[Normal]
00:47:118 (6,1) - swap the new combo onto the (6) , as it is atm its rather wierd to the pattern your doing, this way suits your current pattern better
00:50:429 (5,1) - same here
01:02:842 (6,1) - this could play better, atm it kinda breaks your flow and dont really play good combo or pattern wise :/, i suggest like this
just try it and you will notice it flows better, also i advise you to do this the on 02:02:428 - part too
01:14:429 (7,1) - your breaking your pattern, put the combo onto the (7) insted
01:18:153 (7) - newcombo here, plays MUCH better
01:20:222 (1) - if you do the above remove this combo to follow your pattern, it also plays better this way
01:43:394 (6,1) - swap the new combo onto the (6) , as it is atm its rather wierd to the pattern your doing, this way suits your current pattern better
01:46:704 (5,1) - same here
02:10:704 (7,1) - your breaking your pattern, put the combo onto the (7) insted
02:14:429 (6) - newcombo here, plays MUCH better
02:16:497 (1) - if you do the above remove this combo to follow your pattern, it also plays better this way
[Hard]
these are all purely suggestions, ONLY take them if you 100% agree with them, they are totally just my opinion
SPOILER(suggestion) 00:46:290 (9) - tiny nazi here, your breaking your hitsound pattern, you need a hitclap here
(suggestion)
ok hard one to sort out here, watch the combo pattern your doing at 01:10:979 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - now look at the start of that area at 01:08:634 unlike ALL the rest of this pattern the new combo's here don't start on the beginning of the female vocals, and also you have a new combo in the middle of the break before the female vocals, again unlike the rest of the full pattern.
if you want this to look better i advise trying to make this pattern consistant with the rest of the combos in this pattern, it maybe a bit tricky though and you might need to remap a few notes
(suggestion) 01:42:566 (9) - again nazi, but this needs a hitclap
01:49:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this plays odd timing wise, its easy to fix by moving it foward to 01:49:601 and turning the last slider into a normal hitcircle. i have to admit it plays MUCH better that way since it then flows PERFECT with the patterns like this 02:02:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
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fun maps, just normal did need some combo modding and that timing niggle in hard
