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Usa - shirayuki

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Jycool
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2021年5月14日 星期五 at 3:43:33

Artist: Usa
Title: shirayuki
Tags: Misure Pop Jpop Japanese J-pop japanese pop はな Hana utaite cover Kurousa-P Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Kimi no Iru Keshiki nicovideo NicoNicoDouga Whiteflame presents Beren
BPM: 89
Filesize: 15673kb
Play Time: 04:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Misure's Hard (3.01 stars, 455 notes)
  2. yuki (4.15 stars, 619 notes)
Download: Usa - shirayuki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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beautiful sb by beautiful Beren
hard by Misure
Axey
456
Atrue
Rhythm is just a miss away :D
快做
Topic Starter
Jycool

Atrue wrote:

Rhythm is just a miss away :D
快做
好长啊,凑不齐diff
Beren
m
Mafumafu
Vocaloid!!!
Atrue
It's hard to see this style these days.
I think I haven't shooted a map like this, but I think it worths it.

[General]
Duplicated (unused) storyboard file(s):
Shirayuki (jyc-Binggan).osb

Epilepsy warning is off, please check for repetitive strobes, pulsing images, or flashing colors in storyboard.

Resource should be empty in this case, according to RC.

I would say the diff gap between Normal and Hard is not that safe, but let's see. For now I guess you don't need to take mesure on that.
[Easy]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Well done, but I would say it's more of a mild normal in rhythm.

    03:15:134 - You may want to start the break here as other diffs.This fancy trick can make Easy players have a better feeling.
  2. Minor Picks
    02:23:898 (1,2) - It would be better if you can make them not overlapped.

    04:02:325 - You may consider extend the diff to here to make every diffs the same ending time.

[Normal]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Nice job.

    00:10:415 - Mind adding some 'noises' to this part? You may need some finishes at 00:10:415 and 00:11:763 , with a whistle at 00:11:089 .

    03:15:134 - You may want to start the break here as other diffs.

[Misure's Hard]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Overall good. Some places need some polishments.

    02:16:819 (2,3,4,5) - Yeah I know you used this pattern quite a bit times, but still I think here is a bit hard for a Hard diff. You know 1/8 in BPM 89 is already 180BPM 1/4, with this kind of streams and single taps, plus the stacking, is gonna be a hard time for Hard players. Tentative advice:
  2. Minor Picks
    00:33:336 (1) - Maybe you can try some straight patterns rather than making it a unbalanced pattern group with next slider.
[Yuki]
  1. Structrual Issue
    I like it.
    Nice and decent difficulty with some streams fitting well.

    00:21:201 (1) - I know you put this here intentionally but I still can't really hear the sound the repeat following clearly. Mind only using a note here?

    01:21:370 (8,9,10,1) - This place is a bit hard to read. Also the flow is a bit hard especially for these days' players. I would suggest trying something like:
    03:02:325 (1) - I think this :03:02:830 - might be the place ending the holding slider, which will be easier for players to catch the end since the music goes pretty blur in the end of the sound.
  2. Minor Picks
    02:35:865 (5) - You can stack it under the slidertail.

Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!
Lily Bread
as request

[yuki]
看一下aimod,有几条红线重叠了

00:02:999 - 这个空出来是什么用意..

00:08:055 (4) - 结束在 - 00:08:392 - 听起来好一点,现在这个地方好像没什么声音

00:27:437 (2,3) - 这又是什么用意..不太明白

别的好像没什么特别要说的..
good luck
Misure
@Atrue:
黄书啊我英语不好就汉语回了orz
遮挡怎么说呢 有点想表现那种“张力”的感觉 所以就暂时保留了
那个改成红点滑条 因为整个diff都是想做到一个圆滑的感觉所以全是三点和两点 突然来个直接拐的可能有点突兀 把上面那个往右边挪了下应该看起来比较对称了 感觉还ok
然后gap的话我感觉确实有 先把CS改3.5了 之后再考虑几个三连换成单点 先这样了

