1. Futsuu (2.45 stars, 267 notes)
2. Inner Oni (5.81 stars, 734 notes)
3. Kantan (1.54 stars, 168 notes)
4. Muzukashii (3.8 stars, 417 notes)
5. Oni (3.87 stars, 556 notes)

Surono wrote:

Hi Mania mapper

>General
* 00:13:782 - ~ 00:32:918 you need filling more notes on kantan-futsuu
* 00:03:404 - untill 00:12:485 need reworked on Muzukashii, its close spread with Oni

>Inner Oni
* 00:01:620 (9,11) - emphasize this with don, flow vocal and beat is fit, why not?
* 00:03:404 (1) - Cymbal sound, should fill finisher for consistent
* 00:05:431 - have pitch, should fill as Inner Oni. 00:05:755 - this too
* 00:05:918 - add kat? have stronk pitch to be pattern imo
* 00:08:026 - add don, same like 00:05:431 -
* 00:08:350 - same above, have nice flow with dub beat
* 00:10:620 - 00:10:945 - 00:11:107 - like previous suggestion
* 00:11:350 (24) - change to kat for follow 00:11:593 (27,29) - main instrument, if not this would not fit playable
* 00:11:999 (32,33) - swap, same above with reason.. main instrument should follow for fit playable
* 00:12:242 (35) - change to kat, same reason
* 00:12:566 - 00:12:809 - add note, and then 00:12:728 - change this kat for emphasize this high beat
* 00:33:242 (138) - add finisher on this slider? because is High flow, why not to hit big slider for high sounds?
* 00:35:918 (1,2) - change to don, 00:36:323 (3) - and give this kat, main instrument for playable
* 00:37:134 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - same above 00:11:350 (24,16,18) - change to don and 00:37:134 - give this kat, 00:37:864 - and give this kat for variety with before bcus its variety of music
* 00:38:431 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - kddkddkkdkddk? bcus is started different with previously part and 00:38:918 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - this part is good with kkdkddk
* 00:41:026 (50,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:42:323 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - and this, try with my effort. ( if you not still fix this, you make some normal player confuse with alternating lol )
* 00:43:539 (25) - give this kat, still have high flow till 00:43:620 - get this don emphasize with dub
* 00:44:107 (32) - give kat for avoide monotone, really not fit if you keep this with don
* 00:44:431 (36) - change to don, 00:44:512 (37,38) - ctrl g this. bcus is 00:44:593 - high beat
* 00:44:918 (42,3,6,9,12,14) - is good on here, nice!
* 00:47:188 - still high flow and need for emphasize with kat, and to 00:47:350 - follow this sounds
* 00:47:674 - xddd wtf its singing "Jin Ke La", ddk for follow this vocal and flandre instrument? and 00:48:323 - add don on here bcus is clearly to hear
* 00:48:647 - add kat? for 00:48:485 - follow this similar pitch
* 00:49:539 - change to don, if not you will blocked emphasize 00:49:620 (43,44,45) - this main instrument
* 00:50:431 - ddkdd? seems good? bcus follow flandre theme and that electro vocal imo
* 00:51:647 (62,63) - ctrl g this? also for better playable. is no reason to 00:51:647 - give this kat. so yeah you should ctrl g that
* 00:51:891 - I feels this to overemphasize with kat, change to don? better with contrast instrument
* 00:52:701 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - ddddkkkkd? better on soft flow, 00:53:431 (80) - delete and 00:53:512 - change to don bcus overemphasize
* 00:53:837 - delete to give rest, since this song rare to find a rest section.. its fit bcus not main instrument or stronk sounds
* 00:59:512 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - too monotone.. 00:59:999 (5) - change this to don and 01:00:809 - this kat? its better with main instrument
* 01:02:593 - just don for this, its 01:03:404 - already fit with don bcus downbeat
* 01:04:701 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - also if you like to keep this for high dub beat, sure its fine.. for variety with similar previously part
* 01:10:377 - change don? like on 59sec.. cuz is for main instrument
* 01:12:972 (16,18) - swap this, and don forget remove finisher and fix on (18) after ctrl g
* 01:15:079 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same comment like 01:04:701 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
* 01:27:809 (57,58) - change to don? 01:28:215 - 01:27:972 - and give this kat? just like previously part on begining
* 01:29:188 - not stronk as kat, change to don and hear that. its differ with previously part
* 01:30:323 (81,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:31:620 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - 01:32:755 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - you should consindering this to make consistent like on 1st kiai
* 01:37:296 - kkkd 1/6? oh comeon its fit and I never seen 1/6 on this diff
* 01:37:945 - kat for high drum same like after 1st kiai part, 01:38:107 - change to don to avoide overemphasize
* 01:38:269 - delete for give rest after hit finisher
* 01:41:026 - give this kat, avoid monotone. 01:41:431 - change to don.. no reason with kat and break playable
* 01:42:323 - give kat, 01:42:404 (67,68) - for follow flow,
* 01:47:837 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - and consindering this pattern, I think theres have 1/6.. but dont know
* 01:48:161 - change kat to stable playable

