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Saki: Achiga-hen Cast - SquarePanicSerenade

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年3月11日 at 20:29:53

Artist: Saki: Achiga-hen Cast
Title: SquarePanicSerenade
Source: Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
Tags: Yuuki Aoi 悠木 碧 Touyama Nao 東山奈央 Hanazawa Kana 花澤 香菜 Uchiyama Yumi 内山 夕実 MAKO
BPM: 179
Filesize: 6294kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.46 stars, 194 notes)
  2. Extra (5.43 stars, 855 notes)
  3. Hard (3.36 stars, 559 notes)
  4. Insane (4.64 stars, 733 notes)
  5. Normal (2.18 stars, 362 notes)
Download: Saki: Achiga-hen Cast - SquarePanicSerenade
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: Natsu : Satellite


thanks !
Lami
  • [General]
  1. no tags..? lol
  2. mp3 volume is bit small for me than others (old ranked maps include mine)
  3. you use very loud (90%) volume in 1st and 2nd kiai time. but 3rd kiai is just 60%...
    3rd is not enough cool for using loud volume? ;w;
  4. check preview time in hard diff (-10ms status)

    [Easy]
  5. 00:54:090 (1) - even if it's just easy diff. but i think 00:56:771 - ~ 00:58:112 - is too empty feeling..
    maybe you keep for recovery time after spinner...
    then consider to reduce spinner's length at 00:55:431 - . maybe it's enough length for beginner i guess..

    [Normal]
  6. 02:05:151 (1) - missed NC setting i guess, add NC 02:06:492 (4) - instead of 02:05:151 (1) - .

    [Hard]
  7. 00:26:855 (6) - same with other diff
  8. 03:27:526 (5) - ^
  9. 01:49:900 (4) - change one circle? for simple rhythm in just Hard diff.

    [Insane]
  10. 00:27:023 (5) - x.x... triplet rhythm is here 00:26:855 -
  11. 00:44:537 (5) - add nc? because you already use nc here in hard and extra diff.. lol
  12. 00:51:408 (1) - same with extra diff
  13. 02:50:570 (6) - ^
  14. 03:27:526 (4) - ^
  15. 01:24:760 (1) - change to 2 circle, it more good follow to lyrics.
  16. 03:14:034 (4,1) - no jump..? you already put jump at other similar partten...
  17. 03:27:526 (4) - add nc?

    [Extra]

  18. 00:51:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - tbh, i think it's more clearly for playing in 1/2 rhythm....
    because lyric just end 1/2 rhythm, not 3/4 also 00:52:079 (3) - triple or 1/4 repeat slider x_x
  19. 00:52:749 (5) - hm... add NC?
  20. 00:56:269 (2,4) - if you switch these, player can feel more circle flow in here.
  21. 02:21:073 (5) - add NC? according to 01:16:715 (1) -
  22. 02:50:570 (4) - why don't you use 1/4 slider owo,, for fill up 02:50:654 -
  23. 01:54:676 - add note? since 01:53:168 (2) - , 01:53:838 (2) - look like to follow lyric.
    it's same purpose
  24. 03:06:827 - plz start 3rd kiai time at here.
  25. 03:23:922 - add note or expand slider's length.
    frankly speaking, 3/4 rhythm gap (03:23:587 (4,1) - ) might be unnatural for playing
  26. 03:27:526 (1) - remove whistle on head?

not much to say in lower diff. cuz im noob ;w;
Topic Starter
P A N

Lami wrote:

  • [General]
  1. no tags..? lol will add soon. tbh I'm lazy. looking for modder to feed me.
  2. mp3 volume is bit small for me than others (old ranked maps include mine) umm idk, maybe I will ask you for use that mp3? :D
  3. check preview time in hard diff (-10ms status) umm actually other diffs should be -10 not hard diff. fixed :D

    [Easy]
  4. 00:54:090 (1) - even if it's just easy diff. but i think 00:56:771 - ~ 00:58:112 - is too empty feeling..
    maybe you keep for recovery time after spinner...
    then consider to reduce spinner's length at 00:55:431 - . maybe it's enough length for beginner i guess.. i agreed that it's too empty, let's consider it later.

    [Hard]
  5. 00:26:855 (6) - same with other diff I think this one is correct.
  6. 03:27:526 (5) - ^ remove other diff instead.
  7. 01:49:900 (4) - change one circle? for simple rhythm in just Hard diff. I think it's ok

    [Insane]
  8. 02:50:570 (6) - ^ same
  9. 01:24:760 (1) - change to 2 circle, it more good follow to lyrics. ummm yea but I used that in extra diff so I want this to be easier.
  10. 03:14:034 (4,1) - no jump..? you already put jump at other similar partten... woops, I count that as a same set so let's remove NC. I did like that in extra as well.
  11. 03:27:526 (4) - add nc? remove in extra instead.

