Rita - CRISIS BEAT · forum

banvi

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

banvi 2010-11-20T22:15:12+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月30日 at 0:19:11

Artist: Rita
Title: CRISIS BEAT
Source: Otome Crisis
Tags: Holoaz valuable
BPM: 145
Filesize: 4930kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:

Holoaz's Beat (4.99 stars, 558 notes)
Insane (4.86 stars, 497 notes)
Normal (3.81 stars, 248 notes)
valuable's Easy (1.52 stars, 158 notes)

Download: Rita - CRISIS BEAT
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Rita <3 Otome Crisis <3

mod please ; ;

Thanks for guest diff

valuable (Easy)
Holoaz (Insane)

Thanks for mod

wmfchris , Qrool , Sandpig , NatsumeRin , Nivalis
jericho2442 , Garven

Last edited by banvi 2010-12-29T15:20:30+00:00, edited 20 times in total.

valuable_old

70 posts

Joined May 2010

valuable_old 2010-11-21T01:26:29+00:00

I hope you like my easy diff ><

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

5,072 posts

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2010-11-22T12:47:42+00:00

nice bg

[Holoaz Beat!]
0:07:739 (3)up 1 grid
0:23:152 (9) delete?
0:37:325 (2) up 1 grid
1:25:532 (3) down 1 grid
1:26:980 (7) down 1 grid
1:42:083 (2) ending of (2) not properly stacked on ending of (1)?
2:19:221 (7,8) delete (8), (7)+finish?
2:27:808 (1) right+ up 1 grid?

[Banvi beat]
0:34:014 (2) right+ up 1 grid?
0:40:635 (4) down 1 grid
nice~

star >w<

banvi

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Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

banvi 2010-11-22T12:56:46+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
nice bg Thx , I had a hard time looking for BG ><

[Banvi beat]
0:34:014 (2) right+ up 1 grid? k
0:40:635 (4) down 1 grid k
nice~

star >w<

Thank you ^^

Holoaz

358 posts

Joined November 2009

Holoaz 2010-11-22T13:28:41+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[Holoaz Beat!]
0:07:739 (3)up 1 grid--fixed!
0:23:152 (9) delete?--no , I think it better
0:37:325 (2) up 1 grid--fixed!
1:25:532 (3) down 1 grid--fixed!
1:26:980 (7) down 1 grid--fixed!
1:42:083 (2) ending of (2) not properly stacked on ending of (1)?--no
2:19:221 (7,8) delete (8), (7)+finish?--no
2:27:808 (1) right+ up 1 grid--fixed!

thank you for mod!

Download: Rita - CRISIS BEAT (banvi) [Holoaz Beat].osu

S o r d a

1,576 posts

Joined July 2009

S o r d a 2010-11-22T15:01:05+00:00

star~

Cuuuuri

315 posts

Joined April 2009

Cuuuuri 2010-11-22T17:03:03+00:00

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉHahih~

SPOILER

[banvi Beat/Hit object]
00:02:566 (4) - 1 grid right or 00:02:877 (5) - 1 grid left

[Holoaz Beat/Hit object]
Slider後のCircleｽﾞﾚがやや気になりました。
00:52:221 (2) - x286 y336
00:53:877 (6) - x286 y48
00:54:704 (8) - x226 y336
01:42:704 (3,4) - x255 y192
02:04:635 (3) - x286 y272

[valuale Beat]
Great!

Overall: good map.鳥肌モノですた。

Last edited by Cuuuuri 2010-11-23T05:57:39+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Holoaz

358 posts

Joined November 2009

Holoaz 2010-11-22T17:29:09+00:00

Qrool wrote:
(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉHahih~
[Holoaz Beat/Hit object]
Slider後のCircleｽﾞﾚがやや気になりました。
00:52:221 (2) - x286 y336--Fixed!
00:53:877 (6) - x286 y48--Fixed!
00:54:704 (8) - x226 y336--Fixed!
01:42:704 (3,4) - x255 y192--わざとです
02:04:635 (3) - x286 y272--Fixed!

くろーるさんmodさんくす！

Download: Rita - CRISIS BEAT (banvi) [Holoaz Beat].osu

banvi

1,793 posts

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Topic Starter

banvi 2010-11-22T18:07:47+00:00

@ S o r d a
Thanks for star (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Qrool wrote:
(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉHahih~
[banvi Beat/Hit object]
00:02:566 (4) - 1 grid right or 00:02:877 (5) - 1 grid left oop, ok fixed!

Overall: good map.鳥肌モノですた。:arrow:Thxxxxx

Thanks for nazi mod!

Sandpig

847 posts

Joined September 2010

Sandpig 2010-11-22T19:15:18+00:00

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

add kiai mode?

