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lily-an - White Lotus...~Piano

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Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
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Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 9월 8일 수요일 at 오후 11:32:39

Artist: lily-an
Title: White Lotus...~Piano
Source: Touhou
Tags: Hijiri Byakuren Frill lRasl
BPM: 133
Filesize: 6414kb
Play Time: 03:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Frill's Piano (2.7 stars, 204 notes)
  2. Hard (4.61 stars, 358 notes)
Download: lily-an - White Lotus...~Piano
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I LIKE PIANO!!!

Hard - Ra-s and dksslqj's collab
Last edited by Nakagawa-Kanon , edited 11 times in total.
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
good song 0.0
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Frill
done~

Download: lily-an - White Lotus...~Piano (dksslqj) [Normal].osu
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
>_<
Last edited by Ra-s , edited 1 time in total.
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
:)

Download: lily-an - White Lotus...~Piano (dksslqj) [lRasl].osu
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
General
  • - Add some tags? Like Hijiri Byakuren, Frill, lRasl...or else
    - Preview points
    - Mute sliderslides?

Frill's
  • - Frill <333
00:44:542 (1) - Start at 00:44:768 and finish at 00:45:670? I know you're following vocals, but it's a bit confused
00:50:858 (2) - remove this note?
00:54:693 (2) - why muted the reverse?
01:14:542 (1) - add finish at the end of slider
01:16:347 (3) - ^
01:45:219 (1) - add whistle at start
01:54:693 (3) - whistle at the end
02:57:850 (1) - overlap under 02:56:046 (2)
03:10:708 (3) - start at 03:10:933
03:34:392 (5) - whistle at start and remove whistle from the end


Hard
  • - 3:50 and 5mil...D:
00:33:941 (1,2,3) - move them 1 grid down
02:01:234 (2) - 1 grid down
02:27:399 (4,5,6) - confused
03:49:730 (1,2,3) - move them like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18154
Last edited by Pokie , edited 3 times in total.
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
이상한 부분있어서 수정.



니버 내맵 바꿔놨음?

Download: lily-an - White Lotus...~Piano (dksslqj) [Hard].osu
Neethime
168 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[General]
You forgot Preview point
Add "Frill" "lRasl" to tags.
If you like,you may also add "hijiri byakuren" to tags

[Frill's Piano]
00:31:008 (1) - whistle in the end
00:44:542 (1) - a little ugly,try to change its shape
00:51:309 (1) - 1/4 slider is a bit too hard in this diff,replace it with 2 1/2 notes?
01:35:294 (1) - remove new combo
03:21:760 (1) - ^

[Hard]
You may use more whistles in this diff
00:51:986 (3,4) - this jump is a bit weird to me
02:24:918 (6) - this hitsound scared me a little D: try to turn volume down
You may also do something in the following similar places.

Nice song and map~Star
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Your mp3 is a bit long, let me go ahead and cut that for you~
http://s000.tinyupload.com/?file_id=970 ... 6280088771 - I made the mp3 end at 4 minutes to reduce file size.
This cut will not affect your offset, all you need to do is replace your current mp3 with the one I provided. Then full submit. Then quit osu! to see the changes.
A preview point isn't set for both difficulties. Set one.

[Frill's Piano]
Nothing to note here. A nice easy difficulty, relaxing~

[Hard]
Awesome collab you got here. It's great.
Nothing to mention.

You can have a star.
*star*
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
lol white lotus, nice song.

[General]:
  1. better BG of 1024x768:
    SPOILER
  2. dksslqj.png covers the words on BG :S
  3. you'd better silent the soft-slidersllide.wav
[Frill's Piano]:
  1. 00:58:076 (1) - how about add a note here and let this spinner start at 00:58:302 and end at 01:00:106?
  2. the finishes in some parts are too loud imo
[Hard]:
  1. 02:04:279 (1) - start this at 02:04:166.
  2. 03:50:745 (1) - too loud, suggest use how Frill did on this.
star~
Hurude Rika
Hurude Rika
good luck
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
General;

Cut the .mp3

Piano;

01:10:031 (3,1) - Spacing.
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
nice map,
but you may need to turn down the volume when you use soft-finish, the sound is too loud in this soft song.

[Frill's Piano]
01:00:106 - move this timing section to 01:00:219, I can hear a loud sound at 01:00:106
01:15:557 - please turn down the volume of finish at this part, the song is too soft.
01:44:993 (4,1) - del these hitobjects and add a slider start at 01:44:993, and end at 01:45:444 ?
03:54:241 - move this timing setion to 03:54:354, same reason with 01:00:106

[Hard]
the mp3 is much longer than the part mapped, is there still someone haven't his part?
[dksslqi's part]
01:33:490 (6) - turn down the volume?
02:04:166 (1) - this spinner is too loud ?
[lRasl]
02:24:918 (6) - this sound is too sudden, turn down the volume?
03:14:542 (1) - too near the edge ?
03:18:264 (1) - this spinner is too loud ?
03:50:745 (1) - add a fade out effect by decreasing the sound slowly ?

kd Star ~
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
Frill's Piano
fine.
Hard
02:22:888(x)-Maybe,add a circle?
02:38:452(5)-1 grid up?
03:50:745(1)- D:Big worng!! Here are two spinner in same time. Delete one.

nice map
STARミ★
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi

[frills']

[hard]
03:01:911 (1) - this gets a little low imo
03:14:542 (1) - ^
03:50:745 (1) - uhh, i get a combo break after this spinner? oO I think you have a second one there or something

awsome map
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
[Frill's Piano]
01:05:520 (2,3,4) - Isn't it too jumpy for Easy Normal? Anyway,fix (4) at least,cause it's way too far.

[Hard]
01:14:993 (2) - That's confusing a bit,it's not like 00:59:204 (1,2,1),so I'd like you to place somewhere else.
01:45:444 (3,4) - Way too unexpected,cause it's even don't perfectly fit with music.Not the best place for such a jump.
02:03:264 (1,2,3) - Ahh,wth? Distance between 02:02:813 (4,1) and 02:03:264 (1,2) is similar! Fix distance.

Good job,beautiful song.
Star~
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Nakagawa-Kanon

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Frill's Piano]
01:05:520 (2,3,4) - Isn't it too jumpy for Easy Normal? Anyway,fix (4) at least,cause it's way too far.

[Hard]
01:14:993 (2) - That's confusing a bit,it's not like 00:59:204 (1,2,1),so I'd like you to place somewhere else.
01:45:444 (3,4) - Way too unexpected,cause it's even don't perfectly fit with music.Not the best place for such a jump.
02:03:264 (1,2,3) - Ahh,wth? Distance between 02:02:813 (4,1) and 02:03:264 (1,2) is similar! Fix distance.

Good job,beautiful song.
Star~
aa,,,,

I fixed nothing.... frll's depend himself
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
saymun
[Frill's Piano]
01:07:775 (4) - this seems too far?

[Hard]
Fine :3
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
[Hard]
03:14:542 (1) - Slightly offscreen during gameplay. Move it up a little bit.
02:32:587 (1) - This is too close to the previous note. Since it's not stacked with anything (like most of the other anti-jumps), players might mistake this as a 1/2 note.

You should also cut the mp3 to save file space since it's not being mapped to the full duration.
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
brikel
살짝 어색할수있지만
설마 끝까지 듣고있는 사람이 얼마나 될지..
http://www.mediafire.com/?64ayv917ea4bnac
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