1. Avenged Oni (6,24 stars, 2419 notes)

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Surono wrote:

[notice]hai RayDon, lol my speak bad. so short word.. mod offline, aww just for reference and honest to want irc mod ;w; RayDon? please

~dem Rasio Slider tick is... 3 `w`it's 2 ~_~

~00:42:171 - add kat, consistent with 00:45:921 - if you listen closely, these 2 parts sound slightly different, so I wanted to point out the difference by alternating non-triplet/triplet

~00:43:671 - add don? be stream *but i thinking, u follow guitar pitch? like 00:43:390 (10,12) - and 00:47:140 (34,35) - this. so u make this for emphasize? if not. u can adding that my suggest for feelstreamtohit.3gp* there is indeed a drum hit, but I tested and it breaks the flow, so no change for now

~00:50:890 - ^ * ? that's a don already ~_~

~00:55:015 (91,92,93,94,95) - kkkkd, more fit with drum and gitar pitch.. 00:55:390 (95) - I wanted to emphasize the guitar note at the end, so I purposely made the other 3 notes dons

~01:01:296 - delete, yeah this 01:01:202 - pitch stronk and 01:01:296 - this feel empty.. so fit for hit dat KatFinisher I think there's no problem with this pattern ,_,

~01:06:640 (164,165) - change kat I'd have to change a whole section to k if I did that, and it breaks the flow

~01:06:921 - and then.. add don, this have stronk pitch. and nice pattern stream there is no clear sound here, I prefer not to add anything here

~01:11:890 - change ddkdk? fit with music I think kkddk fits as good or even better C_c

~01:12:640 (201,202,203) - #1 201 kat? lol change to don and 202 and 203 is kat *#2 or 201 keep kat and 202 and 203 is finisher* it took me few reads to actually understand ~_~ but no, that change breaks the flow completely :v

~01:13:202 - more feel this don, and with my before suggestion I don't really feel like it's a don to be honest

~01:18:733 - adding kat, this nice bruh sounds nice, added

~01:24:265 (269,270,271,272,273) - remove finisher? and 01:25:108 - add kat? I feel this part is fine as it is

~01:26:983 - don? voice pitch is fit :3 *like this too 01:29:983 - that part is whole 1/2 for a reason ~_~

~01:28:296 - add don, fit with voice pitch same than above

~01:30:265 - kat? i hear this stronk if 25%playback breaks the flow ;w;

~01:38:890 - kat? like in before? *or this for variant? but repetative is gud if same pitch* I prefer like it is now, fits the rhythm I use

~01:40:483 - add don? this pitch? oops i missed that

~01:57:171 - don? I prefer to keep the flow here

~02:00:733 - ^? would cause inconsistency with previous patterns

~02:04:483 - ^ lol but is can reject *about dem don don*.. if u follow this pitch gitar 02:04:577 - ~w~* ~w~*

~02:08:140 (524,527) - change kat.. when i tested this part.. is weird if not change to kat... it is not weird at all ww

~02:11:890 - kat, pitch stronk I am not following pitch, as you can see in the following patterns

~02:21:171 - add don? i see this too in before actually it's 1/6 ddk wwww thanks for noticing

~02:26:140 (644,645,646,647) - this.. is fit if 1/3 kddk lel *yeah try hear with 25% playback brah :^)* wut O.o no it doesn't fit at all

~02:32:608 - kat, to feel to hear when hit in play. i guess it's nice to variate from previous pattern

~02:37:765 (730,731,732,733,734,735,736) - please change this to kdddkkdd, is make confushed when hear and play XD what

~02:46:390 - what's with this??

~03:01:765 - move to 03:01:827 - here? yeah this for pass this voice pitch..I don't follow voice pitch at all in the map...

