MINAMOTRANCE - Love Colors · forum

Musty

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Musty 2010-07-11T15:47:01+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 10 octobre 2010 at 13:56:55

Artist: MINAMOTRANCE
Title: Love Colors
Source: Touhou
Tags: Marisa Kirisame Love Coloured Master Spark Fight69
BPM: 135
Filesize: 5963kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:

Fight69's Normal (2,73 stars, 188 notes)
Hard (4,94 stars, 432 notes)

Download: MINAMOTRANCE - Love Colors
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Status : RANKED!
SBCredits : Finished

Touhou Remix from Marisa Kirisame

Circle : MINAMOTRANCE
Album : Tohou-dan buto ( Oriental Dance Shot)
Vocal : Suzukina nako
Original Song : Koi-shoku masuta supaku (Love-Coloured Master Spark)

BeatMap(overall) By Sweyax/Mustaash :>
Normal by Fight69 (Finished)
Hard by Mustaash (Finished)

Log:
[09.24.2010]
Jarby, and OdarilIRC Mod Fix'd
[09.25.2010]
Dragon de p?t?'s Mod Fix'd
[09.26.2010]
James2250's Mod Fix'd
[10.09.2010]
LRJ's Mod Fix'd and Some Personal Ameliorations
wmf's Mod Fix'd
Mafia's Mod Fix'd
ztrot's Timing Help Fix'd
[10.102010]
Andrea's IRCMod Fix'd
Andrea's 2ndIRCMod Fix'd xP

Last edited by Musty 2010-10-10T13:23:11+00:00, edited 50 times in total.

m980

Elite Mapper

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Here since the beginning

m980 2010-09-19T10:05:26+00:00

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Ekoro

3,456 posts

Joined March 2010

Ekoro 2010-09-19T10:43:24+00:00

~Star

Pourquoi tu mets "Sweyax" dans le BSS? Remplace par "Mustaash"

Fight69

1,639 posts

Joined January 2010

Fight69 2010-09-19T11:58:18+00:00

Vire la 2ème timing section

Et pour la première, met :

BPM : 135,00
Offset : 1898

Oublie pas de resnapper toute les notes.

Et aussi, vire les letterbox durant les breaks (comme ca : http://puu.sh/cYZ ), on voit même plus la tête de Marisa xD

Fraolinch

577 posts

Joined November 2009

Fraolinch 2010-09-19T16:57:14+00:00

(je ferai un mod quand t'aura finit)

Fight69

1,639 posts

Joined January 2010

Fight69 2010-09-21T18:23:42+00:00

Mustaash wrote:
Credits to Fight69 for the Skin

Wait what ?! o.o
J'ai jamais fait de skin moi

Et aussi :

[Hard]

02:06:786 (2) - WTF ?!

Et pourquoi des cercles que en noir et blanc ?
C'est pas Bad Apple hein D:
Pense aussi a virer le countdown.

Download: MINAMOTRANCE - Love Colors (Mustaash) [Fight69's Normal].osu

Drafura

osu! Alumni

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Joined April 2010

Drafura 2010-09-23T13:34:19+00:00

[Fight69's Normal]
01:42:786 (2) - Wierd shape I understand why you make it like that but when 01:41:453 (1) - disapear it looks wierd for me.
02:04:564 (3) - Kinda borring (I know a normal is borring yet...)

[Hard]
00:33:120 (6) - I think remove it, it sounds really wierd for me
00:53:453 (3) - Maybe use the 0.5x speed here to make it finish at 00:53:897 - then you can make jumps between 00:54:564 (1) - and 00:54:120 (1) - and another one to 00:54:564 (1) -
01:10:564 (3) - Wierd
01:13:009 (1) - ^

I think the Life leech is a bit strong, autoplay life bar down to the half of the bar on calm times.

Musty

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Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Musty 2010-09-23T13:49:04+00:00

Drafura wrote:
[Fight69's Normal]
01:42:786 (2) - Wierd shape I understand why you make it like that but when 01:41:453 (1) - disapear it looks wierd for me.
02:04:564 (3) - Kinda borring (I know a normal is borring yet...) (i don't update this)

[Hard]
00:33:120 (6) - I think remove it, it sounds really wierd for me I Think too
00:53:453 (3) - Maybe use the 0.5x speed here to make it finish at 00:53:897 - then you can make jumps between 00:54:564 (1) - and 00:54:120 (1) - and another one to 00:54:564 (1) - Okay
01:10:564 (3) - Wierd
01:13:009 (1) - ^

I think the Life leech is a bit strong, autoplay life bar down to the half of the bar on calm times.

