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RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-07-22T06:56:55+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 07 October 2010 at 06:01:13

Artist: Imogen Heap
Title: Canvas
BPM: 139
Filesize: 8371kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:

Hectic (4.89 stars, 325 notes)
Rest (0.77 stars, 85 notes)
Safe (2.9 stars, 173 notes)

Download: Imogen Heap - Canvas
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Slow heart,
Dark wait,
Down love,
Black canvas, revolve within, you understand?

Last edited by RandomJibberish 2010-10-07T05:05:02+00:00, edited 14 times in total.

_llkey_18

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_llkey_18 2010-07-23T18:38:07+00:00

hii ^^ lets start

General
mp3 : how about cut it?
Rest
pretty good , nothing to say

Safe
01:15:313 - how about ass break?
01:54:882 - how about add note there with whistle and remove whitle there 01:54:738
02:57:040 - how about add note there with whistle and remove whitle there 02:56:896
nice ^^

Hectic
02:10:421- new combo?
nice ^_^

well very nice map/song have a star ^^

Zetsubou Sensei

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Zetsubou Sensei 2010-07-28T11:57:21+00:00

Hey.

[Rest]
Use a 1/2 snap here...1/3 is not needed
02:47:975 (2) - extend this slider to end at 02:48:407 (then resnap note 3...etc)
02:53:155 (2) - move this back 1 tick to start at 02:52:939 (Make sure that you have 1/2 on)

[Safe]
Same thing...use 1/2 instead of 1/3...you will then have to edit around and make sure all the notes are on tick.
Believe me, once you do some changes with the 1/2 it sounds 100 times better

Then just resnap all the notes, and it should be fine.

[Hectic]
Again use 1/2 snap...1/3 is pointless for this song...
So just as in Safe Diff...Go through it and make sure that every note is on a tick...And it will sound alot better.
Be sure to resnap

I will hold onto my Star for now...Just make these changes and get back to me! GL

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-07-30T11:19:33+00:00

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:
Use a 1/2 snap here...1/3 is not needed.

lol'd

NotShinta

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NotShinta 2010-08-04T05:58:24+00:00

Unless you have drastically changed this since my preview, this is brill.

Even if it has star for Imogen

EDIT:slightlycensored

07:46 <NotShinta> : Oh yeah mod this it's perfect but I don't care
07:46 *NotShinta is listening to (Imogen Heap - Canvas)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18323]
07:47 <NotShinta> : Oh?
07:47 <Powerdrone311> : It's a small project I've been working on besides Coffins and Bananas.
07:47 <NotShinta> : Hmm
07:47 <Powerdrone311> : :3
07:47 <NotShinta> : My best WIP died when my old computer exploded
07:48 <Powerdrone311> : D=
07:48 <NotShinta> : But now I've got 2 storyboards planned huzzah
07:48 <Powerdrone311> : QQ
07:48 <Powerdrone311> : oh yay!
07:48 <NotShinta> : And mod Canvas.
07:49 <Powerdrone311> : okay will do
07:49 <Powerdrone311> : oh god this sucks
07:49 <NotShinta> : What
07:50 <Powerdrone311> : the song is god awful
07:50 <Powerdrone311> : I'm going to vomit
07:50 <NotShinta> : It certainly is the weak point of Ellipse, but still, fuck you
07:50 <Powerdrone311> : not going to mod that
07:50 <Powerdrone311> : xD
07:51 *NotShinta is listening to (Imogen Heap - Canvas)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18323]
07:51 <NotShinta> : wait
07:51 <NotShinta> : wrong command

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-08-08T12:27:06+00:00

Fuck you drone

And DC

Also, know what 1/3 is before telling me not to use it please

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-08-21T09:23:46+00:00

star first.mod later

GladiOol

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GladiOol 2010-08-24T13:59:18+00:00

~~Resnap all notes on 1/2 divisor!~~

'?' means suggestion.

Offset 31.135
Where yo tags? (:

[Hectic]

Tick Rate 3 ?

00:51:710 (1) - Remove New Combo ?
02:48:257 (7) - I would love it more if this would follow the vocals, so maybe make the slider start 1/3 later ?

[Safe]

00:51:860 (1) - Remove New Combo ?
02:34:882 (x) - Extra Note Here ?
02:45:241 (x) - ^

Solid map & Sexy~ <3
Starred~

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-08-25T08:22:27+00:00

cut .mp3 ?
seem fine to me :3

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-08-31T14:27:38+00:00

karenying wrote:
cut .mp3 ?

do it fgt

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-08-31T16:23:21+00:00

No the song's too sexy

Krisom

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Krisom 2010-09-03T23:17:54+00:00

general-
The Kiai Time timing sections are not snapped correctly. Please recheck them =P

Rest-
01:57:471 (3,1) - Weird spacing. Well, I could read it at least...
02:59:630 (3,1) - ^
Great

Safe-
01:28:119 (1,3) - These claps are quite lonely, replace them by whistles?
01:53:587 (1) - ^ I mean, you just used 3 claps on the entire diff
Woah... ...man, this is really relaxing

Hectic-
01:55:313 (7) - The fact that is buried by (4)'s hitsplash AND that it is kinda hard to see the approach circle (due to the black combo colour landing exaclty here...) makes this note really invisible imo.
Amazing o/

Well, you could ignore every single mod I pointed out :v, but the important one is the one about those Kiai Time Sections~

Star ~!

Agnes

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Agnes 2010-09-04T19:16:46+00:00

Modding time, go.

[General]

Poked at the SB Load going within the red (6.00x) in IRC and then goes into 7.00x after the first break, then when it reaches kiai, goes back within 3.00x range. Potential unnecessary transparent images?

[Rest]

O.K.!

[Safe]

O.K.!

[Hectic]

O.K.!

Nothing wrong with the beatmap, t'was just the SB really. Other than that, this map deserves a star. <3

TheVileOne

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TheVileOne 2010-09-07T22:15:19+00:00

Rest

Fine. Just remember to touch up those sliders. Some of them are angled.

Safe

Finished through irc

Hectic

01:17:752 - There just needs to be a note here. It plays so much more natural.

01:34:012 (2) - I don't understand why you have a note here.
01:35:307 (2) - ^
01:36:602 (2) - ^
01:44:372 (2) - ^
01:45:667 (2) - ^
01:46:961 (2) - Move back 1/8th tick?

This difficulty is tricky as hell to hit. I like it.

NotShinta

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NotShinta 2010-09-21T12:16:08+00:00

Can suddenly FC Hectic now.

Anyway, make the SB hang around so it doesn't stop mid-fade. Also, is that black thing meant to be there.

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-09-21T17:42:15+00:00

WHAT'S THAT BLACK THING, DOING THERE?

Actually it is meant to be there

I'll try and fix the sb at the end

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-10-02T09:25:18+00:00

That mp3 is totally 320kbps you bad boy. And you have like 1:30 of unmapped song at the end, fade that out.

Safe and Hectic:

01:53:868 (2) - This threw me off. 1/6 back to sync with vocals properly.
02:04:155 (2) - See above and for the next chorus etc
Fraulein, there's no use hiding your incompetence, I can see your star right there.

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-10-03T18:53:15+00:00

Jarby wrote:
Safe and Hectic:

01:53:868 (2) - This threw me off. 1/6 back to sync with vocals properly.
02:04:155 (2) - See above and for the next chorus etc

IMO it's less confusing if everything is on the 1/3s, as that's where the vocals should be even if Immy is singing a little off.

Larto

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Larto 2010-10-06T21:08:15+00:00

Is the strobing and the overall storyboarding supposed to not fall on white ticks good sir

RandomJibberish

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