~03:13:765 - from here make xx xx? *boring to see 3plet..and this fit too~ XD* nu, that'd break consistency

~03:14:515 (932) - kat, and nu, it's dkkd, I follow guitar here for the 1/3

~03:14:640 (933) - move to 03:14:702 - here.. and in 03:14:640 (933) - i feel weird ^

~03:15:265 - from here, kd dd? would break the flow

~03:18:265 (962,963) - ctrl g and 03:18:452 - change kat, more fit and feel the stream is fine as it is. 962&963 are both dons and the dkkd 1/6 fits the guitar note

~03:24:640 - from here. u make 1/3? i am trying with slow playback and i Think this 1/4.. *dddkk is nice* yeah this 1/4 bcuz still deep with guitar pitch and fit with drum pitch it was fixed in another mod, you should have updated xD

~03:25:577 - kat? would break the flow

~03:27:733 - delete? for empazhise 03:27:827 - this guitar pitch/ddk nu, it's fine as it is :v

~03:26:140 - finisher? like stronk pitch XD I don't hear any clear finisher sound ._.

~03:29:046 - not fit pattern... ddkdd/kkkdd is more nice if you pay close attention to the following+previous patterns you'll notice that I change the flow for few seconds. and I think these patterns are fine

~03:30:265 - more nice if kdkkd, lel beutiful pattern =w= same as above

~03:42:640 - oke this again.. but i feel place of this pattern pitch is like this Screenshot ~_~

~03:43:202 - this don XD wat

~03:43:765 - kat breaks the flow c_C

~done, lol *don kat done

~03:44:702 - kat? this feel high pitch breaks da flow in da hood

~04:02:140 (1329,1330,1331,1332,1333,1334,1335,1336,1337) - hey this.. all kat? is nice with guitar pitch and look exicitink XD nu, it's fine as it is

~04:04:577 - from here, u want make ddkdkkd dkk? I prefer to keep the streams to when the guitar does repeated notes

~04:07:483 - change this kat and 04:08:608 - this kat too *flow is nice to feel* I guess it won't hurt to variate a bit

~04:09:733 - add don? and 04:10:858 - this kat? nu, I prefer to keep this part somewhat calm before the storm starts C:

~04:13:765 - many ddk ;w; not to make variatif with guitar pitch? lel.. it is fixed, you should have updated ~_~

~04:39:640 - from here change to kkddkkd, nice to hear with guitar pitch I don't follow guitar pitch here but I guess variating the patterns won't hurt

~05:01:483 (11,12,13) - kat, and 05:01:952 (16,19,22) - change to kat no, that's fine as it is

~05:04:390 - weh gud.... @w@ C:

~06:14:890 - add don, and in other too.. and 06:17:890 - about like this.. u can ignore and for follow guitar it was fixed, update

~06:14:140 - add kat, well if empty so uhh.. ;w; updateeeeeee

~06:17:140 - ^, and other like this ypdate ;w;

well.. wait 07:03:827 - not make some lol with finisher? no wtf

sorry my mod is old not update maybe bcuz ur maybe change in 5 hours ago.. and about Screenshot maybe i will upload *not have time ;w;* XD i am so sorry.. GLuck yeah. I made major changes to streams and that (ddk)*30 part, so most the suggestions regarding that part have been rejected for that reason ;w;

Surono wrote:

lol nu problem. my mod is old and my conecition make me :'^)
and lol its just suggestion. Opinion, and not Recommend and not make u must to change it.. *lol nice modder is Follow the what want of mapper* fuhhh, nice to read all ur diff with long length lol. thx lol for reply!1~~

EDIT:
and please. dont using dat Ret kolor to many. ew if my mod is like ur new update just ignore. Dont gib dat ret blooot!1!!! ;w; i am not bad gay kwek <(``)

1. BG size is 1359x767... maybe you need to re-size it~~??
   
2. Other is fine

1. 00:30:640 (4) - Change to k? Make a bit difference and the tune sounds higher~
   
2. 00:40:390 (9) - k to follow the guitar??
   
