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DAISUKE ASAKURA - stealth

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ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
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ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, September 07, 2010 at 11:03:13 PM

Artist: DAISUKE ASAKURA
Title: stealth
Source: Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA 2
Tags: samiljul
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3365kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.89 stars, 694 notes)
  2. Hard (4.52 stars, 178 notes)
  3. Insane (4.95 stars, 282 notes)
  4. Normal (1.94 stars, 83 notes)
Download: DAISUKE ASAKURA - stealth
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Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 29 times in total.
hime_nikki04
89 posts
Joined April 2010
hime_nikki04
Hiya! Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your beatmap but there are a few suggestions I would like to make.

Normal:
I felt that it was a little too hard to be ranked as a "normal"... I think you should change it to hard.
For the slider on 00:12:016, why don't you consider making it last a few more beats until 00:13:157... I dunno, it just sounds better.

Insane:
The notes at the beginning were placed a little far apart... maybe you could put them just a tad bit closer together?
The slider at 00:12:016 was too short. Try making it last until 00:13:141 or have multiple sliders.
Be careful with the spacing with this one...

Overall:
I noticed that there was no source. Perhaps you could add an album title or even a genre to fill this in?
There are no tags... once again, consider adding in the album title or genre for this.
"stealth" should be capitalized
Just a preference but DAISUKE ASAKURA should be Daisuke Asakura
Why don't you add in an easier level?

I really loved playing this one especially on insane! ~ star
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

hime_nikki04 wrote:

Hiya! Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your beatmap but there are a few suggestions I would like to make.

Normal:
I felt that it was a little too hard to be ranked as a "normal"... I think you should change it to hard.done
For the slider on 00:12:016 made it the same as insane

Insane:
The notes at the beginning were placed a little far apart... maybe you could put them just a tad bit closer together?
The slider at 00:12:016 was too short. Try making it last until 00:13:141done
Be careful with the spacing with this one...

Overall:
I noticed that there was no source. Perhaps you could add an album title or even a genre to fill this in?
There are no tags... once again, consider adding in the album title or genre for this.
"stealth" should be capitalized its lowercase in the game
Just a preference but DAISUKE ASAKURA should be Daisuke Asakura it appears as DAISUKE ASAKURA
Why don't you add in an easier level?im planing on

I really loved playing this one especially on insane! ~ star
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Umm im not sure about offset being negative... Oh well.
A preview point is not set
Also the Audio lead in is too long in my opinion, i would just have it at 1.5 - 2 seconds
Too bad you cant put the very first note at -10 ms. I wonder if you could make an exception for that note and put it at 0 ms lol

Easy:

00:11:990 - Consider moving this timing section 1/4 earlier
00:26:802 - Consider moving this timing section 1/4 earlier
00:27:740 (2) - I dislike objects overlapping hp bar, but its just me though.
00:50:990 - Consider moving this timing section 1/4 earlier
01:02:896 - Consider adding a new timing section for the hitsounds changes

I suppose that the rest is all fine

Hard:

00:00:365 - Why not add a circle here? So it would start at the same time as easy. Or even better, have both starting at the very start of the song
00:11:990 - Consider moving this timing section 1/4 earlier
00:26:802 - Consider moving this timing section 1/4 earlier
00:47:990 (1) - I suggest to delete this circle, and then move this slider 00:48:177 (2) - 1/2 earlier. Remember adjusting spacing and making the slider new combo if youre going to do this.
01:02:896 - Consider adding a new timing section for the hitsounds changes

Insane:

Meh got lazy at checking your timing sections... so... yeah x:
00:05:427 - This spot is just missing a circle

Now that i have seen the 3 difficulties, i gotta say this:

The level of "neatness" between your insane and the other difficulties is very noticeable. The hard and easy difficulties had the feel of... "meh im making them just so the map is rankable" after seeing insane. I strongly suggest to make them better, up to insane's level (well maybe easy not so much...)
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
well first off, set your preview points lazy lazy ;)

hmmm it feels very lacking in hitsounds, i advise to hitsound it some more


[Normal]
01:11:995 (1,2) - mistake or pattern?


