1. Alone (2,37 stars, 298 notes)
2. Easy (1,14 stars, 132 notes)
3. Normal (1,73 stars, 222 notes)

- mapping french songs -
- homeless - remember - les amants -

#379/2190 best map of 2015

Easy by Me
Normal by Me
Hard by Me

Okoratu (thx for the kudosu! )
Okoratu
Krfawy

Modders!

by order
Lumael
Sky Trias
Okoratu
Krfawy

Nyark Kidoune wrote:

Hi! Je viens mod pour le plaisir.

Alone
- 00:29:505 un circle ici et un slider là 00:29:797 Mauvaise idée, je vais expliquer ça après
- 00:40:282 à supprimer je pense Je vais voir, j'ai essayé de le supprimé, et ça a un peu cassé le flow je trouve
- on voit très souvent cette composition de slider 01:09:118 (1,2) - 01:13:196 (5,1) - 01:14:943 (4,5) - etc... Essaye de diversifiais un peu. Cette difficultée est d'ailleurs très répétitive, essaye des slider avec des formes particulières J'ai essayé D: Nan, en vrai, avant de publier la beatmap j'ai fait des testplays à des amis et aucun d'eux n'ont trouvés que ça soit trop répétitif, je suis d'accord, c'est un peu répétitif, mais ça va encore ^^
- 01:50:476 circle Pareil que l'autre cercle
- 01:50:768 circle que je suggère de superposer au suivant slider ^
- 01:51:933 slider ici ^
- tu devrais mettre le slider velocity multiplier sur 1.20x pour les moment fort, le refrain. Meh, ça me paraissait assez

Pour l'explication des cercles, il faut éviter de commencer des sliders sur le tick rouge, ça peut te paraître peu, comme moi avant, mais sur ma dernière map, auquel j'ai joué avec ça, tout le monde disait qu'il ne fallait surtout pas faire ça. En effet, je prend un exemple: 01:50:476 - Je sais que le chant reprend sur le tick rouge (aussi appelé une "levée"), mais ce n'est qu'une note secondaire, elle n'est pas vraiment puissante, pas vraiment forte, contrairement à la prochaine qui mérite d'être mis en avant, d'où le fait de mettre un slider, d'ailleurs, cette note est légèrement tenue, ce qui amplifie l'importance de la mettre sur un slider.

1. Uncheck Countdown, Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks in all diffs
2. Remove "a" from tags, won't help at all finding this song xD
3. Background size is unrankeable (1365x768) resize it to 1366x768
4. Preview Point is unsnapped

1. 00:10:282 (4,6) - A bit nazi but blanket is off on the tail
2. 00:13:194 (1,3) - Same thing here
3. 00:16:980 (7,8) - Control G here will follow the rhythm better because the slider is starting on a down beat, making the gameplay very awkward atm
4. 00:34:165 (5,6) - Rhythm is not good here, try this instead:
   
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5. 00:41:156 (1,3) - Nazi suggestion allerted, blanket can be improved >.*
6. 00:44:360 - I suggest you adding a 1/2 slider at this location or two circles, one here at the other here 00:44:651 -
7. 00:57:466 (1,2) - This jump here feels random to me, furthermore, the flow is very bad
8. 01:20:768 (1,2,3) - Same thing here, and the jump here is even higher, plays really bad
9. 01:22:224 (4,5) - Decrease this jump, too big without reason
10. 02:37:661 (1) - Lol this spinner, more than 10 seconds spinning, are you sure of that? Maybe you could cut the mp3 a bit here and insert another red timing point on the next kiai?
11. 02:55:718 (2,3,4) - Flow here is bad due to the line of circles, move 3 up a bit so the flow can be improved
12. 03:14:941 (3,1) - Improve this blanket here
13. 03:22:223 (4,5) - This jump doesn't make any sense because you kept constant DS here 03:22:514 (5,6,1) - , in fact this was supposed to be a jump, pay attention on the vocals

