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Han Una - Mannequin ft. Maboos

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Topic Starter
Kiiwa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 5 August 2011 at 4:12:30 p.m.

Artist: Han Una ft. Maboos
Title: Mannequin
BPM: 125
Filesize: 3077kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.37 stars, 58 notes)
  2. Hard (4.83 stars, 553 notes)
  3. Normal (4.04 stars, 206 notes)
Download: Han Una ft. Maboos - Mannequin
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st map.
Wish me luck!
jiantz
star 8-)
Gottwald
star :)
Max300
Star
Playing
Good job in hit sounds~I love this map :)
vivere
Staarrrr <3

PS: When I have a little time, I make a modding :>

EDIT: My mod~

[General]:

* Respects the space between note and note
* You have to correct the title: Han Uan ft. Maboss - Mannequin
* Put all the timing points in the ticks red and white
* Put a Preview Point (Timing > Set current position as Preview Point)
* Yuo have 1 osb in the folder, delete this: Han Una - Mannequin (ft. Maboss) (toejamms).osb, and makes fullsubmit


luck <3
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Thanks everyone! ;)

vivere wrote:

Staarrrr <3

PS: When I have a little time, I make a modding :>

EDIT: My mod~

[General]:

* Respects the space between note and note Have to wait on this.
* You have to correct the title: Han Uan ft. Maboss - Mannequin Have to wait on this.
* Put all the timing points in the ticks red and white Done~
* Put a Preview Point (Timing > Set current position as Preview Point) Done~
* Yuo have 1 osb in the folder, delete this: Han Una - Mannequin (ft. Maboss) (toejamms).osb, and makes fullsubmit Done~


luck <3
Lizbeth
Hi~

Re-snap all notes in both diffs

Hard
00:07:319 (4) - move to next blue tick
00:09:720 (4) - stack it properly under slider end
00:12:359 (5) - shorten by 1/2 beat
00:19:320 (1) - circle 1 should be stacked under slider end
00:40:319 (6) - remove circle
00:56:279 (3) - add new combo

Normal

00:17:159 (3) - too close to 2
00:48:363 (1) - unsnapped note

<3
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Hey babe ~w~

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi~

Re-snap all notes in both diffs

Hard
00:07:319 (4) - move to next blue tick Done~
00:09:720 (4) - stack it properly under slider end Done~
00:12:359 (5) - shorten by 1/2 beat ...No thanks D:
00:19:320 (1) - circle 1 should be stacked under slider end Done~
00:40:319 (6) - remove circle Liz pro~
00:56:279 (3) - add new combo Fixed!

Normal

00:17:159 (3) - too close to 2 Fixed -.-
00:48:363 (1) - unsnapped note Fixed!

<3
Lizbeth
I forgot something...
Go to Song Setup > Advanced. And there, place Stack Leniency in the middle.
nimi
ohi >w<
A quick mod. Only change the stuff you feel like, these are only suggestions ^.^

General
This isn't really a problem, but the combo colours are too similar imo.. Consider looking for some different ones that fit the bg.. I guess changing that second pink would help a lot. Here is my suggestion http://puu.sh/CEY
No tags? o3o Add some, like the album this song belongs to, for example.
Well.. I think there should be a diff between normal and hard.. Normal is pretty easy and hard plays like insane.

Normal
01:04:199 (1) - mm I don't see a reason for this new combo x_x
01:17:159 (1) - bad spacing imo >.< http://puu.sh/CF3 maybe
01:19:079 (2) - only in case if you did ^ change the spacing of this beat too
01:50:279 (1) - same of 01:04:199 (1)

Hard
00:02:519 (1) - remove new combo here or add it on 00:03:599 (5)
00:32:999 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:199 - why kiai here? o3o
00:55:919 (x) - add a note here
00:56:039 (x) - ^
01:01:559 - start the kiai time at 01:03:719?
01:09:479 (2,3,4,5) - this antijumps don't fit really well here imo >.<
01:18:839 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:479 (7,8) - change their spacing to this http://puu.sh/CFc . The current spacing is a bit confusing
01:33:959 (4) - extend this slider to 01:34:439
01:47:639 - start the kiai time at 01:49:799
02:04:919 (1) - remove new combo
02:14:279 (2) - bad spacing imo
02:50:999 (1) - remove new combo

Well, this is reeeally good for your first map. I liked a lot this song as well. You deserve an extra star. :P
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Oh wow, thanks for the awesome Mod and double stars! xD

Wiinter wrote:

ohi >w<
A quick mod. Only change the stuff you feel like, these are only suggestions ^.^

General
This isn't really a problem, but the combo colours are too similar imo.. Consider looking for some different ones that fit the bg.. I guess changing that second pink would help a lot. Here is my suggestion http://puu.sh/CEY Oh yes! That looks way better! Thanks!
No tags? o3o Add some, like the album this song belongs to, for example.
Well.. I think there should be a diff between normal and hard.. Normal is pretty easy and hard plays like insane. May think about changing "Normal" to "Easy" and adding a "Normal"... maybe...

