1. 4K Goddess - 4Key (4.63 stars, 3789 notes)
2. Shin's 6K Liberty - 6Key (5.12 stars, 3946 notes)

Bubbled # 1 by: Rivals_7
Bubbled # 2 by: Maxus
Approved by: Critical_Star
---------------------------------------------------------- 4K Goddess by: me
6K Liberty by: Shinzo-

Thank you so much for helping, supporting, and playing this map

Lenfried- wrote:

i came to collect my testplay kudosus

Proof of tstplay and semi-irc mod: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4094841

-SoraGami- wrote:

Lenfried- wrote:

i came to collect my testplay kudosus

Proof of tstplay and semi-irc mod: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4094841

here's your kudos xD Thanks again

will try to find a solution for this...

SPOILER

really tried... ok i found one, but will use for a alternate pattern if others dont like the current one, kinda destroy of what i want to happen in that part of the song, and because of my mapping style, there only feww patterns that i can use for the LN section and because of the column limit ;w; yah 4k sad, About making the ln complex, tried not to because it will outleved the other ln parts and i love to map simple lns <3 xD
possible:
- the alternate pattern im talking about (optional)
- thinking of changing the chordy ending and adding some simple lns, to make it close to become a bit vary (lol) (so sure of changing this one, >w<)b) Edit: and also reducing instead the lns like what i part in the first part but it is kinda hard for my style to reduce lns

Thanks or pointing these out, really helped me <3

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1. Shin's 6K Liberty - 6Key (5.06 stars, 3961 notes)
2. Testplay

Shinzo- wrote:

GD Done

Also a little mod for the 4K

4K

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[4K ?????]

Diff Name suggestion: 4K Goddess oooo nice thanks xD00:30:705 - you forgot a note here xD should be 2 note for the kick. just like you do on 00:32:590 (32590|1,32590|2,32904|0,32904|1,33218|1,33218|3) - mm.. ohh ok i understand now
00:37:930 - 00:38:244 - might want to add note here okay, will try it for now
00:39:815 (39815|3,39972|0,40129|2,40286|1) - maybe change to LN for make a diffrences with 00:39:186 (39186|3,39343|0,39501|1,39658|2) - since they are diffrent kind of sound ok, nice
00:49:658 (49658|2) - actually the snap is just on 00:49:631 - o.o ohh okay then xD
01:00:233 (60233|2,60233|3,60312|1,60312|0,60391|3,60391|2,60469|0,60469|1) - actually the strea, starts 01:00:155 - so you missing a note there yah, im conscious about that, thinking about the flow but okay
01:00:705 (60705|1) - actually these LN should be on 01:00:862 - since the synt is there, please hear it carefully i followed the most obvious sound there, but will skip these first, im thinking of changing the LN cuz im not satisfied on how i mapped those
01:05:731 (65731|2) - should be on 01:05:888 -
01:10:757 (70757|2) - should be on 01:10:914 -
01:20:338 - 01:20:495 - maybe add note here for the kick im thinking of making this a solo synth glide but ok
01:21:281 - missing note, you should add note here for consistency with 01:21:909 - 01:22:537 - etc. ok
02:53:008 - actually you can make 2 note here for the synt+kick kinda hard for that section but ok rearranged since it lacks impact
03:01:804 - add note for consistency cymbal ok
03:03:846 - 03:04:160 - maybe add note since i hear the snare maybe no, cuz im not that comfortable with the sudden double single double
03:06:124 - you can add note here... or even must wanna make a solo melody glide there, but will change if others point this out
03:13:741 (193741|2) - maybe end the LN 03:14:370 - ? since there is a sound like stop holding there will think about about this
03:17:040 - add LN just like 03:17:354 (197354|2) - ? ok
03:18:768 (198768|2) - 03:23:794 (203794|2) - same as i said before same
03:32:485 (212485|3,212537|2) - 03:33:741 (213741|3,213794|2) - 03:34:998 (214998|3,215050|2) - 03:52:590 (232590|3,232642|2) - 03:53:846 (233846|3,233898|2) - 03:55:103 (235103|3,235155|2) - 04:02:642 (242642|3,242694|2) - ghost note plz xD please hear it carefully ok
04:05:260 - 04:05:574 - 04:05:888 - 04:25:364 - 04:25:679 - 04:25:993 - 04:32:799 (272799|3,272851|2) - maybe add 1 more note here since the snare is kinda hard umm. yah, but not for now, i will be force to add also 03:17:040 (197040|2)
04:12:694 (252694|3,252747|2) - 04:13:951 (253951|3,254003|2) - 04:15:207 (255207|3,255260|2) - 04:22:747 (262747|3,262799|2) - ghost note ok
04:22:851 - add note for cymbal ok
04:32:799 (272799|3,272851|2) - ghost note... please fix the rest i cant mention all of it xD lol
05:16:045 (316045|3) - same as before, snap it 05:16:019 - here ok
05:28:192 - should be just 2 note for consistency oops

1. Shin's 6K Liberty - 6Key (5.06 stars, 3961 notes)
2. Testplay

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi Sora~
mod requested via pm~
below are just my suggestion, feel free to reject!

