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Omarion - Ice Box

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mrtn
osu! Alumni
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mrtn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on donderdag 19 augustus 2010 at 12:25:15

Artist: Omarion
Title: Ice Box
Tags: Timbaland
BPM: 131,1
Filesize: 5330kb
Play Time: 02:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,89 stars, 364 notes)
  2. Normal (2,65 stars, 175 notes)
Download: Omarion - Ice Box
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Last edited by mrtn , edited 8 times in total.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
I came for the mod4mod, though I didn't really find anything, so I'll leave it up to you if you want to mod back.

[Easy]
This plays more like a Normal than an easy.
01:40:933 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for an easy.
02:12:740 (4) - That finish intended?
02:54:160 (1) - Soon after spinner, easy, yeah.

[Hard]
So much normal whistle. ><
01:11:642 (4,1) - Ack, wasn't expecting that jump.

Is it cold in here?
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Easy]
I dunno, blue ticks in an Easy? Personally I would lengthen all of them by 1/4.
01:07:409 (1) - Start 1/4 later to sync with the previous sliders.
02:20:636 (1) - ^. These 2 will be the bane of every new player to this map.

[Hard]
01:07:409 (1) - Yeah, this starts on the "I", but its so soft the "say" covers all of it later, making the start feel like its not sounded to anything. Move 1/4 back and drop one repeat.
02:20:635 (1) - Same as ^. Remove this beat.

Also, less whistles would be appreciated.

You might also want to ask someone to cut the song.



Starred.
TKiller
4,390 posts
Joined May 2009
TKiller
[Hard]

00:31:825 (3) - make this slider same shape as (1) please

00:40:063 (2,3,4) - why use >1.0x spacing?

01:18:278 (4,5,6) - make the slider "rounder"

01:42:992 (3,4,5) - make this pattern more orbital, move (4) 1 grid down and 1 grid left, and then adjust next slider holding alt and shift. Or probably it's easier to reshape the 1st slider, copypaste it, flip and adjust the hitcircle.

02:11:596 (6) - not perfectly symmetrical (press Ctrl+J and see)

02:32:878 (7) - something makes me wanna stack it with (5), makes look 5,6,7 pattern like back and forth swing

02:53:701 (3,4,5,6,7) - I like it more when 4,5 stacked under (3) end, 6 moved in the way it makes orbital pattern with 4,5 and 7 moved by distance snap so it continues (6) curve.


[Easy]

00:31:138 (1) - so random shaped, better make it slightly curved horizontal slider

01:01:573 (2) - 1 grid left

01:03:862 (1,2) - make it something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/20369? (this is just a quick suggestion, shape is not ideal, but enough to get the idea) Linear repeating slider looks so random for me. If you agree, move next objexts in a proper way, of course.

01:07:409 (1) - these slider ticks are so wrong

01:08:896 (2,3,4,5) - move it so stack matches the slider curve (about 2 grids down/right)


damn, I bet I could make more comments on this one, but this heat is just unbearable, I should go back to bed. Also, I liked the hitsounds pretty much. Make spacings more neat and this map would be awesome.


If you agree with my suggestions, a mod4mod would be nice http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18131 (you said you can mod4mod)
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
Topic Starter
mrtn

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
This plays more like a Normal than an easy.
01:40:933 (1) - I think its fine
02:12:740 (4) - fixed
02:54:160 (1) - I think it's fine

[Hard]
01:11:642 (4,1) - don't see a problem with it :o
Thanks for mod :)

JInxyjem wrote:

[Easy]
most are on sliders so I think it's not an issue because you'll still get 300 pts even when you click slightly early/late
01:07:409 (1) - I don't think it's that hard tbh...
02:20:636 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:07:409 (1) - disagree sorry :(
02:20:635 (1) - ^

Also, less whistles would be appreciated. - i'll look at the whistles

You might also want to ask someone to cut the song. - then i would have to redo the storyboard because of the changed offset, so not gonna do that :$

TKiller wrote:

[Hard]

00:31:825 (3) - fixed

00:40:063 (2,3,4) - plays better

01:18:278 (4,5,6) - fixed

01:42:992 (3,4,5) - done

02:11:596 (6) - i know, wasn't going for that :p

02:32:878 (7) - agreed

02:53:701 (3,4,5,6,7) - disagree with the way you thought of it, but i did change it slightly ;)


[Easy]

00:31:138 (1) - so true ;p. fixed

01:01:573 (2) - fixed

01:03:862 (1,2) - agreed

01:07:409 (1) - lol :P. can't do much aobut that particular slider...

01:08:896 (2,3,4,5) - done


thanks for the intense mod :)

If you agree with my suggestions, a mod4mod would be nice http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18131 (you said you can mod4mod) i'll do it asap :)
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
Remove the finishes on the word "be" in the sentence: "Where my heart used to be" in the chorusses, they sound odd.
Also, sliderfix as requested

Download: Omarion - Ice Box (mrtn) [Hard].osu

Download: Omarion - Ice Box (mrtn) [Normal].osu
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Here's a cut mp3 with the same offset as the original.

Edit: Mod post

Normal
00:29:308 (1,2,1) - Move right one grid. [I usually don't nazi...]
01:07:409 (1) - This part is really odd. Move it forward to the red tick and make it end at the same blue tick.
02:20:635 (1) - ^
Oh. If you remove those two 1/4 starting sliders, I think you can call it an easy.

Download: Omarion - Ice Box.mp3
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

The files "bg_chorus.jpg and bg_overlay.jpg" are way too big for storyboarding. You should reduce them at 800x600 at least and full submit.

That's all I can find, really. Fix it and I'll bubble!
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
This is my favorite omarion song, it's so good, however you really butchered it with those whistles of yours. They are first of all very very loud, very very noisy and do not fit this song at all. I know that it wouldn't sound much if you only used claps and finishes because of the vocals, but really <_<

otherwise map is alright, SB is nice
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
Topic Starter
mrtn

Gabi wrote:

This is my favorite omarion song, it's so good, however you really butchered it with those whistles of yours. They are first of all very very loud, very very noisy and do not fit this song at all. I know that it wouldn't sound much if you only used claps and finishes because of the vocals, but really <_<

otherwise map is alright, SB is nice
I decided to lower the whistlevolume by editing the soundsample... I hope it's better now. The map sounds so boring without the whistles imo :(. If you still think it's crap, please rehitsound it how you think it would be best.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Alright, then.

Bubbled~
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
Use 14,663 as the offset.

I guess that's all.
mrtn
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mrtn

Gens wrote:

Use 14,663 as the offset.

I guess that's all.
fixed
Gens
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Joined August 2008
Gens
I'm going to return this to a bubble, since an offset change isn't a light issue.

Still, good job on the map.
Andrea
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Andrea
Looks good to me.

Ranked~
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