3. 01:11:702 (194) - d
   
4. 01:24:452 (271) - Remove finish
   
5. 01:24:827 (273) - ^ hmm I think K d K d K is better here~~
   
6. 01:30:171 - Maybe u wanna a pause here? but I can hear the drum sound here too
   so~ add a d plz.. and the crazy Green lines could start at 01:29:890 (301) -
   
7. 01:35:702 (338) - k
   
8. 01:42:452 (371,372,373,374) - oh remove the ddkk 1/4, here is three 1/6 beat!!!
   Like this: http://puu.sh/jpZOP/2bf22a03b6.jpg
   
9. 01:46:390 (395) - k
   
10. 02:08:890 (534) - Add finish? Because u add one before :3
    
11. 02:09:077 (535) - If you add^ I suggest you remove this d to make a pause~~
    
12. 02:35:233 - Add a d to ddkdddk here?
    
13. 02:43:202 (767) - k~
    
14. 02:49:952 (800,801,802) - Same as I said
    
15. 03:32:140 (1068) - k
    
16. 03:47:046 (1178) - k to follow the guitar
    
17. 03:55:483 (1275,1276) - Delete these two notes and add finish at 03:55:390 (1274) -
    I think you need a pause here~ Because 03:53:140 (1247) - is so crazy lol
    Also if you accept^ then the pattern here 03:55:765 (1277,1278,1279) - change to kkd ddd kkd ddd kkd??
    
18. 05:39:452 (356,357,358) - Same
    
19. 05:43:390 (379) - k and 05:43:952 (383) - d
    
20. 05:55:390 (16) - k
    
21. 06:03:077 (53,54,55,56,57,58) - All finish because he sings really loudly xD
    and I have a idea that maybe you can add a "Green Line"
    at 06:03:077 (53) - with a Speed up x1.25 or... ya it's up to you~
22. 06:10:577 (3,4,5,6) - Hmm I think it's 1/4 here~ so maybe change to ddddk? But it's fine too now.

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hey~ M4M~~ o/ C:

<General>

1. BG size is 1359x767... maybe you need to re-size it~~?? I'll ask QATs about this
   
2. Other is fine

<Tatsujin>

1. 00:30:640 (4) - Change to k? Make a bit difference and the tune sounds higher~ nu, it sounds the same changed 00:31:390 (7) - instead to a don
   
2. 00:40:390 (9) - k to follow the guitar?? it's supposed to be a deep hit, I'll keep f
   
3. 01:11:702 (194) - d breaks the flow :c
   
4. 01:24:452 (271) - Remove finish nu, I like that part how it is now
   
5. 01:24:827 (273) - ^ hmm I think K d K d K is better here~~ ^
   
6. 01:30:171 - Maybe u wanna a pause here? but I can hear the drum sound here too
   so~ add a d plz.. and the crazy Green lines could start at 01:29:890 (301) - no about the green lines. I did the math to make them exact so I'm not changing them and yes there is a drum sound but I don't want the stream to be unnecessarily long
   
7. 01:35:702 (338) - k nope, I'm following drum here
   
8. 01:42:452 (371,372,373,374) - oh remove the ddkk 1/4, here is three 1/6 beat!!! I know what you mean and it was 1/6 before. But I wanted variation, and it sounds equally as good. So I think I'll keep for now
   
9. 01:46:390 (395) - k that'd break the overall flow
   
10. 02:08:890 (534) - Add finish? Because u add one before :3 indeed, added
    
11. 02:09:077 (535) - If you add^ I suggest you remove this d to make a pause~~ nah, BPM is low and that part has faster pace than the start, so I'll keep that note
    
12. 02:35:233 - Add a d to ddkdddk here? maybe I'll consider it
    
13. 02:43:202 (767) - k~ same as before
    
14. 02:49:952 (800,801,802) - Same as I said variation, as I stated before
    
15. 03:32:140 (1068) - k nu, breaks flow
    
16. 03:47:046 (1178) - k to follow the guitar I'd have to change many more notes if I did that. It sounds good as it is
    
17. 03:55:483 (1275,1276) - Delete these two notes and add finish at 03:55:390 (1274) - nu, the song asks for a startup like this
    I think you need a pause here~ Because 03:53:140 (1247) - is so crazy lol
    Also if you accept^ then the pattern here 03:55:765 (1277,1278,1279) - change to kkd ddd kkd ddd kkd??
    
