This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 09, 2015 at 12:32:05 PM

Artist: P*Light feat. yukacco
Title: Stargazer (DJ Shimamura Remix)
Tags: dnb p light drum and & bass edm dubstep j core techno Sketch Up! Remixies
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8410kb
Play Time: 05:12
Difficulties Available:

1. Chasing (5.11 stars, 1123 notes)

Download: P*Light feat. yukacco - Stargazer (DJ Shimamura Remix)
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Chasing - by Spaghetti






Never forget...

Mentioned some awkward jumps/testplay
general advice as someone who already mapped this song b4

PAN-PA-KA-PAAN~~~

00:04:680 (5,6) - 6 is not going in the exact same direction as 5. copy paste 5 and shorten, OR you could drag 6 to slider 5 and adjust slider
00:06:566 (3) - bring lower so that it fits better with two
00:11:537 (1,3) - better blanket pl0x
00:33:137 (7) - fix positioning 01:05:708 (1) - youre not doing to start this slider on a blue tick and end it on the same tick? mk
01:17:366 (2,3) - better sliderblanket plz 01:20:108 (6,7) - if this is supposed to be a blanket, make it better. if it isnt, leave it be o3o
01:41:537 (7,1) - stack? monstrata mode
01:55:594 (1) - i dont think its a good idea to have a sliderend sit on a strong beat.
01:57:651 (3,4) - allign better? 01:55:766 - 02:01:251 - for a hype escalating part like this, the note formations seems a bit cramped?
02:37:766 (4) - bring a bit to the right so that it looks better 02:40:508 (8,9) - allign better (similar to my last allignment mod)
-comments on kiai time-: thats some underwhelming slider velocity
03:02:451 (7,8) - I SEE EVERYTHING. make them go in the same direction 03:16:594 (1) - preferably start on a blue tick right after the last note, and end it in 03:17:366 - why would you end it when the singer breaths? might as well make it end on sta-
03:38:623 (1) - bluetick start because of whatever is that increasing in pitch sound
04:01:937 - holy shit that is some underwhelming slider velocity. after a huge jump and then this? seriously?
04:11:194 (6) - rotate -11 degrees to make a proper curve with 04:10:851 (4,5,6) -
04:26:966 (2,3) - better blanket
04:12:908 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - did you seriously just clap hitsounded the entire part
04:27:480 (4,5) - ctrl+g to create back and forth motion
05:11:880 - 05:07:937 - jeez look at all the pretty geometry jumps
05:06:908 (9) - dont be lazy >:[
05:11:880 - 5% sound pl0x

Will check mod tomorrow. Tired AF nevermind i got time.

Anxient wrote:

PAN-PA-KA-PAAN~~~

00:04:680 (5,6) - 6 is not going in the exact same direction as 5. copy paste 5 and shorten, OR you could drag 6 to slider 5 and adjust slider

i see everything

00:06:566 (3) - bring lower so that it fits better with two No because that adds like 0 difference to the gameplay and it rips my beautiful blanket

wao

before!
after!

00:11:537 (1,3) - better blanket pl0x
00:33:137 (7) - fix positioning

i tell you i see everything

turn off gridsnap to fix this thing
try doing something like this

01:05:708 (1) - youre not doing to start this slider on a blue tick and end it on the same tick? mk ??
01:17:366 (2,3) - better sliderblanket plz

something like

01:20:108 (6,7) - if this is supposed to be a blanket, make it better. if it isnt, leave it be o3o
01:41:537 (7,1) - stack? monstrata mode fite me
01:55:594 (1) - i dont think its a good idea to have a sliderend sit on a strong beat. This is mapped to that trap drum thing in the bg
01:57:651 (3,4) - align* better?

dis

01:55:766 - 02:01:251 - for a hype escalating part like this, the note formations seems a bit cramped? Not at all. it's fast, constant beats that aren't even part of the buildup lol.
02:37:766 (4) - bring a bit to the right so that it looks better Not supposed to be aligned .

box

something like this

02:40:508 (8,9) - align* better (similar to my last alignment* mod)
-comments on kiai time-: thats some underwhelming slider velocity
03:02:451 (7,8) - I SEE EVERYTHING. make them go in the same direction

hahahah

before
after!