1. 00:27:175 (1,2) -
   
   Pattern suggestion

   
2. 00:36:204 (6,1) - Poor blanket here
3. 01:04:457 (1,2) - Same pattern suggestion here
4. 01:39:700 - Not having this beat mapped makes 01:39:991 (4) - really confusing because players would definetly think that this slider was for this sound 01:39:700 -
   

1. 02:05:622 (2) - Very nazi but the first half of the slider is curved less strongly than the second :p
2. 02:10:865 (2,3) - Poor blanket here
3. 02:37:661 (1) - I'm pretty sure you'll need more recovery time here, atleast more 1 snap
4. 03:00:378 (2) - Same slider mentioned
5. 03:08:534 (4,1) - Increase a bit this overlap or remove it all, but this way it's just awful xD

Lumael wrote:

Hello! Comming from my queue~

[General]

1. Uncheck Countdown, Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks in all diffs woops
2. Remove "a" from tags, won't help at all finding this song xD Yes it will, Marina Kaye is the winner of a french emission called "La France a un incroyable talent" which is the equivalent of "American's got talent", but in France x3
3. Background size is unrankeable (1365x768) resize it to 1366x768 why does osu! always resize a picture with this dimensions ;w;
4. Preview Point is unsnapped I love to change the timing and forgot about this 8D

[Alone]

1. 00:10:282 (4,6) - A bit nazi but blanket is off on the tail done
2. 00:13:194 (1,3) - Same thing here done
3. 00:16:980 (7,8) - Control G here will follow the rhythm better because the slider is starting on a down beat, making the gameplay very awkward atm well, why not, I'll see what the other's thinking about this
4. 00:34:165 (5,6) - Rhythm is not good here, try this instead: I don't get the problem, the rhythm is fine imo right now, I made testplays and it just played great, no-one was complaining about this, on top of that, on your version there's slider with the strong beat on a white tick ;p for now I'll keep what I've made and I'll see what the other's thinking
   
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5. 00:41:156 (1,3) - Nazi suggestion allerted, blanket can be improved >.* Done c(x
6. 00:44:360 - I suggest you adding a 1/2 slider at this location or two circles, one here at the other here 00:44:651 - Well, I don't like this :/
7. 00:57:466 (1,2) - This jump here feels random to me, furthermore, the flow is very bad I tried to do something better ^^
8. 01:20:768 (1,2,3) - Same thing here, and the jump here is even higher, plays really bad ^
9. 01:22:224 (4,5) - Decrease this jump, too big without reason do you really think there's no reasons?
10. 02:37:661 (1) - Lol this spinner, more than 10 seconds spinning, are you sure of that? Maybe you could cut the mp3 a bit here and insert another red timing point on the next kiai? Welp, here I don't know exactly what to do, if I put one spinner or multiple spinners. I won't put objects because of the numbers of objects I can place (only long sliders, but in normal it'll looks REALLY ugly)
11. 02:55:718 (2,3,4) - Flow here is bad due to the line of circles, move 3 up a bit so the flow can be improved looks like a pyramid now 8D
12. 03:14:941 (3,1) - Improve this blanket here Done
13. 03:22:223 (4,5) - This jump doesn't make any sense because you kept constant DS here 03:22:514 (5,6,1) - , in fact this was supposed to be a jump, pay attention on the vocals

[Normal]

1. 00:27:175 (1,2) - is (1) still overlapping with (6) and (2) still overlapping with (5)? because I don't get how do you manage to have this x3
   
   Pattern suggestion

   
2. 00:36:204 (6,1) - Poor blanket here Done
3. 01:04:457 (1,2) - Same pattern suggestion here Same answer ;3
4. 01:39:700 - Not having this beat mapped makes 01:39:991 (4) - really confusing because players would definetly think that this slider was for this sound 01:39:700 - do you have a skin with approach circles? x3

[Easy]

1. 02:05:622 (2) - Very nazi but the first half of the slider is curved less strongly than the second :p I thought that too but I wasn't sure x3
2. 02:10:865 (2,3) - Poor blanket here what have i done? x3
3. 02:37:661 (1) - I'm pretty sure you'll need more recovery time here, atleast more 1 snap I don't know, two measures on a slow song (103bpm)
4. 03:00:378 (2) - Same slider mentioned
5. 03:08:534 (4,1) - Increase a bit this overlap or remove it all, but this way it's just awful xD True, done!

