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Reol - Echo

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Crystal
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年1月1日 星期五 at 23:22:35

Artist: Reol
Title: Echo
Tags: No Title- Kencho
BPM: 66
Filesize: 6074kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Drop (2.9 stars, 326 notes)
  2. Easy (1.14 stars, 117 notes)
  3. Kencho's Normal (1.53 stars, 171 notes)
Download: Reol - Echo
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#11

Don't rescue me

While I do sink


Normal by Kencho
Topic Starter
Crystal
oops
Garden
[General]
强烈建议跟水滴音效做个涟漪效果的SB
星级差稍有点大,可能把normal改到1.5吧至少,感觉干脆去掉新手读不了的梗再填个diff比较安全
[Normal]
01:03:638 (4,1) - 往前移1/4跟vocal,然后重新考虑下节奏?最好也不让后面那个水滴的音空掉,跟前面一样(主要我感觉玩normal层次的玩家或许会比较注意vocal,这个水滴音漏掉也比较可惜
02:09:092 (4,1) - ^
03:07:274 (4,1) - ^
[Drop]
整体来说作为最高难度的话可以试着把那些细碎的音也给map进去
00:35:911 - 像这里的音太细如果主要跟vocal无视的话
00:43:638 - 这里的部分我感觉可以兼顾两者,或许像这样
类似的就不提了

00:14:092 - 考虑加个slider从人声切入
01:19:547 - ^
00:50:456 (3,4) - ctrl-g? 感觉flow有点不好打
00:56:365 (1,2) - 虽然感觉是要空出来但还是间距小一点读起来比较清楚,调整了一下个人感觉看上去2.2x-2.4x比较合适
01:04:547 - 水滴音被吃了..如果考虑SB的话效果在滑条中间也做不出来,可以缩短一半加个note
03:09:092 (1,2) - 个人感觉flow不舒服,或许可以1包住2

gl~
zzzzz
Topic Starter
Crystal

Garden wrote:

[General]
强烈建议跟水滴音效做个涟漪效果的SB 工程量有点大orz 可以考虑一下
星级差稍有点大,可能把normal改到1.5吧至少,感觉干脆去掉新手读不了的梗再填个diff比较安全 看看别人咋说吧
[Normal]
01:03:638 (4,1) - 往前移1/4跟vocal,然后重新考虑下节奏?最好也不让后面那个水滴的音空掉,跟前面一样(主要我感觉玩normal层次的玩家或许会比较注意vocal,这个水滴音漏掉也比较可惜
02:09:092 (4,1) - ^
03:07:274 (4,1) - ^ 这个其实就是跟了人声呀
[Drop]
整体来说作为最高难度的话可以试着把那些细碎的音也给map进去
00:35:911 - 像这里的音太细如果主要跟vocal无视的话
00:43:638 - 这里的部分我感觉可以兼顾两者,或许像这样 破坏感觉了的感觉
类似的就不提了

00:14:092 - 考虑加个slider从人声切入
01:19:547 - ^
00:50:456 (3,4) - ctrl-g? 感觉flow有点不好打
00:56:365 (1,2) - 虽然感觉是要空出来但还是间距小一点读起来比较清楚,调整了一下个人感觉看上去2.2x-2.4x比较合适 感觉后面不太好调 先keep
01:04:547 - 水滴音被吃了..如果考虑SB的话效果在滑条中间也做不出来,可以缩短一半加个note 还是想强调vocal
03:09:092 (1,2) - 个人感觉flow不舒服,或许可以1包住2 orz和前面对应的呀

gl~
zzzzz
thanks!
Mikagura Seisa
>.<

[Drop]
02:02:729 (2,3) - 两个微调到 348|80

总体建议是水声尽量都有点击,比如:
01:04:320 (4) - 这个滑条建议变成点+滑条
03:07:956 (3) - ^
01:04:547 - 这地方的水声也不建议作为滑条尾 主难度的话 01:05:456 (1,2) - 变成3个滑条我觉得没什么不好的
01:07:274 (1,2) - ^
其他kiai相同位置类似。。

flow我觉得这种bpm也无所谓顺不顺手了。。
[Easy]
原来第一个难度是normal.......(破事水
这个难度水声都是滑条尾倒是没有违和感了。。
01:03:638 - 以及其他对应位置 可以考虑这个节奏

