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Kenji Ootsuki - Ringo Mogire Beam! (TV Size)

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Sallad4ever
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, November 25, 2010 at 10:51:55 PM

Artist: Kenji Ohtsuki
Title: Ringo Mogire Beam! (TV Size)
Source: Zan: Sayonara, Zetsubou-Sensei
Tags: zetsubou sensei lepidopodus
BPM: 180
Filesize: 16456kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.18 stars, 80 notes)
  2. Hard (4.92 stars, 251 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 334 notes)
  4. lepidon! - Taiko Muzukashii (4.47 stars, 251 notes)
  5. Normal (3.62 stars, 117 notes)
Download: Kenji Ohtsuki - Ringo Mogire Beam! (TV Size)
Download: Kenji Ohtsuki - Ringo Mogire Beam! (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All diffs are finished & ready for mod
Special thanks to lepidopodus for the taiko difficulty

btw this is the opening of Zan Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei, one of the most bizzare anime from the most random studio, SHAFT
I welcome any kind of suggestion

09/19/2010 -- lepidon Taiko Muzukashii added, moved to pending
09/21/2010 -- LesTrucsRose's, wmfchris', Leorda's, Garven's, & Krisom's Mod
09/22/2010 -- lovhin456's & roflninja's mod
09/22/2010 -- change the spinner approach circle and add default-numbers, plz re-download
09/23/2010 -- James2250's mod
09/25/2010 -- Lesjuh's mod
09/27/2010 -- Nivalis' mod
09/27/2010 -- add fail BG, hitscore, & lighting. The skin is finish :D
10/01/2010 -- Doomsday's mod
10/01/2010 -- change the score burst
10/03/2010 -- Sakura Hana's mod
10/06/2010 -- orioncomet's mod
11/07/2010 -- Derekku's Mod
11/08/2010 -- Change mp3 and fix some skin element, Please RE-Download
11/15/2010 -- Derekku's re-mod
11/22/2010 -- Derekku's re-re-mod
lepidopodus
Here's Taiko diff. Taiko Muzukashii(Hard) lvl. 5 so it's just fair for Muzukashii(Hard) players.

Oh, and you can change the name of the diff anyway you want. (Well, Taiko Hard is ok if you want.)

Download: Kenji Ootsuki - Ringo Mogire Beam! (TV Size) (Sallad4ever) [lepidon! - Taiko Muzukashii].osu
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
Lepidon Taiko muzukashii added

Yay I can play this :D
Thanks a lot
LesTrucsRoses
[Normal]
SPOILER
No problems found.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:16:806 (5) - Don't overlay this beat. It doesn't go well with the map. (Suggestion)
01:00:473 (2) - Add the clap hitsound to the end of this slider.
01:00:806 (3) - Add the clap hitsound to the beginning of this slider.
01:01:140 (4) - Add the clap hitsound tot he beginning of this slider.

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:43:639 (4) - It's kind of hard to see the 4 when it's under something like that. Consider moving it around.

Excellent.

Great map. And I love those hitcircles.
wmfchris
[Insane]
0;08:806 (2) left 1 grid
1:03:470 (4,5) ...swap these two notes?
1:19:637 (6) up 1 grid? Though it's now stack on previous (10).
1:26:637 (4,5,6,7) uneven spacing
...better check a bit with your AI mod? :3

[hard]
0:19:639 (7) right 1 grid
0:31:306 (2)...swap beginning point and ending point?
0:44:889 (2,3) make the same spacing of (1,2)?

[taiko] fine~

star
Leorda
Apa Kabar

[General]
You need a default number (default-0, default-comma, and etc.) In test mode, the score doesn't show up in your costom number, because I use deafult, anyway.

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:10:639 (5) - Stack with 00:08:639 (1)?
00:33:973 (3) - New combo??
00:53:973 (x) - Add note here?
01:04:639 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff

[Hard]
00:31:306 (2) - Reverse this, player will get confuse if the slider like this, they though, yolu use a distance snap
00:47:640 (3) - ^


[Insane]
Fine~

Soooo scary, well It's not bad since the song is good enough
Nice song
STAR
Garven
As per your request (That and I love Ootsuki's stuff):

[Skin]
The spinner approach circle is really hard to see against the spinning black and white. Try a red one to go with the noose.

[Easy]
Why is this difficulty at 90 BPM? Change it to 180 and adjust your slider velocity accordingly.
01:16:639 (3) - Freaking awesome.
Nice 'n simple.

[Normal]
Eh, I could nazi sliders, but honestly it's fine beyond that spinner thing that Leorda mentioned.