18. 05:39:452 (356,357,358) - Same same
    
19. 05:43:390 (379) - k and 05:43:952 (383) - d breaks the flow and yes, I missed that lol
    
20. 05:55:390 (16) - k breaks flow once again
    
21. 06:03:077 (53,54,55,56,57,58) - All finish because he sings really loudly xD yes indeed! nice suggestion. Added.
    and I have a idea that maybe you can add a "Green Line"
    at 06:03:077 (53) - with a Speed up x1.25 or... ya it's up to you~ I think I don't need more green lines >w<
22. 06:10:577 (3,4,5,6) - Hmm I think it's 1/4 here~ so maybe change to ddddk? But it's fine too now. na, it's fine c:

That's all.
Really cool song!! I like it lol indeed

Good Luck Raiden~~ ^^b thanks a lot!!

Nyan wrote:

[Tatsujin]

00:47:233 - can add a don hm, fine
00:50:983 - can add a don added a k instead since the rhythm varies a bit

01:13:577 - can add a don (02:21:140 (615,616,617) - is correct 1/6 ddk but not this) sounds fine as it is now
01:25:015 (274,275,276,277) - can be kdddk with removing Finish there is indeed a sound, but I prefer to keep it like it is to maintain the flow

01:57:171 - can add a don sounds good, added
02:00:733 - can add a don I prefer not to here specifically, it would break the flow
02:04:483 - can add a don added k instead since the rhythm varies

04:11:515 (1414,1415,1416,1417) - can be kat I prefer a monocolour here
04:12:265 (1422,1423,1424,1425,1426) - can be 1/6 ddddddk I don't hear any clear 1/6 hits here
04:21:265 (1506,1507,1508,1509,1510,1511,1512,1513,1514,1515,1516,1517,1518) - kddk / kdkk / dddd / k I'd have to change entire streams if I did that because of inconsistency

05:01:390 (10,11,12,13) - can be kkkk I guess some variation won't hurt a lot

05:58:390 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - this part didn't have ddddd base drum sound. can be d___d_d_k_d well indeed, fixed
06:00:827 - can add don nah, I prefer a low density here
06:01:390 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - same as above. d___d_d_k_d fixed

06:11:140 - add a kat no, as I alternate between different followings in all parts

you can actually end the song here 06:46:390 .
In this moment, "(dddd)dk d _ d _ d" pattern already repeated 8 times and song is faded out successfully.
And this part doesn't need Kiai time. it is not repeated since it alternates. Also, I end the song when I feel the sound is barely audible. The song is well ended in my opinion already

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  abbreviate Avenged Sevenfold to A7X.so add tag "A7X"

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  01:15:641 - change to k & 01:15:741 - add k & 01:15:921 - add d.I think good flow. & Plays better to me
  
  01:26:800 - add d & 01:28:299 - add d.I think this long d-k is very simlpe.so add ddk between d-k.& I think good flow.
  
  01:39:268 - move to 01:39:823 - & 01:39:455 - change to d.01:39:268 - I think no need this notes.
  
  02:34:300 - delete.& 02:35:800 - delete.& 02:37:295 - delete.If remove notes,It works better to vary the pace.
  
  05:36:268 - move to 05:36:823 - & 05:36:456 - change to d.

Charlotte wrote:

Hi from m4m

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  abbreviate Avenged Sevenfold to A7X.so add tag "A7X" o-okay...

[ Tatsujin]

• 
  
  01:15:641 - change to k & 01:15:741 - add k & 01:15:921 - add d.I think good flow. & Plays better to me breaks a bit the rhythm I'm trying to use so I'll keep
  
  01:26:800 - add d & 01:28:299 - add d.I think this long d-k is very simlpe.so add ddk between d-k.& I think good flow. this one is simple to variate from the other part that sounds like this in 02:31:577 - , so keep for difficulty variation
  
  01:39:268 - move to 01:39:823 - & 01:39:455 - change to d.01:39:268 - I think no need this notes. but there is a clear drum hit here, and it follows the flow and the k is used to emphasize guitar note, so I'm keeping both for now
  
  02:34:300 - delete.& 02:35:800 - delete.& 02:37:295 - delete.If remove notes,It works better to vary the pace. as I said a bit earlier, I like to vary this part difficulty from the previous one so it has considerably higher note density
  
  05:36:268 - move to 05:36:823 - & 05:36:456 - change to d. this part is the same than a few suggestions above, so I'm giving the same answer >< and same than a bit above in 01:39:455 -

Nice map! Good luck i cri ;w;

Flying Pan wrote:

aloha, from my queue. sorry the lateness is real...

