1. Inner Oni (5.89 stars, 884 notes)
2. Kantan (1.85 stars, 184 notes)
3. Muzukashii (3.6 stars, 491 notes)
4. tasuke's Futsuu (2.66 stars, 306 notes)
5. tasuke's Oni (4.73 stars, 641 notes)

tasuke912 wrote:

Done!
http://puu.sh/mMyVB/5822775e67.zip

Q____X wrote:

Hi

Kantan

Good for me

Muzukashii

00:10:715 - d ok
00:14:505 - ^ No It's fine now
00:24:136 (104) - delete No souhds better now
00:48:452 (10) - sounds better Hmm I follow drum here
00:50:031 (16) - move to 00:49:873 - ^
00:50:347 (18) - move to 00:50:505 - and chage to d ^
00:51:136 - d ^
00:51:452 (23) - delete No...
00:58:873 (58) - move to 00:58:715 - Follow Drum
00:59:189 (60) - move to 00:59:347 - ^
01:05:584 (1) - delete? no the 3-hit fit the music

Inner Oni

00:17:189 (152) - delete No I follow the sounds here~
00:17:347 - d no
00:44:189 (350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359) - this part is a bit strange i suggest delete and put spiner or slider Follow the sounds, 1/8 here fit the music IMO.

I am not good moding inner oni
Sorry for the short mod
I hope you find it useful

Good map

Q____X wrote:

SPOILER

Hi
[Futsuu]Turn off Widescreen Support fixed.

01:08:347 (6) - move to 01:08:189 - it's overkill for beginners.
01:08:505 - d
01:12:136 (14) - move to 01:11:978 -
01:12:294 - d

[Oni]Turn off Widescreen Support fixed.

01:14:268 (6) - k umm, why? ;;
01:14:347 (7) - delete
01:20:031 (44) - delete

Good map

Volta wrote:

SPOILER

Hello Barry and tasuke~
from m4m request.

[tasuke's Futsuu]
00:34:084 - remove? umm, why? it fit to melody well.
00:36:294 - and add d here instead for the drum sound I'd like to keep 1/1 stream here.

01:26:347 - may delete this to give a little break hmm, I think not needed

[tasuke's Oni]
00:34:873 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - you may remove some 1/3 for better spread with muzu, maybe delete 00:35:610 (52,53) - and make 00:35:926 (53,54) - make this just 1 k at 00:35:978 - yeah, actually spread can be improved by removing some 1/3 notes, but each diffs have different flow, it's okay at in the case of having GDs. I think overall difficulties still keep nearly equal interval.

01:03:452 - move this to 01:03:294 - and change it to d as the tone here is important imo hmm, keeping atm but i will consider it again!

Thanks for mods!
http://puu.sh/mP4Xu/cf3ad5a976.zip

Volta wrote:

Hello Barry and tasuke~ Hey Flying Pan, haha ^^/
from m4m request.

[General]
00:45:847 - set preview point here? it will sounds more nice Hmm I prefer now! :3


[Kantan]
overall this diff is lacking 4/1 break in the pattern constellation. basically this is just to give some rest moment for newbie :3

Hmm I'll ask BNs for their opinions~ I think it's fine... not too crowded?? ;w;

00:21:294 - delete this and 00:22:242 - this Detele the second~
00:27:294 - delete ok!
00:32:347 - delete ok!

00:56:347 - delete, we also need 4/1 break in kiai ok delete some notes here~

01:07:715 - i think it's fine to add note here hmm no~
01:13:084 - delete no

01:17:505 - delete OK I delete some notes here too! owo""
01:19:084 - ^
01:20:031 - ^
01:24:136 - ^
01:25:084 - chnage to k and move to 01:25:715 -

01:30:452 - add d no~
01:32:978 - and add k? for consistency with 01:35:505 - no it's fine now!

01:49:242 - delete this. might be too hard for new player, especially after the dense kiai Sure
01:50:189 - ^ ^
01:51:136 - ^ no~ :3


[Muzukashii]
00:14:505 - move to 00:14:505 - will make 00:15:136 - emphasized ok

00:18:689 - maybe too sudden for muzu player if you give duplet here. delete is better No it fits the music! also same color~
00:21:452 - deleting this can make the start of the 8-bit sound at 00:21:610 - stand out better fixed
00:29:663 - ^ hmm no
00:30:926 - move to 00:31:557 - will give you good flow as it fits the 8 bit sound and drum I prefer now o3o
00:34:400 - move to 00:34:242 - and adding k at 00:35:031 - will make the density a bit balanced. Changed to another pattern
00:36:689 - may delete this as the sudden double triplet here might startled player Hmm if anyone say it again I'll fix

00:38:031 - why you dont put D here...emphasis strong beat ;w; Well, I wanna follow the 8-bit sounds here xD
00:39:294 - ^ ^
00:40:557 - add finisher Sorry~

00:52:557 - add d here and k at 00:53:821 - it feels so empty for a kiai ehh I think it's fine here lol
01:02:663 - and 01:03:926 - same as above ^

01:04:557 (1) - i would delete this spinner as it is a nice break spot and it covers the next note and can make player missed them I think it's fine... hmm if anyone say this too I'll fix~ orz

01:05:978 - may delete this for better spread with futsuu No It won't be too hard here IMO~
01:09:768 - ^ ^
01:12:926 - ^ ^
01:23:505 - add d like at 01:23:505 - ? It has been a d now! xD

01:41:505 - move to 01:41:347 - this way will make it smoother imo I think it fits the music, sorry~
01:46:557 - move to 01:46:400 - and 01:47:189 - move to 01:46:715 - fixed
01:45:926 - change to k and 01:46:242 - change to d no~


[Inner Oni]
what a weird number of OD lol haha, hope it's fine :3

overall is a cool diff, but i think some SV changes is not necessary, it can confused player for example at 00:05:031 - as you combine 1/4 + 1/6, and some notes is overlapping because the slow down is not smooth (ex: 00:36:768 - this clearly will be DQed if not fixed). if you still want to use SV change, probably doing some arithmatic and make the SV gradually increase/decrease is better option. example:
1.00x at 00:36:768 -
0.98x at 00:36:926 -
0.94x at 00:37:242 -
0.92x at 00:37:400 -
0.88x at 00:37:715 -
0.87x at 00:37:794 -
probably you can get better number

About the SV changes, I'll consider it for a while and ask more people to get more opinions! Thanks for your suggestions!!

that's it. good luck~