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Ellie Goulding - Your Biggest Mistake

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Behon
Elite Mapper
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Behon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, January 14, 2011 at 8:44:46 PM

Artist: Ellie Goulding
Title: Your Biggest Mistake
Tags: lights Rukarioman
BPM: 123
Filesize: 4494kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.1 stars, 135 notes)
  2. Hard (4.57 stars, 301 notes)
  3. Normal (2.9 stars, 208 notes)
  4. Rukario (4.59 stars, 361 notes)
Download: Ellie Goulding - Your Biggest Mistake
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My contribution to RandomJibberish's Lights beatmap project, which can be found here: forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=35576

Putting in Beatmap Help until all difficulties are complete. Just wanted to show that I hadn't forgotten about it.

9/15: Added a finished Easy and an in-progress Normal.
11/12: Finished Normal and moved to Pending...Two months later.
12/5: New MP3, a new guest difficulty, new soft hitsounds, and made all suggested changes to all of my difficulties. Phew.
12/27: Made IceBeam's changes and added tags.
1/8: Made RandomJibberish's changes.
1/14: A small change to Normal.
Last edited by Behon , edited 10 times in total.
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
Looking great so far~

Let me know when it's done and I'll mod it.
braian5234
230 posts
Joined April 2010
braian5234
star :D
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
General
mp3 is too high a bitrate. Replace with this and full submit
kiai is inconsistent across choruses, make it the same for all of them.
Actually I'd make the kiai sections from 00:50:793 - 01:03:719, 01:57:134 - 02:10:061 and the last one where it is now
Offset 61 on all diffs to fix main menu flashes at the start
Hitsounds are very sparse in places


Easy
00:41:524 (4) - 1/2 longer or shorter?
01:47:866 (4) - ^

Normal
I'd suggest unstacking all the stacks under sliderends e.g. 00:36:158 (4,5) but it's your call
00:21:280 (7) - The time of the repeat here feels odd
02:18:842 (4) - ^

Hard
Same as Normal with the stacked sliderends
01:55:183 (3,4,5,6) - aaa stacking here is super confusing. move them apart slightly or make a stream or something. Also not a huge fan of the ninja spinner after but w/e

great map. Lemme know when you get a bit more priority and I'll bubble~
Lizzehb
645 posts
Joined March 2010
Lizzehb
Easy~
Turn the approach rate up by 3.
01:42:012 - Add note.

Normal~
01:30:061 - Map through this break.

Hard~
01:30:061 - Map through this break.

They all end strangely though, I would end at 03:17:135.
Danzai_old
207 posts
Joined February 2009
Danzai_old
Easy:
Looks fine, I found some minor minor spacing stuff, but dont mind about them.

Normal:
01:30:061 for me, it sounds like this part had been awesome for mapping, but thats just an opinion~
It ends on a wierd place, I would have ended it more like around here 03:17:622.

Hard:
Looks fine.
Just as the above, it ends wierd. Try to end it here 03:17:622.

*twinkle twinkle*
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
The offset should be 61, I don't see the value in keeping it at its current position when the song doesn't have an intro with an odd tempo or anything. As for the kiai time, I don't see why it is disabled halfway through the chorus at the first one but enabled throughout the entire second one. Please correct that. In relation to that, I think stopping the map at 03:01:525 feels a little anticlimatic. Why don't you try mapping until the end?

Easy:

00:22:256 (3) - Quite an odd shape. I don't like it. Uhh, how's that for an effective mod?

Normal:

Incomplete hitsounds in the verses? Seems very unusual.
00:19:573 (5) - New combo for consistency. Consider the arrangement of the objects' combo numbering prior to this.
02:26:647 (5) - I think this would look better if it were arranged more like this.


Hard:

01:19:817 (8) - Quite an ugly shape to use, I think. Please refine it with this and its lovely information regarding symmetry. There are some other patterns throughout the map that could be altered slightly to perfection, but I'm just pointing out the major offenders here.
01:55:183 (3,4,5,6) - I'd find it more interesting if these weren't just stacked on top of each other.
02:26:647 (7) - It'd be nice if this were centered as well. It's also not really symmetrical, so you might just want to fix that up as well while you're at it.

Lovely map, by the way.

Download: Ellie Goulding - Your Biggest Mistake (Behonkiss) [Jar].osu
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario
Guest Difficulty suprise.
Not taking this difficulty would be your biggest mistake~

Put everything in this .rar in the song folder.
Download: 19925 Ellie Goulding - Your Biggest Mistake.rar

BTW, I'd suggets t remove the countdown. I think it doesn't fit.
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Add Rukarioman to Tags as long as you accepted his diff.