其他美丽;w;

gl
Streliteela
OwO/

有关水声的建议:
  • 尽量放滑条,滑条头的位置压住重音,滑条可以放小跳以突出水声的重音。比如00:48:183 (2) - ,00:53:638 (3) - 这些地方处理的都不错,而00:38:638 (2) - ,01:04:320 (3) - 这些地方对水声的表现就稍差一些了
有关静电音:
  • 我个人认为不需要跟,因为听了一下这曲子的静电音基本都是1/16的节奏,如果要跟可能要放一大堆鬼畜1/16的折返滑条,甚至有些节奏都不规则,反倒破坏了整张图的感觉了。某些地方静电音明显可以考虑加个三连什么的,如果是那种过于密集或者不明显的就可以直接无视了
下面是摸:

[Drop]
  1. 00:28:865 (5,1) - 这里静电音还是很明显的所以还是在00:28:979 - 补个note比较好
  2. 00:42:729 (1) - 这里我觉得放个滑条更好些,单点显得有点突兀的感觉。像这样?
  3. 00:50:456 (3,4) - 互换一下,让00:50:911 (1) - 这里下个跳
  4. 00:58:070 - 感觉这里也补个note比较好些
  5. 01:36:138 (2) - 这个note挪到x512|y295的位置吧,这样01:36:138 (2,1) - 能blanket一下
  6. 02:10:797 - 这里也补个note?因为你后面02:12:615 (3) - 这里也有一个note处理
  7. 03:08:979 - 这里也是^
  8. 03:16:365 (5) - nc?

[Normal]
  1. 01:03:638 (4,1,2) - 这里节奏建议下成这样:
  2. 01:10:911 (2) - 这个拉到蓝线结尾是不是好些
  3. 02:09:092 (4,1,2) - 这个地方同第一条
  4. 03:07:274 (4,1,2) - ^

其它就没什么了,做得挺棒的,加油!
Kencho
[General]
  1. Nothing.

[Normal]
  1. 我感覺做的太簡單了,1.16到2.88的gap太大比較危險,要做難點才行,或許這個改成EZ然後加個NM?

  2. 01:03:638 (4,1) - 建議不要堆疊

    02:09:092 (4,1) - ^

    如果改成EZ的話有些1/4的位置就要刪掉了

[Drop]
  1. Aimod 有物件沒對齊時間軸

  2. 00:28:865 (5,1) - 看縮圈包好點

    00:47:161 (3,1) - 沒疊好

    01:35:456 (1,1) - 滑條尾沒疊好
EncoreW
CrusherP GUMI English 还有vocaloid这种东西乱写一通也比tags空着好

没东西可以摸
Narcissu
打包的音效建議和文件 → http://puu.sh/lHJ1b/c377473f30.zip

選了兩個近似的鼓和clap……

副歌開頭我最喜歡的是drum-hitwhistle , 還有其他兩個備用看看喜歡哪一個 :)
Kencho
音效等你複製,1.53星,spread還是太大的話我可以再加點圓圈
Kencho's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Echo.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43183
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Echo
TitleUnicode:Echo
Artist:Reol
ArtistUnicode:れをる
Creator:Crystal
Version:Kencho's Normal
Source:
Tags:No Title-
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:4
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Hollow Wings
m4m

General

  1. 怎么不做个sb啊感觉这个曲子很适合做个lyric的,嗯反正肯定是懒。

Drop

  1. 01:30:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗太具有标志性,以至于我看到此处之前都不愿意相信你在复制粘贴然而看到这个以后就只能确信了。不换个排版吗混蛋,你摆成W形也好啊,射星的欲望瞬间消失。
  2. 01:57:047 我觉得还是塞个note比较好。当然,01:59:774 这里是空着比较好。
  3. 图本身倒是不错的。

Kencho's Normal

  1. 02:40:001 (1,1) - normal里转盘后面必须空2/1的gap。
  2. 做的挺好,不过类似于03:04:548 (4,1) - 这种稍微overlap一点的梗,在其他diff里用虽然非常常见,但在低难度里尽量少用,指不定会有狗说这种因为遮挡难以让noob们读的流畅。顺便这也是逆向flow的一种,在低难度里尽量不要做太多逆向flow。