Good mapset overall, but Alone diff need more mods in rhythm patterns. Don't forget to vote on my Poll! Done

1. Add tags : pop - NEW - SINGLE
2. Inconsistency in Preview Time :
   #1 Easy-Normal
   #1 Alone
   

   #1 174424
   #2 174445

1. HP : 1,5
2. 00:35:913 (5,1) - blanket
3. 00:42:903 - 00:43:777 - what point on this inherit line? i don't see any different except audio decrease .. better remove them
4. Unused Inherit(green) 00:45:234 - 00:45:525 - Better remove them
   

   45234,-100,4,2,1,42,0,0
   45525,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0

5. 00:54:554 (4,1,2,3) - Check this placement , I found nice placement and flow
   00:54:554 (4) - 172|300 then 00:55:136 (1) - 168|200 and 00:52:806 (3,2) - stack them and move 00:59:214 (3) - stack with 00:54:554 (4)
6. 01:14:360 (2) - make same slider like 01:12:030 (3) - better
7. 01:55:136 (4) - -5 degree for better flow
8. 03:06:203 (2) - move down 1 grid (tiny) stack with 03:02:126 (3) - (nazi)
9. 03:13:194 (3,2) - better stack
10. 03:16:106 (3,1) - same ^
11. 03:18:436 (1,2) - better don't stack them

1. CS : 3 - OD : 4,5
2. 00:25:428 (4) - remove this , I don't hear anything here .. If you want to make same like 00:38:243 (3,4) - better add some hitsound there
3. 01:41:447 - add not here
4. I don't see anything wrong here, very nice mapset

1. 00:10:282 (4,6) - blanket same like 00:08:534 (1,3) - better
2. 00:19:602 (4,5) - better change this slider into curve slider , the distance is too far ..
3. 00:33:583 (4) - better -45 degree and blanket with 00:34:165 (5) - or straighten this to Y:340
4. 01:35:914 (6) - move down 1 grid (tiny) (nazi)
5. 01:43:778 (5,1) - why don't make them stack ?

Sky Trias wrote:

M4M

[General]

1. Add tags : pop - NEW - SINGLE "pop" will be added during the ranking process (the genre of the song), and for "new single", the song was uploaded on youtube a year ago xD
2. Inconsistency in Preview Time : woops, done
   #1 Easy-Normal
   #1 Alone
   

   #1 174424
   #2 174445

[Easy]

1. HP : 1,5 Done
2. 00:35:913 (5,1) - blanket Done
3. 00:42:903 - 00:43:777 - what point on this inherit line? i don't see any different except audio decrease .. better remove them remove every points except the one's with a slider tick
4. Unused Inherit(green) 00:45:234 - 00:45:525 - Better remove them I already saw them
   

   45234,-100,4,2,1,42,0,0
   45525,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0

5. 00:54:554 (4,1,2,3) - Check this placement , I found nice placement and flow
   00:54:554 (4) - 172|300 then 00:55:136 (1) - 168|200 and 00:52:806 (3,2) - stack them and move 00:59:214 (3) - stack with 00:54:554 (4) Cool thing! Done
6. 01:14:360 (2) - make same slider like 01:12:030 (3) - better Done
7. 01:55:136 (4) - -5 degree for better flow why not
8. 03:06:203 (2) - move down 1 grid (tiny) stack with 03:02:126 (3) - (nazi) Nazi is good! Nice catch!
9. 03:13:194 (3,2) - better stack Done
10. 03:16:106 (3,1) - same ^ Done
11. 03:18:436 (1,2) - better don't stack them Meh, for now I'll keep the stack

[Normal]