Fun diff, but thinking with playable pattern and tasteless/unnecessary emphasize

>Oni
* 00:01:539 - delete bcus its long for oni
* every 00:03:404 - finisher like this, would you make rest like deleting 00:03:566 - note like this? since this part not have rest: 00:06:161 - 00:08:755 - 00:11:350 - some point need to be rest
* 00:11:755 (74,80) - delete this for balance pattern as Oni
* 00:26:918 - delete for avoid long 1/2 pattern
* 00:32:107 - same above
* 00:35:918 - 00:37:215 - 00:38:512 - 00:41:107 - 00:42:404 - 00:42:891 - 00:43:701 - 00:46:296 - 00:49:701 - (00:51:485 - this really rip for Oni lol) 00:51:972 - 00:52:945 - 00:53:269 - 00:53:837 - some point you would delete as rest
* and same suggestion next similar part, look an above suggestion point
* last for this diff, 01:48:080 - delete this

needed more rest since pattern has complex

>Muzukashii
* 00:03:404 - untill 00:12:485 - too overmap, you should remap and just mapping 1/2 pattern. (try spreading from oni without 1/4 stream)
* boring as hell... 00:26:107 - add kat here, for avoid monotone
* 00:26:593 (118) - move to 00:26:755 - here and change kat, for mini rest on this part
* make xxxxx 1/2 pattern from 00:27:566 - here, same above with reason.. for avoid monotone pattern
* 00:28:864 - move to 00:29:026 - here, flow stronk as pattern
* 00:29:512 - ~ 00:34:377 - consindering to make varies pattern, like above
* 00:38:269 - delete, to harsh for muzukashii, also do this for similar point too
* 00:51:323 - delete ^ same reason
* 00:53:837 - delete for give rest and 00:54:809 - here too
* asik... 3rd kiai looks good for me!
* 01:23:674 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334) - dddkkkdddk? pattern should be easir for muzukashii diff imo
* 01:32:755 - delete, live previous point
* 01:40:620 - delete for avoid harsh playable
* 01:43:134 - same point like previous, for give rest
* 01:44:107 - 01:47:026 - ^
* 01:48:080 - for easir playable, delete

espesially 3rd kiai, I like that part!

>Futsuu
* 00:03:080 - delete for rest, also is long 1/1 if you not delete this
* 00:05:026 (11,13) - delete this
* 00:07:620 (19,21) - same reason
* 00:10:215 (27,29) - ^
* 00:12:728 - not safe for futsuu user lol, delete
* 00:13:782 - ~ 00:32:918 - really lessmapped, you should more filling notes on that part. consindering with muzu spread
* 00:33:242 - spinner untill 00:34:539 - here?
* move (22) to 01:26:918 - here

no comment on 3rd kiai, bcus is nice!

>Kantan
* 00:12:161 - delete this for rest? bcus its long for this bpm lol
* 00:13:782 - ~ 00:32:918 - really lessmapped, you should more filling notes on that part. consindering with futsuu spread[2] dont make long rest for diff like this.. or newbie will press esc when playing lol ( so yeah, you can make 1/1 simple on from old futsuu if you really decided fill notes on futsuu )
* 00:33:242 - spinner untill 00:34:539 - here?[2]
* 01:48:161 - this unnecessary for this part, delete? ( like 00:03:080 - this sounds )

well.. almost good!!

yeah Nice map low diff its almost good for me
GLuck!