    [Extra]

  12. 00:56:269 (2,4) - if you switch these, player can feel more circle flow in here. jump like that is fit for the start of kiai imo.
  13. 02:50:570 (4) - why don't you use 1/4 slider owo,, for fill up 02:50:654 - I still hesitate about this but I think circle is enough for here.
  14. 01:54:676 - add note? since 01:53:168 (2) - , 01:53:838 (2) - look like to follow lyric. ahhhh will add if many modder complain about it, tbh I can't here it.
    it's same purpose
  15. 03:27:526 (1) - remove whistle on head? I heard it owo

not much to say in lower diff. cuz im noob ;w;

thanks so much for the first mod. I kinda blur and sleepy when mapping this so some of mistake are stupid XD so thanks for pointing them out !
Lami

P A N wrote:

[notice][list][General]

umm idk, maybe I will ask you for use that mp3? :D

Not need for this. just use without asking, if you want.

[Insane]

01:24:760 (1) - change to 2 circle, it more good follow to lyrics. ummm yea but I used that in extra diff so I want this to be easier.
i mention it for reason. Because hard diff use 2 circle xd.
but slider is fine too owo.
Topic Starter
P A N

Lami wrote:

P A N wrote:

[notice][list][General]

umm idk, maybe I will ask you for use that mp3? :D

Not need for this. just use without asking, if you want.

[Insane]

01:24:760 (1) - change to 2 circle, it more good follow to lyrics. ummm yea but I used that in extra diff so I want this to be easier.
i mention it for reason. Because hard diff use 2 circle xd.
but slider is fine too owo.
ok so excuse me to use it >< thanks again !
Shad0w1and
m4m
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/405053

[Ex]
AR too low

00:01:055 (1) - delete this because the conflict with the latter pattern 00:03:736 - , or fill this out
01:06:753 (4,5,6,7,8) - sample is weird reconsider plz, usually i suggest have samples on all notes and use green line to reduce volume
01:11:446 - this reversed slider does not make me feel good because it is on downbeat
01:16:474 (5) - this note been hide on slider and because of ar it is really confusing. move it out, or AR 9.2 plz
02:35:580 (6) - Increase DS workes better, even stack on 02:35:915 (1) - will be good

[In]
00:03:736 - same with Ex
01:37:591 (3) - C+j
01:46:809 (3,4,5) - confusing spacing
03:28:038 - spinner maybe

[Har]
00:42:452 (3,4) - red stick sliders really confusing
01:47:982 - missing vocal "い"
02:56:697 (3) - 02:58:541 - fill this out?

[Nor]
01:03:234 - 01:02:563 - 01:47:982 - fill this out?

skipped ez
Topic Starter
P A N

Shad0w1and wrote:

m4m
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/405053

[Ex]
AR too low I think its fine

01:06:753 (4,5,6,7,8) - sample is weird reconsider plz, usually i suggest have samples on all notes and use green line to reduce volume will consider
01:11:446 - this reversed slider does not make me feel good because it is on downbeat um i follow vocal. will fix if many ppl complain.
01:16:474 (5) - this note been hide on slider and because of ar it is really confusing. move it out, or AR 9.2 plz umm all of testplayer got that.

[In]
01:37:591 (3) - C+j for what
03:28:038 - spinner maybe noooooot yet

[Har]
00:42:452 (3,4) - red stick sliders really confusing eh no
02:56:697 (3) - umm no for hard
02:58:541 - fill this out? ^

[Nor]
01:03:234 - 01:02:563 - 01:47:982 - fill this out? no for normal

skipped ez
thanks :D
Yohanes
Ohai PAN! Fancy meeting you here xD

Anyway, change title into 咲-Saki-阿知賀編 episode of side-A
and add this into tags Yuuki Aoi 悠木 碧 Touyama Nao 東山奈央 Hanazawa Kana 花澤 香菜 Uchiyama Yumi 内山 夕実 MAKO Achiga-hen
be sure to double check it :D

no kds
Good luck~!
BriedisLT
Overall, I think that this map set has by nature places where there are awkward pauses, you should consider making them bigger spacing to not get confused.

03:09:435 - I think that the kiai should end here according to the music.
Hard
consider making the AR 7.5 or 8
00:09:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern can be extremely confusing for the player base that your difficulty caters to.
00:28:876 (3,4) - this place is a bit missed up in beat placement
Insane
00:01:725 (1) - increase spacing?
00:09:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern can be extremely confusing for the player base that your difficulty caters to.
00:17:815 (1,2) - wakward placement, maybe rotating them might do the trick
02:49:993 (3,4,5) - placing these next to each other doesn't play well.
02:58:541 - awkward gap, placing a circle is viable, because there's voice there.
Extra
01:11:278 (1) - i dont think that backsliders on kiai are that enjoyable.
02:37:591 (2,3,1) - these are different from 02:36:753 (6,7,8) - for example, i'd guess a different pattern would be beneficial.
02:56:865 (6) - this red tick slider feels kinda out of place
03:22:675 (7) - circle under slider, can be harder to see with HD
I can't stand the wallpaper. Pls be less of a weeb.
I have nothing else to say, your map is solid as expected. Cheers & good luck!
Topic Starter
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BriedisLT wrote:

Overall, I think that this map set has by nature places where there are awkward pauses, you should consider making them bigger spacing to not get confused.

