1. Aquamarine (1.45 stars, 300 notes)

Neglection wrote:

ALRIGHT! Modding easier maps isn't usually my thing, but let's do this!

-First of all, you know someone would say something about this, but the circle size is a bit small. Seeing your song description, I think 4 would fit nicely; not too small for beginners, but relaxing enough for higher players, so it isn't too annoying trying to read some of it, as CS 3 is way too big. >.<
-Love the SB as of now, maybe some lyrics WOULD be nice...
-You might want to cut out some of the overlapping circles, like in 00:38:017. It's okay enough for the upper-level players, but if you're looking for it to be in between Easy and Medium, keep the few that aren't as confusing. Ex, when the rhythm is constant on the overlapping circles/if there are just two in the same spot.
-Try making the first spinner start at 00:16:985 and end at 00:20:103
-EDIT: Also try starting the second spinner at 00:22:617 , end at 00:28:351 , and making the end of the spinner silent. The rest can be whatever. XD
That's it. Besides that, in my eyes, it's perfect!

alacat wrote:

love this map

1. 00:07:472 (3) - start the NC here like you did with 00:02:592 (1) - since its the same piano melody only a bit lower tuned
2. 00:22:316 (1) - any reason why you suddenly decided to start on the piano here? since the violin starts a bit sooner. Actually if you delete the timing point and start on 00:22:316 (1) - to 00:22:316 (1) - (1/3) your spinner lands directly on the breathing part and you still have 800ms recovery
3. 01:58:554 (3,4) - check DS here, would place (3) at 200/280 and then stack (4) for the 1.4 ds
4. 02:27:946 (1) - 336/148
5. 02:37:610 (1,2) - this feels empty especially not mapping 02:39:624 - I wouldn't make 02:37:610 (1) - still part of 02:32:778 (1,2) - bc of the vocal change and not having the piano end
6. 02:53:315 (2) - change into a return slider, bit too loud to ignore that beat with also a vocal sylable
7. 03:09:020 (3) - can control+g this one to emphasize the change and it flows a bit better into (4) imo
8. 03:43:650 (4) - 284/108 then stack (3) so its 1.4ds
9. 03:47:677 (4,5) - adjust a bit so get into the +5-5 ds margin
10. 03:52:509 (3,4) - ds agains, might wanna make (2) a bit curvier too for the fix
11. 05:09:422 (3) - at 216/292 to fix the ds
12. every NC is on the 5th tick so that should be ok and I didn't hear any inconsistent hitsounds so yeah

kabmi wrote:

Hello

00:18:292 - Finish the spinner here Doesn't really have a spot to end here. Or nothing really to back up stopping here.

00:18:695 - Put slider here I'm content with just spinners in this section. A slider doesn't really fit imo.
00:19:902 - ^ ^same as above.

00:38:822 - move circle to x:84 y:260 There's a gap in the notes here, so placing it there would be confusing as I'm following DS.

01:08:218 - I think it would be better if this slider will end on 01:09:695 Vocals aren't really held in this section or anywhere else in the song. It mostly follows both vocals and beats with a simple rhythm. This would break both rules if I did

01:09:829 - And here new slider ^

01:20:299 - Place circle here (1) This mainly follows the beat here, I also did this at 01:39:628 (3) - 01:54:124 (3) - etc. Vocals weren't the main focus

01:20:701 - And slider up here (1) ^

01:45:668 - ^^ There is a slider here? >_<

02:02:983 - Try to take good hitsound here Sure. I'll add a whistle.

02:03:386 - ^ I don't wan to overspam whistles so I'll skip this.

02:44:858 - Same as 1 Yup. Intentional as mentioned before.

03:40:429 - Wow, it's so surprising, I scared : DD XD

03:50:899 - Slider1 superposing slider2, fix it This is intentional to follow the Orange Planet Uniforms.

05:21:905 - Great : D Thank you

P.s. I like it, thanks and good luck : )

Doormat wrote:

hi hi sorry i'm two weeks late- it's mostly good to go in my opinion so sorry if this isn't much :X

Aquamarine

1. 00:16:683 (1) - maybe you could start this spinner at 00:16:884 - (1/6 beat snap divisor)? i know it seems like a minor thing, but by moving it here you start the spinner on that piano note, similar to what you did at 00:22:552 (1) - I would agree but the piano note is actually off key here, so placing it where you suggest is actually slightly early.
2. 00:48:889 (1) - you could move this to x204, y320 and rotate it by 6 degrees clockwise from its selection centre; the move is to make it a horizontal mirror of 00:48:084 (6,7) - and the rotation is to fix the distance snap if you decide to move it Sure, doesn't hurt. thanks!
3. 01:09:426 (2) - i'm not sure a reverse slider is the best idea here; the beats at 01:09:426 - and 01:09:829 - have a different emphasis to them, so i think it'd be better to make those both clickable I actually do this very very frequently in the song. The only main emphasis I really worry about is the first one of each measure. Everything else is just links to them. that's why I'll have vocals start on repeats and such.
4. 02:53:315 (2) - no beat on all three main beats (white ticks) like you did at 00:59:762 (2) -, 01:04:594 (2,3,4) -, 02:58:147 (2) -, etc.? feels kind of incongruent and out of place with the previous bridge and the rest of this current bridge Fixed. nice one
5. 03:06:603 (1,2,3) - mm i'm not sure about this slider shape; the (1) and (3) don't have the slider tick in the middle when you're playing the map, but the (2) does and it looks out of place. this is just a personal thing though, it's probably fine the way it is oh, never noticed that actually. I Guess I'll simplify these.
6. 03:20:295 (5,2) - you can stack these since they're both intended to be blanketed by the same slider oops. Fixed.
7. 03:58:550 (7) - mm wouldn't a 1/1 reverse slider work more effectively than a 2/1 slider here? i think using a slider repeat to emphasize the vocal at 03:58:952 would probably work nicer than a slider tick yeah, I'll drop the symmetry and put a reverse here.
8. 04:56:536 (5) - you could move this to x318, y231 so the triangle here is more equilateral This messes up the DS with the previous symmetrical pattern so I want to leave it as is.
9. 05:06:603 - and 05:07:006 - feels kind of empty here in comparison to the previous combos, e.g. 04:46:872 (5) - and 04:56:536 (4) - have a similar composition to this part so it just feels empty Add a couple notes after these, but I want to leave the gap here.

hope this helps! take a star~