Kurosanyan

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Joined November 2009

Kurosanyan 2010-09-24T15:07:04+00:00

Cool map and great song

Star~

Jarby

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Joined August 2008

Jarby 2010-09-24T16:20:09+00:00

Offset is around 20ms early. Fix that. Set preview point to 00:58:786. Delete those storyboard elements that doesn't seem to be doing anything.

Hard:

The kiai time at the first chorus is ridiculous, it switches on and off too much. There is no need to turn it off during spinners.
Set the tick rate to 2. Sliders like 00:53:453 (3) are impossible to read now.
01:55:675 - Why is there no kiai at this chorus?

Normal:

The kiai time points should be consistent with Hard. Fix that.

Glass

Glass 2010-09-25T07:51:56+00:00

Sidramon

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Joined June 2010

Sidramon 2010-09-25T12:21:19+00:00

Star!!^^

Fraolinch

577 posts

Joined November 2009

Fraolinch 2010-09-25T12:35:22+00:00

Suggestion
Would be better, but oh well
Need to be fixd!

[Fight69's Normal]

No major errors, nice map.

01:07:907 (4) - Try something like this : http://puu.sh/e6o
02:04:574 (3) - Perhaps something like that : http://puu.sh/e6r
02:19:241 (4) - ^ : http://puu.sh/e6t
03:05:018 - to 03:06:574 - : fill this part ?

Woot ninja modding !

[Hard]

No major errors. Nice map.

00:09:463 (2) - One grid right, lvl 3
01:45:018 (2) - kinda rushed. Try making it look like that : http://puu.sh/e6h
01:59:241 (1) - add new combo
02:00:129 (1) - remove new combo
02:44:574 (8) - ^
02:45:463 (1) - add new combo
02:45:685 (2) - remove new combo
02:47:241 (9) - add new combo
02:47:463 (2) - remove new combo

Good luck for getting this ranked

Should be fine

Kotone

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Joined August 2008

Kotone 2010-09-25T15:45:25+00:00

nice song~

Musty

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Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Musty 2010-09-25T16:10:20+00:00

karenying wrote:
nice song~

Thanks~

James2250

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James2250 2010-09-25T20:55:20+00:00

-You have an empty osb file in folder, delete it
-Add Fight69 to tags on both difficulties
-Do a horizontal flip on combo burst? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27814)
-I don't really think the bright orange spinner fits the calm blue background, maybe try and match the colors more?
-Your hp bar is the wrong size, change that

Fight69's Normal:
00:48:129 (5) - new combo
01:08:574 (5,1) - spacing
01:23:685 (5) - new combo
01:45:018 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - why did you stop clap pattern here (and other places in the map, go through and make sure it continues when meant to?)
03:18:352 (2) - shorten by 1 repeat and start spinner at 03:19:018

Hard:
I don't follow the combo's alot on this, not going to do a full combo mod but make sure they follow the song more if possible (stuff like 00:38:352 (1,2,3) and 01:07:463 (1) just seem out of place, try and fix it up a bit
The 01:27:241 timing section is slightly too quiet (01:34:574 too)
I think claps sound better than whistles in this song, I would replace most, if not all, of them
Remove countdown
00:02:796 (1) - remove new combo
00:06:574 (1) - ^
00:45:907 (1) - ^
01:33:463 (3) - sounds odd being so quiet, increase volume on it

*star*

Musty

2,246 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

Musty 2010-09-26T17:03:53+00:00

Fix'd
Not Fix'd

James2250 wrote:
-You have an empty osb file in folder, delete it
-Add Fight69 to tags on both difficulties
-Do a horizontal flip on combo burst? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27814)
-I don't really think the bright orange spinner fits the calm blue background, maybe try and match the colors more?
-Your hp bar is the wrong size, change that

Fight69's Normal:
00:48:129 (5) - new combo
01:08:574 (5,1) - spacing
01:23:685 (5) - new combo
01:45:018 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - why did you stop clap pattern here (and other places in the map, go through and make sure it continues when meant to?)
03:18:352 (2) - shorten by 1 repeat and start spinner at 03:19:018

Hard:
I don't follow the combo's alot on this, not going to do a full combo mod but make sure they follow the song more if possible (stuff like 00:38:352 (1,2,3) and 01:07:463 (1) just seem out of place, try and fix it up a bit
The 01:27:241 timing section is slightly too quiet (01:34:574 too)
I think claps sound better than whistles in this song, I would replace most, if not all, of them
Remove countdown
00:02:796 (1) - remove new combo
00:06:574 (1) - ^
00:45:907 (1) - ^
01:33:463 (3) - sounds odd being so quiet, increase volume on it

*star* Thanks