谢谢黄书 :)

Codesu
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Shirayuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65021
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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[Metadata]
Title:shirayuki
TitleUnicode:白雪~shirayuki~
Artist:Usa
ArtistUnicode:うさ
Creator:jyc-Binggan
Version:Misure's Hard
Source:Kurousa-P
Tags:Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Kimi no Iru Keshiki nicovideo NicoNicoDouga Whiteflame presents Beren
BeatmapID:1127627
BeatmapSetID:373658

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
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444,348,183673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,212,184348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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480,56,191257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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364,132,207269,2,0,L|353:199,2,68.0000012969971
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268,340,211314,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,240,211988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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88,144,213336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,279,214010,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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404,376,219067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,384,219235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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387,150,220078,2,0,P|395:105|383:62,1,92.0000017547608,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,56,220584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,56,220668,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,84,223112,2,0,P|227:78|250:81,1,46.0000008773804,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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512,228,224460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,184,224628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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436,272,225471,2,0,P|391:280|347:267,1,92.0000017547608,6|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
300,188,225977,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,188,226061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,188,226145,2,0,P|295:165|299:142,1,46.0000008773804,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,226482,2,0,P|198:114|177:123,1,46.0000008773804,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,216,226819,2,0,P|202:223|220:237,1,46.0000008773804,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,227156,2,0,P|194:102|173:111,1,46.0000008773804,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,64,233392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,112,233562,2,0,P|199:135|204:157,2,46.0000008773804,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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219,312,242325,1,12,0:0:0:0:
Lapis
as request
[Easy]
03:28:617 (1) - 这个spinner换成4个单点更好的感觉
03:35:021 (2) - 对Easy来说有点难,可以去掉的感觉
[Normal]
整体看起来很好
02:41:426 (3,4) - 滑条尾接圈圈overlap了感觉不好打,好像无所谓
04:00:977 (1,2,3) - spinner完了之后再放这三个没什么意义,建议去掉
[Misure's Hard]
很不错的Hard难度
01:02:999 (1,2,3,4,1) - 如果想要体现圆滑感那这个地方flow不算太好啊,曲子类似的地方像 02:29:291 (1) 这里的五边形则要理想许多
03:01:988 (5) - 应该往后再拉长1/8
03:28:617 (1) - 向上弯但弯曲角度比2大了点,有点不好看
[yuki]
diff name怎么没大写开头
00:27:437 (2) - 这个怎么办啊,什么音都没有但是也没加鼓点啊


你做的这么好玩 叫我摸 我也难办啊 先把Memoirs飞了好不好
Atrue
先把Memoirs飞了好不好
Topic Starter
Jycool

Atrue wrote:

It's hard to see this style these days.
I think I haven't shooted a map like this, but I think it worths it.

[General]
Duplicated (unused) storyboard file(s):
Shirayuki (jyc-Binggan).osb

Epilepsy warning is off, please check for repetitive strobes, pulsing images, or flashing colors in storyboard.

Resource should be empty in this case, according to RC.

I would say the diff gap between Normal and Hard is not that safe, but let's see. For now I guess you don't need to take mesure on that.
[Easy]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Well done, but I would say it's more of a mild normal in rhythm.

    03:15:134 - You may want to start the break here as other diffs.This fancy trick can make Easy players have a better feeling. ok
  2. Minor Picks
    02:23:898 (1,2) - It would be better if you can make them not overlapped. ok

    04:02:325 - You may consider extend the diff to here to make every diffs the same ending time.
ok


[Normal]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Nice job.

    00:10:415 - Mind adding some 'noises' to this part? You may need some finishes at 00:10:415 and 00:11:763 , with a whistle at 00:11:089 . ok

    03:15:134 - You may want to start the break here as other diffs.
ok


[Misure's Hard]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Overall good. Some places need some polishments.

