Tia - Nirvana · forum

Rizen

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2015-10-03T07:42:09+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 October 2015 at 20:21:58

Artist: Tia
Title: Nirvana
Source: ノラガミ ARAGOTO
Tags: noragami season two ending tv size supercell ryo moph iamkwan
BPM: 144
Filesize: 10811kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.58 stars, 97 notes)
Hyper (3.37 stars, 225 notes)
Insane (4.01 stars, 256 notes)
KwaN's Hard (2.47 stars, 223 notes)
moph's Shinki (4.59 stars, 295 notes)
Normal (1.89 stars, 140 notes)

Download: Tia - Nirvana
Download: Tia - Nirvana (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Check out the Opening Song to this INCREDIBLE anime mapped by xxdeathx

Easy

Normal

KwaN's Hard by IamKwaN

Hyper

Insane

moph's Shinki (Extra) by moph

Thank you Shad0w1and for encoding the video and mp3 used in this mapset, it's great!! ^_^
Thank you Ringating for the HD background (goddamn that smile makes me melt) and MP3 with db boost!
Thank you moph and IamKwaN for your amazing guest difficultes! c:

5 yen givers (modders)

Kuki
Sc4v4ng3r
pettankodayo (stars)
FaiVillager
GH40z
gameuse
UndeadCapulet
guineaQ (moph)
Yahuri
Hi Im Nathan (stars)
Kendo-chan (stars)
rs_fadeaway
DakeDekaane
pishifat
Desperate-kun (DQ requested by me)
Lanturn
pishifat

Last edited by Rizen 2015-11-11T09:36:26+00:00, edited 85 times in total.

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2015-10-04T06:19:17+00:00

irc ya silly

2015-10-04 18:59 [ Rizen ]: u reckon u could check my mapset real qucik please?
2015-10-04 19:00 Kuki: no lol
2015-10-04 19:00 Kuki: yeah of course silly link
2015-10-04 19:00 [ Rizen ]: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/795015 Tia - Nirvana]
2015-10-04 19:00 Kuki: dln
2015-10-04 19:00 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/794932 Tia - Nirvana [Easy]]
2015-10-04 19:01 Kuki: this to me
2015-10-04 19:01 Kuki: 00:07:850 (1,2,3,1,2) -
2015-10-04 19:01 Kuki: feels like straight slider overkill
2015-10-04 19:01 Kuki: i feel maybe 00:09:517 (3) - could be a repeat slider
2015-10-04 19:02 Kuki: certified not a fan of this slider
2015-10-04 19:02 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/794932 Tia - Nirvana [Easy]]
2015-10-04 19:02 Kuki: oopd
2015-10-04 19:02 Kuki: 00:12:850 (3) -
2015-10-04 19:03 [ Rizen ]: about 00:07:850 (1,2,3) - , the vocals kinda provide for 3 1/1 sliders
2015-10-04 19:03 Kuki: make these the same slider 00:54:517 (1,2) -
2015-10-04 19:04 Kuki: yeah
2015-10-04 19:04 [ Rizen ]: about 00:09:517 (3) - , I don't really think a repeat fits because the violin changes the note it plays, and vocal emphasis changes
2015-10-04 19:04 Kuki: remove (4) i mean
2015-10-04 19:04 Kuki: and amek (3) repeat
2015-10-04 19:04 [ Rizen ]: but i could be ret.
2015-10-04 19:04 Kuki: but vocals are same
2015-10-04 19:04 Kuki: no-to-ki
2015-10-04 19:04 Kuki: sliderhit
2015-10-04 19:05 Kuki: slider repeat
2015-10-04 19:05 Kuki: sliderfinish
2015-10-04 19:05 Kuki: ya get me
2015-10-04 19:05 [ Rizen ]: but at 00:10:350 (4) - is ki-ma, not just ki
2015-10-04 19:05 Kuki: yeah but you can't map that anyway
2015-10-04 19:05 [ Rizen ]: wait
2015-10-04 19:05 [ Rizen ]: stupid me
2015-10-04 19:05 [ Rizen ]: i'll repeat that
2015-10-04 19:05 Kuki: k
2015-10-04 19:06 Kuki: 00:12:850 (3) - really don't like this tho
2015-10-04 19:06 Kuki: the end is my only problem i think
2015-10-04 19:06 Kuki: actua;;y
2015-10-04 19:06 [ Rizen ]: are these ones here alright?
2015-10-04 19:06 [ Rizen ]: 01:04:517 (3) -
2015-10-04 19:06 Kuki: you can fix (for me at least) by adding a curve at the beginning
2015-10-04 19:06 Kuki: so you get this http://puu.sh/kxQqA/c575138729.jpg
2015-10-04 19:07 Kuki: yeah
2015-10-04 19:07 Kuki: mmmm
2015-10-04 19:07 Kuki: 01:09:517 (1) - not this
2015-10-04 19:07 Kuki: why not just copy and reuse the other one?
2015-10-04 19:08 [ Rizen ]: ok
2015-10-04 19:09 Kuki: 01:12:850 (1) -
2015-10-04 19:09 Kuki: more symmetrical
2015-10-04 19:09 Kuki: or do dis http://puu.sh/kxQyu/690254db36.jpg
2015-10-04 19:11 [ Rizen ]: made it symm
2015-10-04 19:12 Kuki: sik
2015-10-04 19:12 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/795678 Tia - Nirvana [Normal]]
2015-10-04 19:13 Kuki: 00:32:850 (3) - again
2015-10-04 19:13 [ Rizen ]: because the song is 1/3
2015-10-04 19:13 [ Rizen ]: it's super hard to make a normal
2015-10-04 19:13 [ Rizen ]: .-.
2015-10-04 19:13 Kuki: lol
2015-10-04 19:14 [ Rizen ]: not meant to be symme
2015-10-04 19:14 [ Rizen ]: 00:32:850 (3) -
2015-10-04 19:14 [ Rizen ]: curve point is at the white tick
2015-10-04 19:14 Kuki: hmk
2015-10-04 19:14 Kuki: also you need a hard obviously
2015-10-04 19:15 [ Rizen ]: yea
2015-10-04 19:15 [ Rizen ]: I have someone GD'ing a Hard for me