Also,add Lights to Tags as well?

[Easy]
01:00:305 (1,2,3) - How about this?
SPOILER
Don't forget about (3).

02:06:647 (1,2,3) - ^

02:18:110 - Makes sense if you'd add a note here,because of 02:16:159 (2,3).

02:55:427 (1,2,3) - Same as first suggestion.

Those long sliders could be looking more cute,but technically they're fine,and the map as well.

[Normal]
00:12:988 (2) - A little bit out of the rhytm,the last repeat isn't needed.Finish reverse-slider at 00:14:939 and add that circle with finish to 00:15:183.

01:29:817 (1) - Finish doesn't fit with lyrics,remove it.

[Rukario]
00:36:890 (4) - Place right in the centre?
01:29:573 (1) - Move new combo to (2).
Cute sliders,cute rhytm and hitsound work.
But..
00:11:768 (1) - Please,make something out with this slider,it's uggly to me.

[Hard]
01:22:012 (1) - Place it inside that slider?
And why there're 4 breaks?

Nice map,star~
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario

IceBeam wrote:

[Rukario]
00:36:890 (4) - Place right in the centre? done
01:29:573 (1) - Move new combo to (2). I start all the new combo's when Ellie's voice starts the next line. and that is in this case on the current (1). So sorry no.
Cute sliders,cute rhytm and hitsound work. Thank you very much^^
But..
00:11:768 (1) - Please,make something out with this slider,it's uggly to me. Even though it symmetrical? lol changed.
Really like your mods Icebeam^^

Download: Ellie Goulding - Your Biggest Mistake (Behonkiss) [Rukario].osu
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
looking good, can't find anything wrong with this beatmap
but if there's an unused .osb in your folder delete it and full submit

STAR!
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Uhh, RandomJibberish shouldn't be in tags. As far as I can see, he did not contribute to the map.

Oh yeah, I'll mod it at some point~
RandomJibberish
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1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
General
What am I doing in tags?! Project isn't needed either, it isn't like anyone's going to search for that.
The red and orange combo colours are very similar: I'd either remove orange or change it to this sorta dark purple-blue colour
Use tick rate 2 on all diffs
03:13:232 (Easy Normal and Hard) - End Kiai here?
03:13:232 (1) (Easy Normal and Hard) - End 1/2 earlier
02:58:842 (1) (Or similar spinner) (Easy Normal and Hard) - I'd end this 1/1 earlier and add a beat where it ends now.

Hard
00:21:768 (4,5,6) - Clapclapclapclapclapclapclap
00:37:134 (9) - Stick a whistle on the start would ya'
00:46:646 (1) - ^
01:43:476 (9) - ^
01:52:988 (1) - ^

Rukaman
You already removed most of the shit I was planning to complain about :<
01:50:061 (4,5) - Whistles on starts plz
02:27:622 (5) - Remove this finish
02:41:768 (9,10) - Horizontal flip
02:49:329 (7) - Hello offscreen slider
03:16:403 (6) - Two grids right and one grid down? (if this is intentional it looks shit)

Normal
Combos are quite inconsistent on this diff - Check all of your new combo placements make sense.
01:19:817 (6) - clapclapclapclap
02:14:939 (5) - kill dat clap
02:22:744 (5) - ^

Easy
All coo'

You don't need to do it on this map, but I think your future maps would greatly benefit from prefectly symmetrical sliders: Check out my tutorial to learn how to make them easily.

So yeah, I'll bubble when all this is done.
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario
Fixed everything that RJ said about my diff. Also fixed the tags.

Download: Ellie Goulding - Your Biggest Mistake (Behonkiss) [Rukario].osu
RandomJibberish
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Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
Just a one more thing

Normal
02:57:622 (1) - Ouch, the spinner ends 1/2 before the next beat, which is pretty troll for a normal. It doesn't even do this on hard :/

EDIT: <3
Larto
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Joined June 2008
Larto
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Firo Prochainezo
2,140 posts
Joined June 2010
Firo Prochainezo
Really good beatmap! Good job.
Rost94
61 posts
Joined September 2010
Rost94
very cool song, thnx for the map :)
Faust
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Joined January 2009
Faust
This is pretty good, yo.
Garven
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Joined January 2010
Garven
Map is <3
The custom taiko hit sound is way too loud for me though. D:
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