[Hard]
00:47:995 (1,2) - this sounds much better if you make it one slider from 00:47:995 to 00:48:557 - (red tick) i goes with the music perfect then
00:55:495 (5,6,7) - only a small spacing prob, (6,7) need to the same spacing as (5,6)
(suggestion) 01:23:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this would look better if you first made the (4,5) slider abit more smooth than they are, they look abit ugly as they are, and them line up (4,5,6,7) with (3). it looks and plays much more nicer that way

[Insane]
first off resnap all your notes ;) they are off

i like this diff :)

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well i could not see any big probs so nice job, and star ;)
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
I have the urge to do some difficulty for this (probably Taiko, but if I'm not feeling lazy I might just make a standard one) all because my sister just keeps playing this song everytime we play, thus not surprising that it's stuck in my head...
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
your map is good i can't find many >w<"

little nazi ~


Normal

00:14:995 (1,2) - move this up 1 grid ?


Hard

00:47:995 (8) - maybe move close to 7 a bit ? spacing of 7-8 and 8-9 is look confuse (I thinks maybe for me XD)


Insane

00:24:745 (2) - right 1 grid


sorry for I can help only little >x<" my mod skill is not good i can find only this orz..
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
I pick this one

General
ugh so many claps at the beginning and at the end
Normal
00:37:495 (2,1) - the slider shapes are ugly, change
Hard
00:43:307 (1) - 1 prefer this spinner starts on the next red tick
Insane
Sugoi desu~

good!
STAR!
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Hard]
01:24:745 (4) - how about make slider like this picture? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15153

[Insane]
00:22:307 (6) - add new combo
01:06:370 (3) - humm.... move 1 gird left

Normal is fine ^^

good map
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Nice map =) Only a little suggestion

[Colours]
SliderBorder : 255,255,145

Add it in u .osu files

Star~~
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
8-)
Linkred
83 posts
Joined May 2009
Linkred
+1 SP 'cause he bribed me.

*Star*
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
:S I'm sure I modded this before....

[General]
00:00:000 (x) - I'd love having a circle here. Its confunsign now for all diffs imo.

[Normal]
Nothing major here. Use more claps/whistles
<- The Kiai Time would thank you. Other patterns may be fine, but kinda plain. You choose if/where you'll use it.
Make the spinner at the end slowly fade away with the music.

[Hard]
At the end, this diff uses claps. Normal doesn't. Match the hitsounding on the diffs.
Oh, use what I said for normal too.
00:26:432 (6) - I don't know if it is the fact that is """kinda""" far away from (5), or the fact that the combocolor melts with the background in this place, but I failed here. Just letting you know.

[Insane]
At the end, this diff uses claps. Normal doesn't. Match the hitsounding on the diffs.
Use what I said for normal too.
00:05:807 (5) - Spacing? At least break all the combo's spacing so that the spacing from 00:05:245 to 00:05:995 is the same~
Fun to play~!!

Star!
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
star~ ;)
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Preview points, my boy.

Normal;

00:38:995 (1) - Make it symmetrical kthx (or otherwise prettify)

Hard;

00:11:995 (1,1) - This is an odd jump.
00:17:620 (6,1) - Pretty odd antijump; perhaps consider stacking 5 and 6 here.
00:53:995 (1,2,3) - Something like this instead?

Insane;

00:05:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Break spacing, make this neat. Same distance apart kthx
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Pretty decent mapset. Nothing much to point out.
Have a star
*star*
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
offset early?...sorry I can't help you of this...

Insane
01:09:557(2)-umm...just idea .like this?
01:12:557(2)-^

good map. I can't help you more :o
STARミ★
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

karenying wrote:

offset early?...sorry I can't help you of this...

Insane
01:09:557(2)-umm...just idea .like this? nah
01:12:557(2)-^ nah

good map. I can't help you more :o
STARミ★
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
Hi : D
May I make taiko diff?
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