1. Hard (2.72 stars, 294 notes)
2. Memories (3.43 stars, 414 notes)
3. Normal (1.93 stars, 199 notes)

I'm sad the cut version misses a large portion of the last lyrics, which round off the song. Then again, no one will understand the song anyway
The singer is reminiscing about his group of friends who used to meet at a coffee house (cafe) and talks about what they used to do and where they've ended up. Sad and happy at the same time, it's sort of similar to Okkusenman, with more people.

Original by Manna Dey, this cover version is almost as good (and much easier to time)

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, here a mod to your boring map when you can't even post a mod on my maps Stahhhp :[

oops.

Normal
- I see random changes in your distance snap varying from x1.1 and x1.3 throughout your map. There shouldn't be any reason to change this in a Normal (the exception being Kiai time, but it's not consistent even for that). Should be fixed now.
- 00:42:501 (4) -

Slack

(With regards to the overlap, try turning off grid-snapping. Fixed.
- 00:47:189 (1,2,3) - I can tell these aren't all the same shape and that these are off since the blankets don't look perfect and are inconsistent. To make this sort of pattern, make one slider and copy-paste it twice and rotate each one by 120 degrees. I had to tweak the shape so it looked somewhat like a blanket, should be better now.
- 00:57:501 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing through these (P:x1.22, N:x1.27) Fixed.
- 01:01:720 - Remove these timing points since they don't do anything. Oops
- 01:14:376 (2,3,4) - As above (P:x1.28, N:x1.36) Tchah. Fixed.
- 01:24:689 (3) - New combo here since the music begins to change here for a new verse. I had one here, must have accidentally removed it.
- 01:29:142 (2) - This blanket over 01:28:439 (1) is off if you intended it to be a blanket. Edited, but I have to confess, I squinted till I was blue in the face and I couldn't see much that was off :/. Must be blind or something.
- 01:41:564 (3,4) - Might aswell make a double blanket out of these. Dollar Bill
- 01:43:439 (5) - NC here since a combo spanning 3 measures is unusual and isn't consistent with the rest of your map. Oh this was due to spacing testing, forgot to change it back to NC afterwards =/
- 01:46:251 (2,3) - These aren't perfectly the same shape, and as a result the space between the blanekts aren't consistent. Make one sldier and copy-paste the other and rotate 180 degrees. Fixed.
- 01:48:595 (4) - Might aswell make this a normal curve slider so you can double blanket with 01:49:064 (1). Ah yeah.
- 01:54:220 (2) - This blanket is off (check the approach circle from [01:54:571]). Fixed, I think
- 02:25:626 (3) - As above [02:25:245]. Covered up.
- 02:41:564 (2,3,4) - These blankets seem to be a bit off. I won't mention blankets again since quite a few of them I've noticed aren't polished up, unless you want me to list all of them for you. I have the eyes of a 70-year old, I'll never spot all of these stupid blankets D= The cold never bothered me anyway. I went through the map and adjusted whatever looked wrong but I'm 1000% sure I've messed up something as usual.

Hard
- 00:49:064 (1,2,3,4) - This readability might be a bit too cruel for a Hard difficulty for this spread. It might be fine, although I would personally try something else. I agree, I was really on the fence about this one. Changed.
- 01:01:720 - Remove these timing points since they don't do anything. Something something lazy hitsound copying. Fixed.
- 01:51:876 (3,1) - I personally don't like this overlap for this difficulty. It introduces readability patterns which aren't present in the harder difficulty. I ould move this so atleast half of the head isn't obstructed. I see what you mean. Stacked on the sliderend instead.
- 02:10:626 (2) onwards - Your 1/4 overlaps don't seem to be consistent throughout this section. For example, 02:10:626 (2) has a spacing of x0.79 whilst 02:20:001 (4,5) is x1.47. I'd try to make all of these consistent so that your map is a bit more polished. Used the same DS for every 1/4 overlap, should be fixed now.
- 02:24:689 (1,3) - Another one of these overlaps. I liked the flow here but changed to avoid the overlap.

