1. Hard (2.59 stars, 384 notes)
2. Normal (1.54 stars, 220 notes)

1. How about adding a few tags to help players discover the song? traditional vocal jazz relaxing might fit well as the tags. Search for more of those, if you want.
2. Countdown, Widescreen Support and Letterboxes are unnecesssary. Please make sure to have them disabled. (Song Setup > Storyboarding).
3. I really loved the set of colours you use, they are pleasant and look neat but the green and the violet one seem to be unfitting with the background.
   Note: personally, I would suggest looking for a different BG, instead of changing colours. Something providing a better variety of colours would so much better with the song, in my opinion.

1. Consider lowering your OD and HP by one or at least 0,5. The song is relaxing and your mapping style is relaxing as well. Therefore, harsh difficulty settings appear unfitting here.
2. 00:25:369 (3) - this one can be easily replaced with a single circle at 00:25:369. THe rhythm remains quite playable and nothing significant is left out.
   Note: it would be great to simplify this part of the song a little. As the diff is intended to be the easiest one, making it frendlier won't hurt.
3. 01:40:948 (3) - minor - this slider gets overlapped with the HP-Bar. It is not a big issues, but it is possible that such an overlap will trouble newbies and appear untidy. A little re-arrangement of object's placement would solve the problem.
4. 01:53:626 - this is a very strong beat, so I would prefer if there was a circle to click it. Also, I feel like the slider at 01:54:114 - does not emphasize vocals enough, so I thought of a better rhythm and came up with this.
   Note: 02:39:949 (3,1) - same as above applies to this pattern. THey have a very similar sound.
5. 02:13:862 (3) - 02:15:812 (2) - 02:17:763 (2) - we can focus on the vocals and remove those 1/2 circles. This wil ll make the diff work slightly more suitable for beginners.
   Note: you've already done it with 02:20:932 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - , so why not do it again?
6. 02:15:081 (1) - I am pretty sure that this should be placed 1/4 forward. Both rhythm and spacing require it.
7. 02:43:362 (3) - vocals are ksort of splitted and it would be cool to replicate it in the map. What do you think about this rhythm?
   
   I like it! I like it a lot! The only thing I am unsure of is the amount of 1/2 beats, I believe that you could reduce the usage of them a litytle bit. Apart from that, I really enjoyed modding it.

1. 00:26:588 (3) - try to be careful with sudden direction changes. Espicially in calm songs. The trick here is that it has nothing in the music, and the flow suddenly gets broken. A plain straight or sligthly curved slider would fit better here, in my opinion.
2. 00:36:097 (2,3) - was there any reason in the music for this jump? I think it is an unnecessary one. Maybe you can tone it down?
3. 01:00:965 (1,3) - try to unstack the sliders. It will improve their readabillity a little.
4. 02:23:858 (3,4) - the spacing here is inconsistent with the previous pattern (02:21:907 (3,4)). Why don't you try to add little (x1.6 or so) jumps in both of these patterns?
5. 02:31:903 (3) - this would sound and play much better as circle + 1/2 slider due to the vocals sounding like "and - throoough". Also, t would match with the music nicely. Here's an example of what's on my mind.
6. 03:15:057 - 03:16:664 - an so on- The green lines you have placed on the spinner are unnecessary as they do not change anything. Instead, they might cause cause some problems within osu. So, I highly recommend to remove them and leave the red ones only.
   
   Well done and polished. I'd recommend to get a couple of modders to doublecheck the jumps, but I really loved this difficulty.

[ Ernasis ] wrote:

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Normal

normal

• -Instead of this 00:59:502 (1), you can do something like this It will say that I follow the vocal. But If I follow the vocal, that's not enough for it. There must be some additional 1/2 points and things will become more harder. So i'll just keep mine
  -01:54:114 (1) same as above ^ same
  -02:40:924 (1) ^ same
  -Add notes to 01:09:742 and 01:10:229 since thats where vocals start again. I'm not sure if it follow something. And the first vocal start at 01:09:985 - not 01:09:742 - .
  -Move 02:14:959 (1) one tick to the right. Pretty sure this wasn't intentional. I've remove the 1/2 circle from last modder's mod and after that I see no problem with spacing. I don't know if it says fixed or not XD
  -Make a slider from 02:27:759 to 02:28:246 or just notes. With this filled it transitions better into khai. Nope. I see you follow the vocal here. But I follow the instrument
  -I don't think this 02:57:503 (1) nc is needed. It's necessary for 4 beats combo consistency.

