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501st Joint Fighter Wing - Over Sky

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yongtw123
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yongtw123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 03, 2011 at 4:01:32 AM

Artist: 501st Joint Fighter Wing
Title: Over Sky
Source: STRIKE WITCHES 2
Tags: Fukuen Misato Seto Saori Tanaka Rie Sawashiro Miyuki Nazuka Kaori Nogawa Sakura Sonozaki Mie Saitou Chiwa Koshimizu Ami Kadowaki Mai Oohashi Ayuru
BPM: 168
Filesize: 6458kb
Play Time: 04:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.29 stars, 376 notes)
  2. Normal (2.66 stars, 261 notes)
  3. Sky (4.87 stars, 641 notes)
Download: 501st Joint Fighter Wing - Over Sky
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<Full version>
I need some serious suggestions on hitsounods (cry face)

Status: ready for modding

Updates:
(03/03) Colin Hou's modding: Done
(02/19) removed taiko diff by mapper's consent
(01/03) KanaRin, yangzd88, Selee's modding: Done
(12/23) IceBeam's modding: Done
(12/15) NatsumeRin's modding: Done
(12/08) wmfchris, Verdisphena's modding: Done
(12/07) Hitsounds finalized; difficulty name change
(12/06) frost-b-spec's modding: Done
Last edited by yongtw123 , edited 35 times in total.
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
star~~

繼續做個Taiko給你>.<
yongtw123
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yongtw123

kanpakyin wrote:

star~~

繼續做個Taiko給你>.<
Alright we got a taiko diff WIP~
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Taiko Done>w<

Download: 501st Joint Fighter Wing - Over Sky (yongtw123) [Kanpakyin's Taiko].osu
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
nice map

[General]
delete source and add artist "STRIKE WITCHES 2"
add tag "voice actor name" and "character name"
SPOILER
Miyafuji Yoshika (Fukuen Misato)
Sakamoto Mio (Seto Saori)
Tanaka Rie (Minna-Dietlinde Wilcke)
Sawashiro Miyuki (Perrine-H.Clostermann)
Nazuka Kaori (Lynette Bishop)
Nogawa Sakura (Erica Hartmann)
Sonozaki Mie (Gertrud Barkhorn)
Saito Chiwa (Francesca Lucchini)
Koshimizu Ami (Charlotte E Yeager)
Kadowaki Mai (Sanya V.Litvyak)
Oohashi Ayuru (Eila Ilmatar Juutilainen) +Nakai Erika(old voice actor name)
yongtw123
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yongtw123

frost-b-spec wrote:

nice map

[General]
delete source and add artist "STRIKE WITCHES 2"
add tag "voice actor name" and "character name"
SPOILER
Miyafuji Yoshika (Fukuen Misato)
Sakamoto Mio (Seto Saori)
Tanaka Rie (Minna-Dietlinde Wilcke)
Sawashiro Miyuki (Perrine-H.Clostermann)
Nazuka Kaori (Lynette Bishop)
Nogawa Sakura (Erica Hartmann)
Sonozaki Mie (Gertrud Barkhorn)
Saito Chiwa (Francesca Lucchini)
Koshimizu Ami (Charlotte E Yeager)
Kadowaki Mai (Sanya V.Litvyak)
Oohashi Ayuru (Eila Ilmatar Juutilainen) +Nakai Erika(old voice actor name)
Below is my opinion:
Strike Witches 2 is the name of the anime. It would be more logial to put it in "Source".
I admit "501st Joint Fighter Wing" isn't a good choice for "Artist" but neither is "Strike Witches 2".
Putting just "Strike Witches" won't really make sense either because technically, "Strike Witch" is an "occupation", not necessarily representing the 501st Joint Fighter Wing we are referring here.
"Strike Witches 2 Cast" may work, but it's a bit long.

Leveling the options, I'd stay with the current Artist for now. I'll see if any other can come up with better ideas.

Tags appended.
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[general]
mp3@224kbps, compress it to 128~192 kbps.

