Hi ~
Skin;
- Umm, making the hits invisible isn't a good idea :/ Use these instead ?? ... I actually made more skin elements LOL
http://www.mediafire.com/?54jwcvq513l7okeGeneral;
- Use this colors ??
Combo1 : 252,153,20
Combo2 : 202,11,11
Combo3 : 231,216,114
- Set a preview point, it has to be the same on all diff.
- Consider cutting the song if you're not going to map it all.
- The mp3 you have is 320, you need or that is lower than that, use this one
http://www.mediafire.com/?p5jpq0ydg75avc6 ?? Offset may change, so check that.
Easy;
- Are those little kiai fountains necessary ?? Take them out, and put a proper kiai time.
1st kiai time: 00:15:360 ~ 00:29:760
2nd kiai time: 01:05:280 ~ 01:27:840
3rd kiai time: 01:28:320 ~ 01:35:520
4th kiai time: 03:02:400 (not really a kiai time, maybe just add a kiai fountain here ??)
5th kiai time: 03:25:440 ~ 03:40:800
6th kiai time: 03:56:160 (not really a kiai time, maybe just add a kiai fountain here ??)
7th kiai time: 04:03:840 (^)
Probably is better is you use these kiai times in all diff.
- Beats are well placed on the timeline but not on the play field, try to make your sliders well curved by doing symmetrical slider points, also some sliders/notes overlap others and that looks bad.
- Work on hitsounds, they are okk at this point but you need to create a pattern.
Neet's Normal;
- Beat are well placed, both timeline and play field, but your could curve the sliders better
- Use whistles, not just claps.
- Use the kiai time I put in Easy ??
Hard;
- 01:22:560 >> make this a curved slider
- Could use more whistles ~
- Beats are well placed on the timeline but not on the play field, try to make your sliders well curved by doing symmetrical slider points and some jumps don't fit ...
Insane;
- Beats are well placed on the timeline but not on the play field, try to make your sliders well curved by doing symmetrical slider points and some jumps don't fit ...
- Use the kiai time I put in Easy ??
- 00:19:200 >> new combo then remove new combo on next beat
- 00:44:160 >> new combo
- 01:14:400 >> ^
- 01:19:920 >> remove new combo
- 02:39:360 ~ 02:47:040 >> why isn't this part with soft hitsounds ??
- Hitsounds can't change on a note, I think they have to be 1/4 before a note if you want to change the sound from soft to normal or normal to soft, not sure ...
- You have some not necessary timing sections ...
* Ummm, I will recheck I guess, for now, no star, but I will check from time to time this map :3
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图还是挺不错的，我能想到的就只有这么多…