03:16:594 (1) - preferably start on a blue tick right after the last note, and end it in 03:17:366 - why would you end it when the singer breaths? might as well make it end on sta-
03:38:623 (1) - bluetick start because of whatever is that increasing in pitch sound
04:01:937 - holy shit that is some underwhelming slider velocity. after a huge jump and then this? seriously?WTF that's 1.25x, gimme a break. I can't have super long sliders, and those fit fine.
04:11:194 (6) - rotate -11 degrees to make a proper curve with 04:10:851 (4,5,6) - Uh rotated by selection center cuz you didn't specify which ;-;
04:26:966 (2,3) - better blanket
04:12:908 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - did you seriously just clap hitsounded the entire part Intensity bro
04:27:480 (4,5) - ctrl+g to create back and forth motion Not consistent with other parts.
05:11:880 - 05:07:937 - jeez look at all the pretty geometry jumps ikr
05:06:908 (9) - dont be lazy >:[ What else should I put there that's any calmer, the voice is literally faded whispering with no musical anything in the BG.
05:11:880 - 5% sound pl0x

Thanks for the mod <3.

03:59:537 : Reduce the distance between notes ? I mean, put them cooler

Thanks for the mods <3

Spaghetti wrote:

Sorry dude, with all the respect, can you even pass this map?

Can you?

Xexxar wrote:

Spaghetti wrote:

Sorry dude, with all the respect, can you even pass this map?

Can you?

Tbh I failed on the last spinner from drain LOL

Hi.


Judging from the title of your mp3 file, I'm guessing this was a rip from YouTube ?

Saved you some trouble, so I've got the album down and a new mp3 for you.
Includes the nice album art, and I've thrown in a custom normal-hitclap that works well with the song as a bonus.

Generally your song has some interesting potential for some hitsample mixing due to the genre (eg. cymbals, hihats and heavy downbeats)
I'd recommend putting a custom silent-spinner sample for this too.


DL: Stargazer (DJ Shimamura Remix) + Clap


Once you replace the mp3 the offset will be displaced, so please ensure you make the proper re-adjustments for all your timing points and hitobjects.
Approach me if you encounter any difficulty.
The offset ought to be 1065 and really shouldn't be any later than that.

Got 2 backgrounds I thought are worth considering.



Solid map from what I've seen.
All modding is done on a modified difficulty with the new mp3, timing and custom hitclap included.


Chasing:


Most of the flow is pretty well-defined and accentuated with back-and-forths and timely use of anti-jumps.
Can get kind of tricky because you'd want to make sure you get these down at the right sections for full effect.

Really do like that the map 'holds' it's movements at times like the patterns from - 01:42:893 -
Thoughtful, and quite neat to play.

- 01:08:607 (4) - Starting from the first slider, would suggest using 0.9x slider velocity for that subtle change on this entire section until - 01:35:007 (2) -

- 01:18:550 (3) - Suggestion for a slight touch-up.
- 01:20:607 (6) - ^
- 01:59:179 (2) - Could be like this ?
- 02:12:036 (1) - Try x:180 y:264 for a change ?
- 02:47:007 (1) - Overlaps just a little, so why not shift it 1 grid right ?

- 03:02:950 (7,8) - Maybe rotate these on selection by -11 ?
- 03:40:493 (1) - The entirety of this slider section can be optimized if you decide to include a silent slider-slide sample, that way you won't have to deal with having to manually make inherited timing sections just to change the volume.

- 03:56:265 (5) - This part onwards could use gradual SV increments. For example, going from 1.0x, then 1.2 and so on until 1.25x which is your highest.