Hard

hard

• -Ctrl + G 00:36:337 (1). Leads into the slider better and goes well with this type of music. No more unnecessary jumps.
  -Ctrl + G 00:07:084 (6) as well. Makes it feel not as linear to the previous 2 sliders and goes into the next slider better. I'll keep mine to continue the consistency from 00:06:109 (4,5) - .
  -You might want to add a a slider from 01:29:734 to 01:29:916 instead of just a note. Goes well with the bend in pitch with the vocals. I think mine is fine since I heard the "stop" part on the instrument.
  -Move 01:35:585 (4) to x:456 y:48. Makes a nice triangle But it will broke the spacing flow ;w;
  -Blanket 01:36:804 (2) to 01:35:585 (4) I'll blanket it if I can. But if I blanket it, The slider will be overarea mapping
  -Make 01:58:137 (3) into a repeating slider like this. Sounds a bit better instead of just a slider. It's just make things overmapped since I just follow the acoustic guitar here.
  -Blanket 02:31:416 (2,3) better. No more blankets here after I change the second slider.
  -Add notes to 02:56:528 and 02:57:015. Stack them with 02:56:040 (1). Doing this will make it feel consistent with the previous stack on 02:52:139 (1,2,3,4). This part wasn't like the earlier one. In this part, There's no instrument that follow the 1 beat pattern but the earlier one has hat.
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• General

1. It would be nice if you included Call Me Irresponsible in tags as it is name of the album the song was released in.
2. Hitsounds are really cool, but usage of normal-hitnormal is a little bad. Firstly, it seems that sound in its background is a little later than the drum, but moreover, I noticed that its quality is little worsened by volume manipulation, in the end I can clearly hear ugly distortion when it appears in a map. I took the kick drum from one of my older maps (because I was using pretty much the original from some pack or maybe FL) and mixed it with soft-hitnormal the way it doesn't sound distorted as the original file. If you can, please replace it with this.
   
   Hard
3. 00:06:109 (4) - Stacking with 00:04:890 (2) - appears to look much better in gameplay, I guess moving it on 314;313 would not harm the map at all. Stacking doesn't apply for the note, so its position is off the slider in game play and that looks kind of unpolished.
4. If possible, check for other stacks as well, 1 point things like 00:08:791 (2) - don't matter, but things like 00:07:572 (7) - don't look nor read well. I think there weren't that many, just few.
   
   Normal
5. Please copy combo colors from Hard, they are inconsistent and currently these on Normal don't fit the background at all.
6. After checking Bakari's mod, I must admit that 02:42:387 (1,2,3) - fits better the way he suggested it, it makes it little bit more difficult to play, but the rhythm is more correct. You don't have to worry about it being to hard, at least it will fit the 2-diff spread more.
7. For 01:53:626 and 01:54:114, I would also welcome a note here. For similar reasons as above, clicking is emphasizing the important sound much better than ending on slider and it makes the spread a little better.

Wafu wrote:

Found out this beatmap thanks to Bakari and I really love the way it is mapped and everything around it. Here are few things I would welcome to change, they're not many.

• General

1. It would be nice if you included Call Me Irresponsible in tags as it is name of the album the song was released in. Added :3
2. Hitsounds are really cool, but usage of normal-hitnormal is a little bad. Firstly, it seems that sound in its background is a little later than the drum, but moreover, I noticed that its quality is little worsened by volume manipulation, in the end I can clearly hear ugly distortion when it appears in a map. I took the kick drum from one of my older maps (because I was using pretty much the original from some pack or maybe FL) and mixed it with soft-hitnormal the way it doesn't sound distorted as the original file. If you can, please replace it with this. Well, Replaced :3
   
   Hard
3. 00:06:109 (4) - Stacking with 00:04:890 (2) - appears to look much better in gameplay, I guess moving it on 314;313 would not harm the map at all. Stacking doesn't apply for the note, so its position is off the slider in game play and that looks kind of unpolished. I don't know why did that point become that far from the stacking point XD . Maybe I has unwittingly moved 00:06:109 (4,5,6) - XD. And fixed some minor stacking problem too :3
4. If possible, check for other stacks as well, 1 point things like 00:08:791 (2) - don't matter, but things like 00:07:572 (7) - don't look nor read well. I think there weren't that many, just few. yup.
   