03:09:435 - I think that the kiai should end here according to the music. I think right now is correct. also if make it like that, kiai will be very short.
Hard
00:09:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern can be extremely confusing for the player base that your difficulty caters to. it's not confusing imo and now i raise ar to 7.5 too. would be help.
00:28:876 (3,4) - this place is a bit missed up in beat placement I think no, I followed vocal here.
Insane
00:09:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern can be extremely confusing for the player base that your difficulty caters to. no.
00:17:815 (1,2) - wakward placement, maybe rotating them might do the trick how are they awkward :/ and that's intentional.
02:49:993 (3,4,5) - placing these next to each other doesn't play well. I think it's playing well and easy to play too.
Extra
01:11:278 (1) - i dont think that backsliders on kiai are that enjoyable. I tried other but I think backsliders fit best.
02:37:591 (2,3,1) - these are different from 02:36:753 (6,7,8) - for example, i'd guess a different pattern would be beneficial. tried little thing
02:56:865 (6) - this red tick slider feels kinda out of place I think no
03:22:675 (7) - circle under slider, can be harder to see with HD it's pretty visible because it's not completely stack.
I can't stand the wallpaper. Pls be less of a weeb.
I have nothing else to say, your map is solid as expected. Cheers & good luck!
I love this bg :x and I cut it myself so thats why. thanks for mod. no mention / blue = fixed.
dylansantosh
Hello from #modreq <3

I mostly do blanket modding :v)

General
How about adding a blue combo color to match the blue accents on the blonde's clothing
How about adding a Red combo color to match the bow-tie on the red eye'd lady

Easy
00:14:966 (3,4) - You could try to blanket this
01:15:468 (1) - this curve this slightly more to make the blanket prettier
02:41:614 (2) - Blanket slightly off, slider end tiny bit too wide
03:06:083 (3) - ^

Normal
00:04:407 (5,6) - Blanket just slightly off
00:34:574 (6,1) - Distant blanket maybe, can be easly done by adjusting sliderend
00:54:016 (1,2) - Blanket's off ;-;
03:25:189 (7,1) - blankt slightly off Sliderend slightly too wide

Hard
01:27:368 (1) - Blanket is off, sliderend slightly too narrow
01:43:960 (3,4,5) - Blanket maybe?
02:38:932 (2,3) - Hmm feels strangely out of place, how about making the slider longer and starting from 02:38:932 - ?

Insane
00:07:759 (4,1) - Blanket maybe?
00:19:155 (1) - not quite symetrical ;-;
00:22:675 (6) - Blanket's slightly off, Slider end too wide
00:23:848 (4,5) - Blanket maybe?
00:38:764 (4,1) - Blanket's slightly off, slider end too wide
00:41:111 (2) - Blanket's slightly off, slider points too much to up
00:41:446 (3) - Blanket's slightly off, Slider end too wide
00:45:803 (1,3) - Blanket maybe?
01:23:513 (1,2,4) - Blanket's slightly off, Slider end too narrow
01:33:401 (2,3,4,5) - Blanket's slightly off, Slider end too wide
01:35:412 (4,2) - Blanket's slightly off, Slider end too narrow
02:08:429 (5) - ^
02:09:435 (3) - Blanket's slightly off, slider end too wide

Are you starting to hate me yet? <3

Extra
00:40:608 (1,2) - Blanket maybe?
00:58:206 (2,2) - This should stack imo
00:58:709 (5) - Blanket's slightly off, Slider end too wide
01:01:390 (5) - Move it slightly to the right to fix blanket
01:10:440 (3,1) - Blanket's slightly off, Slider end too wide
01:47:815 (2,3) - Blanket maybe? Something like this could work: http://puu.sh/mGFTO.jpg
02:04:574 (6,1) - Blanket's slightly off, slider start too wide
02:07:759 (2,4,6) - Blanket's slightly off, slider end too wide
02:17:982 (2,3) - Blanket maybe?
02:58:038 (6) - Blanket's slightly off, Slider end too wide, don't forget to adjust 02:59:211 (4) - as well which is stacked on slider end
03:20:496 (2,4) - Blanket's slightly off, slider end too wide

