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Magome Togoshi - Gentle Jena

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FireballFlame
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FireballFlame
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 13. Mai 2011 at 22:37:31

Artist: Magome Togoshi
Title: Gentle Jena
Source: Planetarian ~Chiisana Hoshi no Yume~
Tags: The Reverie of a Little Planet Hoshino Yumemi Key
BPM: 66,01
Filesize: 7188kb
Play Time: 02:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,11 stars, 107 notes)
  2. Hard (3,36 stars, 215 notes)
  3. Normal (2,59 stars, 178 notes)
Download: Magome Togoshi - Gentle Jena
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From the visual novel
Planetarian ~Chiisana Hoshi no Yume~
(~The Reverie of a Little Planet~)
Last edited by FireballFlame , edited 36 times in total.
pjiang621111
72 posts
Joined December 2008
pjiang621111
Starred this~ ^^
z6358536
6 posts
Joined June 2009
z6358536
expect~
digiaria
257 posts
Joined October 2008
digiaria
:)
narakucrimson
osu! Alumni
1,713 posts
Joined March 2010
narakucrimson
Hi there! Not much to say, didn't see issues at all. The only thing that, for me at least, doesn't fit, is that long kiai time. It's a reeeally slow and serene song, and kiai is more like for - how could I put it.. - more epic moments. Maybe you can shorten the kiai mode to one beat long, so you'd see that star burst, but circles wouldn't be all shiny and stuff. But that's just an opinion, if you like it as it is, it's enough for me :)

Star, for the good work! Keep it up!
Nadina120
135 posts
Joined March 2010
Nadina120
Still my Favorite map for relaxing and it is the most beautiful song and the map fits perfectly for me so I can not comment any more XD
pjiang621111
72 posts
Joined December 2008
pjiang621111
Hard difficulty is very interesting. :)

Don't know if this is considered a mod, but for the Hard difficulty, the sliders at 01:50:960, 01:51:868, 01:55:276, 01:58:230, 01:59:139, and 02:09:817 need to be resnapped and corrected.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Revived
FireballFlame
280 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
FireballFlame
Thx, now I can resume mapping this.
@pjiang621111: That's because that part wasn't mapped yet, those were just leftover notes from the Normal diff ;)

edit: Done! :)
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
[Hard]

Okay, a few suggestions:

00:41:894 (5,6) - Make them slightly curved? Would make the thing less stiff.
SPOILER
Apply the following mod in the spoiler box if you want some unnecessary but perfect symetry around the center lol.
SPOILER
(grid level 4)
00:47:347 (1,2) - one grid up, one grid right
00:49:619 (4) - ^
00:50:073 (5) - ^
00:50:528 (6) - Make it dead center.
00:50:982 (7) - 2 grids right.
01:10:976 (3) - New combo since distance spacing change?
01:58:235 (3) - ^
02:12:777 (3) - ^
01:42:785 (3,5) - Not well stacked.

[Normal]

00:47:347 (1) - Could definitely use a cuter slider, like this:
SPOILER

[Easy]
01:58:235 (3) - not really symetrical with (1). Select (1) then ctrl+J and ctrl+H to find the right placing... Well if you take the slider as a whole, it is symetrical, so nvm.

Overall, nice map altough a bit dark. Anyways, catch dat star.
FireballFlame
280 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
FireballFlame

galvenize wrote:

[Hard]

Okay, a few suggestions:

00:41:894 (5,6) - Make them slightly curved? Would make the thing less stiff. Done!
SPOILER
Apply the following mod in the spoiler box if you want some unnecessary but perfect symetry around the center lol. This doesn't seem perfect either...I'll leave it the way it is, noone will probably notice anyway :P
SPOILER
(grid level 4)
00:47:347 (1,2) - one grid up, one grid right
00:49:619 (4) - ^
00:50:073 (5) - ^
00:50:528 (6) - Make it dead center.
00:50:982 (7) - 2 grids right.
01:10:976 (3) - New combo since distance spacing change? Okay.
01:58:235 (3) - ^ ^
02:12:777 (3) - ^ ^
01:42:785 (3,5) - Not well stacked. Fixed it with a 1,04x timing section :D

[Normal]

00:47:347 (1) - Could definitely use a cuter slider, like this: True. Done!
SPOILER

[Easy]
01:58:235 (3) - not really symetrical with (1). Select (1) then ctrl+J and ctrl+H to find the right placing... Well if you take the slider as a whole, it is symetrical, so nvm. Yes, I used the middle of the slider for reference.