4K Goddess
00:21:909 - 00:22:066 - add a note? just to be consistent for the 1/2 sound like 00:21:281 (21281|2,21438|1,21595|3,21752|0) - not actually, i followed the kick sounds there, this section is kinda similar to 00:21:281 (21281|2,21438|1,21595|3,21752|0)

00:22:851 (22851|1) - actually the long sound should be like http://puu.sh/mt1e5/b8940671da.png ok

00:25:050 - add a note here for kick like my reason with the first one, i followed the kick in this kibd of sound that is similar to 00:10:286 :>

00:26:935 - 00:27:092 - add a note here like u did at 00:26:621 (26621|2,26778|0) - somehow i just can't ignore this sound :s lol, aaaa like my reason before xD because for me, they are really different

00:27:877 (27877|0) - like before if u accept ok

00:35:417 - till 00:37:930 - would suggest to add a note at the red tick since it was a really loud kick sound too hard for the LN

01:05:417 (65417|0,65417|2,65417|3) - why triple note? :s change xD

01:06:830 (66830|2,66987|3,67144|0,67302|1) - i guess all these should be 1/2 LN the long sound are really obvious here umm..

if u want to follow all these sound with LN, u should add LN for all these sound. some part should be LN ok i decided to remap that part xD

01:15:469 (75469|2,75469|3,75469|0) - double note here should be enough lol oki~

01:31:333 - should have a note here like 01:31:961 (91961|2) - since both are loud impact will remap it xD im not actually pretty satisfied on how i mapped that part

01:31:647 - consider u are following 1/2 sound here, u should add a note for all white tick in this part ^
01:32:904 - add a note for strong piano sound ^ ok

01:33:846 - like before add a note here for drum ^ ok

01:38:872 - add a note , hmm yea i think u got my point xD and so on lol ^
01:42:328 - add a note at 1? ill add it for now

01:54:658 - 01:55:914 - 01:57:171 - 01:58:427 - 01:59:684 - 02:00:940 - missing note? it sound the same like 01:54:029 (114029|1) - i only added for the (i cant describe what sound is that) 01:53:794 (113794|3,113872|2,113951|0,114029|1,114108|2)
02:43:192 - missing drum note? nice catch~

02:59:919 (179919|0,180233|1,180548|2,180862|3) - where is the LN? lol like 02:54:893 (174893|3,175207|1,175521|2,175836|3) - it's hard to make a comfortable pattern with LN in that triples xD also to emphasize the triple sounds

04:25:993 (265993|3,265993|1) - swap column? the pitch are descending here yah, but there's also a sound higher, and also the main thing is i dont like the LN be release with a note on the same hand, really hard to prepare for the next pattern
05:06:830 - till 05:15:626 - optional, instead only bass and kick, u can try catch those tiny 1/4 sound here :3 it could be nice yah thanks, ill try to do that but only some tiny 1/4s

05:16:883 - till 05:25:679 - yea and like above if u accept same xD

05:36:909 - add a note at 4? should be double like 05:36:830 (336830|1,336830|0) - drum prefer not to, so it can be consistent with the others similar to this

05:47:040 (347040|2,347040|0) - end 05:53:951 - ? lol this is why i hate fading sounds, but not for now, will wait for others to point this out xD

05:47:040 - add a note here? for ending crash hit wanna emphasize this 05:47:040 (347040|2,347040|0)

love this song <3 good luck~

Fresh Chicken wrote:

I Rape Chicken mod

owo

2016-01-21 14:30 -SoraGami-: is there some weird stuffs?
2016-01-21 14:30 Fresh Chicken: hmm I couldn't find when I was playing but
2016-01-21 14:30 Fresh Chicken: Yeah let's check it quickly
2016-01-21 14:30 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846184 Yooh - MariannE [4K Goddess]]
2016-01-21 14:31 -SoraGami-: okaysuu
2016-01-21 14:31 Fresh Chicken: 00:09:658 (9658|3,9815|0) - Ctrl + H can be more better I guess. for more natural pattern with 00:07:773 (7773|3,7773|2) - 00:08:401 (8401|1,8401|3) - 00:09:029 (9029|1,9029|2) - these two notes part okay applied this
2016-01-21 14:32 Fresh Chicken: 00:19:867 - Why this part doesn't have SV? it will be better to add the SV lolol there's already an SV
2016-01-21 14:33 Fresh Chicken: For good flow
2016-01-21 14:33 -SoraGami-: nice, applied
2016-01-21 14:33 Fresh Chicken: 00:26:935 (26935|1,27092|2) - You may know it but here has some 1/4 but depend on you i followed the sounds (kick and clap) that is similar to the last section before this
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: 00:49:631 (49631|2) - Isn't it 1/3? I guess so
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: ohh
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: Mistake
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: XDD
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: Sorry
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: Not 1/3
2016-01-21 14:36 -SoraGami-: what timestamp?
2016-01-21 14:36 -SoraGami-: lol
2016-01-21 14:36 Fresh Chicken: "Isn't it 1/3 " is wrong XD
2016-01-21 14:37 -SoraGami-: lol
2016-01-21 14:38 Fresh Chicken: 03:04:671 (184671|2,184710|3,184788|0,184828|1,184867|2) - I want to tell something about this delay
2016-01-21 14:39 Fresh Chicken: Including all same parts
2016-01-21 14:39 Fresh Chicken: I can consciousness it is too repeat when I was playing it. maybe you can try something different without it
2016-01-21 14:39 -SoraGami-: yes?
2016-01-21 14:40 Fresh Chicken: All same parts have same pattern 03:04:671 (184671|2,184710|3,184788|0,184828|1,184867|2) - okay, but this will took me some time to look for a better pattern so i may not applied it yet but soonxD
2016-01-21 14:40 Fresh Chicken: I wish you will change it including other parts too :3
2016-01-21 14:40 -SoraGami-: ohh lol okay, ill try to differ it from each other
2016-01-21 14:40 Fresh Chicken: Nice owo
2016-01-21 14:43 Fresh Chicken: 05:46:726 - How about use the four notes for emphasis last part? added it :3
2016-01-21 14:45 Fresh Chicken: Okay my quick checking have finished
2016-01-21 14:45 Fresh Chicken: Nice done!!
2016-01-21 14:45 Fresh Chicken: Take some star <3 thanks <3<3<3
2016-01-21 14:45 -SoraGami-: will add it then xD
2016-01-21 14:45 Fresh Chicken: :3

Lenfried- wrote:

yeee mod

DONT KDS

testplay

4k:
great as usual. Cool SVs. Last part still repetitive lol, i tried, too hard for my style xD
Could go more aggressive on the LNs but you might mess it up.

6k:
MURICA
DEMOCRACY
APPLE PIE
BALD EAGLE
NO TO GUN BAN
CLOWNPIECE

solid structure and fun bursts aside, you'll have to consider your difficulty distribution w/c will be discussed later. Also there's that one bad SV somewhere.

4k

00:34:631 - add 3 i feel kinda heavy aside from that jack
00:34:946 (34946|3) - move to 2 will thing about it since i have a pattern for this
00:37:930 - bruh https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4400653 better than mine so okay~
00:39:501 (39501|1,39658|2) - add to 4 and 1 respectively mirrored instead, not feeling good with that 4,1,4,1
01:20:652 - this section has some stuff w/c could be chords (that means you add a note to the listed timestamps below) feels heavy for me, mmm idk, kinda want to make it just smooth
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01:21:909 -
01:22:537 -
01:23:165 -
01:24:422 -
01:25:679 -
01:26:935 -
01:28:192 -
01:28:820 -
01:29:448 -
They vary in sounds so check w/c deserve triples
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02:18:453 - too much motion going right. Do some random stuff lol okay, my patterns feels like, eehhh... haha
02:33:296 (153296|1) - ghost there has actually
01:10:364 (70364|2) - ghost ^
02:53:401 (173401|2) - ghost. Consistent ghosts one this pattern usage. Check them al out ^ im pretty sure with it
03:04:671 (184671|2,184710|3,184788|0,184828|1,184867|2) - find a way to make this burst go the other way. By testplaying this, this burst usage is all going to the right. cant think of a more better pattern to replace
03:44:880 (224880|2,224919|3,224998|0,225037|1,225076|2) - ^ ^
03:56:228 (236228|2) - wont list anymore of these, watch out same with before, im 100 sure with it
03:46:412 - 04:45:469 - nigga this is like 1 minute of the same stuff so do try some usage like this in the second set of 30 seconds. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4400722 ayy.. lol okay,... after testplaying, i feel awkward after following main sounds
05:02:511 - too much right movement repatterned
didn't try to nitpick

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