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David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon

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James2250
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James2250
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, November 22, 2010 at 9:04:34 PM

Artist: David Wise
Title: Gang-Plank Galleon
Source: Donkey Kong Country
Tags: Super Nintendo SNES Rareware Final Boss King K. Rool DKC Roddie samiljul
BPM: 109.1
Filesize: 6195kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.83 stars, 567 notes)
  2. Easy (2.19 stars, 113 notes)
  3. Insane (4.97 stars, 341 notes)
  4. Roddie's Normal (2.81 stars, 119 notes)
Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon
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Thought it was about time this song got a remap

My first map learning how to do storyboarding so don't expect anything too impresive yet---background order will make sense if you have played the game

Special Thanks to:
-Roddie for his difficulty
-samiljul for his taiko difficulty
-Starrodkirby86 and Shinxyn for teaching me the basics of sb'ing
-YoshiKart for the pause menu
-Derekku for helping me cut the combo bursts
-All the timing helpers
-All modders who helped me improve this map
Last edited by James2250 , edited 45 times in total.
Roddie
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Roddie
Done~

I hope it isn't to hard for a Normal. ._.

Edit: Improvement.

Edit: finishing touches~

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [Roddie's Normal].osu
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Timing help..... It probably still needs refining though.
gowww
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gowww
8-)
Roddie
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Roddie
And here it is~

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [Roddie's Normal].osu
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
Hi
May i make taiko diff? :3
James2250
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I am seeing you around quite alot asking that now, big taiko fan? :P

I have never had a taiko on one of my maps before but sure go for it, I don't know anything about taiko when modding though so I can't look for any mistakes on it
Sakura
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Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Everything seems ok here

[General]
You could add DKC to tags since it's the abreviation of the game
I was expecting a different kind of SB when i saw the images in the folder, still good tho, nice SB.

[Timing]
The first timing section feels off try -38ms? feels less off for me that way.

[Insane]
Approach Rate +1?
Other than that is fine

[Roddie's Normal]
00:06:061 (1) - Why the sudden change of spacing?
01:26:821 (1,2) - This gap feels sudden and weird, feels like it's breaking the rythm, map something in between theese?

[Easy+]
00:12:635 (1) - I think this shape looks a bit ugly, try to make into a rainbow or something, because spiraling into itself without a perfect curve wont really look well, the curve looks too weird around the bottom right see.
00:23:426 (3) - Too sharp curve, it can be seen at the bottom, make more smooth? something like:
SPOILER
01:00:526 (1) - Dont feel like it needs the clap at the start
01:02:404 (1) - ^
01:04:282 (1) - ^
01:08:038 (1,2,1,2) - Not saying there's problems here, but since you arent using claps at the start on theese, why not do the same with the repeat sliders i pointed earlier, both feel similar in rythm and music anyways
01:31:997 (2) - Feels weird regarding the Rythm you've had on the song, maybe remove.
01:33:875 (2) - ^

[Overall]
Very nice map nevertheless i'll be waiting for your reply to my mod post before i star it tho, Good Luck!~
Edit: Ok Starred then!~
Last edited by Sakura , edited 1 time in total.
Roddie
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Roddie

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Roddie's Normal]
00:06:061 (1) - Why the sudden change of spacing? Fixed.
01:26:821 (1,2) - This gap feels sudden and weird, feels like it's breaking the rhythm, map something in between these? Oh wow. How could I miss that? :( Fixed.
Thanks, Sakura. ;)

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [Roddie's Normal].osu
James2250
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I'm not sure I agree with the new timing, will check it out more in detail later. But everything else fixed, thanks :D
(that's what I get for rushing easy lol)
NatsumeRin
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Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
eggpain timing...
section-pass.png should be 650*650 if i don't remember it wrong... though i love your creative SB for section pass/fail

[Easy+]
00:15:390 (3,4,1) - any reason for 1 not exactly on the line of 3&4?
00:21:859 (4) - add whistle to the beginning? (since you did at 00:19:702 (4) )
01:00:526 (1,1,1) - remove claps at the end... then the next clap start from 01:06:630 (2) could get a better effect.
01:08:508 (2,2,1) - same.
01:26:821 (1) - remove clap at the end.
01:38:100 (8) - finish?

