1. Easy (1.32 stars, 99 notes)
2. Gaia's Hard (2.73 stars, 213 notes)
3. Insane (3.65 stars, 257 notes)
4. Normal (1.57 stars, 128 notes)

Crier wrote:

1st

(EASY GETTING REWORKED)

Easy

1. 00:11:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you change into sliders?
2. 00:13:680 (1) - extend until 00:14:550 as you did it at normal diff

Normal

Very clear diff, but there's too small gap between Easy and Normal, that i can even found harder patterns than Normal diff in Easy diff.
You would be better reduce circles and 1/2rythm at Easy diff because current gap of normal-hard diff is appropriate.

Hard Yea you are totally right I will go remap my easy with significant value.

1. 
   
   [notice]Insane
   
   1. 00:00:638 (1,2,3) - i don't really recommend high jump at the beginning. you can try this I like it
      
   2. 00:09:985 (6) - for nice flow, place at 282||332 and 00:10:203 (7) - 216||289, 00:10:637 (8) - 355||366 (or 356||352)
   3. 00:31:072 (6) - 245||275 YES TO ALL FLOW CHANGES, BUT MOVED SOME AROUND TO FIT MY STYLE
   4. 00:38:029 (7,8) - consider switching them I'll keep it the same, it creates a counter clockwise rotation that fits well despite how close it may seem
   5. 00:51:724 (3) - ctrl+g or do something to increase distance between 00:51:290 (2,3). it's really confusing to catch 1/4 rythm because 00:51:290 (2,3,1,2) have same distance you know. I think you are right on this
   6. 00:52:811 (1) - kibb's slider lol Really? I just threw random crap in there
   7. 01:08:464 (4) - better rythm suggestion
      

Ok did something similiar

overall all diffs are clear so that my suggestions aren't must be fixed. Good luck :3

monstrata wrote:

quick irc

17:19 monstrata: now np map and i'll give it a quick check
17:20 *Kocari is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/746533 mimimemeMIMI - sentimental love]
17:21 monstrata: Insane
17:21 monstrata: lets go
17:21 monstrata: 00:17:594 (10) - Oh, a drum-clap on the slider-end would be coool
17:21 Kocari: lol
17:21 Kocari: K
17:22 Kocari: YE
17:22 Kocari: NICE NICE
17:22 monstrata: 00:20:855 (6) - too 
17:22 Kocari: GIVE ME GIVE ME
17:23 monstrata: 00:48:898 (10) - Here too i guess, drum clap rather tha normal
17:24 Kocari: YES GIVE IT TO ME
17:24 monstrata: 01:07:811 (2,3) - Uh here kinda feels too strong cuz theres a jump + flow break
17:24 monstrata: better to have emphasis from 3>4
17:25 Kocari: What emphasis do you mean
17:25 monstrata: Well i associate jumps + flowbreaks with emphasis
17:25 monstrata: but right now 2>3 uses both 
17:26 Kocari: Ok I'll just keep this part hella basic
17:26 monstrata: okay xD
17:26 monstrata: 01:11:942 (1,2,3,4,1) - This NC intentional?
17:26 monstrata: 01:12:811 (5) - Cuz if it is, would make sense to NC here too
17:27 Kocari: Anyway is fine
17:27 Kocari: I was just utilizing the strong beats in there but fuck it
17:27 Kocari: lets go with you
17:27 monstrata: ah
17:27 Kocari: LETS DO YOU BOO
17:27 monstrata: 01:18:898 (5) - I would put a drum-finish on the head but that's just me lol. maybe you got a better idea tho
17:28 Kocari: I was actually looking for something there, I seemed it to be dead tbh
17:28 monstrata: ya
17:28 Kocari: but didn't know what to go with
17:28 monstrata: 01:20:637 (1) - Hmmm I feel like Ctrl+G'ing it makes a lot more sense
17:29 monstrata: 01:18:898 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Cuz the flow you set up here is going clockwise
17:29 monstrata: 01:21:724 (2) - Also a jump onto 2 doesn't make too much sense for me
17:30 monstrata: 01:26:507 (3) - And I guess you can make this a drum sampleset instead of Auto for that drum sound in the back
17:30 Kocari: YEP
17:30 Kocari: Wait but for the jump on (2)
17:31 Kocari: HMMM
17:31 monstrata: ya idk about the jump i feel like its not necessary
17:31 Kocari: Where should it go then
17:31 monstrata: 2 is on a red tick too usually you'd put jumps on whites unless there was a specific rhythm you were  following
17:31 Kocari: right back into the blanket?
17:31 monstrata: Oh
17:31 monstrata: nono iwas
17:31 monstrata: just giving reasons for
17:31 monstrata: 01:20:637 (1) - Ctrl G'ing this
17:31 monstrata: if you Ctrl+G it it solves all the problems
17:32 Kocari: Yea Ctrl G there is good
17:33 monstrata: okay
17:33 Kocari: ima update YE?!
17:33 monstrata: lemme check hard
17:33 Kocari: fuck hard
17:33 monstrata: you can make minor changes right?
17:33 Kocari: thats for pussies
17:34 Kocari: why not
17:35 monstrata: k done checking hard nwo normal
17:35 Kocari: LOL
17:35 Kocari: nice nice
17:35 monstrata: you could probably apply the hitsound things i mentioned onto normal :D
17:35 Kocari: perfect perfect
17:35 Kocari: ye
17:35 Kocari: copy pasterino
17:35 monstrata: ok xD
17:35 Kocari: But I did
17:35 Kocari: already
17:35 Kocari: =)
17:35 Kocari: I thought of it on normal
17:37 monstrata: looks fine to me
17:38 monstrata: Easy tho
17:38 monstrata: 00:49:333 (3) - 
17:38 monstrata: I think you should NC this lol
17:38 monstrata: for NC pattern
17:39 Kocari: Yea yea got it
17:39 Kocari: he should allow it because he's a greaser
17:39 monstrata: Okay back to Normal
17:39 Kocari: OK
17:39 monstrata: 01:01:507 (1) - Remove NC
17:39 monstrata: 01:03:246 (4) - NC should be here
17:39 Kocari: RIP MY ASSHOLE A NEW ONE
17:39 monstrata: omg ur NC's
17:40 monstrata: im a recheck ur nc's again
17:40 monstrata: lol
17:40 Kocari: I actually don't care about NC
17:40 Kocari: I just yolo it
17:40 Kocari: and let other people tell me
17:40 Kocari: I could try to do better
17:40 Kocari: but meh
17:40 Kocari: too much work
17:40 Kocari: to look at colors
17:40 monstrata: okay 
17:40 Kocari: since Im color blind
17:40 Kocari: =))
17:40 monstrata: let me just do them for you
17:40 monstrata: Insane again
17:40 Kocari: This is why we love you
17:40 monstrata: your pattern seems to be NC"ing every measure... i would do that for Insane anyways so
17:40 monstrata: 00:05:855 (4) - NC
17:40 monstrata: 00:09:333 (5) - NC
17:41 monstrata: 00:16:290 (6) - NC
17:41 monstrata: gmm
17:41 monstrata: verse section you switch to every 2 measures
17:42 Kocari: what? me
17:42 monstrata: I guess every two measures is fine too
17:42 monstrata: yea
17:42 Kocari: who knew
17:42 monstrata: for Insane
17:42 monstrata: 00:47:594 (6) - I'd NC cuz the next measure sounds quite different its like a "reply" to the first
17:42 monstrata: 00:50:855 (6) - and then NC here too
17:42 Kocari: Yea you right
17:43 monstrata: 00:52:268 (1) - Oh what why is this on ablue tick lol
17:44 Kocari: Because magic
17:44 Kocari: you don't see it
17:44 monstrata: 00:51:724 (8) - You could make this a 1/2 slider to fit the other two sliders and then