Memories "Fake Insane"
- I feel that OD8 is too high for a song like this and a map of this difficulty. I'd lower it to OD7 maximum rip dt farm. I really like the progression of the values, AR->6/7/8, HP->3/5/7, OD->4/6/8 Also dt4lyfe :kappa:
- 00:34:064 (1) - You have the whistle going over the entire slider instead of just the head. Oops
- 00:54:689 (1) - I'd move this further away from 00:54:454 (11) since this is a NC and I don't feel an anti-jump is suitable for the music here anyway. Ah yeah, that makes sense.
- 01:24:454 (8,1) - I feel that increase the jump here would be suitable since the music begins to pick up slightly in mood at this point. Yep.
- 02:12:501 (3) - Same thing with the 1/4 spacing as in Hard (02:12:853 (4) and 02:14:728 (4)). Used consistent DS throughout 1/4 overlaps and sliders to fix

Good luck

StarrStyx wrote:

Good luck! Will mod when my assessments are over~

freebird42 wrote:

Hello from evil empire and sorry for my bad english, i'm trying really hard with google translate™ Hi! \o

Normal

01:54:571 - i don't get, why you need this timing section, nothing will change if you remove it Ah yeah, oversight from copying hitsounds.

and i don't know, ar6 on diff below 2 stars is too high, try at least 5.5 Mmmm I agree, made it 5, will probably need to make it 4.

nice diff thanks!

Hard

00:30:314 (1) - why new combo? This seems like a strange thing to do because there are no beats after it, but putting NC on every downbeat big white tick is a good practice.

00:33:595 (5,6) - this two notes after (2,3) double doesn't look good, maybe you should make it double too I see what you mean here and keeping that consistency would be pretty nice I admit, but I really like the back and forth flow I have here =/

00:43:439 (4) - jump is too long, better move 4 to (x:140,y:84) and 5 to (x:240,y:216) or smth like that Since it's a 1/1 and not a 1/2, I put extra space between the notes to make it better to read. I guess I could move it a teensy bit closer but it doesn't make too much of a difference at this BPM imo

00:50:939 (1) - same problem, better move 1 to (x:408,y:288) and 2 to (x:460, y:116) Ok this one I moved closer.

00:55:860 (4) - i would fail this note for sure, better move it under 3, or make here 00:55:626 (3) new combo or smth New Combo'd

00:58:907 (2) - long jump, better move to (x:216,y:316) Ehhh, I'm keeping this one, I think it's close enough as it is, since the beat spacing is different.

01:13:907 (2) - move this slider a little lower and start new combo with it, not the previous note NC needs to be on the downbeat, and the slider is DS'd to keep in sync with the spacing so it should be fine.

01:20:470 (5) - move higher Breaks weak overlap, but ok

01:47:189 (1) - move higher I think the height here is fine.

01:48:595 (4,1,2) - too hard to read, but i don't say that this pattern is bad, so its your choice to rework or not aaaaa this IS pretty hard to read. Geh. I might have to change this later down the road, I'm leaving it as is for now though, I like it.

01:50:939 (1) - new combo is unnecessary, better start it with 01:51:876 (3) also how about making 01:50:704 (5,1) a double and moving 01:51:407 (2) to the end of 01:51:876 (3) Excellent idea with the double and moving "2" to the sliderend, thanks. Also put a NC on "3" since it fits. I'm keeping the first NC though, because I still think downbeat requires an NC and keeping consistency with that throughout the song is important.

01:54:571 - unnecessary timing section and why the folowing note is new combo? Same issue as before, copying hitsounds left some unused timing points, thanks for catching it. NC is again due to big white tick in the downbeat.

02:20:939 (1) - move 1 to (x:129,y:105) and make 1,2,3 a triple; 4 move to the beginning of 5 Nice idea, but I dislike having more than one stacked note, and while this sort of jump pattern that I currently have is one notch above "Hard" difficulty, the BPM makes it a bit better I think.

02:24:454 (5) - start new combo with note, not the slider 02:28:204 (4) - same 02:31:485 (7) - same I admit, I don't like how this looks either, I'd prefer it if I could put the NC on the note, but if I follow the same pattern of NC that I've followed so far, it would be inconsistent. That said, I'm reeeally on the fence about this and it is likely I will change it purely for aesthetics sometime if I don't get complaints.

