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Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (Trance Arrange)

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Natteke
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 October 2010 at 16:31:36

Artist: Lia
Title: Toki wo Kizamu Uta (Trance Arrange)
Source: Clannad ~After Story~
Tags: Garven jericho2442 lepidopodus
BPM: 139
Filesize: 2961kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Garven's Easy (1.49 stars, 121 notes)
  2. Hard (4.93 stars, 339 notes)
  3. jericho2442's Rave!! (5 stars, 434 notes)
  4. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4.81 stars, 531 notes)
Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (Trance Arrange)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload, if downloaded before 09/10/10 (OSB changes)

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Glass
first
Topic Starter
Natteke
Thanks glassy <3
Garven
Silent slider slides that aren't a 1/4 meg each. :/
download.php?id=24776

Diff all done~ Kinda spinner-heavy, but I think it's okay.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (Trance Arrange) (Natteke) [Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Natteke
bump
Muya
Please changed " CLANNAD ~After Story~ " to Source
[Shalon]
cool song XD

can I make taiko map for this song?

If you agree, I'll make it


STAR~

p.s// clannad wa jinsei-
Topic Starter
Natteke
I was thinking to make my own taiko diff. If I get bored, I'll let you know :D
La Cataline
Star this map! :arrow:
TKiller
My message contains too few characters
Blackiris
This song and... trance arrange?

Star.
jericho2442
Topic Starter
Natteke
Jericho, I'll keep it for a while and get some people to check it.
dNextGen
hello
Topic Starter
Natteke
hello, sir =3=
lepidopodus
Taiko map finished. Oni lvl. 6~7 this time.

Anyway, I think timing is a little off in the last part of the song... Or maybe not orz

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (Trance Arrange) (Natteke) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Natteke
yeah I know that the second timing section is a bit wrong. I'll change it later
thx for map
gowww
8-)
KIA
Dji Dji
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Everything here looks ok

[General]
Add a Normal to fill the gap between Easy and Hard? specially with that Hard that has parts that are too hard for a Hard it might cause you a EIII diff spread problem.

[Timing]
Offset -16 ms

[jericho2442's Rave!!]
Add more or longer breaks?
00:19:599 (1) - Remove new combo? as apparently this is the same musical pattern so i dont see a reason for a new combo.
00:25:210 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Dont see a reason for all theese jumps and combos.
00:32:764 (1) - Make a smoother curve that goes perfectly on the outline of the slider end? something like
00:56:289 (1) - Make a more symmetric curve if possible?
01:22:819 (4) - 2 grids right to complete the parallelogram?
01:23:250 (2,4) - 1 grid right to align with the others in the parallelogram?.
01:28:862 (4) - 1 grid down, 1 grid right to allign in the parallelogram?
01:29:725 (4) - 1 grid right to allign in the parallelogram?
01:30:588 (4) - ^
02:11:165 (1) - Remove new combo and remove the jump? neither seem to fit here.
02:12:244 (1) - ^
02:25:177 (1,2,3) - Form a triangle? it looks kind of random when placed like that.

[Hard]
00:37:297 (1,2) - Spacing too close
00:49:383 (1) - try to make a wavy slider instead? it fits better.
00:59:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Ehh for a Hard, i dont think you should include the repeat sliders since they can barely be seen clearly, just make it a regular stream.
01:03:628 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - why the NC spam, it messes up hp calculations
01:18:718 (1) - Might as well make linear, remove the middle waypoint.

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]
Looks fine, although i wonder if you could use more notes at the beginning?

[Garven's Easy]
Well i hope you dont mind that i nazi your sliders =P
00:07:944 (2) - Align start and end?
00:10:534 (1) - Make more curvy?
00:12:045 (2) - Make an arc? this curve is way too semi-curvy not-so-curvy like, or at least a rainbow.
00:13:987 (1) - Delete 1 waypoint and make a better curve?
00:14:851 (2) - More curvy-like?
00:18:304 (2) - Make a more symmstrical slider?
00:23:700 (4) - ^
00:25:858 (2) - I think a Rainbow slider would look better.
00:27:800 (4) - Make a better curve? or a Linear slider?
00:28:664 (1) - Make a more symmetrical slider?
00:31:253 (3) - Align start and end?
00:43:124 (2) - Remove the 2nd to last waypoint and the middle waypoint then make the waves better by draggin the waypoints way off the slider? as it stands currently it has also some corners near the start and end.
00:56:937 (1) - That slider tick at the end looks and sounds awkward, redo this slider so that it doesnt use that tick?
01:24:329 (2,2) - Make more symmetrical?
01:30:804 (1) - What's with the arrange of waypoints in this slider? O_O looks kinda weird to me. ehh was just wondering you can ignore this if you want.
01:34:259 (3) - Make into an arc or rainbow?
01:41:165 (1) - Another Semi-Curve slider.
01:44:618 (1) - Make more symmetrical?
01:52:172 (2) - Make the corner look less sharp? (and more symmetrical)
01:54:978 (1) - Another semi-curve slider, make into an arc or a rainbow?
01:57:568 (5) - Make linear or curve please >_<
01:58:431 (1) - Start at: 02:00:158 and map the part that you remove?
02:10:517 (2) - Make it encircle (1) completely? like this?
SPOILER

308,27,130517,2,0,B|391:34|406:85|406:142|397:176|346:207|291:205|257:173,2,300,2|2|2
02:14:402 (2) - Make more symmetrical?
02:17:407 (4) - Might as well make it linear if your not gonna use a curve at all.
02:18:270 (1) - Make more symmetrical?
02:19:565 (2,4) - Remove the middle waypoint it isnt really needed since you appear to want some linear sliders here.
02:21:724 (1) - Make a more smooth curve? (And Symmetrical)
02:23:019 (2) - I think you can work with just 1 waypoint, but anyways, make it more symmetrical please.
02:24:314 (4) - The positioning of the waypoints look awkward, maybe it's just me.
02:26:040 (6) - Make a rainbow slider instead?.

[Overall]
I'm still worried over diff spread issue
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