1. Odaril's Proximal Shot (2,74 stars, 262 notes)
2. Tri-Burst (0,9 stars, 184 notes)

AdRon Zh3Ro wrote:

[*]Change?
[>]Change!

Easy:
>Use 1/2 Snap Divisor. No.

Normal:
*Drain/Approach/OD +1 Odaril says Yes.

Hard:
*Try to reduce the combos, it will look nicier. No.

General:
*These colours? No.

Kite wrote:

SPOILER

[General]
The difficulty jump from Normal to Insane is heavy, consider making a Hard diff. There isn't a Insane anymore, orz.

[Tri-Burst]
02:43:563 - I don't think kiai fits here Ok, fixed.

[Usagi Drop!]
First said, you took a high slider velocity and combined with 1.0 distance spacing and the amount of triplets you used it's hard to hit them.
You also seem to switch between various distance spacing factors here which makes it a bit hard to read. (00:28:313 (8,9,10) ; 00:29:313 (1,2,3) - for example)
You are missing the combo colours from the other diffs in this one, please fix!
00:18:563 (6) - new combo
00:19:563 (11) - ^
00:23:313 (10) - ^
00:27:563 (5) - ^
00:30:313 (5) - ^
00:31:313 (9) - ^
00:35:313 (8) - ^
00:42:313 (6) - ^
00:47:313 (7) - ^
00:50:313 (6) - ^
00:55:813 (8) - ^
01:00:063 (6) - ^
01:01:563 (1) - remove combo
01:02:063 (2) - New combo or new combo on all these 01:02:063 (2,3,4)
01:05:313 (7) - new combo
01:06:938 - add beat?
01:07:688 (2) - remove
01:09:313 (10) - new combo
01:13:313 (8,9,10) - new combo on 8, please restrain from using such triplet patterns, they are really hard to read and play
01:19:688 (2) - remove?
01:21:313 (8) - new combo
01:23:688 (2) - remove?
01:25:313 (9) - new combo
01:29:313 (6) - ^
01:59:313 (10) - ^
02:10:313 (5) - ^
02:11:313 (10) - ^
02:14:313 (5) - ^
02:14:813 (8,9,10) - please restrain from using such triplet patterns, they are really hard to read and play
02:19:313 (4) - new combo
02:19:438 (5,1) - lulwut jump? definately fix this
02:19:563 (1) - remove combo
02:22:313 (6) - new combo
02:23:313 (11) - ^
02:26:313 (5) - ^
02:26:563 (7,8,9) - please restrain from using such triplet patterns, they are really hard to read and play
02:27:563 (10) - new combo
02:31:438 (7) - remove?
02:31:563 (8) - new combo
02:36:813 (8) - ^
02:38:813 (8) - ^
02:40:813 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - hard to read and 9 -> 1 jump? fix please ... 1/2 would work
02:43:563 - kiai doesn't seem to fit here, also this part seems calm try to map calmly
02:45:313 (8) - new combo
02:47:688 (2) - remove?
02:49:313 (9) - new combo
02:51:688 (2) - remove?
02:53:313 (8) - new combo
03:01:313 (9) - ^
03:02:063 (12,13,14) - please restrain from using such triplet patterns, they are really hard to read and play
03:05:313 (8) - new combo
03:07:688 (2) - remove?
03:09:313 (8) - new combo
03:16:313 (6) - new combo?
03:17:313 (10) - ^
03:27:563 (1) - this stream doesn't fit imo, also silly point boost towards the end
03:32:813 (8,9,10) - please restrain from using such triplet patterns, they are really hard to read and play
03:34:563 (7) - new combo

Pretty overmapped...
This diff could work with more work, try not to absurdly overmap and don't try too hard to make your map hard!
If the song doesn't work for your Insane vision and mapping style don't try to make it work :<
I didn't like this diff myself, so removed it.

Call me back for a recheck please

Kite wrote:

[Odaril's Proxmal Shot]
00:42:813 (9) - spacing Not much of a spacing error actually, since (7) should have been a new combo. I changed it anyway.
00:44:813 (4) - remove? What ? Why ? This note does make sense.
00:45:063 (5) - move 1/2 later remove finish? No for the above reason. Didn't you hear the two notes matched the trumpet ?
00:47:313 (6) - new combo? Okay.
00:48:813 (1,2) - same as 00:44:813 (4);00:45:063 (5) ? Same answers.
01:11:563 (1,2,3) - sounds weird but plays fine Doesn't really sound weird. :/
02:43:563 - I don't think kiai fits here agreed
03:25:563 - ending the diff here would have been just fine I agree, but the other diffs end later, so I have to make this one end at the same place.

jericho2442 wrote:

Odaril's Proximal Shot

some parts of this map feel really cramped :/ cramped ?
00:48:563 (4,1) - swap the new combo onto the (4), plays better that way okay
01:21:563 (3) - clap on here sounds really bad, remove it I don't agree... not changed.
01:23:563 (1,2,3) - i understand you have done this spacing for the sake of the pattern, but it really feels bad to play because it breaks the rest of the maps spacing in a very odd way, i advise to remake this part and give it the same spacing as the rest agreed
03:18:563 (3) - new combo this so that its easier to read the spacing spaced the pattern in a better way and added new combo