[Not Ready To Play This]
Set HP to 0. It will die right? lolol
(ok just kidding. 4 is generous enough.)

00:42:265 (3) - change to k to emphasize the drum? I tend to emphasize drums with dons rather
00:43:390 (10,11,12,13) - sounds like ddddk, like at 00:47:140 (34,35,36,37,38) - I know, but then I'd have to change the following notes as well because it would break the rhythm I use
00:53:421 - add d for pattern consistency with 00:45:921 - I've tried several things and tested, but none seem to fit the rhythm I use, so I'll keep for now
00:54:640 (89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - try ddddkkkkd, it suits better imo I fixed it but in another way, since the stream must be ended with a k to emphasize guitar note like I do on 00:51:640 (71) - for example

01:11:702 () - change to d will flow better I think it flows just fine with k hmm

01:18:546 () - if you follow the guitar i think it is better moved to 01:18:921 - at that point I'm not following the guitar
01:19:108 - and add something here giving the same answer ^
maybe do something like that too at 01:06:640 - which is sounds similar

01:33:452 (330) - sounds like a don to me Tried but doesn't fit quite the thing I wanted to follow (mix of guitar and drum)
01:39:452 (357) - ^ Same answer ^
02:08:140 (531,532,533,534,535,536,537,538) - hmm. is kkkkdddd too easy? tried and tested but again, it doesn't quite feel right to me

02:19:390 - how about ddk kkd ddk kdd here. feels like oscillating yeah changed in an alternative way

02:37:765 (738,739,740,741,742,743,744,745,746,747,748) - well, kdddkkddkkk will fits more here after those long ddk ddk ddk you made before because it also follows the drum keep for consistency with other parts like 01:30:265 -

02:40:952 () - sounds like a don to me
02:46:952 () - ^ Same reason than in 01:33:452 (330) - in both previous and this suggestion
03:32:702 () - ^ if you noticed, at this part of the song I start to transition into a guitar following pace, to somewhat help the player get ready for the streams

04:12:265 (1426) - change to k, it seems like the change pattern start here well indeed, fixed

since i'm bad at ultra long stream i believe in you in those long stream at minute 5. :33

05:30:452 (312) - this don again?
05:36:452 (339) - ^ Same answers than in 01:33:452 (330) -

06:03:077 (48) - remove the finisher, if you hear the music, you need to big empashize the NOT READY TO DIE only a modder told me to emphasize all the vocals here since he sings REALLY LOUDLY compared to other parts, so I'm keeping all the finishers for now
06:02:702 (47) - for the i'm part, move this to 06:02:890 - , I want to keep that note to end the previous patterns and give enough room to wholely emphasize I'M NOT READY TO DIE! at the end
06:02:983 - and add d to become ddk for little emphasis wouldn't feel right to ddK as I didn't quite accept the last suggestion ;w;


well, i think that's all. if there is anything that clash with your intention feel free to reject it. but don't kill me, i'm not ready to die. unless you're G. Romero x)

LCM01 wrote:

Hello from M4M
Am not a good modder..so I expect u will not accept any of these
01:15:640 ddddk added a note at 01:15:921 - instead
01:56:421 d added at 01:56:233 - instead
02:43:577 k there is no sound here, tho ><
02:43:765 d Same answer than above ^
Drum roll after 3rd kiai -> + finish I think it is fine as it is now
05:32:702 d kkk k d Same answer I gave on previous suggestion

binaryfruit wrote:

Hey. Wassup? not much hue

I think you asked me for a mod before I quit as well, so, hopefully this might make up for it.