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Wait, it's not called lepidon!? The world is ending aaaaaaaaaaa- I guess he did say that you can change it to whatever.
Nice~

[Hard]
00:27:139 (1) - There a reason for these little combos?
This is a fun relaxing diff for me. Nice.

[Insane]
00:18:639 (6) - Okay, this slider looks a little messy.
00:45:139 (4) - I guess now there isn't a need to use the uninherited timing sections for this trick - just use the custom slider speeds now.
00:53:430 - ^
Really fun here too.

I kinda wish you have managed to place a note in the "Beemu!" part in the hard and insane, but it's still awesome that you worked it into the Easy and Normal. Excellent maps!
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever

Leorda wrote:

[General]
You need a default number (default-0, default-comma, and etc.) In test mode, the score doesn't show up in your costom number, because I use deafult, anyway. Ok I'll add the default numbers

[Hard]
00:31:306 (2) - Reverse this, player will get confuse if the slider like this, they though, yolu use a distance snap this is intentional, while it can be confusing but it's not very hard, the AR make this easier to read
00:47:640 (3) - ^ ^Yup

Garven wrote:

As per your request (That and I love Ootsuki's stuff): Yeah me too ;)

[Skin]
The spinner approach circle is really hard to see against the spinning black and white. Try a red one to go with the noose.
Okay

[Easy]
Why is this difficulty at 90 BPM? Change it to 180 and adjust your slider velocity accordingly.
ummm at first I don't think I can make an easy with low star rating on this BPM so I halved it. I failed orz

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Wait, it's not called lepidon!? The world is ending aaaaaaaaaaa- I guess he did say that you can change it to whatever. what have I done? :o Changed

[Hard]
00:27:139 (1) - There a reason for these little combos? The reason is, the slider after this is a copy of slider with NC, so yeah I forgot to change it :? Fixed

[Insane]
00:18:639 (6) - Okay, this slider looks a little messy. Forgot to change this too
00:45:139 (4) - I guess now there isn't a need to use the uninherited timing sections for this trick - just use the custom slider speeds now.
00:53:430 - ^ hmm now this is difficult, the lowest custom slider speed on editor is 0.5. I don't know if I can .osu hax it though

I kinda wish you have managed to place a note in the "Beemu!" part in the hard and insane, but it's still awesome that you worked it into the Easy and Normal. Excellent maps! I intend to, but I want more variation, though I'm agree that the "Beemu!" on easy and normal is cooler
Done most of them thank you very much everyone :D
For the skin I'll update later but I'll used the default skin default number cause I like it
Krisom
Easy-
00:11:640 (1,2,1) - Try this? (pic 1) (pic 2)
Nothing else to poke at.

Normal-
Imo, sliders like 00:15:973 (3) or 00:18:639 (3) should not have a whistle at the end (just the start and the body)
00:57:973 (3) - Remove the finish at the start
01:01:639 (3) - I can hear a finish on the music at the start of this slider. Consider adding a finish there.
01:07:306 (2,3,4) - Love <3

(I can pass a taiko... ...woah, well, moving on...)

Hard-
Same comment about the whistle of the sliders than in normal
00:29:806 (1,1) - Why the new combo?

Insane-
Same comment about the whistle of the sliders than in normal
00:57:970 (5) - Remove the finish at the start?
01:08:637 (5) - Remove the finish?


good!
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever
Done all except for the finish, I like them like this :3

Krisom wrote:

Hard-
Same comment about the whistle of the sliders than in normal
00:29:806 (1,1) - Why the new combo? Same comment as Garven's question
Thanks for the fast mod Krisom ;D
lovhin456
Hi ~~

* Yay ! Zetsubou Sensei :3 I want to map a song from this anime too ~

General;
- Is hit circle select necessary ?? If not delete :<
- Umm, I don't like the claps, use this normal clap instead ??
http://www.mediafire.com/?3i249gzy09c6jzg
- Why is zetsubou on tags, is already in source ~

Skin;
- I think pause-back, pause-continue and pause-retry would look better if they wew similar to what spinner-osu, spinner-spin and spinner-clear are :3
- Search here for a comboburst http://safebooru.org/index.php?page=pos ... nsei&pid=0 ?? There's probably something you'd like :3
- Make a slider follow circle ??

Easy;
- 01:05:973 >> delete this slider, then add a note here, then add a slider that starts at 01:06:639 and ends where 2nd kiai time starts

Normal;
- 01:12:973 >> add whistle

Hard;
- I looove this diff :'3

Insane;
- Super fun to play on CtB :3 Well done !

* Star ~ :3
roflninja
Hi Sallad
either im getting worse at modding, or i keep modding extremely good maps

[easy]
00:14:640 (1) - move down 1 grid so its a bit more center?

