-Lemons wrote:

pishifat wrote:

also thanks lilybread, chelli, lemons and p k h g for looking at the map at least lolz getting mods 2 hard

UndeadCapulet wrote:

maybe next time make a map with actual problems

lol where is this from I FIGURED IT OUT

Here just for u mods out of no where i luv u

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  Easy

1. 00:14:131 (2) - Blanket 1's slider end pls then just ctrl g it or something for fun if you want it to end at the same place or something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4053741 it's copy paste of 00:10:522 (1,2) - tho cuz song repeats itself gg
2. 00:29:881 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/lFfRo/1d2d1ba8b1.jpg Speaking of blankets you have an awful lot of cold single notes they could use some blankets blankets are for weenies
3. 01:03:021 (1) - Wow nice design great thing these match up together 01:16:145 (1) - w0w
4. 01:27:957 (2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/lFfYa/7b0039eaf1.jpg yes
5. 01:38:785 (2) - Move this over 2 grid spaces for better line (currently it's http://puu.sh/lFg1e/02a0f93755.jpg ) o yes
6. 02:03:394 (1) - Isn't this missing whatever hitsound that is you're using for your snare drum song only has a snare on the tail tho
7. 02:08:644 (1) - ^
   
   Normal
8. 00:19:053 (2) - Make this be on the blue tick to follow the rhythm you'd been using before then make it snare hitsound yano but if there's no snare how do i follow the snare zzzzzzzzzzz
9. 00:32:506 (2) - Move this one grid down and 1 grid to the right because I'm a nazi and that's the best line ;lol ok
10. 00:41:365 (5) - http://puu.sh/lFgfg/f57b7ede9a.jpg triangle aesthetics > blanket aesthetics
    
    Hard
11. 00:06:585 (1) - why such a jump in spacing into a single note so hard omg i usually put jumps on downbeats cuz they're emphasized sounds... but a few seconds later i figured out i was mapping at double bpm and fixed that so this is woops
12. 00:15:280 (3) - Have this curve more into the upcoming slider pls idk what you're intending but i moved it like 3 pixels lul
13. 00:41:365 (1,2,3) - do dis for cooler flow http://puu.sh/lFgn9/7107c46362.jpg movement between 00:41:693 (3,1) - gets kinda gross tho cuz it's linear. no empahsizz
14. 00:45:631 (2,3,4,5) - wow dude nice and readable you definitely didn't make me want to click stacked notes in a 1/4 pattern and thus im gonna sliderbreak here ljaskdlfjsd made it ez sh
15. 01:15:981 (5) - ^ asasddfa you use like 4 different rhythms on stacked notes idk maybe I'm the crazy one but didn't make this one ez B) music completely stops so spacing is weird
16. 01:17:458 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use http://puu.sh/lFgtN/f484b8cabf.jpg or http://puu.sh/lFgwa/49d37bee40.jpg idk I just know that 1 shouldn't be a 1/2 slider i get what yhou mean but low density for the sake of difficulty overrides hardcore rhythms (plus changing slider lengths a lot looks pretty)
17. 01:18:770 (1) - Nice break after this note good consistancy in diffs the yes
    
    Insane
18. Wasn't this named Difficult or something earlier xd too complex
19. God the lack of hitsounding in this section is really apparent 02:00:769 (1) - pls pishi I want to hear the drums and whatnot but the song doesnt have a bunch of noise there that's why it sounds empty:(((((((((
20. 02:04:050 (2) - idk maybe blanket around the slider end, fuck there's nothing to point out ur a blanket
    
    Expert
21. Oh good I can see the circles in this diff
22. 01:48:793 (6,7,1) - I kinda like the flow you did earlier with 01:47:644 (1,2,3,4) - So maybe do something similar for here more movement for more buildup tho so stacking stuff like that is a nop
    
    Extra
23. 00:14:624 (1,2) - idk the single note feels off cuz the other rhythm you used didn't have it but it also didn't have that drum hit so w/e, with that said, position 00:14:624 (1) - at 362|255 for maximum whip motion+cool pishistack it maybe soudsn crazy but keeping distance between the circle and the 2 sliderheads equal is a big deal on this map. like i designed it so visual distance between all objects = the same and ur placement is breaking that
24. 00:50:224 (3,4,5) - hey how about you make this straight pls 274|267 o k
25. 01:12:208 (1) - I like having this stack on 01:10:895 (1) - slider head because it gives it a cooler flick to it did that sorta by rotating stuff instead. under the sliderhead is hard to see because im really bad at reading
26. 01:50:105 (4) - Move this to like, hereish or something http://puu.sh/lFh7W/0376c9a616.jpg So there's more umph on 01:50:269 (1) - and a funner motion +0.01 star rating
27. 02:23:081 (1,2,3) - I like the way this ended on expert more with the straight line cuz that was hype agree
28. Edit: OD=8.7 so I can farm this map for more pp monstrata-san monstrata trademarked 8.7, but i got 8.6
    