02:35:939 (1,2,3) - make a tripple, 4 move to beginning of 5 Same thing as before, I like the pattern and think this is fine, but if I get complaints about difficulty, I'll change it.

02:44:393 - unnecessary red time section I edited the song and couldn't match the offset perfectly so I stuck this in here, but listening to it again, maybe it is kinda unnecessary. Removed for now.

02:51:423 (2) - move a little bit lower Yep.

in general the cs is too small IMO, maybe you should lower this parameter a bit, but still a good diff Thanks! I guess I could make it CS 3.5 actually, it's a great idea. I'll look into changing it and see if the patterns don't get fudged up too much.

Memories

00:36:407 (2,3,4) - strange flow, maybe you should make 2,3 a double Yeah, bad flow. Stacked "3" on the sliderend to make it a back and forth.

00:39:571 - unnecessary timing section Yeah, don't know what this is doing here.

00:48:595 (4) - move this note to the spot where was 2, and move 5 to the left a bit All right. Moved "5" to the left of the slider.

00:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is pretty hard, but looks okey, so whatever Yeah, the lyrics here are about a sun, so I kinda made it like a rising sun (but a bit wonky O.O)

00:54:689 (1,2,3) - its some sort of square jump and it doesnt look good, better make smth like this 00:49:064 (1,2,3) All right, fixed it into a different pattern.

01:02:189 - why new combo? Downbeeeeats

01:15:079 (4) - move this note to the end of previous slider and remap thse jumps 01:15:314 (1,2,3,4) they doesnt look nice Sure, why not. Adjusted.

01:21:407 (2,3,4,5) - same, this pattern is strange Ehhh, crossing jumps was my idea here, it doesn't look all that great I admit, but I think it works.

01:35:939 (1) - start new combo here and remove new combo here 01:39:689 (1) I already have an NC there? And the other NC is for moar downbeats \O/ It's a commonly used pattern of combo-ing /color]

01:47:892 (2,3,4,5,6) - remap this pattern [color=#0000BF]B-b-but hexagons Remapped the hexagon to fix the shape.

01:51:407 (2) - jump is too long, better move to the beginning of the folowing slider Ah, excellent catch.

01:53:282 (4,5,6,7) - strange pattern This is meant to be a flowy triangle to triangle while following a straight line type thing down the left side.

01:54:571 - unnecessary timing section and why folowing note is new combo? Deleted timing section but kept NC due to downbeat.

02:23:282 (2,3,4,5,6) - place notes more accuratelly They follow the same Distance Snap throughout though If you meant make it straighter, it's meant to be a curved stream

02:23:985 (1,2,3) - don't make such triples, they are hard and don't look nice, better make them like this 00:39:220 (4,5,6) Adjusted spacing a little, but triple to triple in this difficulty is pretty much the hardest pattern I have, and I think at this BPM it's more than doable for the target difficulty range.

02:24:454 (4) - start new combo here It goes off of the same beats ad before though

02:28:439 (1) - unnecessary new combo Downbeat + New line of lyrics

02:34:532 (2,3,4) - too hard, place notes more closely It uses the same Distance Snap as the rest of the 1/4ths in this section, the reverse flow might be what makes this harder, but I think it's ok.

02:38:517 (6) - start new combo here As before

02:39:103 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - unnecessary stream, better use short reverse sliders, or maybe remove it all and when singer goes "oooooooh" place spinner Mmmm, it follows the drum in the background. For lower difficulties, a spinner or series of repeats is good (as done in "Hard") but this is supposed to be a kind of "Insane" so I think this kind of pattern is all right.

02:43:439 (1,2) - move to the right a bit Why not.

02:46:034 (3,4,5) - remap tripple more accurately But it's Distance Snapped to each note

02:46:736 (7,8,9) - and this one too As above.

02:51:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - a little bit strange pattern Mmmm, I'll consider doing something different here, I'm unsure about this pattern as well.

