This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 10월 5일 화요일 at 오전 1:35:16

Artist: Son Dambi
Title: queen
Tags: _llkey_18
BPM: 126
Filesize: 5201kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:

1. llkey's Normal (2.97 stars, 207 notes)
2. Style A (4.78 stars, 383 notes)
3. Style B (4.83 stars, 423 notes)
4. Untypical (4.96 stars, 434 notes)

Download: Son Dambi - queen
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welcome to play~
but not recommend to play 'untypical' diff~ it's not a regular diff honestly :p

멋집니다! 잘 만드셨어요~

done hope you like it :3

Download: Sondambi - queen (Sunny Holic) [llkey's Normal].osu

_llkey_18 wrote:

done hope you like it :3

good~ thank you every time~

General;

If it were me, I'd have an easier difficulty.
That white combo colour really hurts your eyes during kiai time.
Those silent hitsounds are really offputting, turn them up a bit.

Normal;

Dull, but functional.

Hard;

00:30:941 (4) - 1/2 earlier.

Hard acc+;

01:51:060 - What is this timing section here for? Make it inheriting if you must keep it.
On the subject of "why is this here", why is this difficulty here? You already have a Hard and Insane, why do you need this?

Insane;

I don't like this difficulty. The streams are dubious at best, as if thrown in just to add difficulty; similarly, the jumps make no sense musically, and just seem to be a device to add difficulty. Have a look, and tell me what you think.

Call me back for a second look.

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

If it were me, I'd have an easier difficulty.
That white combo colour really hurts your eyes during kiai time.
try turn your monitor's contrast and bright just advice
Those silent hitsounds are really offputting, turn them up a bit.
done~ thx


Normal;

Dull, but functional.
it's just a 3 star diff

Hard;

00:30:941 (4) - 1/2 earlier.
this diff follow inst completely

Hard acc+;

01:51:060 - What is this timing section here for? Make it inheriting if you must keep it.
oh i didn't know that.. thx~
On the subject of "why is this here", why is this difficulty here? You already have a Hard and Insane, why do you need this?
then why i can't keep this? max two same feeling diff are ok

Insane;

I don't like this difficulty. The streams are dubious at best, as if thrown in just to add difficulty; similarly, the jumps make no sense musically, and just seem to be a device to add difficulty. Have a look, and tell me what you think.
all notes of this diff are perfectly depends on vocal, so every note fits a word. no note is unnecessary. musically suit enough
and i know enough if jumps are make sense, i need not your sth this case ^^

thx

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Insane]
Dont change spacing in mid of a combo please.
Other than that is fine.

[Hard]
Fine

[Hard acc+] (What does this diff name mean?)
Feels kind of repetitive
00:25:703 (4) - Slider covered by hit burst

[llkey's Normal]
Fine

Ok have a star!

hi, sorry for little problems

llkey's Normal
00:50:465 - kiai mod in this time?
02:10:465 - ^

Hard acc+
00:43:322 (4) - new combo? or in this 00:45:227 (8)
02:25:227 (1) - turn off new combo
02:26:417 (2) - new combo

Hard
02:49:513 (6) - i think it's needs new combo

Insane
it's good

star

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Insane]
Dont change spacing in mid of a combo please.
or it little abrupt.. i'll consider it `-^
Other than that is fine.

[Hard]
Fine

[Hard acc+] (What does this diff name mean?)
accuracy plus (lol) if you make a better diff name for me i'll be appreciated~
Feels kind of repetitive
00:25:703 (4) - Slider covered by hit burst
? is that problem?

[llkey's Normal]
Fine

Ok have a star!

thank youuu >_<~~!

Vass_Bass wrote:

hi, sorry for little problems

llkey's Normal
00:50:465 - kiai mod in this time?
02:10:465 - ^
good~ thx!

Hard acc+
00:43:322 (4) - new combo? or in this 00:45:227 (8)
02:25:227 (1) - turn off new combo
02:26:417 (2) - new combo
done~ thank you~

Hard
02:49:513 (6) - i think it's needs new combo
done~ thank you~

Insane
it's good

star

thank your helpful modding~

Overall:

White and light blue combo colors are bad choice, for two reasons: they blend in with the backround so making them harder to spot and they don't cooperate with Kiai timing. Suggesting to darken the light blue and choosing other color for white (like the color of her hair in the backround ).

Normal:

00:38:084 (4) Align with 3?
00:46:417 (4) New combo here, so the singing goes along with the numbers?

Hard acc+:

01:49:989 (6) New combo?

Insane:

00:45:227 (7.8.9.10) Make these more symmetrical or something?

Awesome song and map
Star~

Mianki wrote:

Overall:

White and light blue combo colors are bad choice, for two reasons: they blend in with the backround so making them harder to spot and they don't cooperate with Kiai timing. Suggesting to darken the light blue and choosing other color for white (like the color of her hair in the backround ).
no? dark colors not suits this song.. dark brown is ugly..... and i can see these notes very well..

Normal:

00:38:084 (4) Align with 3?
done~
00:46:417 (4) New combo here, so the singing goes along with the numbers?
done~
Hard acc+:

01:49:989 (6) New combo?
done~
Insane:

00:45:227 (7.8.9.10) Make these more symmetrical or something?
i have no way do that..
Awesome song and map
Star~

thank your good modding~

Hello
Hard
All just my suggestion
02:38:560 (5,6) ummm difficult to see IMO. I think this is better
maybe only me , so if you don't like this form , you don't have to change this.
02:48:798 (n) I think better add note.
03:11:179 (n) add anything?

other diff fine to me

overall great
star~

Hey.