1. CS : 3 - OD : 4,5 No, bad idea, it'll break the spread
2. 00:25:428 (4) - remove this , I don't hear anything here .. it sounds weird without, so... :/ If you want to make same like 00:38:243 (3,4) - better add some hitsound there hitsounds follow the song ^^
3. 01:41:447 - add note here I'll see what the other's thinking ^^
4. I don't see anything wrong here, very nice mapset :D

[Alone]

1. 00:10:282 (4,6) - blanket same like 00:08:534 (1,3) - better wat?? lol
2. 00:19:602 (4,5) - better change this slider into curve slider , the distance is too far .. Mhh... dunno about this
3. 00:33:583 (4) - better -45 degree and blanket with 00:34:165 (5) - or straighten this to Y:340I'm not sure, it'll looks ugly
4. 01:35:914 (6) - move down 1 grid (tiny) (nazi) wat? why? there's no reasons here
5. 01:43:778 (5,1) - why don't make them stack ? for the flow

ignorance wrote:

M4M

Alone difficulty:
00:21:933 - Personally I'd prefer two circles here - one on the white tick and one on the red. I feel it fits the song better and this section has a lot of sliders anyway so it would be good variation. Mmhhh, for now I prefer this ^^
00:26:010 - and 00:26:593 - There's no rhythm to go by for these two sliders. I'd consider removing them and putting a circle at 00:26:884 - listen carefully, there's a guitar
00:34:166 - Personally would prefer a circle here since it's following the vocals. Mmhhh... I don't really like how it'll looks
01:00:379 - I'd personally like a long slider here rather than two sliders going across a held vocal note. I'll see what does everybody thinks
01:04:166 - This is fine but I'd add a circle on the blue tick going into the slider since in the background there is a note on the blue tick. Wow, I tried and it looks ugly, sry D: cuz it was a good idea
01:09:700 - Personally would prefer a long slider here.
01:10:865 - I'd make a 2/4 reversing slider here.
01:22:515 - A bit too big of a gap for this difficulty. I tried to do my best for having the less as I can, but hard still needs jumps
01:24:845 - Two sliders could work here too.
02:00:088 - Same as 01:04:166 - There's less sound here
03:13:485 - ^ ^
03:19:019 - I'd make this a non-reversing slider with a circle on the upcoming white tick.

Most of this is personal preference, so don't do what you don't feel suits your taste the most.

Brilliant map. Hard to fault. :D

Hope this gets ranked! :DD

Kudosu ;-; (no changes, sry D: if you want, you can send me a pm and you can try to find something that I'll correct ^^)

Okoratu wrote:

lols

18:19 Z e r s s: Hey! I just read your userpage, and I wanna know if you can mod [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/771922 my map], as I've seen, you're pretty picky, so I'll let you choose, you can say "no", it's your opinion ^^ Thanks!
18:21 Okoratu: so
18:21 Okoratu: what
18:21 Okoratu: uhh
18:22 Okoratu: i should have started with how i don't like the song and don't really want to mod it but does that thing even need any mods it's veeeery very basic stuff lol
18:22 Okoratu: dude nice 8% of the map is a single spinner XD
18:23 Z e r s s: lol, then do as you wish ^^
18:23 Z e r s s: lol
18:24 Okoratu: would increase stack leniency on normal so 1/1 notes stack
18:26 Z e r s s: Mhh, why not
18:26 Z e r s s: done
18:26 Okoratu: all i know is that long spinners are said to be tiring for beginners
18:26 Okoratu: because they tend to spin really big circles
18:27 Z e r s s: Yeah, but I really don't know what to do else :/
18:27 Okoratu: so are you sure you want to have a 15 something second spinenr in there
18:28 Okoratu: well nothing else really fits
18:28 Z e r s s: Until I got ideas, I'll keep this, I'll change it later
18:28 Okoratu: all you could do is multiple spinners but idk if that is any better
18:28 Okoratu: LOL
18:28 Z e r s s: yeah, I thought about that, I'll do that xD
18:29 Okoratu: i don't see anything really worth being changed in these diffs
18:29 Okoratu: are you sure you shouldn't just search for someone to bubble it
18:29 Okoratu: lol
18:30 Z e r s s: I don't have enough SP to bubble it lol xD
18:30 Okoratu: are u out of kd stars or something
18:31 Z e r s s: I don't have any KD left and I have problems I don't have enough time to make multiple mods :/
18:31 Okoratu: [http://puu.sh/kgOPX/99a1c26858.png i am not used to that situation]
18:31 Z e r s s: lol
18:31 Z e r s s: xD
18:32 Okoratu: so yes i could just throw 2 stars at it and bubble it
18:32 Okoratu: uh
18:32 Okoratu: i don't have time to do that right now though
18:32 Okoratu: wait didn't i say i am turning you down
18:32 Okoratu: why
18:32 Okoratu: nvm i'll just do that when i have time like tomorrow
18:33 Z e r s s: Oh, okay xD then thanks :3 you can post the very little mod about the stack leniency if you want, it's still worth a kudosu xD
18:33 Okoratu: 01:00:379 (2) - can u avoid this in easy i've seen cases where stuff like this caused dqs for overlapping itself and thus being unclear sliderpaths
18:33 Z e r s s: Mhh, I'll rework that
18:34 Okoratu: 01:37:078 (1,2) - and i'd recommend to space that out because that would get rid of any confusion this pattern may cause by being stacked
18:35 Okoratu: 03:18:436 (1,2) - afaik this is the only time you ever stack sth in easy
18:35 Okoratu: why
18:35 Z e r s s: lol, I'll change that xD
18:36 Okoratu: i think this is like the only stuff worth changing here
18:36 Okoratu: and well the spinner but im not sure of that myself either
18:36 Okoratu: like keeping it as is is the most simple choice
18:37 Okoratu: splitting it up on the other hand would allow rest moments between them
18:37 Okoratu: the question would be what's more tiring
18:37 Okoratu: and does it matter
18:37 Okoratu: ya ill just post this
18:37 Z e r s s: welp, if you're not sure about this, I'll check that with other ppl
18:38 Okoratu: and then come back to that tomorrow

brb tomorrow

Krfawy wrote:

#WIOLONCZELA

Krzysztof Krawczyk

19:44 Krfawy: so
19:44 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/771921 Marina Kaye - Homeless [Easy]]
19:44 Krfawy: 02:37:661 (1) - a question from me
19:45 Krfawy: my opinion, a very personal one, but I guess it would be easier to follow the rhythm if the spinner lasted till 02:53:389  - here
19:45 Krfawy: because the tension is growing from here I believe D:
19:45 Krfawy: + more time to react 
19:46 Z e r s s: ppl are asking about the length of the spinner, not the end, but, this end seems to be better, i'll put that :D
19:46 Krfawy: the lenghts is totally rankable
19:47 Z e r s s: Yeah I know, but ppl are saying it's boring, but there's nothing else to do :/
19:47 Krfawy: so that's why we use spinners for \o3o/
19:47 Krfawy: XD
19:47 Z e r s s: xD

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

GZ my beast zerss <3

1. 00:15:816 (6,7) - The music is pretty consistently calm here. Not sure what this jump was meant to be.
2. 00:18:729 (3,4) - 00:32:709 (3,4) - The distance setting was rather inconsistent in these two parts. Not sure if you were intending a small jump or not, but to me, it just felt like a random spacing inconsistency.
3. 02:00:089 (6,7,1) - If you uncheck the "Stacking" in "View" tab, you can notice that the stack isn't done properly. (Coexist of manual stack and auto stack) This works properly in none mod, but gets broken when playing Hardrock mod. http://puu.sh/ks9FA/ebccd7c579.jpg
4. 02:37:661 (1) - I'm pretty sure more discussion should've been rised regarding this massively long 17 sec spinner. In my personal view, there are new shouting sounds at 02:42:321 - 02:46:981 - and the current spinner usage is failing to contain those feature. There must be a better alternative than the current status.