This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 11, 2016 at 22:39:04

Artist: Nizikawa
Title: Isuzu no TRACK
Tags: Kantai Collection UNGLAND 3 (Disc1) NIZIGEN COMP marathon kancolle hardcore kazco cm
BPM: 170
Filesize: 10623kb
Play Time: 06:49
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My 3rd Ranked Map

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Vocal : KAZCO
Title : Isuzu no Truck
Lyrics : Tsukadamakoto
Composition : Fumio Okui
Arrangement : Nizikawa

Hi, M4M here~

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[Greget]
00:12:643 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524578 lebih enak di main imo, daripada nge-jack.
00:14:055 - ^
00:45:467 (45467|3) - move to 5? lebih gampang di main.
00:50:055 (50055|0,50232|0,50408|0) - hmm, mending 00:50:408 (50408|0,50408|1,50496|4,50496|3,50585|2,50585|0,50585|1,50673|3,50673|4) - di ctrl+h.
00:50:761 (50761|1) - kalo apply di atas ini ke col 5, kalo ga apply di atas ke col 1.
01:03:467 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524652 lebih enak di main imo.
02:15:820 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524762 better flow imo.
03:22:349 (202349|1) - move to col 5, biar ga berat2 amat abis ngejack sebelumnya.
03:32:408 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524797 better imo.
03:45:996 (225996|4) - move to col 4, biar mirror sama 03:45:820 (225820|1,225820|3,225820|4) - sama hindarin hammer di col 5.
05:57:114 (357114|2) - move to col 1? better flow imo.

good luck!

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, M4M here~

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[Greget]
00:12:643 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524578 lebih enak di main imo, daripada nge-jack. okelah. walaupun sama aja
00:14:055 - ^
00:45:467 (45467|3) - move to 5? lebih gampang di main. y
00:50:055 (50055|0,50232|0,50408|0) - hmm, mending 00:50:408 (50408|0,50408|1,50496|4,50496|3,50585|2,50585|0,50585|1,50673|3,50673|4) - di ctrl+h.
00:50:761 (50761|1) - kalo apply di atas ini ke col 5, kalo ga apply di atas ke col 1. y
01:03:467 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524652 lebih enak di main imo. y
02:15:820 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524762 better flow imo. nice idea.
03:22:349 (202349|1) - move to col 5, biar ga berat2 amat abis ngejack sebelumnya.
03:32:408 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4524797 better imo.
03:45:996 (225996|4) - move to col 4, biar mirror sama 03:45:820 (225820|1,225820|3,225820|4) - sama hindarin hammer di col 5.
05:57:114 (357114|2) - move to col 1? better flow imo.

good luck!

fix all with some arangement
thanks for mod
will mod your map soon

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here comes your M4M goshujin-sama owo
Hope this is good enough

That's all I think

Aras25 wrote:

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here comes your M4M goshujin-sama owo
Hope this is good enough

Mod inside

[*]
[*]I would ctrl+J this 00:12:643 (12643|0,12643|2,12820|1,12820|3,12996|2,12996|4) - and move 00:13:173 (13173|0) - to 2
If this is applied make sure to change theese too 00:14:055 (14055|2,14055|4,14232|1,14232|3,14408|0,14408|2,14585|4) - but why ? in this 00:12:467 (12467|4,12467|3) - i already have note so, it will make hard for col. 4 and 5
[*]00:14:938 (14938|3) - to 1
[*]How about following the voice sample in these part with LN? 00:54:290 i never follow voice in my mapping stlye. also it already follow guitar part in this section. some note for you: in mania map it's not recommend to follow voice (54290|4,54290|0,54290|2,54467|0,54555|1,54643|4,54643|3,54732|2,54820|1,54820|4,54996|2,54996|0,54996|3,55173|1,55173|2,55349|0,55349|4,55438|3,55526|4,55614|2,55702|3,55790|1,55879|2) -
[*]No LN here 02:52:526 ? you can follow the siren like sound thou, for example : 02:52:526 (172526|0) - change to LN which ends here 02:52:879
02:53:232 (173232|3) - Ln and ends it here 02:53:585 and so on yep. i can do it but it will make no sense for me and looks not good IMO
[*]03:35:232 same like point 3
[*]04:19:349 (259349|4) - how about changing the column of all of this sound that followed with LN like this to col. number 3? ???? i make thi 04:19:349 (259349|4) - in col. 4 cuz this 04:17:232 (257232|3) - already in col. 3
[*]05:12:290 (312290|1,312290|0,312643|2,312643|1,312996|3,312996|2,313349|4,313349|3,313702|2,313702|4,314055|1,314055|3,314408|0,314408|2,314761|3,314761|1) - add 1 note at the start, there's crash sound keep. the sound is not very hard and it will break the consistency for 05:15:114 (315114|4,315114|3,315290|2,315290|3,315467|1,315467|2,315643|0,315643|1) -
[*]05:27:026 (327026|4) - to 3, 05:27:114 (327114|3) - to 5 in order to make it like this 05:25:349 (325349|0,325349|2,325438|1,325614|3,325702|2,325702|4) - or something like that, It's a nice pattern really are you deaf or smoething ? that's clearly a different sound. the first you mentioned is long sound, so i use LN for that part. the second you mentioned is short sound, so i use note instead
[*]05:27:996 (327996|1,328173|2,328173|0,328261|1,328438|0,328438|4,328526|1,328526|2) - ^
[*]06:06:202 add 1
[*]06:06:732 ^
[*]06:07:614 ^
[*]06:08:143 and 06:08:232 add 1 on 4 and 3 respectively
[*]06:09:026 add 1 on 5 then 06:09:114 (369114|4) - to 2
and many more synth sound will consider about it
[*]06:13:790 and 06:13:879 add 1 on 2 and 1

