LegendOkay, this is a good map, so I had to raise my modding standards for this a bit. It does have some of my personal opinions to it too, not only little mistakes. Lots of blanket corrections and some note positioning. I think you went a bit crazy with some of the streams as well, which could be toned down a little.
1) 00:16:537 (2) - Could curve this so that it blankets 00:16:787 (3) better
2) 00:17:162 (4,1) - Correct this blanket too.
3) 00:18:662 (2,3) - This too, a little bit.
4) 00:22:787 (3,4) - These don't really follow the symmetry in 00:22:287 (1,2) so change it if you want to, perhaps rotate them 90° anti-clockwise, maybe stack the circles, see what works out the best for you.
5) 00:46:682 (1,2,3) - You could make these a triangle, in that case, even out the gaps.
6) 00:47:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Center this pattern with 00:47:582 (5,6,7)
7) 00:58:682 (1,2) - You could make this slider flow better to (2). You could copy 00:59:282 (3) and replace (1) with it, and rotate it a bit.
8) 01:10:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You could even out the gaps here.
9) 01:16:832 (2,3,4,5,7) - This star pattern looks just a bit stretched, so bring these notes closer to 01:16:682 (1,6,8,9,10) - and reposition them a little if you need to.
10) 01:17:882 (1) - Perhaps curve this slider a little less so it flows better to 01:18:182 (2)
11) 01:21:182 (7) - Would curve / rotate this so that the flow points to 01:21:482 (1)
12) 01:21:632 (2,4) - Just a personal opinion here, but I'd curve these less, would look better when less curved IMO.
13) 01:34:232 (5,6,7) - Would even out the gap between these and perhaps move 01:34:682 (1) a bit higher in the process.
14) 01:34:982 (2,4) - I'd point those sliders directly to these, you can turn grid snap off for this if needed. They're a little off.
15) 01:37:082 (1,2,3) - The speed change here was kind of unpredictable and I kept getting a bad acc on it on multiple plays, if you know the song and/or the map well, you won't mess it up of course. Maybe make these a reverse slider?
The rest of these jumps are fine in that case because the reverse slider would make you realise the different snapping here.
16) 01:39:932 (3) - Maybe curve this a little less? Up to you, just another personal opinion of mine, since I don't usually like very curvy sliders, especially considering the location of the hit circle. If the circle was inside the curve in a blanket, that would be just fine.
17) 01:39:782 (2,4) - This blanket is off, you should correct it.
18) 01:42:782 (5) - You could make this flow better to 01:43:082 (1) by curving it a bit more and stuff.
19) 01:44:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You should even out the gaps between these triangles. For example, if you were to place (6) on top of (1), you can see that the distance there is much larger than from (1) to (2)
20) 01:45:482 (1) - Perhaps curve this a tiiiiny bit more so it works as a better blanket for the end of 01:45:782 (2)
21) 01:46:382 (4) - Kinda unsure how this fits the song here. I can hear quarter beats in the song here though, I would advise replacing it with a triplet of some sort, or a reverse.
22) 01:48:332 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Maybe make this little circle formation in the stream rounder.
23) 01:49:682 (3,4,5,6,1) - The star pattern here could be better. I'd move (3) and (4) a bit lower.
24) 01:51:482 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 14).
25) 01:56:507 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could make these look like a half circle, they don't form a round shape at the moment. Same for 01:56:957 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15)
26) 01:57:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Perhaps make this a little easier, maybe lower the spacing by 0.1 or so.
Also, 01:58:232 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1) should form a rounder circle shape, it'll be easier to do this if you leave more room for it by adjusting the difficulty of this whole stream.
I think something that could work well would be to give these 01:57:632 (1,2,3,4,5) a lower spacing, and then using the spacing it's currently using from (6) and onwards since the vocals kick in, to emphasize them.
27) 01:58:682 (1,2) - I'd adjust the slider here a bit (in the process of doing 26)) so it flows better to (2)
28) 02:03:932 (2,3) - Fix this blanket. (Select the slider and you'll see its start and end points differ from the hitcircle's approach circle radius)
29) 02:04:082 (3,4) - Also make (4) a better blanket for the start of (3)
30) 02:07:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I think you made this stream a bit too difficult, just doesn't play that exceptionally well. I'd lower the spacing by 0.1 at least.
