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Pastry - Nostalgic East

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Leorda
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Leorda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 Desember 2010 at 18:46:19

Artist: Pastry
Title: Nostalgic East
Source: Touhou
Tags: keine kamishirasawa imperishable night th08 dream trance
BPM: 142
Filesize: 6088kb
Play Time: 04:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beast (4,82 stars, 562 notes)
  2. Human (0,42 stars, 148 notes)
  3. Phantom (2,74 stars, 272 notes)
Download: Pastry - Nostalgic East
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Touhou maps. Keine Kamishirasawa is a half-beast woman in Imperishable Night, she is become Beast if the moon is full, and she is become normal if the moon not appear OR not full moon. If you half-beast like Keine, kill Kaguya Houraisan until blood is empty. Well, I hope you like this map ^^

If you download this before August 25, 2010, please Re-Download, because MP3 cutted and the timing is changed

Update in August 19, 2010 : Neethime's Mod and SB added
Update in August 21, 2010 : Kurai-chan's and Liss' Mod, SB Warning added
Update in August 24 ,2010 : Crash's Mod, fixed something
Update in August 25, 2010 : Gladi's Mod, Cutted MP3, change the timing
Update in August 31, 2010 : Rin-yeah's Mod
Update in August 04, 2010 : Hana's Mod
Update in September 05, 2010 : MonKy's Mod
Update in September 20, 2010 : Derek's and Akita Garven's Mod, change BG SB and some Move and Scale are change, redownload please
Update in September 29, 2010 : Lunet's Mod
Update in October 13, 2010 : SB Code fixed
Update in October 16, 2010 : Xero's Mod
Update in October 25, 2010 : Doom's Mod (I hate you)
Update in November 04, 2010 : Title.png is changed (redownload please)
Update in November 05, 2010 : James2250's Mod, redownload please, due the stuff are changed
Update in December 02, 2010 : All SB BG are moved to Foreground
Update in December 06, 2010 : Circle Size at [Beast] are now large, not largest
Update in December 09, 2010 : Fix the SB code
Update in December 15, 2010 : Change hitsound style for kiai from Soft to Normal (because it's awesome XD)
Update in December 16, 2010 : Kiouonesama's Mod
Last edited by Leorda , edited 21 times in total.
Neethime
168 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
[Blood is empty]
[Dead,can't mod]











































OK,Houraisan Kaguya will never die wwww.

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[General]
Normal hitsound is a bit too loud for me, try to turn down volume,or use some soft hitsound at some place.

[Human]

Ahhh..OK www


[Phantom]

01:19:208 (6) - 1 grid down.
02:17:517 (1) - Delete this?


[Beast]

Now the person who said "I hate anti-jumps"use lots of them lol.
OD9 feels crazy to me D: maybe use OD8?
(02:30:616 - 02:36:532)New combos here seem strange to me,
How about like this? 02:30:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
02:41:602 (6,1) - Change to (1,2)
02:42:447 (5,1) - ^

Yeah that's all, great map.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Neethime wrote:

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[General]
Normal hitsound is a bit too loud for me, try to turn down volume,or use some soft hitsound at some place. Fixed

[Human]

Ahhh..OK www


[Phantom]

01:19:208 (6) - 1 grid down. Fixed
02:17:517 (1) - Delete this? Fixed


[Beast]

Now the person who said "I hate anti-jumps"use lots of them lol.
OD9 feels crazy to me D: maybe use OD8? Fixed
(02:30:616 - 02:36:532)New combos here seem strange to me, Fixed
How about like this? 02:30:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
02:41:602 (6,1) - Change to (1,2) NO
02:42:447 (5,1) - ^ NO

Yeah that's all, great map.
TheVileOne
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8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
General
It would be great if there was a difficulty in between phantom and beast

BATS are not going to like the fact that your easy difficulties are so much shorter than your longer difficulty.

Human

00:55:968 (1) - Add claps to all ends of this?
00:59:348 (1) - ^

02:25:546 (3) - Slightly curve the start of the slider inward. I think that it looks off centered because of how it is angled.

Phantom

02:11:602 (3) - Move here 02:11:496 - ??
02:11:813 - Add note??
Space like this??

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21782

Beast

00:56:391 (3) - Move right 1 unit.

00:57:658 (7,8,9) - Space like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21783

01:30:194 (2) - Move left and down 1 unit. (Use distance snap)

03:53:433 - OMG x2 Death stream time. xD

Maybe you should warn us for that.


