1. advanced (2,01 stars, 140 notes)
2. calm (1,29 stars, 87 notes)

Mapset

calm - Mortem
advanced - Mortem

Storyboard - Mortem

1. 00:17:358 (3,1) - nazi blanket :>
2. 00:26:025 (3) - mozna posunout na x:416;y:104
3. 00:33:358 (3) - mozna udelat lehce curved? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3543756
4. 00:38:691 (2) - vic curved - http://puu.sh/jDKO2/caaf30479e.jpg
5. 00:45:358 (1,2) - nazi blanket
6. 00:51:358 (2,3) - naziiiii
7. 01:04:025 (1,2) - tady mozna replacnout koleckama, je to lepsi kdyz v easier diffs emphasizujes vokaly vic nez beaty
8. 01:19:358 (2) - tady zase replacnout dvouma circlama, ktery by byly na 01:19:358 (3) a 01:19:691 (4)
9. 01:23:358 (2) - tady replace slider za kolecko?

1. Zkus dat slider tick rate na 2, vsiml jsem si, ze tam je hodne nezmapovanych hatu, ktery by se dali takhle vyresit
2. 00:10:691 (1,2) - nazi blanket
3. 00:15:358 (5,1) - blanket?
4. 00:17:358 (3,4) - blanket?
5. 00:18:691 (1,4) - tohle bys mohl blanketnout just cuz of my ocd
6. 00:29:358 (1,2) - cmon, d blanket
7. 00:31:025 (4,5) - tady by taky sel
8. 00:36:025 (4,5) - trochu bych tu zvetsil spacing, pokud to udelas, tak obviously posun i following noty
9. 00:39:691 (6,1) - blanket?
10. 00:45:358 (1,2) - nazi
11. 00:52:025 (3,4) - nazii
12. 00:57:358 (3,1) - naziii
13. 00:59:358 (2,3) - naziiii
14. 01:21:358 (3,4) - tohle bys mohl naaranzovat treba takhle http://puu.sh/jDLvm/72f730512b.jpg
15. 01:23:358 (3,4) - naziiiii
16. 01:24:691 (5) - co tenhle slider udelat straight asi takhle? http://puu.sh/jDLA3/77fddf0efe.jpg
17. 01:25:358 (1,2,3) - naziiiiii

Mortem wrote:

Applied some suggestions by Mclaren and Kalibe.
@Lethargy: Vše opraveno až na pár vyjímek v calmu. Díky moc.

Lethargy wrote:

V klidu.

• ~ i remember ~
  so melodic <3

• 
  01:17:025 - add circle

• 
  00:12:691 (4) - add whistle
  00:18:525 - add circle
  01:11:191 - ^
  01:25:191 - ^

1. Thumbs.db is pretty much useless and can be safely removed from the set.
2. I'm not so sure about quality of the background animation loop, probably we should look for something better.

1. For a difficulty labled calm people will expect much lower settings. Also, due to the low BPM sliders are really slow, so AR3,5 / OD and HP 3/ CS 3 (3,5 if you want it to be small). remember, this is the easiest diff on a very relaxibg song.
2. 00:15:358 (3) - minor - having it curved just like the next one at 00:25:358 (2) - would feel really sweet with the vocals.
3. 00:34:691 (1,2) - these two would feel perfect if you turn them in a slider. The music goes calm, so, players will not expect many circles to hit.
   
   A bit messy to my taste, but it still feels really nice to play.

1. 00:08:691 (3) - either snap it to 1/8 earlier (somewhat like you did in [calm]) or to the red tick (as the beat goes here). There is nothing on the blue tick, so finishing slider makes no sense.
   Note: 00:11:358 (2) - same happens here. And in a few more patterns.
2. 00:12:691 (1,2) - if you really want to emphasize the stuff here, start this pattern with a slider. Or else, it is extremely difficult to get the rhythm.example
3. 00:21:358 (1) - this is 1/6. I can fel a very loud beat at 00:21:913. Please snap the slider there.
4. 00:28:025 (3,4) - try to place them in another way to make flow feel more natural here? example As you can see the shapes are a bit softer and the angle feels less forced.
   
   From a quick look I see a few snapping uissue. Try to check them ore attentively, please.

• M4M
  
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  calm

1. 00:12:025 (4) - not entirely sure but I think the sound this repeat is supposed to land on is actually landing on 00:12:483 (5) - which is 1/16 and not 1/8
2. 00:12:900 (5) - this is where the second drum lands on (I think) not sure if http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3583381 is awkward to hit or anything but this is how you'd catch all the drums
3. 00:20:691 (3) - kinda noticeable inconsistency in spacing here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3583391 short song so I guess fixing stuff like that would not be a big bother
4. 00:38:691 (2) - 275/169 for a perfect blanket
5. 00:41:691 (3) - should add another note here for the instrument in the background, would be nice to map this out
6. 00:44:483 (2) - is where the drums you're trying to catch land on
7. 01:00:025 (3) - would move this down a little to get a more curved movement between 00:58:691 (1,2,3) -
   
   advanced
   
8. 00:08:691 (3) - 1/6
9. 00:12:025 (3) - ^
10. 00:12:858 (2) - should start on 00:12:900 (2) - if you want to catch the drums properly
11. 00:26:691 (1) - would move up and to the right a little for smoother flow
12. 00:35:358 (3) - should end on 1/6
13. 00:36:691 (5,6) - kinda weird to skip the strongest sound between these two, which is on 00:37:108 (6) -
14. 00:38:025 (2) - should end on 1/6
15. 00:43:358 (2) - should end on 1/6
16. 00:44:025 (3) - should end one 1/16 later
    
    and so on and so on, should look into fixing this (err and probably double-check whether I am correct or not haha)
    
    Good Luck!

Sieg wrote:

ok