Normal
01:04:199 (1) - mm I don't see a reason for this new combo x_x Fixed
01:17:159 (1) - bad spacing imo >.< http://puu.sh/CF3 maybe This was done so that the note could finish dead center before the break. I'll have to think before changing it~
01:19:079 (2) - only in case if you did ^ change the spacing of this beat too
01:50:279 (1) - same of 01:04:199 (1) Fixed

Hard
00:02:519 (1) - remove new combo here or add it on 00:03:599 (5) Did both ~w~
00:32:999 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
00:46:199 - why kiai here? o3o It's a small part that should have it?
00:55:919 (x) - add a note here No.
00:56:039 (x) - ^ Yes.
01:01:559 - start the kiai time at 01:03:719?
01:09:479 (2,3,4,5) - this antijumps don't fit really well here imo >.< Fixed.
01:18:839 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:479 (7,8) - change their spacing to this http://puu.sh/CFc . The current spacing is a bit confusing Fixed.
01:33:959 (4) - extend this slider to 01:34:439 ...Maybe not Dx
01:47:639 - start the kiai time at 01:49:799 It's a small part that should have it?
02:04:919 (1) - remove new combo
02:14:279 (2) - bad spacing imo Fixed. ( Must have pushed CTRL+ R Dx )
02:50:999 (1) - remove new combo Will leave it~

Well, this is reeeally good for your first map. I liked a lot this song as well. You deserve an extra star. :P
Roddie
Hi. Requested by Lizbeth to mod your map.

General:
  1. For the Storyboard (I'm not an expert by the way), there isn't any lyrics in it. Unless your planning on putting them in later on. If not, remove (in no particular order) lyrics4, lyrics1, lyrics2, lyrics5, lyrics3, and lyrics6 from the foreground setup in Design.
  2. The background size has to be 1024 x 768 or 800 x 600. Fix this when possible.
Normal:
  1. 00:02:279 to 00:17:159-This part is screaming for some hitsounds, man. D: Add some whistles please. Put them as you see fit.
  2. 00:17:639 (1)-Fix the spacing on this.
  3. 00:19:559 (1)- I can't tell if you left this intentional or not. I would suggest is using 0.9x for the distance spacing. Keep the spacing consistent. After that, Fix the spacing on 2 and 3.
  4. 00:21:959 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3) Fix the spacing on those.
  5. 00:20:999 (3)-Remove the whistle from the end of that slider and replace it with a finish.
  6. 00:24:359 (3)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
  7. 00:25:799 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2)-Hm.... Put 1 under the curve of the previous slider. Then, fix the spacing on 2, 3, and 1. Finally, Stack 2 on the end of slider 3. Something like this.
  8. 00:29:159 (2)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish.
  9. 00:48:359 (1)-Add a finish.
  10. 00:48:839 to 01:00:839-Add some hitsounds please. ._. Put them as you see fit.
  11. 01:06:599 (1)-Fix the spacing on this.
  12. 01:07:079 (2)-Remove the whistle from the end of that slider and replace it with a finish.
  13. 01:09:959 (2)-Same thing that I mentioned on 00:19:559.
  14. 01:10:439 (3)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
  15. 01:14:759 (1)-Remove the whistle from the end of that slider and replace it with a finish.
  16. 01:15:719 (2)-Move one grid right and one grid down. It looks better that way, don't you think? o:
  17. 01:17:159 (1)-Fix the spacing on this.
  18. 01:34:439 to 01:46:919-Add some hitsounds please. =(
  19. 01:53:159 (2, 3, 4)-Fix the spacing on those. And on 2, remove the whistle from the end of that slider and replace it with a finish.
  20. 01:56:519 (3)-Remove the whistle from the end of that slider and replace it with a finish.
  21. 01:57:959 (1, 2)-Fix the spacing on those
  22. 02:00:959 (1)-Remove new combo, remove the whistle from the end of that slider and replace it with a finish.
  23. 02:01:799 (4)-Put a new combo here?
  24. 02:02:759 (2)-Fix the spacing on this one.
  25. 02:05:159 (2)-Add a finish.
Hard:
  1. 00:02:279 to 00:17:399-Add some hitsounds please. =(
  2. 00:17:639 (1)-Remove the whistle and replace it with a finish. It would sound better that way.
  3. 00:48:359 (1)-Add a finish.
  4. 00:48:599 to 01:01:319-Add some hitsounds please. =(
  5. 01:32:039 (5)-Add a clap on the beginning of that slider.
  6. 01:34:439 (x)-Add a note and a finish.
  7. 01:57:479 (1)-Remove the whistle and replace it with a finish.
  8. 02:42:599 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7)-Add some whistles...
  9. 02:43:559 (1)-Add a finish.
  10. 02:45:479 to 02:48:839-Add some hitsounds please.
  11. 02:51:239 (2)-Add a finish.
And that's it, I guess. :D