2015-10-04 19:15 [ Rizen ]: IamKwaN
2015-10-04 19:15 Kuki: iiiii think his hards are good
2015-10-04 19:15 Kuki: i've modded a few i think
2015-10-04 19:16 Kuki: k uhh
2015-10-04 19:16 Kuki: if moph has any difficulties i guess he can pm me lol
2015-10-04 19:17 Kuki: i wouldn't expect him to need to but yeah
2015-10-04 19:17 Kuki: i'll post logs to get you started on that +12 fam
2015-10-04 19:17 [ Rizen ]: he told me he is very unsure about thr rhythm
2015-10-04 19:17 [ Rizen ]: because 1/3
2015-10-04 19:17 [ Rizen ]: thanks man
2015-10-04 19:17 Kuki: should be fine
2015-10-04 19:17 Kuki: yeah
2015-10-04 19:17 Kuki: no worries
2015-10-04 19:17 Kuki:

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

moph 2015-10-05T09:35:34+00:00

some small changes

Insane

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: nirvanaed.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 58550
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Nirvana
TitleUnicode:ニルバナ
Artist:Tia
ArtistUnicode:Tia
Creator:[ Rizen ]
Version:moph's Insane
Source:ノラガミ ARAGOTO
Tags:noragami season two ending tv size supercell ryo moph
BeatmapID:795015
BeatmapSetID:361877

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:3

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RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-10-05T23:21:58+00:00

Hi there.

Can I make an advanced diff or are you not requesting any more guest difficulties?

RVMathew

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2015-10-06T03:24:32+00:00

RVMathew wrote:
Hi there.

Can I make an advanced diff or are you not requesting any more guest difficulties?

RVMathew

Thank you for the offer! Unfortunately I must decline as I already have an Advanced Difficulty wip, I just haven't uploaded it yet :<

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2015-10-06T04:26:17+00:00

Hello~ NM from my queue~
~~I would like to make a Normal difficulty if no one has took it yet Such a nice song.~~ Well never mind then lol

Unrankable issues
My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
Small suggestions/nazi

[General]

All looks fine.

