1. Fengshen Yanyi (7.72 stars, 2983 notes)

Kuki wrote:

having random people spam ur maps so you have to actually search for mods is when u kno you've made it

[general]
ai says 1/3 of the map is kiai, not a big deal but maybe try to weed out parts that don't need it (if there are any)

[sounds nice]
01:03:404 (2) - im0 you can ctrl+g this, it makes it a bit more fun and the guitar sounds different here
i like how it goes in the same direction and the pitch is rising and then is like boom with 01:03:890 (1) - so nah
03:18:883 (6) - could do witth nc here
yeah ok(added on one note earlier actually)
03:39:883 (2) - this sounds more like 1/12 actually dude also like this to clarify
its barely off time i guess, it's really unnoticeable when playing tho, especially because it's a slider and stuff near it is on time
03:40:666 (2,1) - fix blanket
okk
04:54:492 (1) - imo nc not needed here
it's fine like this, could work without it too yes but then it would look ugly with that extra follow point haha

okay well apart from those petty things your map is gorgeous. good luck with rank which i imagine will come soon.

riktoi wrote:

asked in pm

00:48:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - as these 2 parts follow the same melodic pattern as the sliders do (00:51:656 (1,2,3) - ) I think you should change these to sliders too
00:53:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
BUT THEN THE STREAMS ARE TOO SHORT

01:10:370 (1,2) - the jump between these is a bit harsh compared to the rest of the stream jump patterns
it actually plays like 1/2

02:17:330 (1,2) - you could make 02:17:450 (2) - point towards in the direction that the stream is going (02:17:250 (3,1) - the angle these 2 are using, perhaps?) as I find it very hard to read the way it is currently
i dont want to make it too linear of an entrance from the stream to the singletaps, i like the semi sharp angle, also that seems confusing cause it might look like the end of the stream because of the little spacing and 1/3s into 1/2s

02:20:930 (1) - Instead of following a linear stream path here you could make it have sharp turns starting from here to follow the modulation of the melody
02:21:650 (1) - ^ (You actually did it here)
youre right, changed

02:23:570 (1) - I have a hard time hearing what these sliders are following, can I get a explanation on these please
02:25:010 (1) - ^
02:26:450 (1) - ^
the guitar, there are a few 1/4 drum hits too (theyre mostly doing triples/shorter bursts though), same with the streams

03:16:281 (1,1) - same as that one double reverse slider before
yeah

03:38:976 (2,1) - this is a 230bpm 1/4 jump
it plays like 1/2, the slider is so fast you dont need to hold it but just click once

k

GoldenWolf wrote:

hurr

Lasse wrote:

ugh i tried

00:33:990 (1,2) - is stacked 00:34:808 (1,1) - is not even though they follow the same concept in the music, so probably try sth like http://i.imgur.com/yX5FWqw.jpg for 00:35:081 (1,2) -
ok

00:43:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - cant really judge if rotating the second half +45° would be better or worse (especially reading wise) but you might as well try it, lol
its fine

01:55:010 (1,2,3) - why the straight line? really takes away some emphasis which shouldn't happen at those guitar sounds- also jump to 01:55:730 (1) - could be a bit smaller, maybe try it like this: http://i.imgur.com/M6fhwFg.jpg
well in my opinion 1/2 straight lines emphasize individual notes well when they're spaced enough because you can't just randomly draw a line like you would on 1/4s and still hit them. i think the jump fits the songs intensity well, it's nothing too huge anyways, it's just sudden after those 1/1s and that's why i like it
01:57:890 (1,2,3) - ^
^

02:00:050 (1) - spacing those red anchors a bit more would look better /maybe even make them symmetric
ok

02:00:770 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - lol k
huh

04:29:455 (1,1) - coud at least overlap the a bit less to make it clearer
yea moved it slightly
05:05:716 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this might be really bad to read from the way they are overlapped
yea changed similarly to how that next example is
05:15:107 (1,2,1,2) - those for example are way better overlapped for readability
05:36:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - suggest you cut this down to only 36 instead of 38 notes maybe, probably remove 12 from the start for some repeating sliders. that way it would let players recover better and together with the rep slider spam at 05:39:295 (1) - it would make it a bit more comfortable to play. I know you want it to be hard, but eh
so far from what i've seen i think this part is ok stamina recovery wise, it has 3 measures of streams and then 2 measures of reverse sliders that let you recover slightly

well those streams especially are really hard for me to judge but I hope I could helo a bit at least
gl with this :v