Holoaz Beat

00:24:290 (3) - would it be better if it's changed into a 3-note-slider?
01:37:221 (3,4) - I think they come later than the music. make them 1/4 earlier and add a note on 01:37:532
01:51:394 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is too long, I think. And it hears weak because soft-sample is used here, also I would like to suggest you not

use finish in stream body. make some change here.
02:29:670 (1) - this circle is lonely...put it "in" your map

banvi Beat

00:35:049 (5) - new combo
00:35:877 (8) - ^
01:42:911 (5) - ^
01:43:739 (8) - ^
02:54:911 (12,13) - seperate them

valuale Beat

seems fine

good map , star

banvi

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banvi 2010-11-22T19:44:58+00:00

Sandpig wrote:
hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

add kiai mode? umm , I won't add kiai.

banvi Beat

00:35:049 (5) - new combo no
00:35:877 (8) - ^ no
01:42:911 (5) - ^ no
01:43:739 (8) - ^ no
02:54:911 (12,13) - seperate them k

good map , star thx~

Thanks for mod ^^

loli_milk

423 posts

Joined May 2010

loli_milk 2010-11-23T07:38:45+00:00

lunlunlun~~♪

NatsumeRin

osu! Alumni

4,032 posts

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NatsumeRin 2010-11-23T09:25:56+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
there's a HUGE gap between valuable Beat and banvi Beat, that is... yeah, a big problem and i'm pretty sure before a diff added to fill it in, this map won't get ranked. /me sad.
tbh i really don't like those 4*claps in the first 2 diffs...(for example: 00:08:566 (1,2,3,4) in [banvi] it sucks orz.

~~[valuale Beat]~~
hey what? you should say sorry to valuable www
00:07:325 (1) - remove whistle at the end.
01:01:118 (3) - remove whistle
01:07:325 (1) - whistle?
01:37:946 (3) - finish instead of clap

[banvi Beat]
HP-1, AR+1 (yes, HP-1 also help reduce the scores partly..)
00:15:187 - 00:16:842 - i guess you don't need this break = =
00:40:014 (3,4,5) - this is preferred to me..

01:01:014 (8) - move 1/4 later?
01:37:842 - add a note?
02:49:118 (1) - i doubt if you need a new combo in this part...= = 17 is... too long

[Holoaz Beat]
00:02:670 (5,6) - switch whistle
00:02:980 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - xxoxxxo (x=whistle, o=normal)
00:10:014 (4) - remove whistle, and same to other similar parts... (too many to list them all T T)
00:13:739 (2) - remove whistle at the beginning
00:29:256 (3) - remove whistle
00:54:911 (1) - whistle at the end.
00:55:325 (2) - remove whistle at the beginning
01:01:118 (11,12,14) - remove whistle
01:34:221 (9) - finish at the end.
01:55:221 - add a note?
02:05:463 (3) - remove whistle
02:31:739 (5) - finish at the white line beat (9th..) instead of at the end.
02:49:325 (3,4,6) - remove whistle
02:50:152 (3,6,8) - ^
02:52:221 (1) - volume increase by 5 in every combo (02:53:049 (1) - 02:53:877 (1) - 02:54:704 (1) ?
02:55:739 (1) - xoxoxxooxoxoxxox
03:12:911 (6) - change to a 1/2 reversed slider?

Rita =w=

banvi

1,793 posts

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Topic Starter

banvi 2010-11-23T10:39:55+00:00

@ loli milk
Thanks for star (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

NatsumeRin wrote:
[General]
there's a HUGE gap between valuable Beat and banvi Beat, that is... yeah, a big problem and i'm pretty sure before a diff added to fill it in, this map won't get ranked. /me sad. uhhh , back to wip for making valua beat to last song.
tbh i really don't like those 4*claps in the first 2 diffs...(for example: 00:08:566 (1,2,3,4) in [banvi] it sucks orz.
hmm changed
~~[valuale Beat]~~
hey what? you should say sorry to valuable www wwwwwwwhy I'm baka><
00:07:325 (1) - remove whistle at the end. k
01:01:118 (3) - remove whistle k
01:07:325 (1) - whistle? k
01:37:946 (3) - finish instead of clap k

[banvi Beat]
HP-1, AR+1 (yes, HP-1 also help reduce the scores partly..) k
00:15:187 - 00:16:842 - i guess you don't need this break = = k
00:40:014 (3,4,5) - this is preferred to me.. no
01:01:014 (8) - move 1/4 later? no
01:37:842 - add a note? k
02:49:118 (1) - i doubt if you need a new combo in this part...= = 17 is... too long fixed

Rita =w=

Thank you very much , Rin >w<