[R] wrote:

lupa gw :^(

[Kantan]
ok

[Futsuu]
00:35:837 - sampe akhir kiai, disini terlalu monoton. Coba dibuat variasi begini ,Cursor at 00:37:620 -


[Muzukashii]
00:04:701 - k , ngikut ritmenya d k
00:08:269 - k , better patter

00:03:566 - | 00:04:215 - terlalu padat kalo dibikin triplet, mending dijadiin d k k .Atau kalo menurutmu it's ok ya delete bagian sini 00:04:864 -
00:08:755 - | 00:09:404 - ^

00:11:026 - delete ? kepanjangan

00:11:188 - dari sini mending dibuat ddkkddkkd biar lebih simple
00:23:512 - delete ? kayaknya ga ada suara yang pas disini
00:24:647 - k , buat variasi

00:40:458 - delete buat ngasih break sedikit

01:00:161 - add d ga x..x
01:02:755 - add d ga x..x
01:04:053 - delete, kasih sedikit break
01:05:188 - repeat aja sama 3 mod diatas

01:11:512 - add note ? ada suara disini


yah segitu aja
sorry ga bisa mod high diff, agak bingung
GL ~

PatZar wrote:

the mods are OP, these are pro mooder ggwp"promodderstarterpack"

PatZar wrote:

the mods here coeg

[kantan]
00:24:161 (2) - d aja, klo d D rada cukup harsh tp oke sih
00:25:134 (3) - delete kasih break, kantan harus bnyk bnyk break
00:42:323 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - ctrl+G for sake, klo bisa jngan reverse consistent, ikutin yang awal aja.
00:44:918 (21) - D for cymbal bass
00:54:972 (38) - delete terus 00:55:296 - jadiin k
01:06:323 (54,55,56) - sama 01:01:134 (45,46,47) - , mw dkd ato kdd? klo kdd jadiin 22nya kdd, buat konsistensi
01:08:593 (59) - delete for break,
01:16:701 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - rada susah ya buat kantan for this section imo, coba otak atekin bagian sini
01:34:215 (104) - D cymabll bass
01:41:026 (115) - delete terus 01:40:701 - D
01:47:837 (128) - move to 01:48:161 (128) - for better emphasis. ga ah xD

[futsuu]
susah juga ya awal"nya, klo bisa spreadnya benerin lagi untuk kantan sama muzunya, soalnya futsuunya cukup susah diawal" sedangkan kantannya simple 1/2, sedangkan disini ada "jack" didalam arti manianya, dan i felt overmapped for this futsuu imo, can't mod this, even though i mod this your taiko's style will corrupt with my styles, happy remap :v

[muzu]
00:38:026 (94) - harsh banget buat gw, soalnya di awalnya 3/4nya rada susah juga terus dikasih 1/4 .
00:43:215 (117) - ^ ntar saya pikkir pikir lagi 'w')/

puyeng gw modnya gara" lagunya arada kek tai :_(, bhah xD gw anggap oni sama innernya fine fine aja
good luck

1. BG size is 1365 x768. resize to 1366 x768
2. Fix slider multiplier to 1.4 in notepad
   

   [Difficulty]
   HPDrainRate:7
   CircleSize:5
   OverallDifficulty:4
   ApproachRate:5
   SliderMultiplier:1.39999976287842 <----- this thing
   SliderTickRate:1

3. adjust BG position to 0,75 so i can see the girls face
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"Background.jpg",0,75

4. the song is loud, so i think you can raise the volume to 90~95%
5. spread between Futsuu and Muzu is too wide. i'd recommend to remove some notes in Muzu

1. 00:00:972 (2,3,4) - kkk rasannya agak kurang pas karena ini suaranya mirip seperti 00:01:296 (5,6,7) - lebih pas kalo taroh d di tengah jadi kdk
   
   
2. 00:08:269 (21,22,23) - ganti jadi kdk akan lebih mengalir dengan pattern sebelumnya, juga bisa menekankan elektrik sound sama drumnya
3. 00:11:107 (24) - ganti jadi k, bandingin sama 00:05:918 (24) -
   