[normal]
00:44:639 (3) - maybe follow the lyrics here?
01:01:639 (3) - just soemthing that bugs me, but a bit high?

[insane]
01:16:637 (6) - grazes the edge

awsome map, good luck
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~~

* Yay ! Zetsubou Sensei :3 I want to map a song from this anime too ~ Yay~ :D

General;
- Is hit circle select necessary ?? If not delete :< ah I've already delete it, plz re-download
- Umm, I don't like the claps, use this normal clap instead ??
http://www.mediafire.com/?3i249gzy09c6jzg the normal is already good but I'll consider this
- Why is zetsubou on tags, is already in source ~The artist of this song is Kenji Ootsuki feat Zetsubou shojoutachi. It's too long to put in the artist field so I put it in tags, putting only shojoutachi may work but I don't like it :P

Skin;
- I think pause-back, pause-continue and pause-retry would look better if they wew similar to what spinner-osu, spinner-spin and spinner-clear are :3 I actually did it before but too many blood xD
- Search here for a comboburst http://safebooru.org/index.php?page=pos ... nsei&pid=0 ?? There's probably something you'd like :3 thanks~
- Make a slider follow circle ?? ok

Easy;
- 01:05:973 >> delete this slider, then add a note here, then add a slider that starts at 01:06:639 and ends where 2nd kiai time starts a long slider is easier and it's flow better

Normal;
- 01:12:973 >> add whistle I can't agree with this

Hard;
- I looove this diff :'3 :D

Insane;
- Super fun to play on CtB :3 Well done ! it's surprising to know that this diff is good on CTB

* Star ~ :3

roflninja wrote:

Hi Sallad Hi ninja :D
either im getting worse at modding, or i keep modding extremely good maps

[easy]
00:14:640 (1) - move down 1 grid so its a bit more center? done

[normal]
00:44:639 (3) - maybe follow the lyrics here? I like it better this way cause the lyrics are on 1/4 and I don't want to use many 1/4 here
01:01:639 (3) - just soemthing that bugs me, but a bit high?
Fixed
[insane]
01:16:637 (6) - grazes the edge it didn't disturb the playability so it fine :3

awsome map, good luck
Thanks for the mod lovhin and roflninja :D
James2250
Include a hitcircle approach circle in the folder (one from the template skin should be fine)
zetsubou isn't necessary in tags but ok
Continue, Retry, and....errr..?

Easy:
no problems

Normal:
00:20:639 (2) - slightly close to hp bar but isn't a problem

Taiko:
no problems that I see

Hard:
00:28:473 (5) - new combo to match others
00:48:473 (5) - new combo
00:48:639 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:
no problems

Nicely done maps~
*star*
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever

James2250 wrote:

Include a hitcircle approach circle in the folder (one from the template skin should be fine) included (I failed orz)
zetsubou isn't necessary in tags but ok I'll still keep this
Continue, Retry, and....errr..? yup Sayonara, nothing wrong right?

Easy:
no problems

Normal:
00:20:639 (2) - slightly close to hp bar but isn't a problem I don't like it too so, moved

Taiko:
no problems that I see

Hard:
00:28:473 (5) - new combo to match others
00:48:473 (5) - new combo
00:48:639 (1) - remove new combo done all :3

Insane:
no problems

Nicely done maps~
*star*
Thanks for the mod James2250 :)
Lesjuh
Offset -10

Insane
Make the timing sections that slow down sliders inherited and use custom BPM adjustment to slow them down again. It won't mess up your timing this way.
00:49:890 (1,2) - I'm against blue tick vocal beats

Hard
00:49:890 (1,2) - You know it!

That's it!
Astom
Hi~
Well I didn't find problems with skin or other things.
About the hitburst... mm... maybe something like a rope, a crying mask or maybe something shining can work... maybe xD

Well nice song =)
Star~
Topic Starter
Sallad4ever

Lesjuh wrote:

Offset -10 changed

Insane
Make the timing sections that slow down sliders inherited and use custom BPM adjustment to slow them down again. It won't mess up your timing this way. ok done by haxing .osu
00:49:890 (1,2) - I'm against blue tick vocal beats I'm disagree, if I put it on white tick it's obviously too late. I'll leave it like this for now

Hard
00:49:890 (1,2) - You know it! same as above

That's it!
Thanks for the mod Lesjuh

Astom wrote:

Hi~
Well I didn't find problems with skin or other things.
About the hitburst... mm... maybe something like a rope, a crying mask or maybe something shining can work... maybe xD yes something shining, ok I'll try making it

Well nice song =)
Star~
Thanks Astom~
lepidopodus
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Sallad4ever
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