It was so soothing under the x2 section and then it became hell to hit. xD


Good enough for a star.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

TheVileOne wrote:

General
It would be great if there was a difficulty in between phantom and beast

BATS are not going to like the fact that your easy difficulties are so much shorter than your longer difficulty.

Human

00:55:968 (1) - Add claps to all ends of this?
00:59:348 (1) - ^

02:25:546 (3) - Slightly curve the start of the slider inward. I think that it looks off centered because of how it is angled.

Phantom

02:11:602 (3) - Move here 02:11:496 - ??
02:11:813 - Add note??
Space like this??

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21782

Beast

00:56:391 (3) - Move right 1 unit.

00:57:658 (7,8,9) - Space like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21783

01:30:194 (2) - Move left and down 1 unit. (Use distance snap)

03:53:433 - OMG x2 Death stream time. xD

Maybe you should warn us for that.


It was so soothing under the x2 section and then it became hell to hit. xD


Good enough for a star.
NO, for all, no kudosu, Phantom is NORMAL DIFF
Kurai
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Kurai
Hi Leo-chan :33

[Human]
00:51:320 (1) - Move 1/1 earlier and extand by 1/1
01:16:250 (1) - Finish at the end ?
01:24:701 (1) - The end is too close to the top border, that's hide by the lifebar, so I recommend to you to change the form of this slider :>
01:27:236 (2) - Too close to the top border
01:32:306 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier ?
I think you must map all of the song

[Phantom]
02:21:320 (2,3) - Too close to the top border, that's hide by the lifebar
I think you must map all of the song

[Beast]
00:51:320 (1) - Move 1/1 earlier and extand by 1/1
03:37:165 (4) - Too close to the top border

:33 Star :D

Hum... If you can, can you give the 4.jpg in a better quality ? (1024*768)
Post here if you can :33
Lissette
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Lissette
Try this offset: 176

Beast
01:05:686 (3,4) - plays better if you switch these two notes >< also will be a jump between 4 and next combo, that i think fits well ^^
01:09:489 (1) - see this jump? i think fits good, and i think u should put a jump like this, in the other parts like this, like here 01:12:870 (1) and 01:16:250 (1) etc ^^ (just a suggestion ofc) <:

Phantom
01:23:433 (1) - too near to the spinners end, since this is normal diff ><
02:03:978 (1) - same

Nice map!
Star! ^^
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hi Leo-chan :33

[Human]
00:51:320 (1) - Move 1/1 earlier and extand by 1/1 YES
01:16:250 (1) - Finish at the end ? NO
01:24:701 (1) - The end is too close to the top border, that's hide by the lifebar, so I recommend to you to change the form of this slider :> NO
01:27:236 (2) - Too close to the top border NO
01:32:306 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier ?NO
I think you must map all of the song

[Phantom]
02:21:320 (2,3) - Too close to the top border, that's hide by the lifebar NO
I think you must map all of the song

[Beast]
00:51:320 (1) - Move 1/1 earlier and extand by 1/1YES
03:37:165 (4) - Too close to the top border NO

:33 Star :D

Hum... If you can, can you give the 4.jpg in a better quality ? (1024*768)
Post here if you can :33

Lissette wrote:

Try this offset: 176

Beast
01:05:686 (3,4) - plays better if you switch these two notes >< also will be a jump between 4 and next combo, that i think fits well ^^ YES
01:09:489 (1) - see this jump? i think fits good, and i think u should put a jump like this, in the other parts like this, like here 01:12:870 (1) and 01:16:250 (1) etc ^^ (just a suggestion ofc) <: YES

Phantom ALL NO
01:23:433 (1) - too near to the spinners end, since this is normal diff ><
02:03:978 (1) - same

Nice map!
Star! ^^
thx
aRiskOfRain
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Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Phantom;

If this is a normal, which I'm assuming it is, get rid of those 1/4 repeating sliders, they're rather inappropriate for a normal.
Kiai in this the same as the other 2 difficulties, thanks.

Beast;

I'm not entirely comfortable with this 2x section, perhaps you'd like to wait until the next build of osu! so you can have a 1.33x or 1.5x section instead?