02:54:471 (5,6,7) - this tripple also needs to be remapped The off-beat-ness of this part of the song led me to delete this and add a spinner.

in general hp7 is too high, you must lower it for sure I will consider this, I think HP 7 is just a bit too high for this BPM, will probably drop it down.

still nice diff Thanks!

btw song is good too Yay! I love this song ^_^

thats all, good luck, comrad This mod was quite good, even though I denied parts of it, those were stylistic choices mostly, a lot of the mechanical choices you made were good quality (New Combos gotta follow the downbeat though ). If you ever map something of your own and want a mod, feel free to poke me! I'd be more than happy to take a look if you'd like . I'm not that great at modding though

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my queue~ Here goes. [I'm noob at English, so PM me later if there's some thing you don't understand] [Somehow I can't get sleep lol]

General

- Maybe you can put the source? So others can know where's this song coming from. There's no source though, it's just a folk song I put the album in tags though
- If possible, your background image should be 1366*768. I'll look into this, maybe I can find a higher res of the BG

Normal

- Some notes like these 00:36:642 (2,3) are too close to the life bar, probably you should move them somewhere better than this. (and there are many of these so I won't mention this anymore) Moved a few of them, but unless they directly overlap the HP bar, I think it's fine, no?
- I'm not sure that some overlaps you did in the map was intentional e.g. 00:57:032 (4,1) , I think this kind of overlapping is a bit weird though, They will make the map become unattractive. Yes, this was intentionally done. I think it looks rather nice and gives more variety and flavor than constant blanket to blanket without overlaps.
01:18:595 (3) - Fix blanket, maybe? Adjusted
02:23:282 (2) - ^ Adjusted

Hard

00:34:064 (1) - Maybe you can ctrl+h this and move back to the same position for a better flow? Ah yeah, why not
00:55:626 (1,2,3) - These are a bit too difficult to read with AR7, I think you should considering remap this part but it's up to you. I like the back and forths here, but I see where you're coming from and If I get more complaints I might just stack them.
02:15:314 (1,2,3) - ^ As above
02:20:939 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (The spacing was so close that it could have been easily misread.) This one I like, jump patterns like this are something I liked playing when I played Hards and the numbers help with reading.
02:24:689 (1,2,3) - The flow feels pretty weird here. Hmm yeah. Did something different here, might be a bit hard to read though, stacks and such.
- Same issues as Normal. (in terms of life bar and overlapping) Except for one repeat slider (which I moved) none of the beats overlap with the actual HP bar (I'm using default skin to test), some are a little close but it should be fine.

Memories

- I might lower the HP to 6.5, it's up to you. Mmmm, reeeally on the fence now. If I get one more comment about the HP, down it goes.
- Same issues as Normal. (in terms of life bar but very few) Except for 02:50:470 (2) - , which is kinda close, I didn't really spot much with the default skin that was close to overlapping the HP bar, so I dunno.
- Somehow I enjoy playing it. Hey, thanks.
- I think those small jumps you put through out the map are pretty good, but you did put some jumps pattern like 00:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8). I think if you change these to those small jumps you mapped in the song it will become much better, I think the pattern didn't match the song because it didn't emphasize the vocal as much as it could. (These ones too, 01:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ) I was worried consistently using geometric cross jumps might get repetitive so I put those back and forths in there to spice it up a bit (I know it's a repetitive song) and the first pattern is supposed to be a kind of wonky rising sun since the lyrics there mention about sunny afternoons gone slightly wrong.

Overall

- I didn't mod much because the map is already decent + I'm sleepy, sry. A mod is a mod, it's all good.
- I think you can remove the second spinner in the end, I don't think it will match anything, maybe just the first spinner is enough. Yeah I see what you mean, second spinner was kinda for fade out but I guess it's not really needed.
- Some placement and overlap issues, please recheck. Many overlaps, particularly in Hard, were on purpose to accentuate flow and aesthetics, adjusted some.

So yeah, that's all from me, good luck on getting ranked! Thanks!

PolkaMocha wrote:

Hey from my mod queue!

