1. Easy (1,73 stars, 132 notes)
2. Hard (4,68 stars, 281 notes)
3. Insane (4,99 stars, 374 notes)
4. Normal (3,2 stars, 159 notes)

Dusty wrote:

Just as a general comment thing, parts of Insane confused me the first 3 or so times I played it and failed where combos overlapped on each other

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vincerio wrote:

Isn't it a
kz(livetune)feat. Hatsune Miku - Yellow

Source : Project Diva 2nd
TAG : vocaloid ryo

1. lemon hitcircles <3

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  02:44:912(4) wanted to see a new combo here. not because it was a mistake or something, just looks good.

• 01:05:227(6) spacing?

La Cataline wrote:

hi~
the map is fine for me, that's why I cant be of much help here...

[skin]

1. lemon hitcircles <3

<3, I was thinkking on adding a lemon sliderball

[easy]

• 
  02:44:912(4) wanted to see a new combo here. not because it was a mistake or something, just looks good.

True, looks far better, done
[hard]

• 01:05:227(6) spacing?

It's readeable, won't fix unless someone else agrees

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Garven wrote:

I guess it's ready then. Wee~

[Skin]
The approach circle for the spinner kind of disappears as it gets closer to the center. Maybe try a color that sticks out a bit more like, oh, I don't know... yellow? Ok~

[General]
Try offset 15,129. It might be a little off still though, I'd get someone to double check the offset. As is, it feels odd. I'll use this one for now

[Easy]
02:27:432 (1) - The return arrow is pointing the wrong way. Kinda weird, heh. How did that happen o_o?? Anyway, fixed.
Nice.

[Normal]
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[Hard]
!

[Insane]
<3

Really dig the new style. G'luck!

General:

You could add a soft-sliderslide, because some sliders are annoying with that sound, specially when music lows a bit.

You have some broken claps here and there, it's a suggestion, but you could use a soft-slidertick of a clap and use it. Some people don't like this at all, though I do. So it's up to you.

I think you could keep using the soft set at Kiai, because it's such a huge change when you change it to the normal set. Also, IMO, soft whistles would sounds better than normal hits. ( If you consider this one, don't change the notes a bit before the Kiai, because those sound better with normal-hitnormal. )

02:46:329 - You could add one kiai fountain here, it would make the final of the song even more epic. <3'

Easy:

Isn't the HP drain too low?

00:39:715 (3) - I don't like the fact that part of the slider circle is offscreen. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22761 I think you could change it.
02:16:566 - Weird blank space...maybe add a note? And make it symmetrycal.
02:17:511 - ^
02:24:125 - ^
02:25:070 - ^
02:27:432 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22768 The return is in a weird position. Why is it different from this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22766

Normal:

Well, I find ugly overlapping sliders. It makes your maps less sexy. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22770
And, IMO, they would get better like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22771
You don't need to use DS for those. You can just place it close to the previous slider end without touching it.
But it's all up to you.

00:31:211 (2) - I think it would be better ( aka more sexy <3 ) like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22769
02:21:762 (5,6) - This one is fine, cute and sexy, way to go. <3
02:45:384 (6) - Change that normal finish to a soft finish.

Hard:

What I said about overlapping sliders applies to this diff too.

02:27:432 (3,4,5) - Kinda hard to see, since it gets a bit covered by the previous notes, so why don't you switch it with the (6,7,8)?
02:44:440 (1) - Add a soft finish at the end of this slider.

Insane:

02:46:330 (5) - Change this to a soft finish instead of a normal one.

KuraiPettan wrote:

[General]
The background must be 1024*768 and not 1004*768, resize it and fullsubmit :3 Oh god, ok~

[Easy]
02:08:534 (1) - Add finish at the beginning ? Nope

[Normal]
01:17:511 (2) - Add finish at the beginning and at the end ? Hmmm, nah
02:46:566 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and end it at the same spot it was. Nice eye


[Hard]
01:17:511 (4) - Add finish at the beginning Nah
01:18:219 (6) - ^ Nah
02:46:566 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and end it at the same spot it was. Ok~

[Insane]
01:17:511 (4) - Add finish
01:18:219 (7) - Add finish at the beginning None was done

Fuuko wrote:

It's been such a long time since I last modded...>_>;
Hope I'm not sucking at it.
Anyways, to the usual:
FUUKO'S MOD DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

You could add a soft-sliderslide, because some sliders are annoying with that sound, specially when music lows a bit. Ok~

You have some broken claps here and there, it's a suggestion, but you could use a soft-slidertick of a clap and use it. Some people don't like this at all, though I do. So it's up to you. I rather have the broken claps :<

I think you could keep using the soft set at Kiai, because it's such a huge change when you change it to the normal set. Also, IMO, soft whistles would sounds better than normal hits. ( If you consider this one, don't change the notes a bit before the Kiai, because those sound better with normal-hitnormal. ) Nope, sorry <3

02:46:329 - You could add one kiai fountain here, it would make the final of the song even more epic. <3' ok done

Easy:

Isn't the HP drain too low? I usually use this one as my HP drain rate for Easy :<

00:39:715 (3) - I don't like the fact that part of the slider circle is offscreen. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22761 I think you could change it. Done
02:16:566 - Weird blank space...maybe add a note? And make it symmetrycal. Newbs get confused with notes too close to the end of a spinner, that's why I used this pattern here :<
02:17:511 - ^ This blank space is to keep the pattern
02:24:125 - ^
02:25:070 - ^And these ones are to be consistent with the ones above~
02:27:432 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22768 The return is in a weird position. Why is it different from this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22766 Dunno, It was glitched, anyway, I fixed that one alredy~

Normal:

Well, I find ugly overlapping sliders. It makes your maps less sexy. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22770
And, IMO, they would get better like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22771
You don't need to use DS for those. You can just place it close to the previous slider end without touching it.
But it's all up to you.Fixed some

00:31:211 (2) - I think it would be better ( aka more sexy <3 ) like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22769 Done
02:21:762 (5,6) - This one is fine, cute and sexy, way to go. <3 <3
02:45:384 (6) - Change that normal finish to a soft finish. Done

Hard:

What I said about overlapping sliders applies to this diff too. Weird, my 1/2 distance sliders are not touching each other imo o_o

02:27:432 (3,4,5) - Kinda hard to see, since it gets a bit covered by the previous notes, so why don't you switch it with the (6,7,8)? Done
02:44:440 (1) - Add a soft finish at the end of this slider. Done

Insane:

02:46:330 (5) - Change this to a soft finish instead of a normal one. Done

Sexy map. <3 Way to go~
Have your star and my good luck. x3