[taiko]
2-plets in the first 15 seconds is not appropiate.
~0:40 the 2-plets and 4-plets is strange too
kiai - the 4-plets is strange, cut the last notes for those 4-plets. If nesscary, add a 1/2 note
...
You should try to recheck all your 2-plets and 4-plets, if they're on a single / two vocal sound, reduce them into single notes / triplets.
this is the general idea, no time for a detailed mod orz

[Sky]
0:44:703 (1,2) spacing
0:50:595 (3,4) ^
that's all I can find

[Hard]
2:26:310 (4,5) up 1 grid?


nice mapping, star~
yongtw123
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Topic Starter
yongtw123

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
mp3@224kbps, compress it to 128~192 kbps.
lol, I will generate a bitrate diagram to clear this up.

[Sky]
0:44:703 (1,2) spacing
0:50:595 (3,4) ^
that's all I can find
ok

[Hard]
2:26:310 (4,5) up 1 grid?
ok
Verdisphena
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Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
Sky:
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)

Hard:
01:25:774 (1) - Better like this?
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)

Normal:
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)
04:10:774 (x) - D:?
Make this section with not kiai


Bad english ;_;
Gl with the map
yongtw123
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yongtw123

Verdisphena wrote:

Sky:
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)
um, nope, I am following the loud cymbal sound there.

Hard:
01:25:774 (1) - Better like this?
Minor so I didn't change it.
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)
same as before

Normal:
03:40:417 (x) - Move this timing section to 03:40:774 (?)
><
04:10:774 (x) - D:?
Make this section with not kiai
Now thank you lol I missed on this one.
Thanks for checking out!
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Fix

Download: 501st Joint Fighter Wing - Over Sky (yongtw123) [Kanpakyin's Taiko].osu
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
sorry for my late.
all i write here are just suggestions.

[Normal]
01:12:203 (3) - finish?
02:20:774 (4) - emm... why not add N1 clap at the reverse?
a series of whistles may be added if you want...
03:31:488 (2) - / 03:34:345 (2) - / 03:35:060 (1) - reverse / 03:37:203 (2) - / 03:39:345 (5) - reverse / 03:40:060 (6) - beginning
03:44:881 (3,1) - maybe remove 3 and let 1 start at 3's current time... not sure.

[Hard]
00:03:453 (3) - whistle at reverse?
00:04:881 (1) - whistle at first reverse?
00:05:595 (2) - whistle at the end?
01:08:453 (2) - move it 1/2 earlier? (then add a note at 01:08:988)
...whistles?
03:29:345 (1) - end / 03:30:595 (3) - beginning / 03:31:131 (4) - / 03:32:203 (2) - beginning / 03:33:453 (4) -
03:56:667 - add a note?

[Sky]
00:59:345 (1) - maybe start this earlier...?
01:23:631 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - not sure if players could read it... (also, the note's group is strange... maybe use sliders at first and then use combos like this?)
02:06:220 (5) - make the triple 1/2 later = =
02:36:488 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same
03:56:667 (1,2) - too far 0 0

[Kanpakyin's Taiko]
00:13:631 (46,47,48) - a simple kat is enough
01:24:166 (64,65) - switch them... i guess you made it wrong
节奏密度实在不高……虽然歌长。但还是过简单了点。。。？

star of course.
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Kanpakyin's Taiko]
00:13:631 (46,47,48) - a simple kat is enough fix
01:24:166 (64,65) - switch them... i guess you made it wrong lol
节奏密度实在不高……虽然歌长。但还是过简单了点。。。？這歌太難就不好玩了.__.
Thanks Rin

Download: 501st Joint Fighter Wing - Over Sky (yongtw123) [Kanpakyin's Taiko].osu
yongtw123
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yongtw123

NatsumeRin wrote:

sorry for my late.
all i write here are just suggestions.