17:44 Kocari: YOU DUN SEE IT
17:44 monstrata: 00:52:159 - Start something here on a red tick so its easier
17:44 monstrata: lol
17:44 monstrata: ppl don't like polarity shifts on low bpm apparently
17:45 monstrata: 01:11:942 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Imentioned earlier but now considering your pattern
17:45 monstrata: I'd remove NC from 01:12:377 (1) -  and just NC 01:12:811 (5) - 
17:46 monstrata: so thers a NC for stream and one for kicksliders
17:46 monstrata: 01:27:159 (1) - Also this NC seems kinda random lol i'd remove it
17:46 monstrata: 01:27:594 (2) - But NC'ing the last note is nice if you want
17:46 Kocari: yea that was pretty random
17:46 monstrata: okay that should be all let me know when ur done applying all xD
17:47 Kocari: time to change the 1/2 and I'm done
17:47 monstrata: okay
17:47 monstrata: uh hang on your
17:47 monstrata: difficulty setttings are really weird
17:47 monstrata: lol
17:48 monstrata: Insane is fine
17:48 monstrata: Gaia's AR could probably be lowered to 6.5 for a better spread cuz Normal's AR ia 4.5
17:48 monstrata: and then BJ's AR is way too high lol. I don't even go past 3.5 for 190 bpm maps so i'd highly recommend moving AR to like 3 or 2.8 or something
17:49 monstrata: As for HP, spread is 3/3/5/6 so you might wanna make the HP for Normal 4
17:49 Kocari: Yea I'll tell him Ima change it
17:50 monstrata: also OD is 3/3/5/6.5 so... 2/3.5/5/6.5 would be better
17:50 monstrata: yea you better. ppl gotta realize these 160-180 bpm AR settings aren't gonna work on 138 bpm loool
17:51 monstrata: SIIIIGHHHHH
17:52 monstrata: 00:00:638 - Easy and Normal. you can remove the green line here cuz theyre useless
17:53 monstrata: o rip did you get my msg about the green lines
17:53 monstrata: internet died
17:53 Kocari: no I didn't
17:53 monstrata: 00:00:638 - on Easy a nd Normal
17:53 monstrata: the green line is useless
17:53 monstrata: Also no custom combo colors?
17:53 monstrata: well i guess they work
17:54 Kocari: What colors are they to you?
17:54 monstrata: red green blue yello
17:54 monstrata: defaults
17:54 monstrata: http://puu.sh/kgb4I.png
17:54 Kocari: wtf....
17:54 Kocari: http://puu.sh/kgb71/29b9d25964.png
17:57 monstrata: wtf my internet
17:57 monstrata: anyways just update when ur done
17:57 monstrata: i'll redl and hopefully it'll show up
17:57 Kocari: ok
17:57 Kocari: Ima upload it now
17:57 monstrata: kk
17:57 Kocari: LETS HOPE I MADE RIGHT CHANGES
17:57 Kocari: BEFORE I DIE OF CANCER
17:58 Kocari: ok updated
17:58 monstrata: o i see the colors now
17:58 Kocari: O
17:58 Kocari: yea these are the colors I wanted
17:58 Kocari: LEL
17:58 Kocari: I didn't check custom colors
17:59 monstrata: Normal's HP could be 3.5 instead of 4
17:59 Kocari: WTF
17:59 Kocari: I THOUGHT I DID
17:59 monstrata: cuz Easy is 2
17:59 monstrata: lol
17:59 Kocari: oh hp
17:59 Kocari: KK
18:00 monstrata: Insane:
18:00 monstrata: 00:51:290 (2) - whaaaa
18:00 Kocari: I said no ideas
18:00 Kocari: LOL
18:00 monstrata: remove the repeat and add another slider pls <3
18:00 Kocari: fuck it
18:00 Kocari: it works
18:00 monstrata: okay lemme try
18:00 Kocari: I was gonna make them all line up and be like you
18:01 Kocari: but I was like duh hell is dis
18:02 monstrata: try a triangle pattern instead? ;o
18:03 monstrata: http://puu.sh/kgbGS.jpg
18:03 monstrata: idk
18:03 monstrata: ahhh whatever if you dont wanna change its fine
18:03 monstrata: missed opportunity imo but mehh everything else is good
18:03 Kocari: actually that's not bad
18:03 Kocari: but it may feel outta place
18:03 Kocari: but YOLO
18:03 Kocari: YOLO
18:05 monstrata: Oh
18:05 monstrata: tried something else see if you like this
18:05 monstrata: http://puu.sh/kgbQv.jpg
18:06 monstrata: 1 and 2 are in the same position, just stacked 4 under the slider-end of 1 and put a 1/2 slider where 3 used to be
18:07 Kocari: I actually did that but then realized the spacing difference was too big
18:07 Kocari: but this might work if I move everything over
18:07 monstrata: wait really?
18:07 Kocari: yea
18:07 Kocari: I did that way
18:07 Kocari: and vertically
18:07 monstrata: i dont see a problem with spacing tbh lol
18:07 monstrata: if you stack the 1/6 repeat on the head everything else is like warranted
18:09 monstrata: http://puu.sh/kgc3W.jpg
18:09 Kocari: `Yea? http://puu.sh/kgc49/13e2c58d46.jpg
18:09 monstrata: better image
18:09 monstrata: yaaaa
18:09 monstrata: maybe point the repeat downward or something
18:09 monstrata: i mean it plays the same, but better visual flow 
18:10 Kocari: yea that will work
18:10 Kocari: Ok I did it
18:10 Kocari: time to update
18:10 monstrata: okay niiice
18:10 monstrata: that flow plays really well and also emphasizes the vocals + drums nicely
18:11 Kocari: what is flow
18:11 Kocari: my definition
18:11 Kocari: its the movement of random bullshit that people like to pick on
18:11 Kocari: =))
18:11 monstrata: flow is inertia :D
18:11 Kocari: you right
18:11 monstrata: okay looks good :D