Overall, nice map altough a bit dark. Anyways, catch dat star. Thanks! :)
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
-For a song that is this peaceful I don't really think the maps need to be too difficult and I would recommend +1 circle size on every difficulty but will leave that up to you
-I wouldn't really suggest kiai time on this map, it doesn't fit too mch
-Audio lead-in isn't needed on any difficulty
-Is 'failsound' needed?

Easy:
HP -1 for such a calm map?

Normal:
01:35:515 (3,1) - space out more

Hard:
Slightly more spaced out than needed but looks good

Don't see too many songs like this in osu so good job~
Have a star
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
I can't mod this yet since my laptop lags like shit while doing stuff in the editor mode.

I'll mod this once I get my PC fixed.

star'd for now.
FireballFlame
280 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
FireballFlame

James2250 wrote:

-For a song that is this peaceful I don't really think the maps need to be too difficult and I would recommend +1 circle size on every difficulty but will leave that up to you I don't really like the largest circle size, so I'll leave it like that.
-I wouldn't really suggest kiai time on this map, it doesn't fit too mch I thought I'd be okay since the flashing is really slow and I removed the fountains... but I guess if more people are against it, I'll take it out.
-Audio lead-in isn't needed on any difficulty Removed.
-Is 'failsound' needed? The .wav is empty, so it actually mutes the failsound. I think it sounds better that way on a song as calm as this.

Easy:
HP -1 for such a calm map? Okay.

Normal:
01:35:515 (3,1) - space out more Fixed!

Hard:
Slightly more spaced out than needed but looks good

Don't see too many songs like this in osu so good job~
Have a star Thanks! :)

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

star'd for now. Oh, thx!
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
410 posts
Joined November 2009
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
-Agreed with James2250. The kiai is unnecessary for this song. Think of remove it.

[Easy]

Calm. Nothing found here.

[Normal]

HP -1

[Hard]

CS -1 (?)
HP -1

And I like how you made this. Jumps. Good idea.

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A nice and calm song. Star.
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Hi >w<

General
I agree with the kiai thing D: It's really random ;w;

Hard
I'd really increase the size of circles here. But as you said you like small ones D:

Don't kd this post >_<
Have a star.
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
...真的有人在做
FireballFlame
280 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
FireballFlame

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

-Agreed with James2250. The kiai is unnecessary for this song. Think of remove it. -.- Removed. :(

[Easy]

Calm. Nothing found here.

[Normal]

HP -1 Done!

[Hard]

CS -1 (?) I still think it's good the way it is...
HP -1 Done!

And I like how you made this. Jumps. Good idea.

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A nice and calm song. Star. Thanks!

Wiinter wrote:

Have a star. Thx!
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
back on my PC.
love the VN. love the song. Kudoso star'd.

not much to say here.
I'm no Nazi modder, but that's better than nothing.
Normal
00:49:164 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 grid up
01:31:425 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - not perfectly symmetrical
01:58:235 (3,4) - 4 could look more like 3
FireballFlame
280 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
FireballFlame

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

back on my PC.
love the VN. love the song. Kudoso star'd. Thx!

not much to say here.
I'm no Nazi modder, but that's better than nothing.
Normal
00:49:164 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 grid up Ignored, after consultation in chat.
01:31:425 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - not perfectly symmetrical Fixed!
01:58:235 (3,4) - 4 could look more like 3 I wanted the outer curves of (3,4,5) to match; unchanged for now.
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