1. Apple (3,03 stars, 203 notes)
2. Easy (1,5 stars, 105 notes)
3. Normal (1,83 stars, 160 notes)

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Nitrousdragon wrote:

from #modreqs

[Hard]

00:25:895 (1) - This slider is not blanketed very well, either blanket it or move this object away from the end at 00:25:511 I'm trying, fixed
00:35:822 (3) - This is a necessarily calm part, you wouldn't want a jump here For a build up before I increase the sv up, play very well imo
00:47:072 (1) - Just a little thing here, why do you have this slider all the way over here? Again, it's not even Kiai time yet Intentional to match with the vocal
00:53:028 (2) - There's no blanket error here, so I don't see the point Thanks~

As for normal, that diff looks good! I hope this gets bubble ^_^ Thanks for cheer me up

1. change SB .jpg to .png : bgapple & bgapple2
2. add tag : cut version (cause this cut version of the song)

1. 00:00:749 (2) - 40|276 better (following with 00:02:513 (2,2) - x|276)
2. 00:27:219 (3) - 372|128 ?
3. 00:17:072 (1) - maybe move up a bit.. or make same like 00:18:395 (3,1)
4. 01:13:542 (1) - 136|140
5. 00:58:984 (3,1) - umm .. make same placement like 01:00:748 (3,1,3,1)
6. 00:24:131 (1) - This slider should start on 00:23:910 - vocal there ..then longer till 00:24:792
7. 00:34:719 (1) - add whistle head.
8. 00:40:013 (1) - more curve maybe? like this maybe?
9. 01:06:484 (1) - same case like 00:24:131 (1)
10. 01:09:132 (2,3,1) - are you copied 00:35:822 (3,4,1) - ? it's weird flow , but looks good . can you improve this?
11. 01:30:748 (4) - 464|152 better.
12. 01:37:806 (4) - 48|236 better.

1. 00:14:425 (2,3,1) - same spacing like 00:00:308 (1,2,1)
2. 00:39:792 (1) - 244|148 better. jumpy like 00:40:675 (3,4)
3. 01:09:572 (5) - better stack with 01:08:910 (2) -
4. 01:10:895 (2) - rotate 10 degree?
5. 01:23:690 (5) - 176|40 better.
6. 00:34:719 (1) - add whistle head.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bgapple.jpg",320,240
_L,8248,1
__F,0,0,441,1,0
__S,0,0,441,0.6283873,0.6944515
__F,0,441,882,0

Sky Trias wrote:

#indonesian request ^^

Apple is . .

[General]

1. change SB .jpg to .png : bgapple & bgapple2 Kalo diubah jadi .png ukurannya bakal 1 mb lebih kak, kalo png kan format gambarnya lossles jadi bakal lebih besar ukurannya
2. add tag : cut version (cause this cut version of the song) Will consider

[Normal]

1. 00:00:749 (2) - 40|276 better (following with 00:02:513 (2,2) - x|276) Fixed
2. 00:27:219 (3) - 372|128 ? Fixed
3. 00:17:072 (1) - maybe move up a bit.. or make same like 00:18:395 (3,1) Fixed
4. 01:13:542 (1) - 136|140 Fixed
5. 00:58:984 (3,1) - umm .. make same placement like 01:00:748 (3,1,3,1) I'm trying, fixed
6. 00:24:131 (1) - This slider should start on 00:23:910 - vocal there ..then longer till 00:24:792 Hmm If I do that will cause bad flow with next notes, for now not change anything there
7. 00:34:719 (1) - add whistle head. Fixed
8. 00:40:013 (1) - more curve maybe? like this maybe? I'm trying, fixed
9. 01:06:484 (1) - same case like 00:24:131 (1) Same answer then
10. 01:09:132 (2,3,1) - are you copied 00:35:822 (3,4,1) - ? it's weird flow , but looks good . can you improve this? Not weird at all imo
11. 01:30:748 (4) - 464|152 better. Fixed
12. 01:37:806 (4) - 48|236 better. Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:14:425 (2,3,1) - same spacing like 00:00:308 (1,2,1) Diffrent SV so it'll have diffrent spacing, probably looks bigger but it's consistent imo
2. 00:39:792 (1) - 244|148 better. jumpy like 00:40:675 (3,4) Fixed
3. 01:09:572 (5) - better stack with 01:08:910 (2) - Fixed
4. 01:10:895 (2) - rotate 10 degree? The curent looks fine
5. 01:23:690 (5) - 176|40 better. Fixed
6. 00:34:719 (1) - add whistle head. Fixed

uhh short mod
I hope this helping ^^
GoodLuck! Thank you so much, really helpful

zj0924 wrote:

Hi!From my queue
[General]

1. Offset-574?then you can remove the other timing point owo I already double check, and have some people to play and they can have an SS easily, so apparently the timing is fine

[Normal]

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - Well this maybe too sudden for beginners,might need a break here?so consider remove 00:08:689 (1) - I keep the curent, but will be consider about that
2. 00:25:013 (2) - consider shorten the slider and map circle 00:25:896 (3) - ?this piano key is relatively important for me I'm working on it
3. 00:27:660 (1,1) - ^ same with the first Same answer
4. consider extending the slider cuz current combination will be awkward to play to some extent
   
5. 01:09:132 (2,3) - ^ Hmm I prefer to have 1/2 rhythm instead imo
6. 01:25:895 (1,2,3,1) - It seems that you follow rap this part but you follow instrument when mapping similar part before,I suggest to keep consistency If I fully follow the rap it might be overmapped since this one is a normal diff, so I made a make diffrent rhythm but still consistent along on that ending part
7. 01:38:910 (2,1) - Anti jump maybe hard for beginners nice idea though I suggest separate them Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:10:233 (1) - ctrl+g?I feel a bit close when playing Fixed
2. 00:46:189 (2) - feel a little close,ctrl+g and adjust the degree Will consider, since the curent is prety fine to play
3. 00:53:028 (2) - I suggest curve right a blit cuz there's an oval flow Yes there's a circular flow between them, already tried to have a curve there but I don't really like, so I put straight instead
4. 00:59:425 (1) - ^curve left a bit Same, I prefer straight one ove a curve
5. 01:04:278 (3) - rotate -45°？current flow isn't imo Hmm not looking so good for me imo
6. 01:37:807 (4) - ctrl+g better flow? Prety fine imo

Nice storyboard and neat layout Really thank you so much hihihi XD
GL~

ziin wrote:

[SB]
Good to see storyboards out there! Thanks for making one! I highly recommend you open up the OSB file in notepad so you can understand what's going on a little better, as once you can create a storyboard by scripting, it makes editing storyboards after they're already created MUCH easier. I'm on my way learning it by scripting, but still not sure how haha XD

bgapple2.jpg looks like you overlaid 2 images on top of each other and didn't even center them. It looks really bad honestly. Just use bgapple.jpg to create the effect you want, or at least the effect most people expect. Yes fixed

I'd like to introduce you to loops:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bgapple.jpg",320,240
_L,8248,1
__F,0,0,441,1,0
__S,0,0,441,0.6283873,0.6944515
__F,0,441,882,0

You can use this in your code to make your life a LOT easier in the future. Might be apply, I'm checking by now

00:29:425 - As I said before, I don't really like this image. If I wanted to see blurry double I'd take off my glasses. Haha XD I don't use glasses :p need a second opinion on that not change for now

Other than that, the SB is very simple. you can leave the jpgs in the storyboard, there's no issues there. Thank you very much!

Everything else looks fine.

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

This map is really good. Enjoyable to play, match the music, and no technical errors. Cool storyboard too.
I could make a useless mod about suggestions for shapes/blankets/"flow" etc. but it's not necessary and I hate forced modding like that
So I'll just give some stars instead and hope this gets ranked soon

Good luck!

JuanCR2912 wrote:

You need make an easy difficult map, but good rhythm

1. 00:35:822 (3,4,1) - spacing looks a bit odd here. Mostly cuz the impact that (1) has and 00:35:381 (2,3,4) - being weirly spaced. I'd move 4 and 1 somewhere further from 3, or somethig like this?
2. 00:41:557 - any reason for not mapping this vocal out?o.o. The full previous pattern follows vocals. by ignoring it, makes the pattern weird.
3. 00:52:366 (1,2) - this inconsistent spacing is weird cuz you give emphasis to a weak beat like (2) is, but not to (1) which has the more impact here. I know you're trying to blank, so moving (1) more up would be better imo. (ugly example)
4. 01:13:101 (3) - this slider seems to be heavily spaced out, on the pattern context. Maybe move it to around x424y47 or just blank with 01:11:778 (1) - ?
5. 01:26:778 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g this rhythm? so there's no akward offbeat sliders i guess, and also you could add a note here 01:26:667 - as you do for vocals afterwards
6. 01:36:814 - it's weird that you leave this unmapped but in the whole section you map these triples-vocals-thing. ><

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - 00:27:660 (1,1) - i'm almost sure it's unrankeable as is. It need to be like 2 white ticks apart or something. So maybe ask someone else or make the spinner just a long slider >w<
2. 01:26:557 (2,3) - what about this rhythminstead? Right now sounds really off, like mapping nothing in concrete. Same here 01:33:616 (2,3) -

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - 00:27:660 (1,1) - 00:54:131 (1,1) - similar to normal, needs to be like 1 measure apart. so this doesnt happen http://puu.sh/hZxkO/064b4d8d33.jpg
2. 01:32:072 (4) - change it into 2 circles? like similar patterns you have, and also makes it a bit more fun i think?xd Same here maybe 00:39:131 (4) - just to vary from the 1/1 spam
3. 01:39:131 - add a green line with another sample, cuz slidertick is wut here.