    

Now if you'll excuse me I'm going to shoot more stars at this map asdsdfasdf bns pls come'

and thanks mr lemon

Ebina~: i finished the sb
Ebina~: and apple edited the mp3
Ebina~: now it's just 1 redline
pishizor .: gud
pishizor .: very gud
Ebina~: cuz pishi ' ll bub it right?
Ebina~: <3
Ebina~: i was dreaming about this day
pishizor .: lol
pishizor .: i would have ranked your first yesterday if you asked too
Ebina~: how many times i did asked you to check it?
Ebina~: :(
Ebina~: lies
pishizor .: https://i.gyazo.com/0195bc6d6ec3e6cb74cd4d7f7829be22.png
pishizor .: asked in the middle of that gap
pishizor .: hard to do anything at that time
Ebina~: should've been the first map after that gap
pishizor .: would have if you asked yesterday g
pishizor .: double milan
pishizor .: cuz the last map 10 days ago was transcend lol
Ebina~: im there for you
Ebina~: everyday
Ebina~: of your life
Ebina~: makes nosense, ok
pishizor .: need to make a map every day
pishizor . is now Away.
Ebina~: cant keep up with pishi's modding routime
pishizor . is now Away.
Ebina~: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4067438
Ebina~: was ok
Ebina~: didnt like how overused this pattern was http://puu.sh/lIewI/32a3041eb9.jpg
pishizor . is now Online.
Ebina~: also this jump 01:50:105 (4,1) -
Ebina~: always broke on that one
Ebina~: got higher combo yay http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4067479
pishizor .: g
pishizor .: the only other person to testplay
pishizor .: ringating
pishizor .: said those stack things also sucked
pishizor .: are you able to read it properly
pishizor .: or is it just bad
Ebina~: what stack
pishizor .: s http://puu.sh/lIewI/32a3041eb9.jpg
Ebina~: it's easy to read
Ebina~: 3 and 4 arent stacked at all
pishizor .: ringating is bad then
Ebina~: also you do that the whole time, you get used to it xd
pishizor .: id hope so yes
pishizor .: but then again
pishizor .: you said i over did the pattern
pishizor .: so if i do it less does that make it more confusing then
Ebina~: i'd say no
Ebina~: i could even play it correctly on the first try
pishizor .: o
pishizor .: then i should do different stuff instead of just repeating the same double stacky thing
Ebina~: also if you want to be cute with milan
Ebina~: nerf some circles here 01:48:629 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
Ebina~: cuz i get tired very quickly in this section
Ebina~: :(
pishizor .: how much does the star rating og down
pishizor .: if you delete those
Ebina~: 4.78 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4067570
pishizor .: those placementstho
Ebina~: 4.77 with 2-3 as slider
pishizor .: i was already thinking
pishizor .: ill just make the first 2 circles
pishizor .: a slider
pishizor .: wait
pishizor .: that's not even
pishizor .: the part i was thinking of lol
Ebina~: ´ñz
pishizor .: dont have the map open
pishizor .: was expecting the thing before the 2nd kiai
Ebina~: 01:57:980 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
pishizor .: yes that
Ebina~: that part?
pishizor .: how does that work
Ebina~: cant even tell exactly
Ebina~: after 6 circles im dead
pishizor .: lol.
Ebina~: clicking whatever i see
pishizor .: hard to judge when i can fc my extra every time
pishizor .: so insane jump section is really ez
Ebina~: yes xd
Ebina~: i think that part you say, will be easier if you break that triangle thing you have
pishizor .: break my monstrata jumps
pishizor .: how so
Ebina~: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4067626
Ebina~: dunno if you can tell what's going on
Ebina~: but after testing. plays more easy than yours
Ebina~: xd
pishizor .: so break flow every combo
pishizor .: people in class thinking im crazy now
pishizor .: moving a pen in motion of circles on my screen
Ebina~: xd
Ebina~: less horizontal stuff
pishizor .: logs so i wont forget to do things when i get home
pishizor .: do

Zectro wrote:

hey pishi

[Easy]
01:36:488 (3) - Try x446y125 ya

[Hard]
01:11:716 (2,2) - How about making these the same shape so it looks more consistent+cleaner? ya

[Insane]
01:15:653 (1,1) - These nc's are not really necessary tbh pause tho

[Expert]
02:13:237 (4) - Try x197y105 breaks my equal distance between every object thing tho

[Extra]
00:00:515 (2) - Shouldn't this be at x74y132? ya
00:43:334 (1) - How about something like x218y270? i see you have stacks disabled in the editor lol


GREAT map, no need to reply to this or give kd since it looks good to go!