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love solfege' - arabesque of dif.

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Garven
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Topic Starter
Garven
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, January 17, 2011 at 12:11:08 AM

Artist: love solfege'
Title: arabesque of dif.
Tags: Matsumoto Shin-ichiro Blueberry & Yogurt cloisters' end and piano piece collection
BPM: 147.75
Filesize: 3898kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2 stars, 140 notes)
  2. Hard (4.76 stars, 306 notes)
  3. Normal (4.2 stars, 197 notes)
Download: love solfege' - arabesque of dif.
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This is a cute piano piece by love solfege'

Details in Selee's post. :P

Sexy hitsounds courtesy of La Cataline. <3

Timing tightened up by Lybydose. Thanks again!

Redownload since 01/11/2011 please.
Last edited by Garven , edited 22 times in total.
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
._.

Produced by love solfege' & MUTS music studio ←Artist?
Direction , Music & piano : Matsumoto Shin-ichiro
Engineering management : Igarashi Yoshiki
Publishing assistant : Igarashi Yoshiki , ayu , Iida Yoshikazu
mastered by : Blueberry & Yogurt(ヨ) yay~
Art Direction & Graphic Design : ayu



00:23:153 (2) - Delete this? It doesn't fit well
00:35:668 (T) - Reduce 10% volume?

141.100
40,149

145.400
46,610

136.000
56,748

145.700
57,199

143.000
58,452 (-5ms)

136.000
62,642

124.500 (If you only use spinner here ._.)
106,876

160.000
111,650(+20ms)

150.000
113,311

Star for piano music >_>
Glass
Glass
<3 piano music
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
[Easy]
01:09:418 - useless timing section


[Normal]
00:21:393 - slider start sounds off, I suggest move start of slider right by 1/6 (1/8?). Or wrong timing?
01:31:537 - ^

I guess timing is not perfect, but seems good =/, may be i'm wrong, idk.

relaxing music, have a star
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Garven

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Easy]
01:09:418 - useless timing section I think you mean the one at 01:09:453 - ?

[Normal]
00:21:393 - slider start sounds off, I suggest move start of slider right by 1/6 (1/8?). Or wrong timing?
01:31:537 - ^ Hrm, adjusted for now.

I guess timing is not perfect, but seems good =/, may be i'm wrong, idk. It's wrong, but good enough from what I've tested. I'd still prefer someone known to be good at timing to double check on it.

relaxing music, have a star
Thanks~
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Well, I just felt timing is somewhat off in 00:29:711...? Otherwise it seems quite nice. I enjoyed this.
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Hi Garven :D Stumbled upon this on your profile

[General]
-> Remove "piano" from tags? (Already in the source)

[Easy]
00:35:025 (4) - I think it's better to curve it down rather down up. Personal preference though.
00:57:199 (2) - Try to make this not touching (1)?

[Normal]
00:24:836 (1) - 1 grid right?
00:49:120 (5) - Add whistle at start?

[Hard]
00:57:610 (5) - Weirdly curved
01:45:895 (3) - I know you want to place the slider's end below (4), but it seems forced. Perhaps just wave it facing left?

Can't find much... Really well done. Star!
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Garven

Nivalis wrote:

Hi Garven :D Stumbled upon this on your profile :3

[General]
-> Remove "piano" from tags? (Already in the source) Fair enough

[Easy]
00:35:025 (4) - I think it's better to curve it down rather down up. Personal preference though. Mm, the downward motion didn't feel good transitioning to the next slider though. :<
00:57:199 (2) - Try to make this not touching (1)? They're not though! :P Moved a skosh.

[Normal]
00:24:836 (1) - 1 grid right? Oop, kk
00:49:120 (5) - Add whistle at start? Nah

[Hard]
00:57:610 (5) - Weirdly curved My wavy sliders suck. ;_;
01:45:895 (3) - I know you want to place the slider's end below (4), but it seems forced. Perhaps just wave it facing left? I actually wasn't going for that since they're not stacked perfectly. I just wanted the downward motion for the closing of the phrase. I gave it a wider arc for a better feel.