Looks good to me now

Kibbleru wrote:

i suck at qualifying so ill just rebubbleru

Kocari wrote:

@Nanoka - You have to realize that this map took me 2 months to get to this state. I've shown this map to 10 other people prior but none of them actually posted irc mods. I'm sorry it's not on here, but I never intended it to be speed ranked or whatever. It's honestly your decision and your choice to make because I honestly want to map based on my preference. I honestly do not care what you or anyone else might think of how this went. You can ask

All The People Who Contributed :
Gaia
Ritzeh
Midge
guineaQ
Aerous
Vincent
Ipas
etc, and the other map testers. This is literally my 2nd map and I still don't have a single fucking clue what I'm doing. So think what you want, but without backstory there is no truth to that meaning I do apologize for asking you after being to this state so quickly, that is deeply my fault and mine alone. But everything else... Yea OK

Remaps Done - Insane 2
Normal - 1
Easy - 1

Reasons I don't map is because I don't like it in general, unless there is something I want to dedicate my time into

xxdeathx wrote:

Kocari wrote:

@Nanoka - You have to realize that this map took me 2 months to get to this state. I've shown this map to 10 other people prior but none of them actually posted irc mods. I'm sorry it's not on here, but I never intended it to be speed ranked or whatever. It's honestly your decision and your choice to make because I honestly want to map based on my preference. I honestly do not care what you or anyone else might think of how this went. You can ask

All The People Who Contributed :
Gaia
Ritzeh
Midge
guineaQ
Aerous
Vincent
Ipas
etc, and the other map testers. This is literally my 2nd map and I still don't have a single fucking clue what I'm doing. So think what you want, but without backstory there is no truth to that meaning I do apologize for asking you after being to this state so quickly, that is deeply my fault and mine alone. But everything else... Yea OK

Remaps Done - Insane 2
Normal - 1
Easy - 1

Reasons I don't map is because I don't like it in general, unless there is something I want to dedicate my time into

No matter what you claim here, it's still fishy when 9 of the 14 SP is your own stars and it got bubbled after 1 mod.