Easy

  1. 02:40:001 (1,1) - easy里转盘后面必须空4/1的gap,不过你这个曲子略慢估计空2/1也能过,1/1是必死。
摸的有点水,不过obj本来就不多,嘛就这样吧。

good luck
Topic Starter
Crystal

Mikagura Seisa wrote:

>.<

[Drop]
02:02:729 (2,3) - 两个微调到 348|80

总体建议是水声尽量都有点击,比如:
01:04:320 (4) - 这个滑条建议变成点+滑条
03:07:956 (3) - ^
01:04:547 - 这地方的水声也不建议作为滑条尾 主难度的话 01:05:456 (1,2) - 变成3个滑条我觉得没什么不好的
01:07:274 (1,2) - ^
其他kiai相同位置类似。。这里还是想强调人声 所以不改了

flow我觉得这种bpm也无所谓顺不顺手了。。
[Easy]
原来第一个难度是normal.......(破事水
这个难度水声都是滑条尾倒是没有违和感了。。
01:03:638 - 以及其他对应位置 可以考虑这个节奏 也是想突出人声

其他美丽;w;

gl

Streliteela wrote:

OwO/

有关水声的建议:
  • 尽量放滑条,滑条头的位置压住重音,滑条可以放小跳以突出水声的重音。比如00:48:183 (2) - ,00:53:638 (3) - 这些地方处理的都不错,而00:38:638 (2) - ,01:04:320 (3) - 这些地方对水声的表现就稍差一些了 好像也不是每个水滴都要给点击。。我是觉得其中一些没什么的
有关静电音:
  • 我个人认为不需要跟,因为听了一下这曲子的静电音基本都是1/16的节奏,如果要跟可能要放一大堆鬼畜1/16的折返滑条,甚至有些节奏都不规则,反倒破坏了整张图的感觉了。某些地方静电音明显可以考虑加个三连什么的,如果是那种过于密集或者不明显的就可以直接无视了
下面是摸:

[Drop]
  1. 00:28:865 (5,1) - 这里静电音还是很明显的所以还是在00:28:979 - 补个note比较好
  2. 00:42:729 (1) - 这里我觉得放个滑条更好些,单点显得有点突兀的感觉。像这样? 改了一下位置 不太想改成滑条
  3. 00:50:456 (3,4) - 互换一下,让00:50:911 (1) - 这里下个跳 还改了一下前面俩
  4. 00:58:070 - 感觉这里也补个note比较好些 感觉效果不是很好。。
  5. 01:36:138 (2) - 这个note挪到x512|y295的位置吧,这样01:36:138 (2,1) - 能blanket一下 故意的
  6. 02:10:797 - 这里也补个note?因为你后面02:12:615 (3) - 这里也有一个note处理 三段这里是统一的 而每段前后并不是统一的
  7. 03:08:979 - 这里也是^
  8. 03:16:365 (5) - nc?

[Normal]
  1. 01:03:638 (4,1,2) - 这里节奏建议下成这样: 这样感觉就有点挤了
  2. 01:10:911 (2) - 这个拉到蓝线结尾是不是好些 1星多点的还是算了 而且这里本身就有音
  3. 02:09:092 (4,1,2) - 这个地方同第一条
  4. 03:07:274 (4,1,2) - ^

其它就没什么了,做得挺棒的,加油!

Kencho wrote:

[General]
  1. Nothing.

[Normal]
  1. 我感覺做的太簡單了,1.16到2.88的gap太大比較危險,要做難點才行,或許這個改成EZ然後加個NM?