[llkey's Normal]
Seems fine.

[Hard acc+]
01:20:227 (8) - extend this slider to end at 01:20:703 (sounds better to me)
Seems fine.

[Hard]
02:48:798 (x) - add a note here
03:11:179 (x) - add a repeating slider here that ends at 03:11:417 (do this for all difficulties...its only like a second )

[Insane]
Why do you have 1/2 on? Some of the notes aren't even on ticks cause of this! I think you meant to have it on 1/4!
01:01:417 (8,9,10) - i think its best to move these to the left and up a bit...just so you can make the 9 slider straight and so its not so low
01:20:227 (12) - extend this slider to end at 01:20:703 (sounds better to me)
02:21:417 (8,9,10) - same thing as the one above, move to the right and up though, so that the 9 slider can be straight and not so low.
Just check your spacing (cept anything that is suppose to be a jump)

Overall...Its a good map, well done, and well the songs ok not my type but ok.

~STAR GOOD LUCK!

banvi wrote:

Hello
Hard
All just my suggestion
02:38:560 (5,6) ummm difficult to see IMO. I think this is better

SPOILER

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maybe only me , so if you don't like this form , you don't have to change this.
i tried.. but 6's end not point 7's position if i do that.. so i can't change
02:48:798 (n) I think better add note.
done~
03:11:179 (n) add anything?
done~
other diff fine to me

overall great
star~

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey.

[llkey's Normal]
Seems fine.

[Hard acc+]
01:20:227 (8) - extend this slider to end at 01:20:703 (sounds better to me)
umm.. i'll cosider.. mean if more people mention it i'll change~
Seems fine.

[Hard]
02:48:798 (x) - add a note here
done~
03:11:179 (x) - add a repeating slider here that ends at 03:11:417 (do this for all difficulties...its only like a second )
done~

[Insane]
Why do you have 1/2 on? Some of the notes aren't even on ticks cause of this! I think you meant to have it on 1/4!
it's not important~
01:01:417 (8,9,10) - i think its best to move these to the left and up a bit...just so you can make the 9 slider straight and so its not so low
i think good even now.. if i going to change like that i must change all following notes' position..
01:20:227 (12) - extend this slider to end at 01:20:703 (sounds better to me)
umm.. i'll cosider..
02:21:417 (8,9,10) - same thing as the one above, move to the right and up though, so that the 9 slider can be straight and not so low.
Just check your spacing (cept anything that is suppose to be a jump)

Overall...Its a good map, well done, and well the songs ok not my type but ok.

~STAR GOOD LUCK!

thank your fast modding~

Wake up~Wake up~So great and I can't find anything at all

★Star!★

What the difference of Hard acc+/Hard……

Ooh, so adorable song<3

PLEASE make the soft hitsound sections more loud. I can barely hear them at all. ;_;
Spinner-metre is also ugly colored</3 Maybe change the green to something more like the one in combo colors?

[additional]
Oops, lot's of combo modding. OTL

00:18:560 (8) - New combo
00:19:275 (1) - Delete New combo
00:20:465 (4) - New combo
00:27:370 (10) - New combo
00:32:608 (4,5,6,7,8) - Is this jump thing really necessary? Maybe make it no jumps or at least make them more neater? looks pretty confusing to me. ;_;
00:34:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - These sliders are bit weird looking like that, they could turn more prettier way.
00:35:465 (1) - Delete New combo
00:35:941 (2) - New combo
00:37:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - same as the previous one.
00:39:275 (1) - Delete New combo
00:39:751 (2) - New combo
00:40:703 (6) - New combo
00:41:656 (9) - Confusing spacing, new combo or move it further away. ;_;
00:45:227 (7,8,9,10) - New combo on (7), and this spacing is un-even.
00:49:036 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe new combo on (5), an this spacing is also un-even.
00:52:370 (6) - Move the second square one grid up and left.
00:53:798 (9) - New combo
00:56:180 (4) - Second square one grid up and left.
00:57:608 (7,8,1) - New combo on (7), delete new combo on (1)
00:58:560 (4) - New combo
01:02:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - un-even jumps again.
01:11:894 (8) - New combo
01:19:513 (9) - ^
01:47:132 (7) - ^
02:05:227 (6) - ^
02:17:608 (7,8,1,2) - New combo on (7) and (2), delete new combo on (1)
02:21:417 (7) - New combo
02:22:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Un-even spacing.
02:33:322 (1,2) - New combo to (2), delete new combo from (1)
02:47:132 (8) - New combo

[Hard]
00:30:941 (4) - Maybe move this to 00:30:703? this would sound better to my ears.
01:08:084 (7) - New combo
01:11:894 (7) - ^
01:15:703 (1) - ^
01:16:894 (1) - Delete New combo
01:17:608 (1) - New combo
02:24:513 (8) - ^

[Hard acc+]
01:38:560 (7) - New combo
01:42:370 (5) - ^

Great map, starred~ ★

thank you very very much~~

p.s. i changed diff name~

sounds good

정말좋아요~ bbj0920의 첫번째 부케! Ivan_schteiger(이반_슈타이거)! hard acc+,insane 강추~~

[general]
Minor problem: The two combo colours are just like the same... orz
0:50:465 start kiai here?

No spacing found. good job!

[untypical]
2:45:108 (4) spacing not enough? up a bit.

no major spacing problem. good job!