   Normal
5. Please copy combo colors from Hard, they are inconsistent and currently these on Normal don't fit the background at all. Whoops... forgot it :3
6. After checking Bakari's mod, I must admit that 02:42:387 (1,2,3) - fits better the way he suggested it, it makes it little bit more difficult to play, but the rhythm is more correct. You don't have to worry about it being to hard, at least it will fit the 2-diff spread more. After considering about it and this thing was mentioned 2 times, I think I'll change it.
7. For 01:53:626 and 01:54:114, I would also welcome a note here. For similar reasons as above, clicking is emphasizing the important sound much better than ending on slider and it makes the spread a little better. Yea like I said above :3

I don't see really any reason for changing other beatmap patterns, settings or anything else. Apart from these, few minor, few more important things, I have no reason to make mapper wait any longer, difference between these diffs is adequate and because readability for both diffs (apart from mentioned stacks) is perfect, I cannot really say no, it's great. Call me back.

1. 00:12:935 - 00:36:341 I think you forget? http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg
2. 00:52:432 (3) - Imo this beat 00:52:919 - is quite strong, so rather than holding the slider I guess it's better to be clicked, so the rhythm something like http://puu.sh/jjWao/a038252ea5.jpg
3. 01:20:957 (2,3,4) - Idk it's kind of sudden on that triplet while the rest you use 1/4 slider with repeat
4. 02:43:362 (3,4) - Kinda too close imo, considering to make them a bit farther? as the SV is 0.90 same as 01:57:771 (2,3) - so I guess it's better to have same spacing on them visually
5. 03:04:573 - Set to http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg, then remove normal sampleset on this one 03:04:817 -, then lastly on 03:05:119 - set also to http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg. So overall better at the bass and drum emphasis imo

1. 00:00:502 - Duplicate inherited point
2. 00:19:518 (3,1) - Spacing error it's noticeable imo
3. 00:31:221 (3,1) - Spacing error
4. 01:41:192 - Add additions Drum clap, then add additions Drum finish here 01:41:436 -? kinda too quite there imo
5. 02:43:118 (2,3,4,5) - How about try this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3466730 instead? It's more fit with both vocal and guitar melodies
6. 03:04:573 - Set to http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg, then remove normal sampleset on this one 03:04:817 -, then lastly on 03:05:119 - set also to http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg. So overall better at the bass and drum emphasis imo

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:12:935 - 00:36:341 I think you forget? http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg ya... I forgot it XD
2. 00:52:432 (3) - Imo this beat 00:52:919 - is quite strong, so rather than holding the slider I guess it's better to be clicked, so the rhythm something like http://puu.sh/jjWao/a038252ea5.jpg After considering about it. First time I won't change it. But after I see 02:33:854 (3,4) - , I change my mind :3. And changed 01:47:044 (3) - too for consistency :3.
3. 01:20:957 (2,3,4) - Idk it's kind of sudden on that triplet while the rest you use 1/4 slider with repeat Changed for consistency.
4. 02:43:362 (3,4) - Kinda too close imo, considering to make them a bit farther? as the SV is 0.90 same as 01:57:771 (2,3) - so I guess it's better to have same spacing on them visually Nope. This point have a different effect from the last point you said. This point has a low tom part that I think if the spacing was a bit decreased, it would be cool :3.
5. 03:04:573 - Set to http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg, then remove normal sampleset on this one 03:04:817 -, then lastly on 03:05:119 - set also to http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg. So overall better at the bass and drum emphasis imo But I hear a kick drum at 03:04:817 - that looks not a good idea to ignore it

[Normal]

1. 00:00:502 - Duplicate inherited point didn't notice it lol. fixed
2. 00:19:518 (3,1) - Spacing error it's noticeable imo fixed
3. 00:31:221 (3,1) - Spacing error fixed
4. 01:41:192 - Add additions Drum clap, then add additions Drum finish here 01:41:436 -? kinda too quite there imo yea... I forgot to add it XD . Added to make it consistent with Hard
5. 02:43:118 (2,3,4,5) - How about try this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3466730 instead? It's more fit with both vocal and guitar melodies it will ignore the vocal you on the music
6. 03:04:573 - Set to http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg, then remove normal sampleset on this one 03:04:817 -, then lastly on 03:05:119 - set also to http://puu.sh/jjVp6/155842ae76.jpg. So overall better at the bass and drum emphasis imo But I hear a kick drum at 03:04:817 - that looks not a good idea to ignore it

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Overall looks great, feel free to call me for a recheck