That's all I think

thanks for trying to mod this
will mod your map later

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Hi Frim~
Sorry I can't mod this map well enough. It's already good enough for me. I still have suggestions though


Good luck! Hope these help

Yo Frim, sorry for the late reply!


Overall, pretty solid map! I like it!

m4m req dari threadku
Well, aslinya melanggar rules tentang "lenght mod", tapi gpp lah.
Berhutang budi sama mantan ketua mod thread
Maaf jg kalau modnya kurang spesifik
#waiting for your mod

Another Lie wrote:

m4m req dari threadku

Greget

yah, ntah di AiMod terlalu diperhatiin / ga di ranking criteria, kalau masalah itu aku ga tau
00:32:232 - add a note, sama kyk note dibawahnya
00:32:673 - ^ sedang dlm proses perbaikan
03:04:879 (184879|4,184879|3,185055|2,185055|3,185232|1,185232|2) - kenapa ga dibuat sama persis ini? jacknya maksudnya, padahal suara sama well, itu sih bebas. mau dibuat jack ato ga03:08:055 (188055|0,188055|4,188232|1,188232|4,188408|4,188408|2) -
04:21:290 (261290|1,261379|3) - saran, dibuat note biasa (kenyamanan tangan, lagian udah ada space jack itu) following sound (biar greget)
05:23:761 (323761|0) - dibuat note biasa aja, kalau ini sih dah bener 05:23:055 (323055|1,323232|3,323408|4,323585|2) - #bukan maksud menghakimi, saran ganti note biasa aja why??? i think it fit the song better IMO
05:25:173 (325173|4) - ^
05:26:585 (326585|1) - ^
05:27:996 (327996|1) - ^

Well, aslinya melanggar rules tentang "lenght mod", tapi gpp lah.
Berhutang budi sama mantan ketua mod thread
Maaf jg kalau modnya kurang spesifik
#waiting for your mod

sorry ga baca rulesnya
btw thx for mod

mods... where are you mods....
why don't you come to this thread

Here comes a mod
I hope it's helpful

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Greget

00:35:320 - you're missing a note here, as you normally have a single note; compare to 00:36:732 -, 00:38:143 -
00:42:467 - as with above, you normally have a double; 00:43:526 -, 00:41:055 -

I think 00:50:585 (50585|2,50585|4,50585|3) - has the same sound as 00:50:496 (50496|0,50496|1) -. I'd suggest changing this into a double
00:50:761 (50761|3,50761|4,50761|2) - as with above

00:50:938 - this should be a double; you normally place a double here - whether you use a SN+LN or 2SN.
For consistency, I'd change an SN at 00:50:761 - to a LN (should have 2SN and 1LN at the end) and an SN at 00:50:938 - to a LN (1LN, 1SN), as you've been mapping the last few notes of each bar with LNs

00:55:349 (55349|4,55438|3,55526|4,55614|2,55702|3,55790|1,55879|2,55967|0) - this pattern, if you ask me, would be better represented by a pattern that is repeated every 1/2. This doesn't really make much sense so I'll just show you
I think it represents the music better because there's just two alternating pitches - therefore I think that a repeated pattern of two notes would work better. Maybe a pattern like {1,3,1,3,1...} might also work because the two pitches don't change