Can't find much... Really well done. Star!
Appreciate the look!
La Cataline
osu! Alumni
1,025 posts
Joined March 2010
La Cataline
boom!
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Garven

La Cataline wrote:

boom!
*crash*

Kudosu for providing amazing custom hitsounds~
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
First, I'd give star orz
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: #3
4,845 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
Courtesy of the "No Restriction" mod lol

[Easy]
00:15:096 (3) - A whistle at the third beat of the slider sounds in line with the next repeating slider which is 00:18:346 (2).
00:28:492 (4) - Add a whistle?


The rest seem fine 8-) [/inability]

Star XD
Garven
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Topic Starter
Garven

KRZY wrote:

Courtesy of the "No Restriction" mod lol

[Easy]
00:15:096 (3) - A whistle at the third beat of the slider sounds in line with the next repeating slider which is 00:18:346 (2). Nah. I wanted to use the whistle at the peak of the phrase. I had a crescendo set up with the hit sound volume so a whistle would mar that a bit, imo.
00:28:492 (4) - Add a whistle? Mm, sure.


The rest seem fine 8-) [/inability]

Star XD
Also changed the preview point because of an annoying pop noise. Thanks for the look!
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Easy
Nothing to say.

Normal
00:01:282 (3) - Just a suggestion - for this and every other time this sound pattern appears - make the end of the slider a whistle ? with the tick, it sounds amazing imo
01:07:659 (3) - Too far from the previous slider - it plays fine but looks bad.
01:29:237 (1) - The ticks there sound pretty bad imo, silence them ?
01:31:606 (1) - ^

Hard
I think the constant change between 1/3 and 1/6 is a bit confusing, spacing-wise. When there are 1/3, then the note after 1/6, the spacing is confusing to read. I suggest you stack some of the 1/6 in this case. For instance:
00:24:023 (3,4,5,1,2,3) -
00:32:420 (5,6,7,1,2,3) -
01:34:248 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -
01:36:179 (5,6,7,1,2,3) -
01:42:800 (5,6,7,1,2,3) -
00:30:795 (5) - This slider is almost invisible, hidden by the previous slider and its hitburst.
01:30:631 (4) - It's a bit hard to see this note under the sliders+hitbursts.

Nice map.

EDIT: If you can find the sheet I might learn that on my piano. :3
Garven
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Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Garven

Odaril wrote:

Normal
00:01:282 (3) - Just a suggestion - for this and every other time this sound pattern appears - make the end of the slider a whistle ? with the tick, it sounds amazing imo Agreed
01:07:659 (3) - Too far from the previous slider - it plays fine but looks bad. I'm not seeing any difference, but whatever.
01:29:237 (1) - The ticks there sound pretty bad imo, silence them ? Sure
01:31:606 (1) - ^

Hard
I think the constant change between 1/3 and 1/6 is a bit confusing, spacing-wise. When there are 1/3, then the note after 1/6, the spacing is confusing to read. I suggest you stack some of the 1/6 in this case. For instance: Mm, nah. I'm not really seeing an issue with these, and test plays haven't really shown problems with that.
00:24:023 (3,4,5,1,2,3) -
00:32:420 (5,6,7,1,2,3) -
01:34:248 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -
01:36:179 (5,6,7,1,2,3) -
01:42:800 (5,6,7,1,2,3) -
00:30:795 (5) - This slider is almost invisible, hidden by the previous slider and its hitburst. Changed a bit
01:30:631 (4) - It's a bit hard to see this note under the sliders+hitbursts. Let's see what he's talking about here and OH MY GOD THE DEFAULT HIT BURSTS ARE HUGE. Garven skin go!

Nice map.

EDIT: If you can find the sheet I might learn that on my piano. :3
I'd have to transcribe it, haha. Don't have time for much transcription anymore, unfortunately.