Yes, I want 7 PM ranked and out of my life so I can focus on other maps already 8'D You're close

I'll just mod memories; I've had a long day, y'feel? No worries

00:21:407 (2) - Blanketing needs work. Fixed.

00:24:454 A triplet is called for here. mm yeah

00:29:376 (3,4,5,6) - Although this pattern is nice, I don't agree with the spacing on (6). Mmm, I see what you mean, the decrease in spacing can seem a bit odd. Moved it very slightly, but keeping it mostly intact for now.

00:40:157 (3,4) - This stack could be confusing. Constant jumps in an already repetitive map was pushing my sanity, so I added stacks to spice up the patterns a bit.

00:43:439 (6) - This blanketing needs a bit of work. Fixed.

01:11:095 (5) - ^ Fixed.

01:11:564 (1) - If this slider bent on 01:11:798, it would fit better to the music. Reversed.

01:12:970 (5) - Blanketing needs work. Fixed.

01:17:657 (2,3,4) - This pattern might be confusing. Mmm, I dunno, at this BPM, a slow back and forth shouldn't be too difficult for an "Insane" as it were.

01:26:798 A slider from here to 01:27:267 might fit better. I agree.

01:30:782 (2) - Blanketing could use some work here. Fixed. I don't like how 01:31:485 (4) - now overlaps a bit but nothing really to do there :/

01:34:064 (1) - ^ Fixed.

01:40:157 This gap, especially for kiai time, is awkward. I mean, it sounds fine to me, there isn't any music there, it's like a lull in the beat pattern.

02:12:267 (2,3) - This slider Doesn't go well in relation to (2) Flipped.

02:28:439 (1) - This is not blanketed well Adjusted

02:30:314 (1) - ^ Adjusted

02:31:251 (4) - ^ Covered

02:39:103 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The vocals call for a triplet, but not a stream here. This follows the drums in the background though

02:39:923 Map the vocals here to avoid awkward pausing. I disagree that this sounds awkward, on the contrary, I think following the vocals here would be more awkward than anything else.

02:42:970 (5) - Blanketing needs work Adjusted

02:49:064 Why end on a downbeat? It follows the vocals here, hence the new slider, hitsound follows beat pattern. It does sound a little meh if you're focusing on the beat, so I'll consider changing this.

That's all. With all of the animu cancer around here, this is oddly relieving. Gotta try, right.If we won't map other genres, who will

Ben wrote:

We discussed on IRC and went over some patterns/placement. Chatlog was lost on my end but he will respond with the chatlog. We did this over TS so some descriptions might be vague. If he doesnt go into detail about the chatlog then i will be more than happy to do so when he posts.

GranDSenpai wrote:

Oi, shit cunt. Here's your mod you begged for <3 <3

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00:20:939 (1,2,3,4) - They aren't aligned 100% Fixed
00:23:751 (4,1) - 4 should move into the center of 1 Fixed
00:35:939 (1,2,3,4) - Arfdrea hue
00:43:439 (1,2) - Why is it pointy slider to curved slider, seems odd. Eh..variety
00:49:064 (3) - Blanket Fixed
00:54:689 (1) - NC Fixed
01:00:548 (1) - Fix spinner gap here, should start on the red tick Fixed
01:16:251 (5,1) - Slight overlap Fixed
01:20:939 (1) - How tf do you make these map moar
01:25:157 (2,3) - I don't like these on lower AR, consider changing Mmm, I like these, might try out some other patterns
01:31:251 (6,7) - Blanket Fixed
01:44:376 (2,1) - Blanket Fixed
01:48:126 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Spammy comapred to the rest I dunno, I think it works, but I do see where you're coming from. aaaaaa
01:50:939 (1,1) - Why can't my sldiers be like this Because you're a shit cunt ;^)
02:09:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - I didn't realize osuplayer111 was in this collab oi. Symmetry for life
02:24:689 (1,3) - this doesn't blanket, so idk Gah, I didn't notice that false blanket. It leads into the next note though.
02:37:814 (1) - NC Fixed
02:39:689 (1) - NC Fixed
02:40:626 (2) - Remove NC Fixed
02:52:814 (1) - Idk if this is necessary doot.

