HELLLOOOO, im here to give useless mods
00:17:258 (6) - it might be just me but this overlap looks extremely weird
00:18:458 (3) - move this more down so that 00:17:858 (1,2,3) - would have visually even spacing oh and these 00:18:758 (4,5) - too
00:20:258 (1) - lacks emphasis no?
00:28:508 (5) - questionable slider end
00:34:358 (8) - weird flow or just me
00:43:658 (6) - wtf those slider points lul
00:45:908 (5) - stackign isn't the best choice here imo
01:14:858 (5) - I found this shape to be quite out of nowhere
01:15:608 (2,3,4) - well since you're using this patern I'd recommend the circles to be same distance away from the slider that blankets them
01:23:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - star?
01:26:408 (2) - Circle instead and nothing on 01:26:558 -
01:34:883 (2) - weird transition from slider I think
01:38:558 (3,4,5) - 01:40:958 (3,4,5) - imo these are inferior to other paterns in the section, but since you use them everywhere I guess it's ok
02:23:708 (1) - nc, cause you change the paterning completely, I wasn't expecting this.
02:34:658 (1) - a little too much curve?
02:55:958 (7,1) - flow is a little strange here
03:00:458 (3,4) - this looks a little strange to me because you blanketed it very far but here 02:59:258 (3,4,1) - very close
03:13:208 (2) - nice hide lul
03:17:858 (1,3) - did you run out of space that you put these so close
03:40:958 (3,4,1) - same blanketing story. I advise you blanket at same distance
03:45:308 (3) - nc if you nced before the part I told you
03:57:008 (4) - some people might have problems reading
04:04:058 (3) - a little further from the slider?
04:10:058 (2,3,4,5) - perhaps this
04:12:908 (4) - a little away from slider to make even
04:23:858 (1) - did you try blanket here?
Great map and song. Good luck!