[Easy]

00:19:933 (2,3,1) - Not a must to change, but I don't really like the flow of this pattern. While it is a blanket which keeps things tidy and clean, beginners may not expect the flow to take a sharp turn at (3), and then again at (1), which can possibly incur in a combo break.
00:59:517 (1,2,3,4) - Well the flow could mislead beginners as flow from (1) and (2) is leading towards (4) and not (3), which really does impact gameplay by a lot for them. You wouldn't really want that ;-;
Well other than that, I found nothing serious. Good job

[Normal+]

You could have named this difficulty as 'Light Hard', but I guess that is the matter of taste.
00:14:517 (1,2,3,4) - It is just my opinion, but the rhythm may be bit more intuitive to follow if you make (1) and (2) 1/1 sliders. If (1) was following 1/6, it may be hard to hit (3) and (4) as they are individual circles, as it may confuse some newer players at this level.
00:37:433 (5,1,2) - You didn't really have to make a sharp turn at (2) and make it dangerously close to (5), it could have been bit more further away to be safe.
00:51:183 (1,2) - I didn't really expect you to suddenly follow the vocals when you were following the synth for this section, it may throw some players off since the rhythm consistency you were having is broken off at this point. You may want to use 1/1 slider instead to amend that.
00:54:517 (1,2) - ^^
01:04:517 (4,5) - You totally could have made the notes travel downwards, instead of going back to where (3) was, as there is plenty of space to use down there, and the stack is definitely visible during gameplay, which kinda will confuse some newer players as they won't really have enough time to react with such a low AR.
01:15:767 (7,1) - Although polarity doesn't really matter much in Normal or higher, the rhythm here may confuse players as the slider before was at the downbeat, 01:02:850 (1) - . It is also weird as you switched suddenly from following the instruments and the synth to following the vocals.

Well... 1/6 Insanes are really hard to mod for me ;-; Sorry x.x You can call me back for a mod on Hard or Advanced when they are finished.~~(As well as the GD, if you are interested in me mapping Normal)~~
GL!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2015-10-06T05:59:18+00:00

Sc4v4ng3r

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Hello~ NM from my queue~
~~I would like to make a Normal difficulty if no one has took it yet Such a nice song.~~ Well never mind then lol

Unrankable issues
My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
Small suggestions/nazi

[General]
All looks fine.
[Easy]
00:19:933 (2,3,1) - Not a must to change, but I don't really like the flow of this pattern. While it is a blanket which keeps things tidy and clean, beginners may not expect the flow to take a sharp turn at (3), and then again at (1), which can possibly incur in a combo break. personally, I think it's fine. The flow follows a slight structure and isn't completely random
00:59:517 (1,2,3,4) - Well the flow could mislead beginners as flow from (1) and (2) is leading towards (4) and not (3), which really does impact gameplay by a lot for them. You wouldn't really want that ;-; [b]I think this is ok ;_;[/b]
Well other than that, I found nothing serious. Good job
[Normal+]
You could have named this difficulty as 'Light Hard', but I guess that is the matter of taste.
00:14:517 (1,2,3,4) - It is just my opinion, but the rhythm may be bit more intuitive to follow if you make (1) and (2) 1/1 sliders. If (1) was following 1/6, it may be hard to hit (3) and (4) as they are individual circles, as it may confuse some newer players at this level. I think this will be fine as the flute/piccolo is very loud here, leading to me placing more emphasis on it
00:37:433 (5,1,2) - You didn't really have to make a sharp turn at (2) and make it dangerously close to (5), it could have been bit more further away to be safe. I deleted Normal+ and replaced with Normal. This problem isn't in normal
00:51:183 (1,2) - I didn't really expect you to suddenly follow the vocals when you were following the synth for this section, it may throw some players off since the rhythm consistency you were having is broken off at this point. You may want to use 1/1 slider instead to amend that. [b]changed to a circle and 1/1 slider instead[/b]
00:54:517 (1,2) - ^^ ^
01:04:517 (4,5) - You totally could have made the notes travel downwards, instead of going back to where (3) was, as there is plenty of space to use down there, and the stack is definitely visible during gameplay, which kinda will confuse some newer players as they won't really have enough time to react with such a low AR. was in normal+ but not in normal
01:15:767 (7,1) - Although polarity doesn't really matter much in Normal or higher, the rhythm here may confuse players as the slider before was at the downbeat, 01:02:850 (1) - . It is also weird as you switched suddenly from following the instruments and the synth to following the vocals. The vocals here is very strong, I think this will be alright
Well... 1/6 Insanes are really hard to mod for me ;-; Sorry x.x You can call me back for a mod on Hard or Advanced when they are finished.~~(As well as the GD, if you are interested in me mapping Normal)~~
GL!

