1. Hard (4.71 stars, 369 notes)
2. Normal (3.07 stars, 230 notes)

Odaril wrote:

First mod ? wow ninja'd by ykcarrot
Requested by Keksi.

General
You should add at least another diff. An Easy diff preferably, since your Normal isn't much beginner friendly.
ㄴno.. i just need 3 star diff.
The second break placement feels a bit weird to me. 02:08:651 (1) - This note as well, why don't you finish the break were the kiai starts ?
ㄴbecause it's first beat of 4/4.. so sounds better

Normal
This is a pretty decent Normal, but not as the easiest diff of the mapset. The patterns used are generally a bit hard for new players.
ㄴit's normal. so not for new players~
<nazi> 00:16:651 (1,2,3) - space them a better way (grid snap off) ?
ㄴ done
01:26:651 (3) - Remove the last repeat and add a note at 01:27:901 - ? it souds better this way to me.
ㄴumm i tried.. but i can't hear the different
02:28:401 (1) - This spinner starts a bit soon after the note. Make it start 1/2 later ?
ㄴ...
02:31:151 (1) - The note is hidden by the hitburst when the spinner is completed. Move it up ?
ㄴis it look like hidden?..
03:11:151 - This little breaks breaks the rhythm you had been using so far... Map something in it ?
ㄴdone~

Hard
Reduce the OD and AR by 1 ? They seem out of place: the AR is too fast given the spacing, beat placement and slider speed, and the OD makes the timing rough for a pretty cool song.
ㄴhigh AR is cool... but.. fixed ;_;
From 00:56:651 (1) - to 01:00:651 (3) - : this part needs hitsounds
02:11:901 (1,2,3) - These are hidden by the hitburst when the spinner is completed. Move them to the upper left ?
02:50:651 (7) - New combo ?
ㄴdone

Solid and very nice map. I'm glad to see a cool map, that's a real change from other streamy and jumpy maps that let no space for a bit of breathing. The map is calm, easy without being boring, and does match the song well. Very good work on it.

Verdisphena wrote:

Hard :
Ap -1

00:14:401 (9) - Ctrl + H and join the slider with the note 8
00:57:651 (3) - Add a clap
00:59:401 (8) - Add a clap in the of the slider
02:12:651 (x) - Kiai time starts here
02:19:651 (4) - Spacing?
02:28:651 (x) - Kiai time starts here
02:34:651 (7) - New combo
02:40:401 (3) - 3 grids down
02:42:401 (2) - 2 grids up

Normal :

Slider tick rate +1

00:44:901 (5,6,7) - So hard for a normal
01:16:651 (1,2) - Looks very hidden
01:52:651 (8) - Delete this note and add a repetition
02:12:651 (x) - Kiai time starts here
02:42:151 (6,7) - Better like this


Gl with the map x3

shabao_pig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard

看起来似乎很好了，我不鸡蛋里挑骨头了……


Normal

00:58:151 - 好像停顿略显长，因为这一段听起来还是比较连贯的……这里加个音？
02:09:651 (1,1) - 感觉还是不要让两个spinner中间露出背景吧？第二个提前1/4?


挑不出什么了orz...

wmfchris wrote:

[hard]
0:22:401 (9) down 1 grid
0:31:401 (4) right 1 grid
0:45:651 (6) down 0.5 grid
1:21:401 (4) spacing

[Normal]
no problem with spacing

star~

_llkey_18 wrote:

hard
03:01:401 - add note there?
03:03:401 - ^
03:13:401 - ^

WAAAAHHH very nice song/map gogo¡¡ get this amazing map ranked ^_^

Explorer09 wrote:

Hello. Mind if I mod your map?

[Hard]
1:47:651 (6) - I cannot see this note when hidden mod is on. Probably because the direction of the previous slider.


[Normal]
The stack leniency may be too low in this difficulty. It would be better to stack notes that are a whole beat distant.(I mean time distance) Of course this is optional.

0:12:401 (1 and 2) - Feels a bit strange here. Also note 1 cannot be seen when hidden mod is on. (I rarely see the note "sandwiching" like this, so I don't have a solution here yet.)
1:17:401 (2) - I can hardly see this when hidden mod, too.
1:26:651 (3) - This slider bounces too many times. I don't like it. (Maybe add a note at 1:27:651 in the same position as 1:28:151 ?)

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Leorda wrote:

Annyong

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
02:30:651 (6) - Make symetric?

Well, good job
STAR