01:00:908 (60908|3) - remove this note; refer to 00:59:496 -, 00:58:085 -

01:09:114 (69114|1,69114|2) - remove this. You're using doubles for the bass notes in this section and there isn't a bass note here
01:26:055 (86055|3,86055|0) - as with above
I think that doubling the piano chords between 01:08:055 - and 01:54:643 - would be better than using doubles for the bass, as I believe it's more clear. Check this with someone else before changing it, though - because that's a lot of different points

03:50:055 - you're missing a note for the bass

03:59:585 - there's no bass here, don't double it

04:21:290 (261290|1,261379|3) - turn this into one LN. The flute only changes pitches once
04:21:820 (261820|0,262085|1) - as with above

04:38:408 - the drum-roll-like sound here would probably be better mapped by a LN (so there are 2SNs and 2LNs at the point). I thought there would be a much stronger sound here, due to the three SNs

04:49:702 (289702|0,289702|1,289702|3) - has the same sound as 04:46:879 (286879|2,286879|4) -. Remove a note from 04:49:702 -

05:19:614 (319614|3) - isn't this a ghost note?
05:21:026 (321026|1) - as with above
05:22:438 (322438|4) - as with above

05:24:467 - this has the same sound as at 05:24:555 -, 05:24:379 - and 05:24:290 -. I'd leave it at two notes

05:30:908 (330908|2) - ghost?
05:32:320 (332320|2) - as with above

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Seriously, good luck with this map. Ranking marathon maps with unconventional key modes is pretty hard

Cipse wrote:

Here comes a mod
I hope it's helpful

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Greget

00:35:320 - you're missing a note here, as you normally have a single note; compare to 00:36:732 -, 00:38:143 -
00:42:467 - as with above, you normally have a double; 00:43:526 -, 00:41:055 -

I think 00:50:585 (50585|2,50585|4,50585|3) - has the same sound as 00:50:496 (50496|0,50496|1) -. I'd suggest changing this into a double
00:50:761 (50761|3,50761|4,50761|2) - as with above

00:50:938 - this should be a double; you normally place a double here - whether you use a SN+LN or 2SN.
For consistency, I'd change an SN at 00:50:761 - to a LN (should have 2SN and 1LN at the end) and an SN at 00:50:938 - to a LN (1LN, 1SN), as you've been mapping the last few notes of each bar with LNs

00:55:349 (55349|4,55438|3,55526|4,55614|2,55702|3,55790|1,55879|2,55967|0) - this pattern, if you ask me, would be better represented by a pattern that is repeated every 1/2. This doesn't really make much sense so I'll just show you

Example

I think it represents the music better because there's just two alternating pitches - therefore I think that a repeated pattern of two notes would work better. Maybe a pattern like {1,3,1,3,1...} might also work because the two pitches don't change

01:00:908 (60908|3) - remove this note; refer to 00:59:496 -, 00:58:085 -

01:09:114 (69114|1,69114|2) - remove this. You're using doubles for the bass notes in this section and there isn't a bass note here
01:26:055 (86055|3,86055|0) - as with above
I think that doubling the piano chords between 01:08:055 - and 01:54:643 - would be better than using doubles for the bass, as I believe it's more clear. Check this with someone else before changing it, though - because that's a lot of different points

03:50:055 - you're missing a note for the bass

03:59:585 - there's no bass here, don't double it

04:21:290 (261290|1,261379|3) - turn this into one LN. The flute only changes pitches once
04:21:820 (261820|0,262085|1) - as with above

04:38:408 - the drum-roll-like sound here would probably be better mapped by a LN (so there are 2SNs and 2LNs at the point). I thought there would be a much stronger sound here, due to the three SNs

04:49:702 (289702|0,289702|1,289702|3) - has the same sound as 04:46:879 (286879|2,286879|4) -. Remove a note from 04:49:702 -

05:19:614 (319614|3) - isn't this a ghost note?
05:21:026 (321026|1) - as with above
05:22:438 (322438|4) - as with above

05:24:467 - this has the same sound as at 05:24:555 -, 05:24:379 - and 05:24:290 -. I'd leave it at two notes