Cut your .mp3.
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

DiamondCrash wrote:

Phantom;

If this is a normal, which I'm assuming it is, get rid of those 1/4 repeating sliders, they're rather inappropriate for a normal.
Kiai in this the same as the other 2 difficulties, thanks. Fixed

Beast;

I'm not entirely comfortable with this 2x section, perhaps you'd like to wait until the next build of osu! so you can have a 1.33x or 1.5x section instead? I wish the next bulid of osu! is released now :(

Cut your .mp3. No, I want to keep it
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
[General]
  1. Map is lacking Soft Hitwhistles~ Add some more please! Especially in the kiai time parts.
  2. 25% is not used at the ending of the .mp3 file. I will also say: Cut it like DiamondCrash said.
[Beast]
  1. Tick Rate 2 ?
01:15:598 (2,3,4) - Delete these notes? I think it'll sound better if you delete them~
02:14:542 (4,5) - Make this part the same as 02:11:161 (4) So it will follow the music better?
02:43:591 (x) - Extra note here? To increase stream length?
03:37:359 (5,6,7,8,9) - Make this part the same as 03:33:978 (5) - again? To follow the music better?
03:41:584 (7) - Add New Combo.
03:50:880 (4,5,6) - Make this part the same as 03:47:499 (5) ~


[Phantom]

01:05:880 (10) - Either move this one grid level up, or make 01:06:091 (1) go one grid level down. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
01:12:429 (6) - Move 2 grid levels to the right.
03:37:781 (5,6,7) - Move these 1 grid level to the right.
03:43:274 (8) - Add New Combo.


[Human]
  1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by one ?
Starred~
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

GladiOol wrote:

[General]
  1. Map is lacking Soft Hitwhistles~ Add some more please! Especially in the kiai time parts.
  2. 25% is not used at the ending of the .mp3 file. I will also say: Cut it like DiamondCrash said.
[Beast]
  1. Tick Rate 2 ?
01:15:598 (2,3,4) - Delete these notes? I think it'll sound better if you delete them~
02:14:542 (4,5) - Make this part the same as 02:11:161 (4) So it will follow the music better?
02:43:591 (x) - Extra note here? To increase stream length?
03:37:359 (5,6,7,8,9) - Make this part the same as 03:33:978 (5) - again? To follow the music better?
03:41:584 (7) - Add New Combo.
03:50:880 (4,5,6) - Make this part the same as 03:47:499 (5) ~


[Phantom]

01:05:880 (10) - Either move this one grid level up, or make 01:06:091 (1) go one grid level down. (Grid Level 3 / Most Precise)
01:12:429 (6) - Move 2 grid levels to the right.
03:37:781 (5,6,7) - Move these 1 grid level to the right.
03:43:274 (8) - Add New Combo.


[Human]
  1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by one ?
Starred~
Some mod are fixed, thx
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
don't think you need a countdown.

[Easy]
01:33:167 (1) - remove whistle at the end.
01:43:308 (1) - add whitstle to the end.
02:16:266 (1) - whistle at the start.
02:25:562 (3) - remove sliderwhistle.(keep the whislte on beats)
02:36:548 (4) - remove whistle.
03:39:083 (4) - whistle at the start.
04:19:646 (4) - whistle.

[Normal]
02:20:491 (1,2) - the claps at slider's start don't make sense.
02:25:562 (2) - ^same
02:39:928 (5,6,1) - spacing not equal. though it's very easy to read and hit.
03:07:393 (5) - nazi. should be 1 grid right.
04:06:125 (1) - xooxo. x=whistle.

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate -1/-2. you have some short breaks and during them HP drops damn fast. if you won't add notes, then decrease this plz...
slider tick rate:1
you learn those jumps... from ... who? don't say me. your spacing is a bit far so don't use 2x distance to jump.
01:12:040 (1,2,3,4) - things like this are...evil.
01:35:702 (4) - leave the last beat as a circle may be better.
03:53:449 (1) - what...? 2x? serious?

glad to see you get improved on mapping. fuck yeah.
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario
General:
Hmmm you have a Storyboarded pulse before every diff starts. I personally have nothing against it but because most peple skip it seems kinda pointless. <- you don't have to change this if you don't want
mp3 quality 128 kbps. hmmmm could you maybe find a better mp3?

Human:
02:12:040 (3) - align the end point like this
SPOILER
03:43:308 (5) - also align this end point to the start point like before.
04:01:779 (1) - ^

Phantom:
01:25:139 (4) - raise the end of the slider by one tick
02:58:519 (3) - ^
03:07:181 (4,5) - one grid left?
04:14:998 (4) - one grid left and down.