And about the GD, yeah... I had a normal already mapped but didn't upload it yet.. Sorry about that :<

~~Will apply soon--~~

applied--

pettankodayo

10 posts

Joined August 2014

pettankodayo 2015-10-07T11:25:48+00:00

nice map!!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2015-10-07T11:42:08+00:00

pettankodayo wrote:
nice map!!

thanks~

FaiVillager

268 posts

Joined October 2012

FaiVillager 2015-10-09T01:57:44+00:00

Hi~from my queue~

[insane]
some blanket could be better
00:00:767 (1,1) - up & down symmetry
00:17:711 (7) - i suggest start nc here
00:20:767 (5) - change to another way that will be seen clearly
00:25:072 (3) - maybe use same ds?
00:34:517 (1,2,3,4) - little bit confused by the rhythm, it's weird for me. it is unusual to make a clap on the slider turn
00:53:683 (5) - suggest make it curve
00:57:017 (1) - make a slience on the end of it sounds better for me
01:09:447 (6,1) - a grid right
01:19:378 (8,9,1) - better with the same curve (notes and slider)

[advance]
it is ok to use 1.20x now? maybe i'm out of time
00:09:517 (3) - blnket better
00:29:100 (4) - could be grids higher to make it looks better
00:33:683 (3) - ^ (move right)
00:38:267 (2,3) - all curve or all straight
01:09:517 (1,4) - way too curve. don't be tied by blankets

[normal]
00:07:850 (1,2) - facing different ways might looks nice
00:23:683 (5,6) - same curvature or use copy
00:32:850 (3,4) - it is a good idea to make a combo shape but it doesn't looks well
00:52:017 (3) - i think this is better

[easy]
00:12:850 (3) - use more white dots to make it smoothy like:

i can't change more

good luck ~

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2015-10-09T05:11:10+00:00

FaiVillager

FaiVillager wrote:
Hi~from my queue~

[advance]
it is ok to use 1.20x now? maybe i'm out of time I think it's fine :<
00:09:517 (3) - blnket better ok
00:29:100 (4) - could be grids higher to make it looks better done
00:33:683 (3) - ^ (move right) righto
00:38:267 (2,3) - all curve or all straight curved both
01:09:517 (1,4) - way too curve. don't be tied by blankets ok ;_;

[normal]
00:07:850 (1,2) - facing different ways might looks nice don't quite know what you mean ._.
00:23:683 (5,6) - same curvature or use copy it is the same o.o
00:32:850 (3,4) - it is a good idea to make a combo shape but it doesn't looks well made into one 1/1 slider
00:52:017 (3) - i think this is better done

[easy]
00:12:850 (3) - use more white dots to make it smoothy like: ok, made it smoother

i can't change more

good luck ~

thank you for the mod!

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

moph 2015-10-09T09:16:24+00:00

FaiVillager wrote:
Hi~from my queue~
[insane]
some blanket could be better
00:00:767 (1,1) - up & down symmetry ok
00:17:711 (7) - i suggest start nc here why? I'd prefer to start on the new stanza
00:20:767 (5) - change to another way that will be seen clearly okay I tried
00:25:072 (3) - maybe use same ds? changed pattern
00:34:517 (1,2,3,4) - little bit confused by the rhythm, it's weird for me. it is unusual to make a clap on the slider turn yeah changed rhythm
00:53:683 (5) - suggest make it curve I like it how it is
00:57:017 (1) - make a slience on the end of it sounds better for me ok
01:09:447 (6,1) - a grid right ok
01:19:378 (8,9,1) - better with the same curve (notes and slider) ok

Thanks!