05:30:908 (330908|2) - ghost?
05:32:320 (332320|2) - as with above

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Seriously, good luck with this map. Ranking marathon maps with unconventional key modes is pretty hard I think it's not very hard cuz i already did it for 2 times

okay
some mods are aplied and some are not cuz i need to confirm it with BN.
- for triple note : it was on purpose cuz there are 2 SN+1LN. so, i change it to 3SN
-for bass: i think i'm gonna change it with LN. then change the piano with 2SN
will mod your map later
UPDATE

Hi Frim
M4M with my map :3


That's it, good luck with another greget map

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hi Frim
M4M with my map :3

Greget

1. 00:27:908 - 00:27:996 - 00:28:085 - this isn't suit to be a single note... better make then double? it feels weird with all that kick sound.. you even make a double for weaker sound such as 00:35:408 (35408|0,35408|2,35496|3,35496|1) -
2. 00:28:438 (28438|3) - delete this note? the sound is too transparant, i think this doesn't need it.. it will play better as well.
3. 00:39:643 - add a note and W HS to make it consistent as 00:41:055 -
4. 00:50:055 - 00:50:232 - not make LN like 01:01:349 (61349|3,61526|0) - ?
5. 00:50:232 - delete one note? even 01:01:526 - only use one note.
6. 00:50:938 - ^
7. 00:59:761 (59761|4) - move to 1? to lessen the anchor at column 5
8. 01:41:143 (101143|2) - what does this note follow? a faint piano? if it is, it should be at 01:41:114 -
9. 02:05:055 (125055|0) - for what is this note? ._. something like a bass sound ?
10. 02:17:585 (137585|4) - can be made into short LN for beep sound, i think it will fit
11. 02:29:938 - add for cymbal?
12. 03:04:879 (184879|3) - just a suggestion, how about move this to 3, and then move 03:05:232 (185232|1) - to 1? to make it consistent with 03:08:055 - ?
13. 03:17:761 (197761|2) - delete "W" Hitsound?
14. 03:21:996 (201996|0,201996|1,202085|2,202085|1,202173|3,202173|2) - i think this is unnecessary, this could be avoided with 12-34-12 pattern, the instrument itself doesn't warrant to be made jack imo.
15. 03:36:643 - maybe add HS for this? keep. i don't want adding another hs anymore
16. 03:36:820 - i think this can be made more consistent with 00:55:438 - ? i think a bit weird same instrument with totally different notes.
17. 03:46:879 - add here for consistency with 01:05:938 - ?
18. 03:48:732 - not LN ? like 01:07:790 (67790|2) - ?
19. 04:21:290 (261290|1,261379|3) - i'm afraid this would be too hard considering that it's a slow jam and it's a sudden spike in calm part, i suggest keep make it simple. keep for now. waiting BN confirmation
20. 04:22:085 (262085|1) - this too. ^
21. 04:27:820 - i think this should be the one that double? same sound as 04:26:408 (266408|1,266408|4) -
22. 04:28:173 - delete one. wait for BN.
23. 04:29:585 - delete one? make it consistent as 04:28:879 - ? this is a bass sound. for piano i'm only use single, bass double
24. 04:53:585 (293585|3) - hmm, this LN isn't the same as roll drum sound that you use as a LN like 04:45:114 (285114|4) - ? i think delete it and add a note at 04:53:761 - ?
25. 05:22:349 - add a LN and delete 05:22:349 (322349|3,322438|4) - ? it is still a synth sound
26. 05:00:820 - i can imagine a bit SV gimmick to make the suddent "stop" a bit more epic xd, well. just me mumbling with myself xd well, let see what i can do
27. 05:40:967 - add a note? there's a bit melody here.
28. 06:09:820 (369820|0) - should be F?
29. 06:14:761 (374761|2,375114|0,375467|3) - this can be made double, i feel it's too empty xd
30. 06:46:790 - add here?

That's it, good luck with another greget map

no reply means OK
-fix some part in LN use and piano things
-try make a SV gimmick xD

Halo Frim, Mod request

Column : 1-2-3-4-5


Goodluck on rank >w< and ak tembak 3 stars~

sorry im late
M4M request
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nice map !

