Jar - ztrout's Visit to The Proctologist · forum

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-10-06T14:43:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 17 November 2010 at 5:00:01 AM

Artist: Jar
Title: ztrout's Visit to The Proctologist
Tags: anime catgirl cat girl Rokodo
BPM: 134
Filesize: 3005kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:

B-Be Careful! (1.19 stars, 73 notes)
I-It Hurts!! (3.65 stars, 117 notes)
Roko-Don's Taiko Probe (5 stars, 500 notes)

Download: Jar - ztrout's Visit to The Proctologist
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Warning: Audio is not suitable for minors.

I shed a tear for jericho today.

Last edited by Jarby 2010-11-16T21:00:09+00:00, edited 18 times in total.

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2010-10-06T19:27:26+00:00

...oh....my....what have i just mapped

Download: Jar - ztrot's Visit to The Proctologist (Jarby) [jericho2442's Tears].osu

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-10-07T13:42:14+00:00

General
Add jerico2442 to the Tags

Careful
00:06:298 (1) - Remove new combo
00:07:194 (2) - New combo
00:07:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - Don't stack these, feels lazy IMO.
00:21:746 (1,2) - Ugly overlapping
00:34:059 (1) - This slider has too many repeats IMO. Not to mention the slider is 1/1 long. Change this to multiple notes or sliders.
00:48:388 (1) - ^

Hurts
Don't like the box mapping and the almost exclusively linear sliders.
00:06:298 (1) - Remove new combo
00:07:194 (2) - New combo
00:07:194 (2,3,4,5,6) - Lazy mapping with stacks. Spread them out.
00:21:522 (x) - Add note here. People feel tempted to hit the note here instead of 1/2 later.
00:34:059 (1) - This slider has too many repeats IMO. Not to mention the slider is 1/1 long. Change this to multiple notes or sliders.
00:48:388 (1) - ^

Tears
00:51:074 (3) - [nazi] Don't make this overlap with (2)
00:52:865 (3) - [nazi] ^

The choruses of the first two diffs are the same, except one has smaller circles. Change please.

Mukku

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Mukku 2010-10-07T14:26:07+00:00

Offsets: 12 and second one 57325 (if the second one actually makes any difference now, since I just moved both around separately.)

lol this song

A8mew

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A8mew 2010-10-07T16:16:51+00:00

Only problem I could find is the combo colors combined with that top right corner.

Both the dark red and the black approach circles are damned near invisible, if not entirely, up in that black area. No idea how you're supposed to hit that in time.

That said- star.

GabrielRKF

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GabrielRKF 2010-10-10T01:47:21+00:00

D:

Rokodo

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Rokodo 2010-10-11T14:16:45+00:00

Love you too babes.

*

Rukario

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Rukario 2010-10-12T12:56:08+00:00

Mod for the lovely song choice <333

B-Be Careful:
00:30:462 (3,4) - flip horizontally?
00:44:791 (3,4) - ^
00:46:582 (1,2) - if you do the one above please flip these horizontally too

I-It Hurts!!:
Nothing.

jericho2442's Tears:
00:05:164 (3) - align this vertically with the start of (2)
00:44:791 (2) - stack the end point of the slider below the endpoint of the previous one
some unsymmetrical sliders which look kinda eh but I can say okay to those.

Also I note the lack of curved sliders in the first two diffs bothers me, but that's probably just me. Just take note of it.
Also I won't mod taiko sry.
Star~

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2010-10-12T13:16:55+00:00

Rukarioman wrote:
Mod for the lovely song choice <333

jericho2442's Tears:
00:05:164 (3) - align this vertically with the start of (2) no
00:44:791 (2) - stack the end point of the slider below the endpoint of the previous one might as well
some unsymmetrical sliders which look kinda eh but I can say okay to those. everything is not allways about being symmetrical

Download: Jar - ztrout's Visit to The Proctologist (Jarby) [jericho2442's Tears].osu

Larto

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Larto 2010-10-15T18:53:36+00:00

The backgrounds and the difficulty names are related to the song, the storyboard is related to the secret meaning and to the singer.
There has been a lot of thought into all the difficulties and the patterns.
It's also not too short.

Man, I'm gonna regret this.

kuyukiP

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kuyukiP 2010-10-17T20:56:43+00:00

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-10-18T03:08:23+00:00

NSFW backgrounds, you have to change them.
I dunno if this map can even be ranked, that song doesnt look like something you would see on a ranked map

James2250

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James2250 2010-10-18T03:20:31+00:00

I think people have proven even the worst sounding songs can be ranked >_>

As for backgrounds I don't know anymore...BAT's seem to allow alot of stuff in that I am not sure I agree with, so no comment

whymeman

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whymeman 2010-10-18T03:25:13+00:00

Having a background with a some guy's head shoved up a woman's secret place wouldn't be pleasant at all to see.....

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-10-18T08:10:29+00:00

Changed the backgrounds.

Sakura Hana wrote:
I dunno if this map can even be ranked, that song doesnt look like something you would see on a ranked map

James2250

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James2250 2010-10-18T17:06:06+00:00

-Don't really like kiai time during breaks, can't you remove it and start it again after (as you do that anyway) - like jericho's
-Are you really going to have "those" backgrounds now?
-Erm what is with picture at the end..
-Final note sounds better being a finish to me

B-Be Careful:
00:06:283 (1) - remove new combo
00:07:179 (2) - new combo (to keep it consistent with other ones)
00:07:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - kind of boring being all stacked?
00:34:044 (1) - don't like long repeating sliders like this, isn't interesting
00:48:373 (1) - same comment as before

I-It Hurts:
00:06:283 (1) - remove new combo
00:07:179 (2) - new combo
00:07:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack is still boring
00:34:044 (1) - same as other difficulty (yes it follows the song but still)
00:48:373 (1) - ^

Jericho's Tears:
01:11:656 (3,4) - seeing as these are aligned why not align 01:10:760 (1,2)?

Taiko:
Looks ok, but aren't long streams with no hitsounds kind of boring? (maybe taiko players don't mind)

I would try and find some backgrounds that somehow fit (and that aren't NSFW)
ignoring the song you get a star~

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-10-18T17:11:20+00:00

James2250 wrote:
but aren't long streams with no hitsounds kind of boring?

Seems that's minor ver. of Hataraku. (which is [ddd]dddddd[ddd]dddddd... with BPM 160... [ ] is 1/8.)
Actually I like (dddd)ddddd(dddd)ddddd is better than (dddd)ddddddddd but WHATEVER. ( ( ) is 1/6 here.)

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-10-19T05:41:05+00:00

James2250 wrote:
00:06:283 (1) - remove new combo
00:07:179 (2) - new combo (to keep it consistent with other ones)

This has been suggested before and I'm going to deny it again. Take note that everything in that combo is the same pitch. It made sense for me to arrange it like this despite the fact that the start time and length are different. As for everything else: I changed the kiai placement, the backgrounds are fine and I changed jericho's difficulty on the assumption that what he did was not intentional.

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-10-19T05:46:52+00:00

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