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Rita - dorchadas

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Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Selee
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月18日 at 5:33:01

Artist: Rita
Title: dorchadas
Source: Shikkoku no Sharnoth ~What a beautiful tomorrow~
Tags: Darkringsystem KanbeKotori Liar Soft Visual Novel Gal Blueberry Yogurt kanaco 40558019 Lovely Crab holyring12 Garven tq04t46
BPM: 188
Filesize: 16285kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crab's Hard (4.42 stars, 223 notes)
  2. DRS's Sliders (4.9 stars, 191 notes)
  3. Garven's Easy (1.71 stars, 89 notes)
  4. Kotori's Insane (4.98 stars, 310 notes)
  5. Normal (2.94 stars, 125 notes)
  6. The M (4.95 stars, 289 notes)
Download: Rita - dorchadas
Download: Rita - dorchadas (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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漆黑のシャルノス ~

Thanks DRS(DrakRingSystem) for his her sweet skin and diff :P

Garven's Easy by Garven
Normal by Selee
Crab's Hard by Lovely Crab(40558019)
DRS's Sliders by DarkRingSystem (Holyring12)
The M by Selee
Kotori's Insane by KanbeKotori
Last edited by Selee , edited 115 times in total.
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
漆黑のシャルノス

XD I like it
Ibuki Suika
1,254 posts
Joined March 2010
Ibuki Suika
Strar~
lol
奋斗了一晚啊~ :D
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
nice~ >~<
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Selee
↑
KDS for sound helping > <
kenji
127 posts
Joined April 2009
kenji
star☆
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
-The maximum height for a combo burst is 767 (yours is 800), resize it
-Include a hitcircle approach circle in folder from template skin
-Add DrakRingSystem to tags on all difficulties
-Random tags like Blueberry Yogurt? ok..
-I feel like there should be a kiai fountain at 00:54:247

Normal:
00:00:769 (1,2,1) - add claps to the end of these?
map looks fine

Hard:
01:08:997 (8) - new combo

DRS's Slider:
HP Drain at max...ok these things are too high
HP -2, OD -1, AR -1
Include 2 second lead-in time
Remove countdown
Resnap all notes (check AIMod)
00:08:428 (1,2) - spacing
00:13:854 (4) - extend 1/4
00:16:088 (1) - repeat is hidden, move it somewhere else
00:23:109 (2) - new combo
00:35:237 (1) - repeat is hidden
00:43:694 (3) - ^
00:46:726 (8) - new combo
00:53:247 (6) - new combo
00:56:497 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - doesn't look good with everything being so close together
01:06:497 (1,1) - new combos look odd
01:14:497 (10) - new combo
01:17:247 (4) - not really hidden repeat, but I would still move it
01:29:747 (10) - new combo
01:37:997 (9) - ^
Some of those long streams of short sliders could look neater~

*star*
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
no kiai? :3

[hard]
0:06:194 (5,6) spacing larger than before? though fine for me
0:57:622 (7,8) right 1 grid
1:!2:247 (3) left 1 grid
1:28:122 (2) right 1 grid

star~
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Selee
Normal & Hard fixed
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
xBubu
[Normal]
nice

[Hard]
00:04:120(4,5,6)-Hitsounds is too loud , imo
01:17:622(5)-Add a whistle hitsound at the start of slider ?

[DRS's Slider]
00:13:854(4)-Make the slider end at 00:14:173
01:27:997(6)-New combo?
01:29:747(10)-^
01:31:747(17)-^
01:36:247(6)-^
01:37:997(9)-^
01:39:997(14)-^

Expecting hitsound of DRS's Slider , DRS's diff is very fun imo

nice map , star
Lovely Crab
70 posts
Joined October 2009
Lovely Crab
good hitsound,i like it.
star!


and,selee told me that DRS will try to remap his diff,so i will mod next time :D
KanbeKotori
315 posts
Joined May 2009
KanbeKotori
;) 过于鬼畜，慎add

Download: 18977 Rita - Dorchadas.rar
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
我尽力了... :o

Download: Rita - Dorchadas (Selee) [DRS's Slider].osu
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Oooh, this song is lovely! <3

[General]
This map has lot of horribly big and fast jumps that I don't like too much... ;_;
maybe lower the volume step or two?

[Hard]
00:04:598 (1) - This jump feels really out ot place, move this closer to the previous note?
00:53:622 (1) - Delete new combo and add it to 00:54:247 (3)
01:45:747 (1) - Maybe completely silence this spinner instead of fading?

[DRS's Slider]
00:10:351 (9) - New combo
00:11:309 (1) - Delete new combo
00:12:266 (4) - New combo
00:14:181 (9) - ^
00:20:245 (7) - ^
00:25:670 (6) - ^
00:27:585 (5) - ^
00:56:502 (5) - ^
01:07:002 (1) - Delete new combo
01:08:502 (7) - New combo
01:18:127 (9) - ^
01:19:252 (1) - Delete new combo
01:20:252 (6) - New combo
01:22:502 (12) - ^
01:36:252 (7) - ^
01:42:002 (9) - ^
01:44:502 (1) - Delete new combo

[Normal]
01:01:247 (6) - New combo
01:29:247 (4) - ^
01:45:997 (1) - Maybe completely silence this spinner instead of fading?

Starred~ :3
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Selee
Thanks your modding&star =w=

DRS's new combo would be fixed later.
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

my modding

[Normal]
00:16:088 (1) - Start Notes add finish
00:28:215 (3) - add clap
00:28:854 (5) - End Notes add clap
00:55:747 (3) - Start Notes add clap
00:57:747 (2) - add clap
01:05:747 (5) - ^
01:33:747 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:41:620 (5) - remove clap [it awkward]


good song star
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[DRS's Slider]
* fix 1st offset to 458 | 2nd 50,747 and resnap all note
* add some lead-in >_<
00:59:752 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - =A=.. I don't like this jump orz

[Kotori's Insane]
* fix 1st offset the same as other diffs? it's not matter though 'cuz 769 = 450
* after this part is overmapped 00:53:497 .. orz
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

[Normal]
Seems fine.

[DRS's Slider]
Add 2 Second Lead-in & remove Countdown
Seems fine.

[Hard]
Seems fine.

[Kotori's Insane]
Seems fine.


~STAR (GOOD LUCK)
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi ~ You requested my mod and I'm here :3

Info of the Song;
- Source >> Shikkoku no Sharnoth ~What a beautiful tomorrow~ // The "w" is capitalized
- Tags >> Remove game, since I believe that goes in genre when this gets ranked

General;
- Make audio lead-in the same in all diffs.

Skin;
- Fail BG should be 1024x768
- When comboburst comes out I see some white noise around it
- Hitcircle should be in a gray scale
- Woooops, I see a nipple in your Spinner BG ... umm, not sure if that is okk :<
- Spinner-metre should be 1024x768
- You should add a spinner-approach circle
- Here, have the elements fixed :3
Download: Rita - Dorchadas.rar

Normal;
- Try to make sliders like these ??
SPOILER
- 00:50:747 >> I was expecting a faster slider velocity from this part on :<

DRS's Slider;
- Is okk ~

Hard;
- Is okk ~
- Well, umm, some sliders are too curved but is not a big problem, just for the looks

Kotori's Insane;
- Is okk ~

* Star :3

Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Selee
I'll change some skin element tomorrow. >w<
Thanks your modding&star. :D
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