Hard
00:49:064 (1,2,3,4) - Might be hard to read Adjusted
00:55:860 (2) - Stack this correctly Fixed
01:27:267 (2,3) - Blanket Fixed
01:34:767 (2,3) - Blanket Fixed
01:38:282 (2,4) - Blanket Fixed
01:41:564 (3,5,7) - you lazy fuck ehehehehehe
01:51:876 (1) - Blanket Fixed
02:24:689 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed
02:35:939 (1,2,3,4) - ohohohoho hu3hu3hu3hu3hu3
02:41:095 (2,3) - Blanket Fixed
02:46:954 (6,1,2,1,2) - This with AR7, you evil cunt. I like it ^_^

Memories
00:23:751 (5,6) - Blanket Fixed
00:28:439 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed
00:29:376 (3,4,5,6) - pp Illuminati
00:29:845 (5,2) - this overlap is weird I like it
00:44:376 (1,2,3) - Kreygasm yee
00:46:720 (9,1) - Blanket Fixed
00:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ohohohoho dadadadada
00:54:689 (1,2,3,4) - nice cross to cross, not 100% sure about this flow Adjusted
01:01:720 (8,9,10) - I like these better than stacks \O/
01:11:564 (1,4) - Stack correctly Fixed
01:14:376 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
01:44:376 (3,4) - Blanket Fixed
01:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - check spacing Fixed
01:51:876 (1,3) - Blanket Fixed
02:13:439 (1) - NC Fixed
02:52:814 (1) - NC Fixed

Routalempi wrote:

Made my way over here from my modding queue, here's your NM good sir/madam!

What a lovely tune this is, I can already tell I will be coming back to this map whenever I need a break from the drum&bass and anime OPs that seem to dominate the ranked map scene nowadays. <3

Memories

- Right off the bat, i think OD 8 is too high for this map. I'd suggest OD 6, but 7 might suffice as well if you want to keep it unusually high while still making sense.
- The intro (00:20:939 - 00:39:454 -) could use a slower slider velocity, right now the sliders feel rushed.
- Most of the sliders in the intro feel just a tiny bit too short; that's the song's fault and it can be mitigated by muting hitsounds on sliderends. (Not sure if this is a problem in the first place, just bothered my ear for some reason)
- 00:56:564 (7) - NC here
- 00:52:814 (5) - NC here
- 00:56:564 (7) - NC here
-

I got this far when the map started constantly crashing my osu whenever I opened it in editor. I changed from beta to stable to CE and back, re'downloaded the map several times, but no matter what I do it still keeps crashing almost instantly when I open it in the editor. Is anyone else having this problem? I really wanted to mod this, too

rfandomization wrote:

Yeah, the editor has been bugging out today, it's not just you
Switching to stable fallback seems to be a temporary fix at the moment

Hard

There's an unsnapped green timing point at 02:47:125 - snap it to 02:47:071 (It's your very last kiai endpoint).
Map plays well and there aren't any obvious note placement or pattern issues here. Combos need fixing though:
- 00:30:314 (1) - remove NC
- 00:55:626 (1) - remove NC
- 00:58:439 (1) - remove NC, 00:59:376 (3) - add NC, 01:00:314 (1) - remove NC
- 01:50:939 (1) - remove NC
( - 01:51:407 (7) - MAYBE NC here so this note is its own combo, not quite sure though. a very tricky part to combo well )
- 01:54:689 (1) - remove NC
- 02:31:720 (1) - remove NC, 02:32:189 (2) - add NC
- 02:52:813 (1) - remove NC

Routalempi wrote:

rfandomization wrote:

Yeah, the editor has been bugging out today, it's not just you
Switching to stable fallback seems to be a temporary fix at the moment