The song is quite nice to listen to and Hard is nicely done. Not bad for someone's first time. 8-)

Good luck getting this ranked~

Star~
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
@Roddie: OMG
Thanks so much!
SPOILER
Took me 10 days to fix all that...
Lissette
miau~

I think you don't Lead-in in this map ^^
Don't abuse of kiai fountains, this willl make your map unrankable T.T try to use no more that 2 fountains per kiai time
You have two .osb files in your folder, delete the one you're not using ^^

Hard
00:11:279 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing (look at time-line) 2 must be near to 3
00:19:319 (1,2,3) - looks kinda ugly in-game D: i'm not saying to change, just try to fix it ><
00:20:279 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:599 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:279 (1,2) - 1 remove new combo, 2 new combo
00:41:159 (4,1) - 4 new combo, 1 remove new combo
00:51:959 (1,2) - 1 remove new combo, 2 new combo
I wont point more new combos >< just try to keep the same pattern for new combo in all the map, following the rhythm of the song ^^
01:28:439 (6) - stack under previous 4 to keep spacing consistent
01:30:119 (6) - hard to see under the hits-explosions

Normal
set preview point
decrease HP drain 2 ticks
same thing as hard about new combo pattern ^^

Lovely map~ ~(**)~

Star!~
Lunah_old
General

OFFSET : 2.275
Audio Lead-in in Normal is 993 and in Hard is 493 (Open difficulties files (.osu) with bloc note or word pad, and make them equal manually [http://puu.sh/JT6] (Make this with editor closed)

Normal

-1 or 2 Approach rate
-1 Overall difficulty (?)
Set Preview Time

01:00:835 (3) - 1 Grid right (?)

Hard

1- Approach rate (?)

00:03:959 (1) - move this under 00:03:599 (1) - and make 00:03:959 (1,2,3,4,5) like 00:02:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - (http://puu.sh/JTb)
00:17:399 (3) - Am i wrong or this beat is unsnapped on the grid ? btw 1 grid down
01:14:519 (5,6) - Did you made this spacing on purpose?
02:11:879 (4) - Spacing, (2 grid to right)


Very Very nice, goodluck on ranking
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Thanks Liss & Lunah ~
Fixed all <3

Lunah wrote:

General

OFFSET : 2.275
Audio Lead-in in Normal is 993 and in Hard is 493 (Open difficulties files (.osu) with bloc note or word pad, and make them equal manually [http://puu.sh/JT6] (Make this with editor closed) Fixed. Thanks!

Normal

-1 or 2 Approach rate Done.
-1 Overall difficulty (?) Done.
Set Preview Time Done.

01:00:835 (3) - 1 Grid right (?) No.

Hard

1- Approach rate (?) No.

00:03:959 (1) - move this under 00:03:599 (1) - and make 00:03:959 (1,2,3,4,5) like 00:02:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - (http://puu.sh/JTb) No thanks.
00:17:399 (3) - Am i wrong or this beat is unsnapped on the grid ? btw 1 grid down Fixed.
01:14:519 (5,6) - Did you made this spacing on purpose? Yup~
02:11:879 (4) - Spacing, (2 grid to right) :D


Very Very nice, goodluck on ranking
jiantz
no audio for this beatmap

please full submit ;)
Topic Starter
Kiiwa

jiantz wrote:

no audio for this beatmap

please full submit ;)
Lizbeth

Kiiwa wrote:

jiantz wrote:

no audio for this beatmap

please full submit ;)
do it >.>
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