    02:16:819 (2,3,4,5) - Yeah I know you used this pattern quite a bit times, but still I think here is a bit hard for a Hard diff. You know 1/8 in BPM 89 is already 180BPM 1/4, with this kind of streams and single taps, plus the stacking, is gonna be a hard time for Hard players. Tentative advice:
  2. Minor Picks
    00:33:336 (1) - Maybe you can try some straight patterns rather than making it a unbalanced pattern group with next slider.
[Yuki]
  1. Structrual Issue
    I like it.
    Nice and decent difficulty with some streams fitting well.

    00:21:201 (1) - I know you put this here intentionally but I still can't really hear the sound the repeat following clearly. Mind only using a note here? add some hitsound to fit it

    01:21:370 (8,9,10,1) - This place is a bit hard to read. Also the flow is a bit hard especially for these days' players. I would suggest trying something like:now is good
    03:02:325 (1) - I think this :03:02:830 - might be the place ending the holding slider, which will be easier for players to catch the end since the music goes pretty blur in the end of the sound. now is good
  2. Minor Picks
    02:35:865 (5) - You can stack it under the slidertail.
ok


Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!
thank you at! 8-)
Topic Starter
Jycool

Lily Bread wrote:

as request

[yuki]
看一下aimod,有几条红线重叠了

00:02:999 - 这个空出来是什么用意..

00:08:055 (4) - 结束在 - 00:08:392 - 听起来好一点,现在这个地方好像没什么声音

00:27:437 (2,3) - 这又是什么用意..不太明白

别的好像没什么特别要说的..
good luck
都是故意的 8-) 谢谢mod!
Topic Starter
Jycool

Emik wrote:

as request
[Easy]
03:28:617 (1) - 这个spinner换成4个单点更好的感觉
03:35:021 (2) - 对Easy来说有点难,可以去掉的感觉
[Normal]
整体看起来很好
02:41:426 (3,4) - 滑条尾接圈圈overlap了感觉不好打,好像无所谓
04:00:977 (1,2,3) - spinner完了之后再放这三个没什么意义,建议去掉
[Misure's Hard]
很不错的Hard难度
01:02:999 (1,2,3,4,1) - 如果想要体现圆滑感那这个地方flow不算太好啊,曲子类似的地方像 02:29:291 (1) 这里的五边形则要理想许多
03:01:988 (5) - 应该往后再拉长1/8
03:28:617 (1) - 向上弯但弯曲角度比2大了点,有点不好看
[yuki]
diff name怎么没大写开头
00:27:437 (2) - 这个怎么办啊,什么音都没有但是也没加鼓点啊


你做的这么好玩 叫我摸 我也难办啊 先把Memoirs飞了好不好
谢谢mod!!虽然一个都没改,但是谢谢mod! 8-)
Topic Starter
Jycool

Emik wrote:

as request
[Easy]
03:28:617 (1) - 这个spinner换成4个单点更好的感觉
03:35:021 (2) - 对Easy来说有点难,可以去掉的感觉
[Normal]
整体看起来很好
02:41:426 (3,4) - 滑条尾接圈圈overlap了感觉不好打,好像无所谓
04:00:977 (1,2,3) - spinner完了之后再放这三个没什么意义,建议去掉
[Misure's Hard]
很不错的Hard难度
01:02:999 (1,2,3,4,1) - 如果想要体现圆滑感那这个地方flow不算太好啊,曲子类似的地方像 02:29:291 (1) 这里的五边形则要理想许多
03:01:988 (5) - 应该往后再拉长1/8
03:28:617 (1) - 向上弯但弯曲角度比2大了点,有点不好看
[yuki]
diff name怎么没大写开头
00:27:437 (2) - 这个怎么办啊,什么音都没有但是也没加鼓点啊


你做的这么好玩 叫我摸 我也难办啊 先把Memoirs飞了好不好
谢谢mod!虽然一个都没改,但是谢谢mod!
Swell
revive pls
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