1. Easy (1.4 stars, 147 notes)
2. Hard (2.85 stars, 312 notes)
3. Memories of You (4 stars, 431 notes)
4. Normal (1.7 stars, 203 notes)

1. Wtf is this offset, pls. AT LEAST -18 ms (3911) because it's terribly late atm. The suggestions below are before any timing change
2. It could be something related to the song/whatever this song is from and I'm missing it, but why are the combo colors so... boring and similar? Some color in the kiais would look a lot better, this is kinda plain.
3. I think the spread is alright, except for the AR used in the normal diff. It goes from 3.5->7->8, so maybe you should at least pick AR 4.5-5 to make it fit the spread better, also both ar3.5 as 4.5 work out for the normal.

1. This map+DT= hello pp

pkhg wrote:

[General]

• Unused hitsounds:
{soft-hitwhistle.wav}

pkhg wrote:

• Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
{normal-hitfinish.wav}

pkhg wrote:

hai

[General]

• Unused hitsounds:
{soft-hitwhistle.wav} fuk

• Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
{normal-hitfinish.wav} help me fix it pls ;_;

n i c e
pls

[Normal]

00:42:714 (6) - make it 1/2 i'll just make (5) a 1/1 slider

[Hard]
k00L

[Memories of You]

00:39:286 (4,5,6,1) - 6 > 1 distance should be higher why? the vocal ends in 6 lol
00:56:857 (1) - tails on downbeats are bad, i cri following vocals tbh.
01:11:643 (1) - remove nc for consistency nice
maybe the jumps at the end is what makes this need a easy diff, so u can make hard a bit harder and so on xd
dont be lazy i've tried to make an easy, i just can't.. normal star diff is already so low, and since this is low bpm, i think normal is easy enough.

maphowteachtome no, this map looks a bit messy imo idk why and i'm just a regular mapper ;_;

A Mystery wrote:

Hi there

General

1. Wtf is this offset, pls. AT LEAST -18 ms (3911) because it's terribly late atm. The suggestions below are before any timing change ok
2. It could be something related to the song/whatever this song is from and I'm missing it, but why are the combo colors so... boring and similar? Some color in the kiais would look a lot better, this is kinda plain. it's temporary, i always start with shades of grey
3. I think the spread is alright, except for the AR used in the normal diff. It goes from 3.5->7->8, so maybe you should at least pick AR 4.5-5 to make it fit the spread better, also both ar3.5 as 4.5 work out for the normal. ok, changed to 4

Memories of You

1. This map+DT= hello pp

00:12:071 (4,1) - Would rather see a bigger distance here instead of between these 00:11:643 (3,4) - , because of the downbeat sick
00:15:929 (1) - Same thing here kinda, you could move the whole pattern with (1) stacked on the solider-head instead of tail for example fixed, just ctrl g some stuff
00:39:714 (6,1) - Again, kinda weird that you put these so close to each other before a downbeat fineee i'll change it lol
00:41:000 (4,5) - Switch rhythms? I understand that you're following the background music here and there, but at this spot the vocals seem like a more important thing, and this rhythm will work out better I believe ok
00:44:857 (3) - You should've cut the song here for optimal speedrank power :^) LMAO pls
01:41:643 (1) - Woah please make this a circle+slider (or slider+circle) to map the guitar. Why do you ignore it because there's the drums as well
02:05:536 (1) - Remove the circle? Whatever you're mapping is not in the song (or barely audible), and the impact on 02:05:643 (4) - will be way stronger which feels nicer there's a drum there...
02:27:179 (4) - Shitty drummer is shitty XDDD I LIKED IT THO

Hard

00:17:429 (1) - Why does the spinner start on the red tick here and not in the insane? changed. (on the insane)
01:17:643 (5) - the KORUUUUUU or something seems to be pretty strong no? I think a 1/1 return slider is not the best thing to use here, because it completely ignores the voice. I see that you're trying to be consistent with the first part of the kiai, but that voice actually has the same rhythm as well so feqoinfeqnoifeqnoi idk do whatever you want it's just for the sake of simplying the rhythm tbh.
01:41:643 (1) - Same as insane same
01:53:214 (6,1) - You could do the same thing as in the insane, using a slower slider to end before this break. I actually liked that more I don't want any SV change in this diff, only insane xd
02:09:071 (1) - gdsrgds same

Normal

00:17:429 (1) - Same as hard. Also, I know you're not going to agree, but the pause after the spinner is kinda awkward. I know you're doing this to give the player enough time to reach the next object, however I think a longer slider would work out better since that doesn't require you not to map the first beats after the spinner nah, for the sake ofconsistency xd
00:40:786 (2,3,4) - I like this rhythm, why is it not applied here 00:27:071 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - . If it's for variety's sake, idk if it's worth it tbh ok, vocals. xd
02:35:000 (1) - Inconsistent with hard and insane diff nice.