[Normal]
01:12:203 (3) - finish? ok
02:20:774 (4) - emm... why not add N1 clap at the reverse? oh no i missed on this lol
a series of whistles may be added if you want...
03:31:488 (2) - / 03:34:345 (2) - / 03:35:060 (1) - reverse / 03:37:203 (2) - / 03:39:345 (5) - reverse / 03:40:060 (6) - beginning
all added, thanks~
03:44:881 (3,1) - maybe remove 3 and let 1 start at 3's current time... not sure.
hmm, maybe not

[Hard]
00:03:453 (3) - whistle at reverse?
00:04:881 (1) - whistle at first reverse?
00:05:595 (2) - whistle at the end?
all added, plus some myself
01:08:453 (2) - move it 1/2 earlier? (then add a note at 01:08:988)
hmm, nope i guess
...whistles?
03:29:345 (1) - end / 03:30:595 (3) - beginning / 03:31:131 (4) - / 03:32:203 (2) - beginning / 03:33:453 (4) -
some of them already have whistles lol
03:56:667 - add a note? nope i think

[Sky]
00:59:345 (1) - maybe start this earlier...? this spinner is sync-ed in all diffs, so probably no for now
01:23:631 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - not sure if players could read it... (also, the note's group is strange... maybe use sliders at first and then use combos like this?) yea... i am thinking about readability too. What i did was just flipping horizontally and vertically. Now I made the 4 occurrences of this group of notes more gradual in terms of difficulty.
02:06:220 (5) - make the triple 1/2 later = = i think it sounds okay? :?
02:36:488 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same changed. Hope it's better?
03:56:667 (1,2) - too far 0 0 I meant it that way. A tiny tweak is made though.
Thanks for the thorough modding!
Vass_Bass
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Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~
Very nice map, good work

May be do sounds just a little louder? (Suggestion)

Star :)
yongtw123
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yongtw123

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~
Very nice map, good work

May be do sounds just a little louder? (Suggestion)
Hmm...maybe I'll increase volume once another mod says so

Star :)
Thanks for checking out~!
IceBeam
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IceBeam
I wouldn't said that volume in Normal hitsound is high.
But some moments,like:
[Normal]: 00:12:917 (3) - Where the music stops,they sound a bit rough,it's not really neccesary cause there're only few moments like this,but still,if you want your map to be perfect,consider adding some hitsound on those notes/reducing volume/changing to Soft samples.

Kay,here's mod:
[Normal]
03:56:131 - Add a note?

[Hard]
00:07:917 - From here I'd suggest this:
SPOILER
01:17:917 (3) - ^ Same pattern.
01:20:774 - ^

[Sky]
Pretty nice~

Perfect,star~
yongtw123
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yongtw123

IceBeam wrote:

I wouldn't said that volume in Normal hitsound is high.
But some moments,like:
[Normal]: 00:12:917 (3) - Where the music stops,they sound a bit rough,it's not really neccesary cause there're only few moments like this,but still,if you want your map to be perfect,consider adding some hitsound on those notes/reducing volume/changing to Soft samples.
allright, fixed~

Kay,here's mod:
[Normal]
03:56:131 - Add a note? good!

[Hard]
00:07:917 - From here I'd suggest this:
SPOILER
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01:17:917 (3) - ^ Same pattern.
01:20:774 - ^
changed 2 out of 3

[Sky]
Pretty nice~

Perfect,star~ yay thanks~
Thanks for the modding!
KanaRin
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Joined April 2010
KanaRin
>w< Over Sky! I love this song so much =w=
Here's some mod >w<
Also, I'm a new modder =w= But i will try'
K, Let's go. Remind that my mod should be suggestion>a<

[Normal]
00:21:131 - Maybe you can delete this green line (?)
01:12:203 (1) - New combo
01:12:560 (x) -add a circle
03:47:560 (1) - New combo

[Hard]
Fine~


[Sky]
Beautiful >w< I love your map style!

[Taiko]
ALL: 有點二連打 不符合音樂 改一改比較好
00:16:844 (x) - I think you should add note in this break time.
02:42:559 (x) - ^ same. I think that's too long and it will make player boring *3*
other is ok for me.


From Ying's modding queue.
Star~
Licnect
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Licnect
GO~~UP UP
and shooting star~ :D
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