I mean the fact that you do those 5-circle streams before this makes it kind of difficulty spike that should be avoided. It twists around a lot too so that just makes it even more difficult, though the patterns themselves look quite nice.
31) 02:10:982 (2,3,4,7) - Fix this blanket too.
32) 02:11:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I think this one's alright, no special twists in the stream and a slider before it so you have at least a split second to prepare. Consider making 02:12:407 (8,9,10,11,12,13) form a rounder shape.
33) 02:16:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make these evenly perpendicular towards 02:17:282 (7,8,9,10,11,12) I mean, 123 start between 10 and 11, and 456 start more between 8 and 9, Just make them start perpendicular to 11 and 8.
34) 02:19:532 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - You could make these form a circle too
35) 02:35:582 (7) - You could make this flow better to (1) by curving it a little to its direction.
36) 02:39:482 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Could look cool if these formed a rounder shape as well. Especially if you got something to match on top of (1) like in 02:38:732 (7,16)
37) 02:42:482 (3,4,5,6,7) - The circles here don't form a straight line.
38) 03:02:282 (1,2) - Improve this blanket. If you select the first slider and then scroll to the end point of the second slider in the editor timeline, you can see that the slider ball circle doesn't capture an equally large part of the first slider's starting and ending points.
39) 03:03:482 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 14), but to a smaller extent.
40) 03:09:482 (1,2) - Make the slider here flow better to the hit circle.
41) 03:10:982 (2) - I would reposition this so that the distance from the start point to 03:10:682 (1) is as large as the distance from the end point to 03:11:282 (3)
42) 03:12:782 (5) - This could be directed more towards the blanket of (4)
43) 03:16:682 (1,2) - This blanket's a little off.
44) 03:17:882 (1,2) - You could make these flow better.
45) 03:17:882 (1,3) - I would blanket these.
46) 03:19:982 (8,9,10) - Reposition this stack so that it is an equal distance away from 7 as 6 is.
47) 03:26:732 (3,4) - Fix this blanket.
48) 03:29:882 (1,3) - Fix this blanket as well.
49) 03:30:482 (4,6) - This too.
50) 03:34:082 (4,6) - And this. (A tiny bit)
51) 03:35:207 (8,9) - Adjust these a little to create a symmetrical hole in the center.
52) 03:37:532 (2,3) - Fix this blanket.
53) 03:39:032 (4) - I think you could improve the flow to this a little bit by perhaps repositioning this circle.
54) 03:44:882 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - You could make this a bit rounder. Make it look like a circle half in any case.
55) 03:50:732 (2,3) - Could blanket these a bit more.
56) 03:54:782 (13,14,15,16) - I think this spacing is too much, especially considering the formation you gotta do at 03:54:407 (8,9,10,11,12,13) which makes it an unnecessary difficulty spike, so I'd lower the spacing or make that formation clearer.
57) 04:02:282 (1,2) - I'd improve the flow between these.
58) 04:05:132 (6,7,8,9,10,6,7,8,9,10) - Maybe you could lower the spacing of these streams by 0.1 to make it a bit more comfortable to play.
59) 04:13:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I think you should make this stream just a bit easier considering the stuff you need to do right before this. Perhaps lower the spacing in the beginning a bit, or overall. The stream shape is quite nice though.
60) 04:20:882 (3,4) - Could blanket the end of (4) to the first slider.
61) 04:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would perfect these triangles. Or at least center 1 and 6, they're a bit too low.
62) 04:23:582 (5,2) - You should move these a tiny bit to the right so that 04:24:482 (3) is evenly centered between 4 and 5.
63) 04:25:682 (3,4) - I think this blanket could be improved.
64) 04:28:082 (5,6,7,8) - Is the gap between 4 and 5 intentional? You could even it out. Perhaps make a triangle shape from 3, 4 and 5.