Mako Sakata wrote:

I'm really sorry for the delay answer and super late reply due to college activities and busy things out there ;(

ziin wrote:

00:29:425 - As I said before, I don't really like this image. If I wanted to see blurry double I'd take off my glasses. Haha XD I don't use glasses :p need a second opinion on that not change for now

Milan- wrote:

hi Helloooo~

[apple]

1. 00:35:822 (3,4,1) - spacing looks a bit odd here. Mostly cuz the impact that (1) has and 00:35:381 (2,3,4) - being weirly spaced. I'd move 4 and 1 somewhere further from 3, or somethig like this? Fixed, tbh the curent is also fine haha XD, I flipped between (3) and (4) instead, example given not really nice imo
2. 00:41:557 - any reason for not mapping this vocal out?o.o. The full previous pattern follows vocals. by ignoring it, makes the pattern weird. Added circle
3. 00:52:366 (1,2) - this inconsistent spacing is weird cuz you give emphasis to a weak beat like (2) is, but not to (1) which has the more impact here. I know you're trying to blank, so moving (1) more up would be better imo. (ugly example) Will be considered, tbh I don't really like when this 00:52:145 (4,1) - turn too sharp because I rotated (1)
4. 01:13:101 (3) - this slider seems to be heavily spaced out, on the pattern context. Maybe move it to around x424y47 or just blank with 01:11:778 (1) - ? I don't get what you mean, but I mapped that according to "Lalalala" on the vocal and for variances I make that spaced one, since there's two "Lalalala" thing
5. 01:26:778 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g this rhythm? so there's no akward offbeat sliders i guess, and also you could add a note here 01:26:667 - as you do for vocals afterwards Fixed
6. 01:36:814 - it's weird that you leave this unmapped but in the whole section you map these triples-vocals-thing. >< For a cool down before the song ended and to match the "boy boy" on vocal so yeah I prefer not to insert that triplets you mention about

[normal]

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - 00:27:660 (1,1) - i'm almost sure it's unrankeable as is. It need to be like 2 white ticks apart or something. So maybe ask someone else or make the spinner just a long slider >w< Tbh I think the one you mention about is a guidelines and afaik it's not a rankable issue, because it said that after a spinner there should be enough time before the next note, so yeah it's pretty much fine
2. 01:26:557 (2,3) - what about this rhythminstead? Right now sounds really off, like mapping nothing in concrete. Same here 01:33:616 (2,3) - If I make a reverse slider with circle, I should remapped the whole ending part, so I guess no

[easy]

1. 00:06:484 (1,1) - 00:27:660 (1,1) - 00:54:131 (1,1) - similar to normal, needs to be like 1 measure apart. so this doesnt happen http://puu.sh/hZxkO/064b4d8d33.jpg Prety much fine imo as I mentioned on Normal
2. 01:32:072 (4) - change it into 2 circles? like similar patterns you have, and also makes it a bit more fun i think?xd Same here maybe 00:39:131 (4) - just to vary from the 1/1 spam Yeah sure thing
3. 01:39:131 - add a green line with another sample, cuz slidertick is wut here. I'm sowwyy my bad :p Fixed

i was actually going to ask you for m4m like you stated in #modreq, but dunno if you want to mod back cuz it's too short or something so yolo
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/309867 Sure thing, will do that on this weekend hihi, I'll try my best~

nice set, gl<3 Thank you very much for inspirational sugestion <3

ziin wrote:

What about using this bgapple2.jpg?. I just hate the fact that the current image isn't centered It seems I misunderstanding your mean on last mod :p, sure fixed with your new bgapple2 <3

Lama Poluna wrote:

Hello :3
Apple
00:47:072 (1) - Move x:220 y:308. Fixed and make a bit adjustment by rotate 3degree for better blanket
01:23:028 - 01:23:910 - The entire map looks great, and this place her spoils. Idk what you mean but thanks
01:38:910 (2) - Move x:176 y:36. The curent one is better imo
01:40:013 (1) - ^^^
Normal
Nothing to say.
Easy
Nothing to say.

Wonderful map.
Good luck ( ´ ▽ ` )