Beast:
01:14:681 to 01:15:104 - I feel like something is missing here, it sounds odd.
04:19:857 - from here on I expected a 1/8 slider because the SB is also implying a 1/8 stream. maybe change that

Really nice map Leorda^^
Star~
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
Hmmm you have a Storyboarded pulse before every diff starts. I personally have nothing against it but because most peple skip it seems kinda pointless. <- you don't have to change this if you don't want No
mp3 quality 128 kbps. hmmmm could you maybe find a better mp3? I can't find any :cry:

Human:
02:12:040 (3) - align the end point like this Yes
SPOILER
03:43:308 (5) - also align this end point to the start point like before. Yes
04:01:779 (1) - ^ Yes

Phantom:
01:25:139 (4) - raise the end of the slider by one tick Yes
02:58:519 (3) - ^ Yes
03:07:181 (4,5) - one grid left? Yes
04:14:998 (4) - one grid left and down. No

Beast:
01:14:681 to 01:15:104 - I feel like something is missing here, it sounds odd. Yes
04:19:857 - from here on I expected a 1/8 slider because the SB is also implying a 1/8 stream. maybe change that Yes

Really nice map Leorda^^
Star~
thx
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Please remember, some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
After a fresh download it asks me to update the .osu files, make sure your osz is being uploaded properly

[Beast]
I think the 2x section is too extremist, try 1.5x?
01:26:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the spacing on theese is too close, i throught i had to click faster
01:46:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:57:674 (1) - This curve could be less sudden try something like this?
SPOILER

[Phantom]
04:22:181 Is this timing section supposed to be unsnapped? Will sound awkward at it's current position.

[Human]
01:24:717 (1) - Overlapping with Hp bar looks ugly.
04:22:181 Once again an unsnapped timing section
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember, some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
After a fresh download it asks me to update the .osu files, make sure your osz is being uploaded properly

[Beast]
I think the 2x section is too extremist, try 1.5x?
01:26:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the spacing on theese is too close, i throught i had to click faster
01:46:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:57:674 (1) - This curve could be less sudden try something like this?
SPOILER

[Phantom]
04:22:181 Is this timing section supposed to be unsnapped? Will sound awkward at it's current position.

[Human]
01:24:717 (1) - Overlapping with Hp bar looks ugly.
04:22:181 Once again an unsnapped timing section
Done

BTW, did you forgot to star this? Or you want to recheck these?
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Offset: 197. Or maybe lower than it.

[Storyboard]
-- Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG SBwhite.png",320,240

F,0,123349,123560,0.01895732,1 - Change 0.01895732 to 0.

[Boring]
00:44:140 (1) - Better add a finish at the end.
00:50:901 (1) - Replace finish with clap.
01:16:253 (1) - Better add a finish at the end.
01:24:704 (1) - Add one 1/4 tick.
01:43:295 (1) - Add whistle at the repeat?
03:21:323 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
03:25:971 (1,1,1) - Their combos make no sense...
03:26:182 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:26:394 (1) - ^
03:27:239 (2) - Add new combo.

[Phantom]
00:51:323 (1) - Replace finish with clap.
03:21:323 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
03:25:971 (1,1,1) - Their combos make no sense...
03:26:182 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:26:394 (1) - ^
03:26:816 (2) - Add new combo.

[Beast]
01:26:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The distance suddenly smaller. I don't accept such this.
01:46:675 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:20:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is ok since the approach circle shows that the distance is actually smaller.
02:39:915 (1,2,3,4) - Is it just me or those jumps seem too extreme?
03:21:323 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
03:25:971 (1,1,1) - Their combos make no sense...
03:26:182 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:26:394 (1) - ^
03:26:816 (2) - Add new combo.
Star.
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Leorda
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Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

VanMoNky wrote:

Star.
You forgot to star it
Agnes
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Joined July 2009
Agnes
Leorda. <3 Long time, no see, buddy! :D
~Agnes' Rage Modding Queue service

[General]
At around 00:38:200, while I was testing the map, I saw the SB Load blink red for a second. Check the storyboard images and make sure there's not a lot of transparent images.

[Human]
O.K.!

[Phantom]
01:05:914 (10) - New combo?

[Beast]
O.K.!

Nothing much to really get in depth with, just a small storyboard hiccup I've noticed. Star'd!
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