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GH40z

GH40z 2015-10-09T09:22:48+00:00

hello~
request from my queue

Advance

[Advance]
- 00:17:711 (4) - re-position
- 00:19:933 (2) - ctrl+j and re-position

Insane

[Morph's Insane]
- could u change ar8 to ar7.5?
- 00:13:683 (3,4,5) - reduce jump
- 00:26:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- 01:13:544 (3,4) - try change to LN '-'
- 01:24:794 (2,3) - reduce jump

that's it can i do because too many homework and job i have

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Rizen 2015-10-09T10:54:27+00:00

GH40z

GH40z wrote:
hello~
request from my queue

[Advance]
- 00:17:711 (4) - re-position I'm assuming this means stack, but it's already stacked...?
- 00:19:933 (2) - ctrl+j and re-position changed in a different way

[Morph's Insane]
lel

thanks for the mod--

gameuse_old

39 posts

Joined November 2013

gameuse_old 2015-10-12T03:35:59+00:00

Nice song!

SPOILER
Easy
Offset 767
your song's beat map divisor does not need to exceed 1/2
remove all (auto, auto) sounds and replace with (soft, soft) finishes or whistles
00:14:517 to 00:24:100 consider decreasing volume to around 30-40%
00:59:517 to 01:26:183 volume could go up to 80%
00:39:517 remove the (auto, auto) and replace with (soft, auto) finish
00:41:183 to 00:56:392 this phrase is way to loud, soften up the volume

Normal
Offset 767
your song's beat map divisor does not need to exceed 1/2
remove all (auto, auto) sounds and replace with (soft, soft) finishes or whistles
00:14:517 to 00:24:100 consider decreasing volume to around 30-40%
00:59:517 to 01:26:183 volume could go up to 80%
00:14:517 whistle
00:17:008 to 00:19:100 ^same
00:19:100 ^same
00:22:017 ^same
00:41:183 to 00:56:392 this phrase is way to loud, soften up the volume
the kiai time sounds really good

Advanced
Offset 767
remove all (auto, auto) sounds and replace with (soft, soft) finishes or whistles
00:14:517 to 00:24:100 consider decreasing volume to around 30-40%
00:59:517 to 01:26:183 volume could go up to 80%
00:41:183 to 00:56:392 this phrase is way to loud, soften up the volume

UndeadCapulet

1,100 posts

Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2015-10-12T04:07:18+00:00

From my queue:

General

There's a very good chance you will need another difficulty between Advanced and moph's Insane to properly balance the spread. Spacing fluctuates too much in the Insane, and in general Advanced is much slower paced. AR6 to AR9 is not a viable difficulty curve. nvm i missed the comment in the description oops

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moph's Insane

00:07:850 (3) - Should probably NC, no?
00:34:517 (1,2,3) - Personally I wish you used the same style of rhythm as 00:07:850 (1,2) - , it was a really nice fit for the vocals.
00:39:517 (1,2,3) - Should probably stack 2 underneath 1 instead of on top of 3, the 2/3 seems pointlessly tricky to notice. I think it fits the music better in general anyway.
00:41:183 (2) - Personally think you should NC here because of the downbeat and overall difference in musical tone.
00:48:267 (4) - Maybe curve this slider so it plays better out of the 1/3 triangle. Like so?
00:58:544 (4) - I would NC here to keep the pattern of NC's consistent throughout the entire 00:56:183 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - arrangement.
01:01:043 (6) - Try stacking under 01:00:767 (5) - 's tail so the snap to 01:01:183 (1) - is more powerful.
01:05:906 (8,9,1) - This is incredibly awkward. The circular-snappy motion of the triangle patterns is completely broken off by the placement of the next slider. I highly recommend you find a different arrangement that doesn't break the flow so much.
01:17:294 (5) - An NC here would be nice because of how strong these beats are.
01:23:683 (4) - Perhaps NC here for a similar NC pattern as 00:57:017 (1) - .

Your triangle and star patterns might be a tad highly spaced compared to the rest of the map, but I don't think it's too big of a deal. Overall this was really nice :3

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Advanced

00:11:183 (1,2) - Honestly, a slider would probably fit better. It would make the downbeat stronger and makes a better distinction between the 00:10:350
4,5) - circles.
00:18:683 (3) - Ctrl+h this slider, it makes the 00:18:683 (3,4,1) - motion more varied and more enjoyable.
00:39:517 (1,2,3) - This is a very clunky and unfitting rhythm. Try this instead.
00:41:044 (5) - I get that you put this here for the vocal, but I think it'd be better if you deleted it. It lets the guitar hold feel stronger and gives the next slider more power.
00:58:683 (3) - NC so the NC patterning of 00:56:183 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is fully realized. This is also strong enough on its own to warrant an NC imo
01:07:850 (1,2) - By following the vocals here, you've created a clunky rhythm. The rest of the kiai would have you click on the white tick, do that to keep things more consistent.
01:10:211 (3,4,5,6,1) - This part seems rather cramped, try out an arrangement along the line of this.
01:17:294 (3,1) - Swap NC since 3 is clearly the start of this rhythm idea.

