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Ellie Goulding - I'll Hold My Breath

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Takuma
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Takuma
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Lunes, Hulyo 11, 2011 at 11:30:49 AM

Artist: Ellie Goulding
Title: I'll Hold My Breath
Tags: RandomJibberish
BPM: 123
Filesize: 7379kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.04 stars, 261 notes)
  2. RJ's Normal (2.37 stars, 200 notes)
Download: Ellie Goulding - I'll Hold My Breath
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Fight fires in your best clothes,
Touch skin with your eyes closed,
Chase thunder with the volume down,
Pack a suitcase and wander to the next town.
Last edited by Takuma , edited 7 times in total.
Armin
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Armin
W-Wow.
braian5234
230 posts
Joined April 2010
braian5234
Ellie Goulding ♥
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
Hi

Here's my diff and a bg cropped so you don't get ugly black letterboxy bars~

Also I'm pretty sure the bpm is half what it should be. Just half the sliderspeed and tick rate and everything should work fine.

Download: Ellie Goulding - I'll Hold My Breath (Takuma) [RJ's red hawt normal].osu

The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon
♥
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Don't use that background image at all, it's too small.
Takuma
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Topic Starter
Takuma

RandomJibberish wrote:

Hi

Here's my diff and a bg cropped so you don't get ugly black letterboxy bars~

Also I'm pretty sure the bpm is half what it should be. Just half the sliderspeed and tick rate and everything should work fine.
I think I changed it so that you could see the .5x sliders more clearly, I got into an argument about it awhile back
DeadAlready
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Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
:O tamama~
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
General:
An Easy would be nice. I'd prefer if you made it yourself, but if I run out of things to do... (I won't)
Your BG is too mainstream. Or just too small, idk. I found you several better BGs and made them black and white like the current one, take yer pick if you want one at all~ except the last one

Hard:
00:27:664 (1) - This jump doesn't really fit, in my opinion, and just is there for a prettier pattern. PM me if you're really stuck fixing it.
00:38:152 (3) - I think this jump is too extreme within the context of the map. It doesn't have to be removed exactly, it can just be lessened.
01:17:174 (3) - Move this up a grid for loveliness.
01:20:101 (6) - This does play alright, but if this wasn't intentional, which I can see being possible, Ctrl+H it
03:24:247 - For the hardest difficulty, it seems kind of anticlimatic to not have a hitcircle here.
03:24:735 - ^

argledarf's Normal:
00:59:857 (6,7) - I'd move these 1 grid to the right, because it's prettier and I'd assume you're silly like that
02:02:296 (6,7) - Left.

Until you see me in your dreams, you don't know what nightmares are. Also, when I played this, my cat had nice dreams, it looked like. And I will too.

If this mod is bad (it is), it's because this map is so nice (it is). You asked me to mod a graved map. Oh no.
RobotoRaccoon
224 posts
Joined December 2010
RobotoRaccoon
Ellie 8-)
lovelx
51 posts
Joined September 2010
lovelx
Starstarstarstarstar <3
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
:)
Takuma
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Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Takuma
Timing fix thanks to Jarbykins. <3
SapphireGhost
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Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
[General]
  1. Another difficulty would be cool, but I understand if you don't want to make one.
  2. Delete the .osb file if you are ever already Full Submitting for any other reason.
  3. Why is Overall Difficulty set to 6 on [Hard]?
[RJ's Delicious]
02:28:394 (1,1) - Note comes fairly quickly after a spinner for the easiest difficulty but maybe that's just me being annoying so have a cake.

[Takuma] You have 55 unsnapped objects.
00:26:445 (2,3) - RJ would be sad.
02:30:223 (5) - Only 1/4 note in the map... you could change it to a slider somehow, possibly like this.
02:33:272 (5) - The sliderticks on this object look really weird when playing, but I don't have any suggestions on how to fix it.

Overall, a fairly nice map. Have a star.
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
Sorry, Takuma, I don't think I can bubble this with the muted spinnerbonus.wav, but that appears to be the only issue at the moment.
Takuma
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Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Takuma
gave kudosu to jarby for helping me with timing.
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena
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Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
I can't believe I forgot, but please add RandomJibberish to tags and I will bubble it right away, seriously! Also stop giving me kudosu damnit.
Makar
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Joined February 2011
Makar
Small mod.. I love this song ^^

Normal
03:12:052 (2,1) - This spacing is confusing because of the slider speed...

Hard
00:59:125 (4,5) - Why not stack these under the slider before?
01:27:418 (1) - Remove new combo?

Star~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
I was gonna rank this, but since there's a mod that you didn't checked yet, let me know what you're going to do with it and I'll rank this beauty. <3
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