Also, thanks for all the kudo stars guys~ <3
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
Made various small changes to the timing. I can't remember all the changes I made, so here's the whole thing. Try it out:

SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
476,406.088354843515,4,2,1,51,1,0
12861,-100,4,1,1,23,0,0
13267,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
15299,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
15705,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
16111,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
16517,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
18955,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
19226,-100,4,2,1,39,0,0
21325,-100,4,2,1,28,0,0
22409,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
22950,-100,4,2,1,59,0,0
34597,428.571428571429,4,2,1,59,1,0
35668,-100,4,1,1,59,0,0
36354,422.535211267606,4,2,1,41,1,0
39729,427.041428571428,4,2,1,41,1,0
44840,434.782608695652,4,2,1,41,1,0
46610,413.793103448276,4,2,1,41,1,0
48293,419.58041958042,4,2,1,41,1,0
49948,423.758740024013,4,2,1,41,1,0
50795,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51643,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
52490,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
53338,-100,4,2,1,41,0,0
55044,431.654676258993,4,2,1,41,1,0
56762,441.176470588235,4,2,1,41,1,0
57199,411.805078929307,4,2,1,41,1,0
58452,421.391914893616,4,2,1,41,1,0
62210,442.176470588235,4,2,1,55,1,0
63522,413.793103448276,4,2,1,55,1,0
66418,-100,4,2,1,41,0,0
68418,-100,4,2,1,54,0,0
69108,-100,4,2,1,41,0,0
69453,-100,4,2,1,51,0,0
69553,-100,4,2,1,51,0,0
69960,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
70141,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
73433,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
74966,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
75103,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
75728,-100,4,2,1,31,0,0
76327,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
76418,-100,4,2,1,51,0,0
82820,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
83404,418.118466898955,4,2,1,33,1,0
83812,418.118466898955,4,2,1,33,1,0
85265,-100,4,2,1,39,0,0
85683,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
86101,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
86519,-100,4,2,1,54,0,0
86728,417.827298050139,4,2,1,54,1,0
88610,-100,4,2,1,61,0,0
89028,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
90916,418.118466898955,4,2,1,40,1,0
91467,-100,4,2,1,41,0,0
92721,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
93140,-100,4,2,1,51,0,0
93415,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
95051,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
95484,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
100873,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
102548,413.793103448276,4,2,1,51,1,0
105050,428.535211267606,4,2,1,51,1,0
105673,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
105895,444.444444444444,4,2,1,40,1,0
106118,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
106876,481.927710843374,4,2,1,70,1,0
111625,389.61038961039,4,2,1,80,1,0
113301,400,4,2,1,80,1,0
113880,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0
114121,400,4,1,1,100,1,0
114317,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0
114603,400,4,2,1,100,1,0

Note that this contains the inherited sections from Hard, so if you have any different green sections in the other difficulties, add those back in yourself.
Rukario
973 posts
Joined May 2009
Rukario
Normal:
00:21:457 (1) - start this 2 1/6 ticks later? (so the slider starts on the white tick) and place a beat on the previous slider beginning
01:31:612 (1) - ^

Hard:
01:51:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest here to make a square pattern with the first 4 beats and then have the 5th note in the middle.

That is all.
Fine piece of music you choose there.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Garven

Rukarioman wrote:

Normal:
00:21:457 (1) - start this 2 1/6 ticks later? (so the slider starts on the white tick) and place a beat on the previous slider beginning
01:31:612 (1) - ^ Sure

Hard:
01:51:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest here to make a square pattern with the first 4 beats and then have the 5th note in the middle. Nah.

That is all.
Fine piece of music you choose there.
Thanks~
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
:arrow:
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Easy]
01:13:433 (1,2,3) - [Suggestion] Little spacing difference but it's up to you :3
01:41:700 (4,5,6) - ^ Also, I think you can make it regular-triangle-shape :3

[Normal]
01:18:827 (2) - [Suggestion] Little covered by HP bar ;_;

[Hard]
1/6 :3<



Nyan :3
Good luck.

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply
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