Davin Fortune wrote:

Halo Frim, Mod request

Column : 1-2-3-4-5

Greget

00:03:114 (3114|2,3114|4) - move to 1 and 4 biar muncul pattern ngetrill antara 00:02:055 (2055|

3,2055|1,2408|2,2408|0,2761|3,2761|1,3114|2,3114|4) -
00:04:526 (4526|4,4526|2) - dimove ke column lain biar gak ngejack dengan chord selanjutnya karna jack keep. karna follow vocal dan juga variasi sendiri xD

seharusnya mulai di 00:04:879 (4879|4,4879|1) -
00:08:761 (8761|2,8761|4) - first mod? ^
00:12:820 - jadikan 1 aja karena beat ini hanya menyambungkan 2 beat sebelum dan sesudahnya
00:14:232 - ^ keep. karna klo dijadiin satu kayaknya kurang bagus
00:48:908 (48908|1) - delete, ghost ? jelas" ada suara (gitar) disitu. ghos dari mana ?
00:54:290 (54290|2) - ganti stair yang arahnya berlawanan dengan stair di bawahnya biar konsisten ? jelas" suaranya itu cuma satu. jdi ga bisa dibuat stair. contoh 00:52:879 (52879|4) -

dengan stair di bawahnya dan 00:54:732 (54732|2,54820|1) -
00:56:055 - add a note di column 2 biar konsisten dengan pattern di bawahnya
02:53:055 (173055|0) - delete, biar nadanya terpisah, jangan disambungin menurutku hithat sound bro
Coba yang bagian nyanyi slow liat baik antara mulai part 01:08:055 - dan 04:20:055 - , lbh sulitan yang maksudnya ?

meniot ke 4 udh
04:19:702 (259702|1) - delete
04:25:349 (265349|3,265349|0,265526|3) - kok jadi susah amat sih?
04:28:349 - add a note?
04:30:114 - add a note?
04:30:290 (270290|2) - delete?
04:33:820 (273820|4) - ngapa gak tambah LN baru? t4 lain kamu gitu kok
04:41:938 - add note, bass sound should have more note
04:43:349 - ^
04:47:585 - ^
04:48:996 - ^
04:50:408 - ^
Hijaunya di 04:52:702 - http://puu.sh/pqPfr/9cc6eaa3e5.jpg, lbh baik gitu XD
04:54:643 - add note
04:56:408 (296408|0) - delete aja karna beatnya udh masuk dalam LN disampingnya keep
05:24:820 (324820|3,324820|0) - delete aja biar ad pause antara beat sebelum dan sesudahnya keep. jelas" ada suaranya disitu
05:26:761 (326761|4,326849|3,327026|1,327026|4) - rasanya aneh emng kaya gitu. soalnya ada break sama suara panjang sama ada drum
05:28:261 (328261|3,328438|0,328438|4) - ^
05:39:555 - just make it 1 note karna cmn penyambung nada and no bass there keep. yg 05:39:290 (339290|3,339290|2,339467|2,339467|0,339732|3,339732|1) - udh terlanjur double
06:09:555 - biasa kalau ad nada gituan kok gak kek gini? --> http://puu.sh/pqPDa/18e910421b.jpg

Goodluck on rank >w< and ak tembak 3 stars~

thanks for mod and stars

-no replys means OK
-will remake some patterns

will update later cuz koneksi is ngelag

Wonki wrote:

sorry im late
M4M request
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Greget

00:27:908 (27908|1,27908|3,27996|0,27996|2,28085|1,28085|3) - hard to play so i recommend http://puu.sh/pqVIN/ed10b733ea.jpg
00:28:349 - how about SV here?
00:33:908 - ^
02:16:173 - ^ if you put in SV it will be nice
02:41:232 - this too no SV, boring until here this is just my op
03:24:996 - no powerful sound 2note pls already triple notes
03:45:114 (225114|4,225114|3,225114|1,225202|0,225290|1,225290|3) - ctrl h it s same pattern 03:44:761 (224761|3,224761|1,224849|0,224938|1,224938|3) - here i don't understand what you mean
04:10:879 (250879|0) - this sound start 04:10:879 (250879|0) - here
06:36:996 (396996|4,397349|3,397702|2,398055|1) - i think this part maybe jack is right i guess so note 4 keep. the sound is become low and this pattern is fit imo

nice map !

thanks for the mod
will mod your map later

-fixing some patterns
-trying to add more sv for greget players

Frim4503 wrote:

Coba yang bagian nyanyi slow liat baik antara mulai part 01:08:055 - dan 04:20:055 - , lbh sulitan yang maksudnya ?

meniot ke 4 udh

Maksudnya ada perubahan pattern ke pattern yang lebih susah pada menit ke 4 yang mempunyai nada yang gak jauh dengan pattern menit ke 1 yang lebih simpel
Untuk yang delete dan lain lain, i dont want have debate about stupid thing

halo frim~
m4m here

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That's all greget :3