Looks like it's working again today, going to finish what I started here

Memories

- Right off the bat, i think OD 8 is too high for this map. I'd suggest OD 6, but 7 might suffice as well if you want to keep it kind of high while still making sense. I might have to lower it down to OD 7, for now though I'm keeping OD 8 up there,
- The intro (00:20:939 - 00:39:454 -) could use a slower slider velocity, right now the sliders feel rushed. It will also give a bit of contrast to the first kiai time. Originally the first 15 seconds or so were mapped, but due to how weirdly off-time it was, that got deleted. I think the SV works considering that's when the song starts to pick up.
- 00:46:251 (7) - NC here I didn't put one there because the music is completely and very much a continuation of the previous notes.
- 00:52:814 (5) - NC here
- 00:56:564 (7) - NC here you fixed these already it seems
- 01:00:314 (5) - NC, 01:02:189 (1) - remove NC Fixed first NC, didn't remove the second one due to it being an end beat
- 01:15:079 (4) - having this note under the sliderend doesn't feel nice to play, and the music doesn't suggest such a pause in flow either. Changed this up a bit
- 01:39:689 (1) - remove NC Kept this due to end beat, again. Might change since I don't like the last note of a triple being NC
- 01:51:876 (1) - remove NC Sure
- 01:53:751 (4) - NC, 01:54:689 (1) - remove NC NC'd 01:52:814 (1) - instead
- 02:39:689 (1) - remove NC Again, end beats. Don't particularly like this but have had objections to not having an NC here so :L
- 02:52:814 (1) - remove NC ^

Overall the map plays well as it is IMO. Thanks

Hard

There's an unsnapped green timing point at 02:47:125 - snap it to 02:47:071 (It's your very last kiai endpoint). Fixed
Map plays well and there aren't any obvious note placement or pattern issues here. Combos need fixing though:
- 00:30:314 (1) - remove NC As before, end beats
- 00:55:626 (1) - remove NC This has to do with reading the note under the slider that follows this one, I was advised to make this an NC
- 00:58:439 (1) - remove NC, 00:59:376 (3) - add NC, 01:00:314 (1) - remove NC Added the NC but didn't remove the other ones due to big white tick and end beats
- 01:50:939 (1) - remove NC Big white tick
( - 01:51:407 (7) - MAYBE NC here so this note is its own combo, not quite sure though. a very tricky part to combo well ) Mmm, yeah that's a tricky one. I'm not keen on NC-ing it but if I get readability complaints I probably will have to.
- 01:54:689 (1) - remove NC Aaah why the hate on my end beats I was told by an experienced mapper that this is a better idea, I don't really like how it looks either tbh.
- 02:31:720 (1) - remove NC, 02:32:189 (2) - add NC Agreed with this one.
- 02:52:813 (1) - remove NC As above

Normal

- 00:29:376 (2,3) - feels really weird to play rythm-wise, try removing the repeat from 00:29:376 (2) and moving 00:30:782 (3) to 00:30:314 and making it one tick longer. On a harder difficulty this would be fine as-is, but it's too much of a trip-up in a normal-level map IMO. Sure why not.
- as with previous difficulties, some combos need fixing:
- 00:59:376 (5) - NC here, 01:00:314 (1) - remove NC Added but didn't remove, I need to discuss about these end beat combos with a BN or something :/
- 01:30:314 (4) - NC Done.
- 01:35:939 (5) - NC here, 01:37:814 (1) - remove NC Added but didn't remove due to big white tick
- 02:13:439 (5) - NC here, 02:15:314 (1) - remove NC, 02:17:189 (3) - NC here Added both but didn't remove.
- 02:20:939 (3) - NC here, 02:21:876 (1) - remove NC Agreed
- 02:39:689 (1) - remove NC, 02:40:626 (2) - add NC Added but didn't remove since I did this in all diffs.
- 02:52:814 (1) - remove NC End beat

It would make me so happy to see this eventually ranked, have a star! Thanks! I'm trying my best, would make me happy to see a ranked Bengali song on osu!