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Normal

01:16:044 (1) - Don't skip the downbeat here, circle-into-slider is fine.

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Easy

I was going to suggest change tick rate to 1, but then I saw 00:12:850 (3) - and changed my mind. Awesome!

00:40:767 (5) - I don't think this circle is really necessary, aside from maybe keeping you from rearranging things, lol. Letting 4 hold the full weight of the guitar strings with no interruptions seems better imo.
Try adding a note at 00:50:767 to keep the 00:41:183 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - rhythm from getting too dull.

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This song is really pretty~ and the whole set is great, too! Good luck!

Last edited by UndeadCapulet 2015-10-12T13:51:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

moph

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Joined January 2013

moph 2015-10-12T06:24:14+00:00

UndeadCapulet wrote:
From my queue:
General
There's a very good chance you will need another difficulty between Advanced and moph's Insane to properly balance the spread. Spacing fluctuates too much in the Insane, and in general Advanced is much slower paced. AR6 to AR9 is not a viable difficulty curve.
as mentioned in the map description there is a Hard diff on the way

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moph's Insane
00:07:850 (3) - Should probably NC, no? ok
00:34:517 (1,2,3) - Personally I wish you used the same style of rhythm as 00:07:850 (1,2) - , it was a really nice fit for the vocals. yeah actually, why didn't I do that zz
00:39:517 (1,2,3) - Should probably stack 2 underneath 1 instead of on top of 3, the 2/3 seems pointlessly tricky to notice. I think it fits the music better in general anyway. yeah this doesn't read well, did something else
00:41:183 (2) - Personally think you should NC here because of the downbeat and overall difference in musical tone. ok
00:48:267 (4) - Maybe curve this slider so it plays better out of the 1/3 triangle. Like so? sure
00:58:544 (4) - I would NC here to keep the pattern of NC's consistent throughout the entire 00:56:183 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - arrangement. ok
01:01:043 (6) - Try stacking under 01:00:767 (5) - 's tail so the snap to 01:01:183 (1) - is more powerful. keeping as is for now, more emphasis would be great there but I don't think it would play well
01:05:906 (8,9,1) - This is incredibly awkward. The circular-snappy motion of the triangle patterns is completely broken off by the placement of the next slider. I highly recommend you find a different arrangement that doesn't break the flow so much. great point, reversed the second triangle
01:17:294 (5) - An NC here would be nice because of how strong these beats are. sure
01:23:683 (4) - Perhaps NC here for a similar NC pattern as 00:57:017 (1) - . I don't think that is necessary here

Your triangle and star patterns might be a tad highly spaced compared to the rest of the map, but I don't think it's too big of a deal. Overall this was really nice :3

Thanks UndeadCapulet!

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guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-10-13T10:11:54+00:00

On moph's insane

its pretty cool map overall but 01:18:128 (3) - is such a troll placement, since the stack leniency is low enough that it completely overlaps with the sliderhead, I would just move it slightly so that it doesn't completely overlap (besides, this is the first and the only time you stack a note below the sliderhead)

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

moph 2015-10-14T06:59:40+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
On moph's insane

its pretty cool map overall but 01:18:128 (3) - is such a troll placement, since the stack leniency is low enough that it completely overlaps with the sliderhead, I would just move it slightly so that it doesn't completely overlap (besides, this is the first and the only time you stack a note below the sliderhead)

hmm good point, fixed.
changed some other things as well

update

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Rizen

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Rizen 2015-10-15T07:27:44+00:00

gameuse

gameuse wrote:
Nice song!