- 04:02:436 (1) - Recommend you just swap to the custom hitclap because the normal clap sample really wrecks the immersion in my opinion.
It's a bit too much obnoxious against this kind of song, while the whistles seem to fit in alright.

- 04:59:179 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Suggestion for pattern selection tilting clockwise by -11.
- 05:03:122 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ Rotate selection clockwise by 4.

- 05:07:407 (9) - Recommend cutting down on the repeats and introduce a slider to finish this off.
And that's it for modding.
Good map.

Faust wrote:

Hi.


Judging from the title of your mp3 file, I'm guessing this was a rip from YouTube ?

Saved you some trouble, so I've got the album down and a new mp3 for you.
Includes the nice album art, and I've thrown in a custom normal-hitclap that works well with the song as a bonus.

Generally your song has some interesting potential for some hitsample mixing due to the genre (eg. cymbals, hihats and heavy downbeats)
I'd recommend putting a custom silent-spinner sample for this too.


DL: Stargazer (DJ Shimamura Remix) + Clap


Once you replace the mp3 the offset will be displaced, so please ensure you make the proper re-adjustments for all your timing points and hitobjects.
Approach me if you encounter any difficulty.
The offset ought to be 1065 and really shouldn't be any later than that.

Got 2 backgrounds I thought are worth considering.

Solid map from what I've seen.
All modding is done on a modified difficulty with the new mp3, timing and custom hitclap included.


Chasing:


Most of the flow is pretty well-defined and accentuated with back-and-forths and timely use of anti-jumps.
Can get kind of tricky because you'd want to make sure you get these down at the right sections for full effect.

Really do like that the map 'holds' it's movements at times like the patterns from - 01:42:893 -
Thoughtful, and quite neat to play.

- 01:08:607 (4) - Starting from the first slider, would suggest using 0.9x slider velocity for that subtle change on this entire section until - 01:35:007 (2) -

- 01:18:550 (3) - Suggestion for a slight touch-up.

- 01:20:607 (6) - ^

- 01:59:179 (2) - Could be like this ?

- 02:12:036 (1) - Try x:180 y:264 for a change ?

- 02:47:007 (1) - Overlaps just a little, so why not shift it 1 grid right ? Shifted it a bit more.

- 03:02:950 (7,8) - Maybe rotate these on selection by -11 ?

- 03:40:493 (1) - The entirety of this slider section can be optimized if you decide to include a silent slider-slide sample, that way you won't have to deal with having to manually make inherited timing sections just to change the volume. Lol, there is a silent slider slide sample. The inherited sections are to silence the slider ends.

- 03:56:265 (5) - This part onwards could use gradual SV increments. For example, going from 1.0x, then 1.2 and so on until 1.25x which is your highest. I prefer not to, I like keeping stuff like that consistant.

- 04:02:436 (1) - Recommend you just swap to the custom hitclap because the normal clap sample really wrecks the immersion in my opinion.
It's a bit too much obnoxious against this kind of song, while the whistles seem to fit in alright.

- 04:59:179 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Suggestion for pattern selection tilting clockwise by -11.

Rotated it a bit more.

- 05:03:122 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ Rotate selection clockwise by 4.

- 05:07:407 (9) - Recommend cutting down on the repeats and introduce a slider to finish this off.

And that's it for modding.
Good map.

Thanks for the mod <3

nice

good luck1

You should check AiMod, you've got a lot of unsnapped objects.
*runs*

Hail Zaros wrote:

You should check AiMod, you've got a lot of unsnapped objects.
*runs*

O shit LOL I forgot to resnap.

Added Epilepsy Warning cuz 2intense heuheuehueheuhe


EDIT: Removed SB. RIP epilepsy Warning

1077 offset sounds more correct

Aka wrote:

1077 offset sounds more correct

I don't think that sounds very good, especially at the slow part where I map the vocals, sorry

your offset noticeably hurries though. your choice hehe

Aka wrote:

your offset noticeably hurries though. your choice hehe

For now, I'll keep the offset Faust gave me, if more people side by you I'll change it

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