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Ayane - ribbon

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Dotsu
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Joined March 2009
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Dotsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月4日 at 14:25:03

Artist: Ayane
Title: ribbon
Source: Memories Off After Rain
Tags: KID Cyberfront Yue Imasaka Shirakawa Hotaru
BPM: 130
Filesize: 16353kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.05 stars, 117 notes)
  2. Hard (4.87 stars, 292 notes)
  3. Normal (4.33 stars, 191 notes)
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My 13th map~

From Memories Off After Rain.
Last edited by Dotsu , edited 11 times in total.
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
8-)
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
8-) 13
KanbeKotori
315 posts
Joined May 2009
KanbeKotori
;)
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
;)
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
orz, you damn good mapper.

nice job for a first submission.

im sorry i couldnt mod as you requested.

too good.
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume
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Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Hard:

Found nothing.

Normal:

Found nothing worth to be said :)

Easy:

Found nothing.

Lol, you shouldnt have asked such a noob modder as me to mod your map D:
Only thing extra i could say, is that the maps could be spiced up a bit more, such as placing some jumps, or invent something new. But then again, map is fine as it is.
Interesting note: I SS'ed them all on first try =o! (and im not a frequent sser,a nd not like you cared :x)
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Hi, tried to mod it but found nothing :D.

ErufenRito wrote:

Only thing extra i could say, is that the maps could be spiced up a bit more, such as placing some jumps, or invent something new. But then again, map is fine as it is.
I kinda agree with Eruefen. It's a great map, but it could use more jumps :P. So I decided to look some places were you could place jumps (they're all suggestions):

Hard:

00:17:808 (1) Maybe 1.6 Distance spacing
00:25:193 (1) ^
00:30:731 (1) ^
00:39:962 (1) ^
00:54:731 (1) ^
00:58:423 (1.2.3) ^
01:11:346 (1) ^
01:18:731 (1) ^
01:22:654 (1.2.3.4) Rising jumps
01:26:116 (1)

Normal could also have some jumps, but not so big. Put some if you like.
Easy doesn't need jumps imo.

Aight. Have a star and good luck~
Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Revengexsoyah
Hello :D


ONLY SUGGESTIONS.

~Easy~
00:06:731 : this form of slider can get to have a heart attack a noob xD
01:23:346 : down 2 grids. :D
01:37:193 : same as 00:06:731

~Normal~
Fine. (Y)

~Hard~
is so perfect.


kudosu star , for dedication and perfect mapping.
good luck :D
narakucrimson
osu! Alumni
1,713 posts
Joined March 2010
narakucrimson
Hi! Lets get to this:

[General]

I think the offset should be at about 1170.
Remeber to always re-snap if you change the offset.

Btw, great job with the hitsounds!


[Easy]&[Normal]

Nothing too wrong here. I'd correct a few little overlappings, but hell, it's ok as it is xD
But, in Normal, things may get a little bit too overlapped. Anyway, if you like it as it is, I won't say a thing n.n


[Hard]

Ah, much better! I like this one a lot!


As you see, not much to say.
You have my star and support!
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Hi, as per your request.


[General]
- Current offset is a little bit fast to me. Try 1195 and resnap all note include all green lines.
- Change the title from 'Ribbon' to 'ribbon'. Please check this
- Remove 'Vol.3 Graduation' from the source.
- 01:35:109 - End kiai time at here ?


[Hard]
00:40:416 (2,3) - Changing as below is more fit.

00:55:416 (2,3) - ^ same suggestion.


[Normal]
Oh no... you mistook at setting offset but I already gave you other offset. :o
Nothing to point out except that.


[Easy]
I think you should insert break time somewhere due to this diff is for beginner.
Mapset is good.


Nice map :)
Roddie
osu! Alumni
1,468 posts
Joined June 2009
Roddie
Hi

Blue: Suggestions
Violet: I really think you should fix this in my opinion
Red: Must be fixed.

Easy:
01:37:186 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning of that slider. Add a finish instead.

Normal:
01:37:184 (3)-Remove that whistle. Add a clap instead.
01:46:414 (3)-Add a clap on the end of that slider.

Hard:
01:37:186 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning of that slider. Add a finish instead.

Impressive map set. 8-) Nothing major I can point out. So, its all good. ;)

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Download without video



Download with video



I dunno what happened, I've tried to download it 3-4 times... :|

Try a Full Submit, this will maybe work again
Saten
Global Moderator
3,864 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Works fine now.

Star~
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Ok, let's go ! :)

(my english can be sometimes a bit...uh...weird : Sorry :cry: )

[General]

Offset : 1179
This sounds better for me (don't forget to resnap everything)

I don't recommend a white combo combo color, it hurt the eyes, especially during kiai time :|

[Hard]

Fine, awesome job ! :D

[Normal]

01:00:500 - This clap sounds a bit weird here IMO, add a whistle
01:00:731 - Add a clap and delete the whistle

Nice :P

[Easy]

00:01:193 (1) - Delete clap at the end of this slider
00:02:577 (2) - Add a clap
00:05:808 (2) - Delete clap at the beggining and add a clap at the end of this slider
00:09:500 (2) - Delete clap
00:09:962 (3) - Add a clap
00:12:269 (1) - Add a clap at the end
00:13:192 (2) - Delete the clap at the beggining and add a clap at the end
00:15:039 (3) - Delete clap and add a finish
00:31:640 (4) - Delete clap and add a whistle
01:29:794 (1) - (meganazi) 1 grid down for the 2nd waypoint and 1 grid left for the last waypoint

It's just a lot of HS modding, great diff :P

It's a solid mapset !
Star for you~ ! ;)
VTC
767 posts
Joined October 2010
VTC
good nice :)
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Nice map, couldn't find anything worth mentioning.

Good job :)
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
Normal
00:46:880 (7) Consider moving this note just a little. It would make it look nicer.
Hard
00:15:304 (3) No hitsound here?
00:17:341 (5) Beat here isn't lined up, though that could be intentional.
01:12:957 (1) Might look better non-linear
01:36:034 (3) Same.

But I like this overall, so it gets a Star!
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Hi!!~~ it's my Modding Time

[Overall]
SPOILER
i didn't see anything wrong with infos.

[Easy]
SPOILER
- 00:05:803 (2) - i can be annoying with minimal fixes...but i reccommend to move it 1 grid to the left and up (lvl3), then 1 grid to the right (lvl3) Something like this.
- 00:19:649 (3) - Rotate 11 degrees Anticlockwise, then move it 1 grid left.
- 00:40:880 (2) - move 2 grid to the right, 1 down and 1 right again (lvl3).
- 01:19:188 (1) - 2 grids down (lvl3)
- 01:31:649 (2) - 1 grid tto left (lvl3)
just make those movements and everything will go better.

[normal]
SPOILER
- 00:11:457 (2) - 1 grid down.
- 00:59:803 (4) - 1 grid to right.
Nothing more found.

[Hard]
SPOILER
- 00:10:187 (4) - move 1 grid down, then 1 grid to left (lvl3).
- 00:26:803 (1) - move 1 grid up and then to left (lvl3).
- 01:03:957 (1) - instead circle, use slider (?)
No more problems found.

Hey, your map is very well done, despite that sensation that you weren't following grids (._.)...i just wrote little suggestions, hope them helps you...i think the map is ready for MAT modding and Bubbling!! I wanna see that map ranked ASAP!! oh and of course...STAR!!☆~~
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