   
4. 00:13:458 (50) - kenapa disini finisher? penekanan berlebihan dibanding sekitarnya. lebih pas di 00:13:782 - karena masuk part baru. terus SV changenya juga terlalu mendadak dan membingungkan. coba deh pasang green line mulai dari 00:12:485 sampai 00:13:782 - tiap 1/4 beat, besarnya 0.99, 0.98, 0.97, ...., dst sampe di 00:13:782 - 0.82x. ngerepotin tapi jadi lebih smooth. visual here
   
   
5. 00:17:755 - nadanya turun di sini, ganti jadi d
6. 00:21:404 - kalo disini masih sama, ganti jadi d
   
   
7. 00:36:404 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - coba kdkkdk, dibandingkan dengan 00:35:837 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - suaranya lebih tinggi
8. 00:41:593 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ kdkkdk
9. 00:43:539 (25) - deletee. this is inconsistent with previous pattern. juga buat penekanan ke 00:43:458 -
10. 00:44:188 - k? dengerin lagi
11. 00:44:431 - ^
12. 00:44:755 - ^
    
    
13. 01:22:864 - lebih enak dimaenin kalo k.
    
    
14. 01:32:837 - delete.
15. 01:33:485 - k
16. 01:33:728 - k
17. 01:37:296 (31,32,33) - 1/6 donggg. masa suara begini 1/4 biasa.

1. 00:55:539 (308,309,310,311,312,313) - kenapa gak dikasi finisher semua
   
   
2. 00:13:782 - SV nya bisa dibikin lebih smooth dengan teknik yang sama kayak inner.
3. 00:23:837 - kasih finisher. terus green linenya mending pindah ke 00:24:161 - lebih jelas transisinya
   
   
4. 00:11:350 - drum disini rasanya gak bisa diabaikan. tambah d.
5. 00:17:755 - ganti jadi d. nada berubah
6. 00:21:404 - d, nada tetap
   
   
7. 00:35:674 - delete, inconsistent sama 00:03:242 -
8. 00:44:755 - delete juga, biar suara syussh nya kedengeran
9. 00:46:053 - ganti jadi k, suara sama kayak 00:45:891 -
   
   
10. 01:34:053 - delete
11. 01:35:350 - k
12. 01:43:134 - tambah d

1. 00:11:999 - delete
2. 00:29:026 - pindah ke 00:28:864 - kalo ngikutin denyutan
3. 00:32:107 - delete
4. 00:33:080 - ^
5. 00:33:404 (77,78,79,80) - delete. ganti spinner ato slider aja kayak diff lainnya
   
   
6. 00:38:026 - dibolehin sih ada duplet di muzu, tapi gw gak setuju dipasang disini, karena banyak nada off-beat dan bakal terlalu ngagetin buat muzu player..delete
7. 00:43:215 - delete ^
8. 01:32:512 - ^
9. 00:46:053 - k
10. secara umum muzunya butuh banyak perbaikan. di beberapa tempat, misalnya 01:38:106 (321,322,323,324) - gak jelas ngikutin apa.

Volta wrote:

o/

[General]

1. BG size is 1365 x768. resize to 1366 x768
2. Fix slider multiplier to 1.4 in notepad
   

   [Difficulty]
   HPDrainRate:7
   CircleSize:5
   OverallDifficulty:4
   ApproachRate:5
   SliderMultiplier:1.39999976287842 <----- this thing
   SliderTickRate:1

3. adjust BG position to 0,75 so i can see the girls face
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"Background.jpg",0,75

4. the song is loud, so i think you can raise the volume to 90~95%
5. spread between Futsuu and Muzu is too wide. i'd recommend to remove some notes in Muzu

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:00:972 (2,3,4) - kkk rasannya agak kurang pas karena ini suaranya mirip seperti 00:01:296 (5,6,7) - lebih pas kalo taroh d di tengah jadi kdk
   
   
2. 00:08:269 (21,22,23) - ganti jadi kdk akan lebih mengalir dengan pattern sebelumnya, juga bisa menekankan elektrik sound sama drumnya
3. 00:11:107 (24) - ganti jadi k, bandingin sama 00:05:918 (24) -
   