Easy
Offset 767 this offset misplaces the downbeat.. the first note of the diff is because the vocals starts before the downbeat
your song's beat map divisor does not need to exceed 1/2 this song is in 1/3 rhythm but this diff is in 1/1, changed to 1/1
remove all (auto, auto) sounds and replace with (soft, soft) finishes or whistles this mapset has both soft and drum hitsounds because I think it suits the song very well
00:14:517 to 00:24:100 consider decreasing volume to around 30-40% made quieter
00:59:517 to 01:26:183 volume could go up to 80% that's too loud... I even think 70% is pushing it.. decreased down to 60%
00:39:517 remove the (auto, auto) and replace with (soft, auto) finish focusing the hitsounding at this part on the drums, which was not in the section before
00:41:183 to 00:56:392 this phrase is way to loud, soften up the volume changed to 30% volume

Normal
Offset 767
your song's beat map divisor does not need to exceed 1/2 this song is in 1/3 rhythm..
remove all (auto, auto) sounds and replace with (soft, soft) finishes or whistles mentioned in easy
00:14:517 to 00:24:100 consider decreasing volume to around 30-40% decreased volume
00:59:517 to 01:26:183 volume could go up to 80% changed to 60% instead..
00:14:517 whistle that would ruin the consistency of the diff and mapset, there's a whistle in this section every 2/1 small white tick
00:17:008 to 00:19:100 ^same ^
00:19:100 ^same ^
00:22:017 ^same ^
00:41:183 to 00:56:392 this phrase is way to loud, soften up the volume changed to 30% volume
the kiai time sounds really good

Advanced
Offset 767
remove all (auto, auto) sounds and replace with (soft, soft) finishes or whistles mentioned in easy
00:14:517 to 00:24:100 consider decreasing volume to around 30-40% done
00:59:517 to 01:26:183 volume could go up to 80% changed to 60% instead
00:41:183 to 00:56:392 this phrase is way to loud, soften up the volume

thank you for the mod!

UndeadCapulet

UndeadCapulet wrote:
From my queue:
General
There's a very good chance you will need another difficulty between Advanced and moph's Insane to properly balance the spread. Spacing fluctuates too much in the Insane, and in general Advanced is much slower paced. AR6 to AR9 is not a viable difficulty curve. nvm i missed the comment in the description oops

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Advanced
00:11:183 (1,2) - Honestly, a slider would probably fit better. It would make the downbeat stronger and makes a better distinction between the 00:10:350
4,5) - circles. applied
00:18:683 (3) - Ctrl+h this slider, it makes the 00:18:683 (3,4,1) - motion more varied and more enjoyable. you're right, done
00:39:517 (1,2,3) - This is a very clunky and unfitting rhythm. Try this instead. plays nicely. thanks--
00:41:044 (5) - I get that you put this here for the vocal, but I think it'd be better if you deleted it. It lets the guitar hold feel stronger and gives the next slider more power. ok
00:58:683 (3) - NC so the NC patterning of 00:56:183 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is fully realized. This is also strong enough on its own to warrant an NC imo roger
01:07:850 (1,2) - By following the vocals here, you've created a clunky rhythm. The rest of the kiai would have you click on the white tick, do that to keep things more consistent. I really think this slider fits this part of the song because the vocals at this point is so much more different than the vocals from the rest of the song... I really don't think this would be much of a problem
01:10:211 (3,4,5,6,1) - This part seems rather cramped, try out an arrangement along the line of this. ok, done
01:17:294 (3,1) - Swap NC since 3 is clearly the start of this rhythm idea. ok

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Normal
01:16:044 (1) - Don't skip the downbeat here, circle-into-slider is fine. done

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Easy
I was going to suggest change tick rate to 1, but then I saw 00:12:850 (3) - and changed my mind. Awesome!

00:40:767 (5) - I don't think this circle is really necessary, aside from maybe keeping you from rearranging things, lol. Letting 4 hold the full weight of the guitar strings with no interruptions seems better imo.
Try adding a note at 00:50:767 to keep the 00:41:183 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - rhythm from getting too dull.

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This song is really pretty~ and the whole set is great, too! Good luck!

thank you for the mod!!!

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RVMathew wrote:

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

pettankodayo wrote:

FaiVillager wrote:

FaiVillager wrote:

GH40z wrote:

General

moph's Insane

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Normal

Easy

UndeadCapulet wrote:

General

moph's Insane

guineaQ wrote:

gameuse wrote:

UndeadCapulet wrote:

General

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