You also offered to M4M with this, if you want you can mod my Ninja Gaiden map. If not then I'll just mod another one of your maps and we'll call that an m4m sure, im always up for m4m

Use HP5 or even 6. This is a very easy map to pass since most of the difficulty is in one spot; just farm on the easy parts and then spam through the hard parts. You don't want to let me pass, do you? ;3 I still didn't pass I'm afraid I have to reject. On my "hard" maps I like it to be like that: easy passes, HARD AS FUK full combos. So I'll keep

Pet peeve; I think you should set the hitsounds to 100. There's no real reason to keep it down at 70; players can set their own individual volumes. This was personal, as I liked to hear the song while mapping. I'll keep it

I think you should also use the big grid size, as it will make it easier to keep the notes organized. Not that it makes much of a difference in the map itself, it just looks cleaner haha. lmaooo

Tatsujin

SPOILER

01:32:515 - Add d nono, I'm following a somewhat mix of drum+guitar

01:36:265 - Add d same I said to previous modder

01:44:327 (389) - move this to 01:44:515 - , and do so for the other kiai's thing is, that would mean I'm somewhat following vocals. I don't usually follow vocals

01:51:077 - add ddd, and do so for the other kiai's nope as I said to previous modder ~_~

02:21:077 - huh? what happened to this poor quad? It lost one of its friends.... rip in peace poor dddk please put it back! dude look at 01:13:640 - ahahaha

02:52:015 (821) - d but this is a d already? O.o

03:24:640 (1019) - kdkdk? Maybe? nu, the kkk part is to follow the guitar note and the end d is to finish it

03:40:202 (1136) - kdddkdk? Maybe? I don't think that would flow well

04:00:827 (1330) - Add a stream here, to keep this sick momentum going. I think kkddkdkkd would work well. added, but a different one

04:32:702 (1625) - Hah! I love these sorts of 1k 2k 3k 4k patterns here. Don't change it! huehue

05:06:640 (69) - kkdd ->kdkd? I just feel it's a better followup to kdddkddd. I think the follow up is correctly done as I want to differentiate from parts like 05:16:765 -

05:08:140 (85) - Same here.

05:09:640 (101) - And so on. Same answers ^

05:29:702 (308) - d_k -> ddd? Same changes as other kiai's. I prefer the kiais as they are now tbh

06:34:390 - I know you are gonna say no to this but I'm gonna say it anyway, hahaha. I think you should end the map here; I'm of the opinion that if you're just gonna let it go quieter and quieter with the same or similar easy patterns then there's not much point in having this part of the map. Several people have told me this. I might reconsider reducing note density as the song loses volume, maybe

Even if you don't end the map there, you really ought to cut down the mp3 since it has a sound effect at the end that doesn't seem to be part of the song. I can do this for you if you want, or you can do it yourself in Audacity. The crash sound is intentionally there, so when you're in scores it gives an epic ending :3

In general I think you've nerfed the hard part plenty. I think you should focus on making the easy parts a bit harder. I wish you luck on your rank!

1. There are too many Spinners in intro. I highly recommend delete this bcz it's insistent, and HR mod is so higher score than HD.
2. 01:01:390 (136) - Remove Finish, or delete (135). this pattern is allowed, but not recommended. tbh this finish doesn't work well.
3. 01:30:265 (307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317) - looks horrible. consider to delete these green lines.
4. 01:42:452 (374,375) - the drums sound 1/6 here, so this notes should be 1/6.
5. 02:08:796 (540,541) - See above.
6. 02:37:765 see above.;
7. 02:49:952 (807,808,809) - 1/6. similar reason as above.
8. 03:53:140 (1254,1255,1256,1257,1258,1259,1260,1261,1262,1263,1264,1265,1266,1267,1268,1269,1270,1271,1272) - I think should be 1/4 pattern bcz drums sound 1/4 here. also these 1/6s are bit overmapped?
9. 06:13:577 (15,16,17,18) - idk What does this 1/6 follow the sound. i think should be 1/4.
10. 06:14:140 add k to follow the drum. same as 06:17:140 (31) -
11. 06:16:577 (26,27,28,29) -, 06:22:577 (53,54,55,56) -, etc. same above,.
12. 06:20:140 -, 06:26:140-, etc. ^