65) 04:29:882 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved a little.
66) 04:37:082 (1,3) - Blanket these a little better as well.
67) 04:51:482 (1,2,3) - I'd make a triangle here. So basically just move 3 a bit closer to 2 so the distance is equal to 1.
68) 04:53:582 (7,8,1) - Perhaps also make the distance between these equal.
69) 04:55:082 (1,2) - Could blanket these.
70) 04:56:582 (2,4) - Could blanket these a little as well.
71) 05:07:682 (3,4,5,6,7) - You could perfect this triangle.
72) 05:13:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Considering the length of this whole stream, the patterns on it, the spacing, and the fact that there was a considerably difficult part right before it, I think it's too hard. Could you add a reverse slider break in the halfway section of it maybe? Or just lower the spacing, that works too.
73) 05:19:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you could improve this shape a little maybe.
74) To be honest, around this section of the map, I think your stream spread is way too high. Sure, some streams should have a higher spread but I don't think all of the necessarily need to have it. I would recommend lowering the spacing on a lot of these streams, it's hard enough as it is with the constant quarter beats. Should make it more playable.
75) 05:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Such as these, you could really lower the spread.
76) 05:27:557 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Streams that start at the ends of sliders are usually some of the toughest to my experience, especially getting a good accuracy on them, so I'd lower the spacing here as well. And you could make this 05:27:782 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) shape look rounder too.
77) 05:29:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Especially here, just awkward to play with all constant quarter beats at this spread, even if it's supposed to be a very difficult map, I'd want it to be fun to play at least. This section is not, I would really lower the spacing here, at least on parts like 05:29:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
78) 05:42:782 (4,3) - Improve this blanket.
79) 05:48:482 (5,6) - It's a bit hard to tell, but I think these reverses might reverse on a 1/8 beat instead of a 1/6.
80) 05:57:632 (2,6) - You could put these on top of each other. This pattern is a bit weird anyways.
81) 06:00:332 (6,7,8,9,10) - I think you could lower the spacing here a bit too.
82) 06:11:882 (1,2) - Fix this blanket.
83) 06:14:582 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - You could move these so that the 6 stacks with the (4) slider.
84) 06:15:932 (3,4,1) - You should make the slider end points here to make a triangle.
85) 06:16:982 (2,4,3,4,5) - Fix the blanket for these.
86) 06:20:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You could add a small reverse slider to the end of this stream.
87) 06:30:332 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved.
88) 06:31:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The blanket formed by this stream could be improved.
89) 06:32:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Okay here's another difficulty spike part. I would really lower the spread of the stream.
90) 06:33:782 (5,6,7,5,6,7) - I think these circles and sliders could be turned into reverse sliders. Would be alright with the song and would really even out the difficulty.
91) 06:38:732 (4,6) - You can improve this blanket.
92) 06:39:482 (1,2) - This one too.
93) 06:41:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think you could lower the spacing here a little, or at least in some sections.
94) 06:44:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Here too, especially the end. You could also add a reverse in there somewhere, or just start the stream with a more decreased spacing. You could at least tone down the spacing in the very end, the spacing there is so high, I think it's more about luck when hitting those. Perhaps make the gray section have smaller spacing, then increasing it a bit in the yellow one and then a bit more in the red one.
95) 06:51:707 (2,3,7,8,2,3,7,8) - I think these could be just a tiny bit closer to the lower circles of the stars.
96) 06:56:282 (1,2) - You should make these flow better. Move the slider to the left a bit so that the end point is centered and form a blanket with 06:56:882 (3) at the same time.
97) 07:13:082 (1,2) - Could make these flow better too.
98) 07:14:582 (2) - This should be more to the lower left, just a bit, so (1) will work like a blanket, sort of.
99) 07:23:132 (2) - Could rotate this this a bit so that it works like a distant blanket for (3)
100) 07:34:382 (4,2) - Could blanket these a bit.
Alright, that's about it, exactly 100 suggestions on how to improve this.
Song setup's alright too. It's a good map, hopefully it gets approved, good luck!
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