Hanczer wrote:

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[Memories]

00:23:751 (5) - 00:25:157 (2) - 00:26:564 (1) - 00:28:439 (1) - 00:34:064 (1) - 00:35:939 (1) - 00:38:282 (2) - 00:50:939 (1) - 00:51:407 (2) - 00:55:392 (4) - 00:56:095 (6) - 01:01:251 (7) - 01:11:095 (5) - 01:13:439 (1) - 01:13:907 (2) - 01:32:189 (1) - 01:44:376 (3) - 02:11:564 (1) - 02:34:064 (1) - fix those blankets Adjusted
00:26:564 (1,3) - overlap Not anymore
00:29:376 (3,4) - Ctrl + G Ctrl-G'd the slider
00:33:126 (4) - This slider should be directed at 00:32:657 (2) - as you did with 00:33:595 (5,1) - This is a rotation of the previous pattern due to the similar sounds.
00:44:376 (1,2,3) - Copy 00:44:376 (1) - and rotate it by 120 degrees http://scr.hu/1ks5/89wya Adjusted
01:16:720 (7,8,9) - I feel like you should place it further Why not
01:22:110 (5) - place it between 01:21:407 (2,3) - http://scr.hu/1ks5/2xha2 Making a straight line with 01:21:642 (3,5,6) -
01:24:454 (8,4) - overlap Moved
02:29:142 (2,3,4) - make it a perfect triangle Adjusted

[Hard]

00:26:564 (1) - 00:47:189 (1) - 00:57:501 (3,4) - 01:18:595 (5) - 01:23:751 (2) - 01:26:095 (5) - 01:35:001 (3) - 01:36:173 (1) - 01:38:282 (2) - 01:51:876 (1) - 02:41:564 (3) - fix those blankets Adjusted
00:28:439 (1) - This slider should be directed at 00:29:142 (2) - Adjusted
00:42:501 (3) - The shape of this slider doesnt fit to this flow, try to flip it by 180 degrees Changed
00:48:126 (3,4) - Copy sliders insted of trying to make them identical It's the same slider...
00:50:001 (5,6,1) - This flow could be better It's up and down while curving, looks fine to me
00:53:517 (5) - blanket to 00:52:814 (4) - http://scr.hu/1ks5/kfabd Fine
00:55:157 (2,1,2,3) - This may be confusing, I would suggest to unstack 00:55:626 (1) - aaaaaa f this pattern. If I get one more bloody complaint about this it's going bye bye. I like back and forths though so it stays for now.
02:14:845 (4,1,2,3) - ^ The other one was at the bottom of the screen so I get it but this one stays, I don't want to remove every back and forth.
01:12:501 (3,4) - Make them parallel http://scr.hu/1ks5/x8ict They're fine, I don't want it that rigid.
01:29:845 (3,4,1,2) - same problem here, unstack 01:30:079 (4,2) - Is it the AR 7? I've had two complaints about the back and forths on this difficulty, but not a single playtester messed up on them, they fudged up other sections, like the 3/4 near the end.
01:32:189 (1,2) - Place then on a straight line Adjusted
01:41:564 (3,5) - place them the same way as 01:42:501 (5,7) - Adjusted, but it didn't seem to be that different.
01:50:704 (5,1) - I feel like you shouldnt stack them because these sounds arent similar at all Kept this
02:19:064 (1,2,3) - Make this spacing consistant Moved 3 further away
02:20:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - Its really hard to read with low AR, maybe try to make a pentagon I used to love this sort of cross jump at 60K, and playtesters liked this too, so no change for now.
02:25:626 (3,4) - No need to stack Unstacked to make it a back and forth

[Normal]

00:48:126 (2) - 01:19:532 (2) - 01:21:524 (2) - 01:44:376 (2) - 01:50:939 (1) - 01:54:220 (2) - 02:23:282 (2) - 02:33:126 (4) - 02:34:064 (1) - 02:41:564 (3) - 02:47:658 (2) - fix those blankets Done
02:51:877 (1,2) - Bad flow Adjusted
00:43:439 (1) - A single slider with red point doesnt fit to this pattern, there's no reason for it This line of the lyrics has an abstract negative meaning to it, hence the pointy slider whenever the line appears in the song. Also, having fifty million curves gets annoying after a while, there has to be some variation.
00:52:814 (3) - ^, place at least even number of them ^

Good luck~ Thanks for the blanket check, was really helpful, along with some of the other suggestions, good for polishing off parts of the map.