  2. 01:03:638 (4,1) - 建議不要堆疊

    02:09:092 (4,1) - ^

    如果改成EZ的話有些1/4的位置就要刪掉了

[Drop]
  1. Aimod 有物件沒對齊時間軸 好像没有

  2. 00:28:865 (5,1) - 看縮圈包好點 改掉这里了

    00:47:161 (3,1) - 沒疊好 orz

    01:35:456 (1,1) - 滑條尾沒疊好 ok

T-Mac wrote:

CrusherP GUMI English 还有vocaloid这种东西乱写一通也比tags空着好 这些和这首歌并没什么关系

没东西可以摸

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. 怎么不做个sb啊感觉这个曲子很适合做个lyric的,嗯反正肯定是懒。 orz这首歌貌似故意咬音不准 歌词啥的也有好几种版本(似乎) 官方也没给出这首歌的歌词 大概还是不做了

Drop

  1. 01:30:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗太具有标志性,以至于我看到此处之前都不愿意相信你在复制粘贴然而看到这个以后就只能确信了。不换个排版吗混蛋,你摆成W形也好啊,射星的欲望瞬间消失。 故意让人知道是复制粘贴的 嘿嘿(
  2. 01:57:047 我觉得还是塞个note比较好。当然,01:59:774 这里是空着比较好。
  3. 图本身倒是不错的。

Easy

  1. 02:40:001 (1,1) - easy里转盘后面必须空4/1的gap,不过你这个曲子略慢估计空2/1也能过,1/1是必死。 改了
摸的有点水,不过obj本来就不多,嘛就这样吧。

good luck
thanks for modding!
KaedekaShizuru
[Drop]
00:28:865 (5,6) - 建议跟1/16电音用短折返 顺便这里可以考虑用类似的音效我找不到
00:35:910 (4) - 在00:36:024 结束然后在00:36:138 接1/16短折返
00:48:979 (3,4) - 这个错位挺莫名的 最好全部保持一致叠好 也可以专门找一些特殊的节奏点摆成这样 纵观全图貌似只有这一处这样就不太好了
01:34:319 (5) - 1/16折返
01:41:365 (2) - 缩短到01:41:479 然后01:41:592 放1/16折返
01:48:865 - 1/16折返
结尾仍然可以map啊

本来就没什么可摸的 那些1/16可加可不加 看你选择 不过有些地方你还是压上了电音 真心建议使用相应的音效我真的找不到
smallboat
[General]
  1. 圖片格式最好還是用1024x768標準尺寸較好,1082這個qualified的話可能又要被說閒話
[Easy]
  1. 00:42:274 (5,1) - 這個Easy的零間距的stack又overlap大部分可能又要被草
  2. 00:50:001 (5) - 這1/4 reverse在Easy還是別用吧 (換個1/2 slider?)
  3. 00:57:729 (4) - 這放紅線就好,在Easy不用太複雜,藍線不明顯
  4. 01:23:638 (3) - 忘記NC
  5. 01:55:456 (5) - 同00:50:001 (後面 02:53:638 (5) - 也同)
  6. 02:03:183 (4) - 同00:57:729 (03:01:365 (4) - 也同)
  7. 02:32:729 (1,1) - 不太清楚低Bpm後轉盤是否還是要隔4拍。問問個QAT
  8. 02:50:911 (3) - 忘記NC
[Kencho's Normal]
  1. 02:40:001 (1,1) - 感覺還是要照規則隔2拍? 也是建議去問問個QAT

最後一個難度沒什麼問題,timing fine,用好再用QQ叫我。
Kencho

smallboat wrote:

[Kencho's Normal]
  1. 02:40:001 (1,1) - 感覺還是要照規則隔2拍? 也是建議去問問個QAT 改了,換成滑條隔了兩拍了
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406,64,117728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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398,206,119546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Crystal

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Drop]
00:28:865 (5,6) - 建议跟1/16电音用短折返 顺便这里可以考虑用类似的音效我找不到
00:35:910 (4) - 在00:36:024 结束然后在00:36:138 接1/16短折返
00:48:979 (3,4) - 这个错位挺莫名的 最好全部保持一致叠好 也可以专门找一些特殊的节奏点摆成这样 纵观全图貌似只有这一处这样就不太好了 改了
01:34:319 (5) - 1/16折返
01:41:365 (2) - 缩短到01:41:479 然后01:41:592 放1/16折返
01:48:865 - 1/16折返 1/16还是不加了 容易断滑条尾
结尾仍然可以map啊

本来就没什么可摸的 那些1/16可加可不加 看你选择 不过有些地方你还是压上了电音 真心建议使用相应的音效我真的找不到

smallboat wrote:

[General]
  1. 圖片格式最好還是用1024x768標準尺寸較好,1082這個qualified的話可能又要被說閒話
[Easy]
  1. 00:42:274 (5,1) - 這個Easy的零間距的stack又overlap大部分可能又要被草 改了
  2. 00:50:001 (5) - 這1/4 reverse在Easy還是別用吧 (換個1/2 slider?)
  3. 00:57:729 (4) - 這放紅線就好,在Easy不用太複雜,藍線不明顯 还是想保留这个 不然有点单调
  4. 01:23:638 (3) - 忘記NC 故意的啊 前后一致的
  5. 01:55:456 (5) - 同00:50:001 (後面 02:53:638 (5) - 也同)
  6. 02:03:183 (4) - 同00:57:729 (03:01:365 (4) - 也同)
  7. 02:32:729 (1,1) - 不太清楚低Bpm後轉盤是否還是要隔4拍。問問個QAT 这个bpm66 两拍比160的四拍间隔还要长了 应该没事
  8. 02:50:911 (3) - 忘記NC 一致的

最後一個難度沒什麼問題,timing fine,用好再用QQ叫我。
thanks for modding!
smallboat
Okay, picture size confirm safe and nothing to say, so give a Bubbled
Chaoslitz
[General]
  1. Unsnapped slider in Kencho's Normal: 03:03:185 03:04:094 03:07:503
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:001 (1,2) - 試試這樣?
  2. 00:57:729 (4) - 用note不就好了嗎...
  3. 01:03:638 (4,1) - 這樣放新手可讀不了圖.., 還有既然01:03:638 (4,1,2) vocal在藍線就不要跟,這只是Easy跟節奏就可以
  4. 01:34:547 (1,2,3,4) - 這個不跟藍線也沒問題啊
  5. 01:47:274 (2) - Easy不要多於一個折返
  6. 01:58:183 (3) - 這個看起來怪怪的,短滑條不太需要紅點
  7. 02:03:183 (4) - 03:01:365 (4) - Note
  8. 02:09:092 (4,1,2) - 03:07:274 (4,1,2) - 跟之前說的一樣
  9. 02:47:274 (1) - 雖說bpm低轉盤後沒4拍也不大問題,但最好把這個放中間點,易點接上
[Drop]
  1. 01:01:706 (3) - 01:07:161 (3) - 02:07:161 (3) - 02:12:615 (3) - 03:05:342 (3) - 03:10:797 (3) - 也太遠了吧,這bpm根本不適合....,像00:48:979 (3) - 這樣的距離就可以啦

改完叫我, 記得M4M啊
Topic Starter
Crystal

Chaoslitz wrote:

[General]
  1. Unsnapped slider in Kencho's Normal: 03:03:185 03:04:094 03:07:503 我aimod检查的时候没有报错..
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:001 (1,2) - 試試這樣?
  2. 00:57:729 (4) - 用note不就好了嗎...
  3. 01:03:638 (4,1) - 這樣放新手可讀不了圖.., 還有既然01:03:638 (4,1,2) vocal在藍線就不要跟,這只是Easy跟節奏就可以 改了
  4. 01:34:547 (1,2,3,4) - 這個不跟藍線也沒問題啊 感觉这样比较好点
  5. 01:47:274 (2) - Easy不要多於一個折返 好像没有这样的规定啊 先keep
  6. 01:58:183 (3) - 這個看起來怪怪的,短滑條不太需要紅點 诶形状这样不太想改
  7. 02:03:183 (4) - 03:01:365 (4) - Note
  8. 02:09:092 (4,1,2) - 03:07:274 (4,1,2) - 跟之前說的一樣
  9. 02:47:274 (1) - 雖說bpm低轉盤後沒4拍也不大問題,但最好把這個放中間點,易點接上
[Drop]
  1. 01:01:706 (3) - 01:07:161 (3) - 02:07:161 (3) - 02:12:615 (3) - 03:05:342 (3) - 03:10:797 (3) - 也太遠了吧,這bpm根本不適合....,像00:48:979 (3) - 這樣的距離就可以啦 作为顶难度这样也没什么吧 而且bpm挺低的 应该也不算多难

改完叫我, 記得M4M啊
thanks for modding!
and thanks smallboat for bubble :3
Chaoslitz
Qualified!

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