Hello! From my queue
General- Looking good
- Offset -8~10? It sounds pretty late to me. If you change this, the suggestions below are before any timing change so the links won't work correctly if you change it first.
- No kiai?
Insane- Plays really nicely, love it
- The spinner ends on the red tick in this diff, but in every other diff it ends on the white one after it, so you might want to make it consistent
00:16:433 (9,1) - The pattern has quite a high spacing, but then you use a pretty low distance before the downbeat (the final note of the pattern, and also a strong beat of course). Doesn't seem like the best thing to do here. You could make 00:16:599 (1) - a ctrl+h+j version of 00:16:933 (2) - and then make the blanket again for a higher spacing, which imo does fit
01:06:599 (3,4,5) - This is cool and all but wouldn't it be better if these 3 circles were moved to a different location so the downbeat and start of the chorus or idk how it's called would get something like a littler jump? like x=240 y=120, something like that
01:16:433 (1) - Not trying to be all nitpicky but if you would rotate this clockwise it would flow better from the previous circle (and it would kinda make this 01:16:433 (1,2) - a blanket, not really though, you get what I mean)
01:18:266 (1) - I think 3 circles, or a slider+circle, whatever would work out better, rather than ignoring the vocals. Also, 01:18:766 (2) - the slider-end seems like a stronger beat than the slider-head so you also might wanna change this
01:27:099 (1,2) - Blanket? It looks pretty meh if that was your intention
Hard00:16:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern (and more) don't really make that much sense to me because they are paired by 3, while the song does not have something that is paired by 3 as well. I suppose not a lot of people care about this, so I'm just mentioning it.
00:20:433 (5) - Quite a big jump no? Anyway rotate the slider a little clockwise for a better flow, and maaybe move it a little closer, because it doesn't seem like a stronger beat than 00:21:933 (1) - , while the distance is noticeably bigger
00:55:099 (4,5) - Woah why is the distance so big here? I know you use a high spacing here and there but I don't think the red tick justifies it at this spot
00:56:099 (6) - Make this a return slider to cover the sound on the red tick? It feels a little empty atm
00:58:266 (6) - Same as 00:55:099 (4,5) -
01:09:766 (1) - Move further away? pretty strong downbeat here, it would fit, and you can easily move it without ruining spacing/flow for the next object
01:30:766 (1,2,3) - I know hard players aren't complete newbies, but maybe move it further away so it won't be confusing
Normal- The spinner starts on the red tick instead of the blue one. I don't think timing between an object and the start of a spinner matters, so why not let it start on the blue tick as well? (or change it to the red tick in the insane and hard)
01:27:766 (6,7) - Is there a reason for these offbeat sliders? I think
this would make more sense
Easy- Same about spinner
01:06:599 (1) - Because this slider-return is a very strong beat (start of the chorus) I would recommend using a different pattern rather than a repeat just on that tick. I understand that it's an easy though, but it feels really meh. You used 3/2 spacing more (like here 01:07:933 (2,3) - ) so it wouldn't be a problem right?
01:17:266 (4) - let it end on the red tick? That tick seems way stronger than the white one. Either way I see why you let it end on the white tick, but the red tick might be more important not to ignore
Good luck! Have a star