Good luck! (and have a star)

pkhg wrote:

[General]

• Unused hitsounds:
{soft-hitwhistle.wav}

Is used for 1 hitsound I believe, but it's kinda stupid no? Why not remove it

pkhg wrote:

• Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
{normal-hitfinish.wav}

The "possible delay" is part of the finish sound, (yes it does not have the best feedback because of that)

Taeyang wrote:

• General

1. 
   BPM : 140
   Offset : 3886 whoa, 3886 is WAY too early.
2. Check metadata
   http://kaminomi.jp/cd/index.html#2B_PENCILSalubum
   
   
   you cant add '(TV Edit)' no, look again. http://puu.sh/kgLBc.png
3. all diff uncheck 'Widescreen Suport' done
4. care combo colours,similar combo colours is unrankable yes, this is just temporary.

• Normal

1. 00:34:786 (4) - slide looks better then straight slide i suggest like this changed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:04:786 (4) - take HP bar fixed
3. 02:31:357 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - suggest rhythm and remove NC here 02:33:071 (1) - ; changed, but just (3) and NC removed.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:35:000 (1) - here spin why not here start? 02:34:893 - like another diff changed.

• Hard

1. i recommend use downbeat NC term 00:22:786 (5,3,4) - like here changed.
2. 00:10:357 (4,1) - avoid overlap? i suggest like this ok
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:44:000 (2,3,4) - flow suggest too far, and breaks jump DS (1.80)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:17:643 (5) - NC ok
5. 02:13:143 (2) - hitsound changed lol

• Memories of You

1. 00:16:571 (1,2,3) - you can increase here jump already changed.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:01:571 (5) - remove NC and flow suggest 01:02:214 (1) - move this slide to x141 y83 and make like this changed.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:11:643 (1) - remove NC? no lol. pattern changed + 1 measure
4. 01:36:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - too much make 1.9~2.3 01:33:071 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - here is almost 1.7~2.0 i think they're fine the way they are.
5. 02:02:643 (1) - NC change of pattern

good luck~!

RenDashiePrower wrote:

Hallo :3

Normal:
Most of what I found here pertains to spacing -
-00:08:196 (5,6,1)
-00:09:911 (2,3,4)
-00:13:339 (2,3,4)
-00:32:196 (4,5,1)
-00:33:053 (1,2,3)
-01:11:625 (4,5,1)
-02:03:053 (5,6,1)
-02:21:911 (2,3,4)
-02:24:482 (1,2,3)
-02:28:768 (2,3,4)
-02:33:911 (5,6,1)
These are all places where the rhythm and the beats' placement imply a perfect 1-2-3 transition. Instead of stacking the middle note on top of its successor, I suggest placing it directly in the middle of its neighbors, mirroring the timing and making the transition feel smoother.
Other than that, super cool! :3 Moving on. This has always been how I map my Normal difficulties. I don't plan to change them.

Hard:
Not much to say here, other than, more please! x3

Memories of You:
-01:51:053 (5) - This beat isn't quite in sync with the rest of the star formation. Assuming you're mapping with the tiny grid, it should be moved up one unit and out two. fixed
-02:03:268 (4) - I suggest moving this beat one or two units to the right on the Tiny grid, but it's not a huge deal. it'll ruin the 2DS i assigned it for
-02:05:196 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just wanted to say, very beautiful stream here xd thanks
-02:07:768 (2,3,4,5,6) - The formation here is very inconsistent. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but it looks a bit dirty to me :/ changed.

That's about it from me! :3 Sorry I couldn't be of more help. ;p For the most part, this map is just really cool as it is! I hope to see it ranked one day. It'll be a fun challenge. Keep up the good work!

Nayrus wrote:

I'm not sure about this but isn't Offset the beat of the first tact? That would be 00:05:625 'cause the first part is a prelude. If you listen to it with NC the extra beat on 00:17:625 is definitely wrong, it has to be on 00:19:339.
On 00:48:482 has to be a new timing point/offest btw.

appleeaterx wrote:

Looking really good so far, love the song!

riktoi wrote:

[General]

imo this should be a 2B map since the title has 2B u see what i men no xd

[Memories of me irl]

00:48:276 - snap break thingy here pls all breaks at all diffs snapped

01:42:597 (5) - unsnapped sledeire wtf bear i know i'm amazing at finding these songs with weird drums
02:27:204 (4) - do these really go 4/6 i dunno yes.

02:16:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - so agressive hitsounding 02:16:133 (1,2,3) - weird change from this changed, tho it fits.

02:31:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - the pp pattern :^) yes and no. it does make sense. and apparently i'm really good at finding nice songs with cool build ups.

02:36:490 - needs more inherited points pls no xd

[Hard]

00:48:276 - red point breaky

02:05:740 - the drum what about it?

02:36:490 - more inherited points to reduce 1000 pointy sound but no 5% all the time pls no xd

[Normal]

00:36:276 - wtf how is there a hitsound here r u drunk xd

00:48:276 - break modding make it happen #2k16

02:36:490 - lel you know it

[Easy]

00:11:204 - you should get a slidertick sound for this one I AM AGAINST SLIDERTICK HITSOUNDING, YOU SHOULD BE A SHAME OF YOURSELF IF YOU DO THIS.

02:36:490 - yes