I love the map, song's kinda funny to listen to :)

All the blanket stuff really is just nitpicking, all your patterns are beautiful, I'm SURE this is getting ranked

gl;
Topic Starter
P A N
sorry that I don't like to fix blanket because it's really toooooooooooooo littleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and some blanket makes the flow worse.

thanks very much for the mod tho !
when I was a beginner, I also mod like this so I understand you. good luck on modding!
IamKwaN
Oh god, I disapprove the BG because of wrong couple :C (jk
Topic Starter
P A N

IamKwaN wrote:

Oh god, I disapprove the BG because of wrong couple :C (jk
oh god LOL
Okoratu
Oh god, I disapprove the BG because of the way these mouths are drawn
Topic Starter
P A N

Okoratu wrote:

Oh god, I disapprove the BG because of the way these mouths are drawn
PLEASE

and please bubble this map wew
AkinOppai
Hello my friend!
Insane
01:10:105 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/9u4xt9 It's very odd while playing you should change these up like scramble them around a litte that would do it!
01:44:966 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/9u4zse Same thing in here you should scramble them around it's a little odd!
02:20:496 (4) - You should move the 4 a little further like this http://prntscr.com/9u50iz so the gameplay gets better!
03:23:836 (4) - Same thing here move it a little further like this http://prntscr.com/9u51nc
03:27:368 (3) - You MUST remove that 3 it is off the beat and very weird...
Hard
03:27:368 (4) You MUST remove that 4 it is off the beat and very weird again...

That's it!
I really loved your map :)
I hope to see it ranked soon!
Have a great day! CYA ^^
Topic Starter
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AkinOppai wrote:

Hello my friend!
Insane
01:10:105 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/9u4xt9 It's very odd while playing you should change these up like scramble them around a litte that would do it! it's already like that if you turns on "stacking" or you can see in gameplay.
01:44:966 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/9u4zse Same thing in here you should scramble them around it's a little odd! ^
02:20:496 (4) - You should move the 4 a little further like this http://prntscr.com/9u50iz so the gameplay gets better! what, not like that. it's very harder and it's 1/4.
03:23:836 (4) - Same thing here move it a little further like this http://prntscr.com/9u51nc ^
03:27:368 (3) - You MUST remove that 3 it is off the beat and very weird... please... it really has a beat there, you can use playback rate 25% to hear it properly.
Hard
03:27:368 (4) You MUST remove that 4 it is off the beat and very weird again... same

That's it!
I really loved your map :)
I hope to see it ranked soon!
Have a great day! CYA ^^
thanks :D
Lully
Random Mod.

[Extra]
00:00:552 (2) - x:124 y: 40 00:00:887 (4) - x:212 y:36 Looks better and more playable.
00:07:759 (2) - Place it like this: http://puu.sh/mHR8U.jpg Why? ^
00:40:105 (4,5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/mHReC.jpg
01:33:401 (2) - Overlap. ~ Like that should be better http://puu.sh/mHRmr.jpg
01:34:910 (3) - x: 172 y:348 More playable
01:39:100 (4,5,6) - Triples don't really fit there. Create a stream until that ends 01:39:435 (7)
03:12:116 (1) - x:164 y:344
03:12:787 (1) - x:348 y: 344

[Hard]
It feels like an Light Insane.. welp.
Change the CS to 3,5 or smth.

Insane should be oki.
Idk how to Mod Normal and Easy lol.
Good luck and i hope that was helpful. ~ I would love it to see this map here ranked. :3
Topic Starter
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CookieKivi wrote:

Random Mod.

[Extra]
00:00:552 (2) - x:124 y: 40 00:00:887 (4) - x:212 y:36 Looks better and more playable. ummm I tried yours,yes... but I love mine more and the up-down zigzag is more playable imo.
00:07:759 (2) - Place it like this: http://puu.sh/mHR8U.jpg Why? ^ same here, slider makes straight way to note is more playable.
00:40:105 (4,5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/mHReC.jpg o.........k
01:33:401 (2) - Overlap. ~ Like that should be better http://puu.sh/mHRmr.jpg ok fixed to something.
01:34:910 (3) - x: 172 y:348 More playable ummm not for here.
01:39:100 (4,5,6) - Triples don't really fit there. Create a stream until that ends 01:39:435 (7) eh but I think it's fit. 01:39:183 is strong unlike 01:39:351
03:12:116 (1) - x:164 y:344 ahh no, recent spacing is already fit imo.
03:12:787 (1) - x:348 y: 344 ^

[Hard]
It feels like an Light Insane.. welp.
Change the CS to 3,5 or smth. interesting, let's try this.

Insane should be oki.
Idk how to Mod Normal and Easy lol.
Good luck and i hope that was helpful. ~ I would love it to see this map here ranked. :3
thank you so much for the mod >o<b
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