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SHIKI - Lapis

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kiddly
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kiddly
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月8日 at 13:18:04

Artist: SHIKI
Title: Lapis
Source: BMS
Tags: Trancer Doll's Alace pangpang Dr_dy
BPM: 146
Filesize: 4625kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (4.99 stars, 500 notes)
  2. Hyper (4.81 stars, 426 notes)
  3. Standard (2.84 stars, 220 notes)
Download: SHIKI - Lapis
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Trancer Doll's
No.4 Lapis

Dr_dy Beginner!
Alace Hyper~

11/27:MP3 changed again.reDL pls.
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abcde1234qaz
120 posts
Joined September 2009
abcde1234qaz
._. first`~
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume
>.<~
vivi90722
19 posts
Joined February 2010
vivi90722
I love your map >w<
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
:)
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
:)
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
Hi :)
May I make taiko diff?
Tomoka Rin
Former osu! Champion: #1
378 posts
Joined June 2009
Tomoka Rin
staR~
kenji
127 posts
Joined April 2009
kenji
star★
rustbell
483 posts
Joined January 2010
rustbell
hi
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
lzy
nice
Shinkuu
231 posts
Joined June 2009
Shinkuu
8-)
Sanjenin Nagi
381 posts
Joined December 2009
Sanjenin Nagi
i love it shiki BMS!~
star~
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
:)
Deye
163 posts
Joined August 2009
Deye
< <

可随意更改。

我是不擅长音效，看到那一大堆绿线压力真大= =

另外soft-slidertick2那个音效应该用原本的soft-hitclap音合适，不过我没有找到。

Download: Beginner.rar
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kiddly
885 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
kiddly
0.0
好啊
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
Done

Download: SHIKI - Lapis (kiddly) [Hyper].osu
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Hey :)

  1. The offset seems slightly early. I got Offset: 2,106
  2. I don't know if you're going for ranking with this but I'll say anyway. If you are, you'll need to reencode the MP3, since it is at 320kbps. Could you reencode it down to at least 256? (Since this map was uploaded before the max limit was 192, so you can have 256 with this).
[BEGINNER]

The red section at 01:21:415 has a different offset to the ones in the other diffs :|. It is only 2ms, but you should still make it the same as in the other diffs.

Also, this seems too hard to be a "Beginner" diff imo. Having jumps and other stuff in a Beginner doesn't usually work. I think you should rename this to "Standard", and then make another, easier "Beginner". I think that would work better since the harder parts in this would make sense if this was "Standard". :)

That said, it is a nice diff, even though it would work better as a "Standard" rather than a "Beginner".

[HYPER]

I really like this diff. It's great fun, and looks nice too. Nothing bothered me in this

[ANOTHER]

It feels a bit random with those streams 'n' stacks (especially since there is a melody there that would be great to map to), but surprisingly, it does work. It reminds me of Al-Azif maps, which is a good thing.

The odd jump felt a bit weird, but that's only minor. I couldn't find any issues worth raising.

Heh. It's not the most groundbreaking map I've seen, but it's actually pretty nice. Most new maps I see like this, I don't usually like, but this one is alright.

I'll be dropping my star here.
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
looks good, hyper is awesome stuff babies are made out of
Mogsy
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Here since the beginning
Mogsy
Sorry if this seems really nitpicky, but these are things I just can't ignore.

Standard:
  1. Sliderticks sound extremely soft. I'll give you some specifics about this. You don't necessarily need to change them, it just sounds a bit awkward. The only time you really need to change sliderticks is when they're silent, because even if this is an easier difficulty, breaking a combo because of a slidertick you can't hear is just plain unfair.
  2. 00:26:787 (6) - The slidertick here could be a bit louder. I only barely caught it my first time looking through this.
  3. Section starting at 00:54:732 - The sliderticks here are also on the soft side. I could deal with the volume being turned up a tick.
  4. 01:02:129 (2) - Much too soft. Much, much too soft.
  5. 01:06:239 (3), 01:10:143 (6), 01:13:431 (5), 01:16:719 (5) - Silent/close to it? No thank you.
  6. 01:46:102 (5) - Slidertick at 01:46:924 is much too soft.
  7. 02:21:034 (2), 02:22:677 (4) - Slidertick is much too soft.
  8. 02:38:705 (2) - ^
  9. 02:41:992 (3) - ^ to a certain degree. Don't know why, but I can hear this much more easily than the previous point I mention.
  10. 02:45:280 (3) - ^
  11. 02:51:855 (3) - ^
  12. 02:58:431 (1) - A Finish to send this off as just an aside in the echo would be a nice touch, don't you think?
Hyper:
  1. These blue points are purely hypothetical. I would like you to try them and see how you like them.
  2. Find a place to put a spinner, to add some score variety.
  3. 00:28:225 (6) - Put a Clap on this. It helps accentuate the end of the phrase and sounds pretty sexy.
  4. 01:02:129 (4) - Put a New Combo mark on this.
  5. 01:02:951 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark from this.
  6. 01:04:595 (2) - Put a New Combo mark on this.
  7. 01:10:143 (6), 01:13:431 (6), 01:16:719 (8), 01:50:006 (6), 01:53:294 (6), 01:56:581 (2), - Remove the Clap from the endpoint.
Another:
  1. Find a place to put a spinner, to add some score variety.
  2. 00:41:582 (12) - Put a Finish on this. It sounds nice and accentuates that big finishing part.
  3. 01:47:746 (1) - ^
Standard's okay, Hyper is really damn nice, Another is one I'm ambivalent towards.

Only not popping because of superficial things/it'll pop when you reupload. I'll be happy to rebubble, though.
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