   
4. 00:13:458 (50) - kenapa disini finisher? penekanan berlebihan dibanding sekitarnya. lebih pas di 00:13:782 - karena masuk part baru. terus SV changenya juga terlalu mendadak dan membingungkan. coba deh pasang green line mulai dari 00:12:485 sampai 00:13:782 - tiap 1/4 beat, besarnya 0.99, 0.98, 0.97, ...., dst sampe di 00:13:782 - 0.82x. ngerepotin tapi jadi lebih smooth. visual here
   
   
5. 00:17:755 - nadanya turun di sini, ganti jadi d
6. 00:21:404 - kalo disini masih sama, ganti jadi d
   
   
7. 00:36:404 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - coba kdkkdk, dibandingkan dengan 00:35:837 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - suaranya lebih tinggi
8. 00:41:593 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ kdkkdk
9. 00:43:539 (25) - deletee. this is inconsistent with previous pattern. juga buat penekanan ke 00:43:458 -
10. 00:44:188 - k? dengerin lagi
11. 00:44:431 - ^
12. 00:44:755 - ^
    
    
13. 01:22:864 - lebih enak dimaenin kalo k.
    
    
14. 01:32:837 - delete.
15. 01:33:485 - k
16. 01:33:728 - k
17. 01:37:296 (31,32,33) - 1/6 donggg. masa suara begini 1/4 biasa.

[Oni]

1. 00:55:539 (308,309,310,311,312,313) - kenapa gak dikasi finisher semua biar beda ma oni
   
   
2. 00:13:782 - SV nya bisa dibikin lebih smooth dengan teknik yang sama kayak inner.
3. 00:23:837 - kasih finisher. terus green linenya mending pindah ke 00:24:161 - lebih jelas transisinya
   
   
4. 00:11:350 - drum disini rasanya gak bisa diabaikan. tambah d.
5. 00:17:755 - ganti jadi d. nada berubah
6. 00:21:404 - d, nada tetap
   
   
7. 00:35:674 - delete, inconsistent sama 00:03:242 -
8. 00:44:755 - delete juga, biar suara syussh nya kedengeran
9. 00:46:053 - ganti jadi k, suara sama kayak 00:45:891 -
   
   
10. 01:34:053 - delete
11. 01:35:350 - k
12. 01:43:134 - tambah d break dikit kk

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:11:999 - delete kenapah o.o
2. 00:29:026 - pindah ke 00:28:864 - kalo ngikutin denyutan
3. 00:32:107 - delete
4. 00:33:080 - ^
5. 00:33:404 (77,78,79,80) - delete. ganti spinner ato slider aja kayak diff lainnya
   
   
6. 00:38:026 - dibolehin sih ada duplet di muzu, tapi gw gak setuju dipasang disini, karena banyak nada off-beat dan bakal terlalu ngagetin buat muzu player..delete
7. 00:43:215 - delete ^
8. 01:32:512 - ^
9. 00:46:053 - k
10. secara umum muzunya butuh banyak perbaikan. di beberapa tempat, misalnya 01:38:106 (321,322,323,324) - gak jelas ngikutin apa. itu masih ada suara kek yg di kiai, coba di denger lagi ... tapi yaudah deh ane re-arrange

Good luck (¦3[___]

yassu- wrote:

hi (^^)
from game chat

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

Oni

・00:10:864　change d

・00:18:323 (105,106)　change d

・00:39:972　change d

・00:43:458　change k

・01:25:134　change spinner or slider/ Also ask each of the other degree of difficulty If you use one.

・01:29:269　change d

・01:29:999　change k

・01:32:755　change k

Inner Oni

・00:01:296　I think more of this arrangement is good.


・00:18:323 (105,106)　change d

・00:50:593　01:39:891　I think more of this arrangement is good.


・01:47:026　change K

・01:47:674　change k

・01:48:323　change K

good luck　(^^)/

Surono wrote:

cie dek mania jadi pakpak taikos.. wtf cari modder lewat pm :C anak2 jepun lagi.. maksa amat >_<

poor shinzo chan~