Mofu kun wrote:

good song
im new modder pls don’t hate me
[General]
the outro seems really long for all diffs. cut it down. lots of clapping lol
[Extreme]
00:51:416 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - these notes feel like a really sudden change in spacing for not that big of an increase of strength in the song. i think that the spacing should be decreased here. considering that a new instrument comes in here that's a lot louder than string plucking i think the sapcing is fine :p it's less than what i've got on the currently ranked version at least lol
01:04:645 (4,5,6) - the spacing here seems really far here as well. whatever instrument playing here goes super high pitched so spacing is representing that here
01:16:670 (3,4,5) - this triangle is slightly larger than the rest. i’m not sure if it matters too much, but change it so the sizes are the same. the triangles are all decreasing in size here; same with the next pattern
01:21:949 (1,2,3) - the spacing between these two is really smaller than in the pattern here. i think that note 2 should be moved a bit farther so that it is the same the whole pattern.
01:32:905 (1,2,3,4) - can’t hear anything in the music here that would constitute a stream. the cymbal sounds only really start at note 5. i get what you're listening to, but the string instrument there is also in 1/4. the ranked version is the same thing as this without the cymbal sound
01:34:992 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:58:004 (4) - think that this should be made a NC as it is not part of the violin notes, but is part of a drum beat. makes sense i guess for the 1/3 thing too so yes
02:04:006 (4) - ^ yeeeeeee
02:09:576 (3,4) - i don’t think these notes fit the song too well. they don’t match the guitar, violin, or drum beat, so they don’t really fit anywhere. the drums are all 1/3 here so ya. that's why all the extended sliders are ending on 1/3 ticks
02:16:337 (7) - i can’t hear anything in the song for the note. i think it should be deleted. there's constant 1/4 in the string stuff, so i'm using that to emphasize sounds at the ends of triplets. it's a cool mapping technique that people probably consider overmapping but o well
02:17:403 (6) - ^
02:18:470 (7) - ^
02:20:603 (6) - ^
02:21:670 (7) - ^
02:22:737 (7) - ^
02:33:337 (6,7) - ^ (while there is a drum beat for note 6, i think that it is better when both the notes are deleted, because all that is being mapped here is the violin notes.)
02:34:470 (7) - ^
02:35:494 (7) - ^
02:37:444 (8) - ^
02:39:346 (7) - ^
(im probably missing what you mapped to for this last portion…)
[Extra_]
01:32:905 (1,2,3,4) - the same problem as the previous diff. the cymbal noises that the streams are mapped to here don’t sound like they start here, and sound like they start at slider 5.
01:53:598 (4,2,4) - the note that these are mapped to sounds like they should be mapped to one long slider, as opposed to one long slider. these essentially act as long sliders since you'd hold them for the same amount of time. they're following beats in the music so it hsouldn't really bea problem (and i wanted to be something different from extreme lol)
01:59:642 (5,2,4) - same as 01:53:598 (4,2,4)
02:05:611 (5,2,5) - ^
02:08:514 (4,3) - ^
02:11:312 (5,3,3) - ^
02:13:578 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - the spacing on these patterns seems a bit far for what isn’t that strong of a point in the song. maybe lessen the spacing by a bit. id actually consider this to be pretty strong stuff lol. i also arrange spacings according to pitches a lot, so that could also add to it in my mind
02:17:403 (5) - i can’t hear anything in the song that would support this note. it should be deleted.
02:21:670 (5) - ^
02:34:470 (5) - ^

tell me things that i can improve with my modding! when there's something repeatedly wrong in a difficulty, you don't have to list out every instance of the problem. just say what the problem is with an example and mention that it occurs in many places. it's probably important to get the mapper to understand what the issue is more than simply fixing it.

the way you have reasoning for all your points is really good. you're also really good at expressing what you want to suggest which is better than like 99% of current modders lol. i may have rejected a bunch of stuff, but your mod is actually really well written.

knowing more about what's acceptable and understanding the intentions of mappers will also definitely help since your modding structure is like perfect

UndeadCapulet wrote:

From my queue:

Nice fucking diff names nice osu glitches thinking it's a different mapset

7

02:43:025 (1,2,3,4,1) - The BPM is so high that this feels really circular. I don't think that's what you're intending, it's very different from the rest of the map. i'll see how this goes with some testplays before changing it. i personally find it really easy to snap that thing
02:47:020 (1,2) - Even for intentional antijumps, these are really hard to see coming after the 317BPM. Space them out more. really makes no difference but like why not

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6

01:17:212 (1) - Weird slider, keep the rhythm consistent with 01:17:754 (1,2,3) - , it's cooler that way. spread disagrees with the rule of cool
01:21:427 (1) - ^
02:48:869 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The NC job in 7 diff was better tbh yea i was thinking "gotta nc to the pattern!!" then i realize i did the same thing on 5 pattern wise and nc'd it the same as 7 so lol

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5

01:28:601 (4) - I think dropping down a little, like this is better. it is

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best mod ive ever given
eagerly awaiting your rejections
maybe next time make a map with actual problems will do !!!!!!

Hiyori wrote:

Hello there from my Queue! Don't forget to vote on my poll. Thank you!

1:

1. 01:05:498 (5,6) - swap places? moves into the next combo way better as it is now, so nah
2. 02:39:875 (4) - move a bit downwards mkay
3. 02:51:312 (1) - try this? too hard to interpret the bpm change stuff, which is why it's a slider :p
   

2:

1. 00:49:929 (1) - curve just to emphasize the beat not really seeing how it emphasizes the beat when curved lul
2. 02:51:807 - add circle instead
   

3:

1. 01:57:751 (1) - extend till 01:58:131 the song has stronger stuff on 1/3, so uhyea
2. 02:03:759 (1) - extend till 02:04:130
3. 02:51:807 - circle instead?

Sorry short mod. Perfect mapset! Hyped to see this on the ranked section. soooooooon