[Roddie's Normal]
AR+1
00:03:862 (1,2,3,4) - spacing at this part is farther than other parts...? if not on purpose make them the same.
00:09:361 (5) - prefer you to make it 1 grid down+ 1 grid right (at the line of 1&3)
00:30:452 (1) - finish at the beginning?
00:36:105 (1) - remove clap at the 2nd reverse.
00:41:734 (1) - why change the clap pace here..?
01:06:864 (1,4) - remove clap at 1's end and 4
01:13:678 (10,1,2) - another spacing changing part.
01:30:107 (5) - remove clap

[Insane]
00:12:635 (1) - add whistle to the slider (include sliderslide)
00:31:172 (4,5,6) - = =....nazi.
00:39:389 (5,1) - better not to change spacing though there's a new combo.
00:41:030 (4) - 1 grid up i guess.
01:04:987 (1,2,3) - consider the hitsounds you choose, better to use circle-slider-slider.
01:18:957 (5) - clap?
01:24:591 (8) - ^
01:26:469 (8) - ^
Roddie
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Roddie

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Roddie's Normal]
AR+1 First time that I did that. Fixed.
00:03:862 (1,2,3,4) - spacing at this part is farther than other parts...? if not on purpose make them the same. My bad. u_u;
00:09:361 (5) - prefer you to make it 1 grid down+ 1 grid right (at the line of 1&3) I'll just fix the slider.
00:30:452 (1) - finish at the beginning? Fixed.
00:36:105 (1) - remove clap at the 2nd reverse. Fixed.
00:41:734 (1) - why change the clap pace here..? Oh wow. That's fixed.
01:06:864 (1,4) - remove clap at 1's end and 4 Nah.
01:13:678 (10,1,2) - another spacing changing part. Fixed.
01:30:107 (5) - remove clap Nah, Its fine.
Thanks for the mod, Rin. 8-)

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [Roddie's Normal].osu
James2250
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James2250
section-pass.png should be 650*650

That is the max size, it is allowed to be less than that
Everything else fixed
Lesjuh
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Lesjuh
Osu! does not detect a background image!

Timing (Replace with [TimingPoints] in all .osu files!)
SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
3850,549.954170485793,4,1,0,40,1,0
12630,549.954170485793,4,1,0,40,1,0
13720,553.50553505535,4,1,0,40,1,0
15910,550.45871559633,4,1,0,40,1,0
18090,542.49547920434,4,1,0,40,1,0
20230,539.568345323741,4,1,0,40,1,0
22395,515.907136715391,4,1,0,21,1,0
26490,502.092050209205,4,1,0,21,1,0
28480,500,4,1,0,21,1,0
30440,480,4,1,0,40,1,0
32320,480,4,1,0,40,1,0
34220,469.116497263487,4,1,0,40,1,0
45480,469.666497263487,4,1,0,40,1,0
60520,469.483568075117,4,1,0,40,1,0
75550,469.483568075117,4,1,0,40,1,0
90580,469.483568075117,4,1,0,40,1,0
Insane
01:24:004 (5,6) - This really got me confused, perhaps you could make a little more space between them.

That's it!
James2250
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James2250
yeah I know AIMod doesn't see the sb'ed backgrounds, but people do, so will ignore AIMod on that one
Beuchi
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Beuchi
Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore :P

~All Diffs~
- AIMod says you don't have any background image, but you actually have a thumbnail, how did you do it? I'm curious =D

~Storyboard~
- "DK-dying.png" has a lot of blank space around the real image, could you crop it?
- I think you should make the section fail sound storyboarded and not as the fail sound, the music sounds before donkey gets hitted by the cannonball xD

~Easy~
No problems here!

~Roddie's Normal~
No problems here, though this feels more like a Hard, there are a lot of long 1/2 chains >:

~Insane~
00:50:411 (6) - NAZI!! - Move this a little bit to the right, it isn't aligned correctly =x
01:23:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Woah this pattern is so cool!

Cool map~ Good luck with this!
*star*

ps. don't kudosu this, it's not worth it xD
James2250
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You get kudosu because I did follow everything you said :D

I have no idea why it shows that thumbnail (as that isn't even the background that is in my folder anymore, it is the old one that I used), and AIMod still says I don't have one....oh well?

(also changed everything to JPEG and made total file size go down by 4mb~~~~)
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
:3?

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [31's Taiko].osu
James2250
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James2250
Added thanks~

(I added kiai to it, hope you don't mind)
Everything else left the same
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wmfchris
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wmfchris
[taiko] fairly ok...still overmapped

[insane]
0:06:462 (3) down 1 grid
0:08:799 (4) ^
0:37:503 (13,14) spacing
0:44:775 (8,9) spacing

other seems ok, star~
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